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The freakshow, the amazing sequel to Sligs in Muun forest!

Okay, does anyone remember Sligs in Muun forest, my second fanfic? Well, here comes the sequel. It takes part one year after Sligs in Muun forest. This sequel is going to be a lot better. Sligs in Muun forest was just the beginning of a whole slig fanfic series. Stay tuned for more!

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First part -Sligs in Muun forest!
Second part - The freakshow, which you are reading now.

While this fanfic first seems to be a non - sligs in Muun forest related story, you will later see that it is really the sequel! Just read on and enjoy!
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Chapter 1: The Glukkon amusement club!
It was a day like every other day at FeeCo Depot. The sligs were patrolling around, mudokon slaves were working, just another day at FeeCo Depot. At the FeeCo Depot are entrances to places like Slig Barracks, Bonewerkz, V.P. Aslik's executive office, Vykkers labs (comin' soon!) and Soulstorm Brewery. Many people don't know there are also a few more locations at FeeCo Depot. And one of them is the Glukkon amusement club.

The (very few) members are some mudokon scrubs, sligs, a vykker and a glukkon called Snegh. Snegh was the boss of the club. The club was found because Sneg tought glukkons led a boring life. Always busines, always trying to make more moolah, mudokon terrorists... The goal of the Glukkon amusement club was simply to amuse the glukkons. Not that they were so amusing. Their stunts always failed, and their musicals were too stupid to be funny. They just had a meeting....

"Okay, we have two weeks to think up something for our next act. Does someone have an idea? But not another stunt or musical, or we will be killed before we can even begin! The other glukks are tired of those..." said Snegh. The other members, two mudokon scrubs, three sligs and one vykker, tought about it for a few moments. "Eureka! I've got it!" yelled the vykker. "Okay Hykker, tell it to us." Said Snegh. "Okay okay.." began Hykker the vykker. "What do you think of a freakshow? With all those expiriments at Vykkers labs, we have got a lot of freaks, crossbreeds, genettically manipulated animals and lots more! It will be the best freakshow ever!" The others were impressed. None of them was smart enough to think up something like that. "Brilliant! Accepted! Get as much freaks as you can get!" said Snegh. "At least, a good plan..."
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i like...keep it up...
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I must go to school now, but after that, I will post the next chapter, in which you see some characters from SIMF (Sligs In Muun Forest) back.
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Thats cool I wanner see the next chapter
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Here are the next two chapters. Have fun!
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Chapter 2: A freak is missing!
It was two days after the club meeting, when Snegh met Hykker the vykker at FeeCo Depot. "Hi Hykker! And, do you have all the freaks?" said Snegh. "No boss. We are missing one of them." Said Hykker. "Who?!" asked Snegh. "Years ago, we tried to create another slig queen. The expiriment succeded, but she was escaped, along with some other sligs. We called her Sligra." Said Hykker. "And where is she now?" asked Snegh. "Don"t know boss." Answered Hykker. "Where did those sligs escaped sligs came from?" asked Snegh. "Slig barracks, boss." Said Hykker. "Well, go to slig barracks and talk with the sligs about it, listen to conversations. Maybe you will get a clue..." said Snegh. "Okay boss!" said Hykker.

The next day, Hykker heard something that would change his life. 4 sligs were talking about a place called Muun forest... The sligs were Murck, Morck, Flir and Stan. He heard stories about mudokon terrorists, a shrykull, a native slig tribe and... Queen Sligra! Muun forest! He would never forget that name! He ran (as far as vykkers can run) to a vykker-phone (expirimental communication machine) and called Snegh, who also had a vykker-phone. "I know where she is, boss! Muun forest!" he yelled trough the phone. "Exellent work Hykker!" said Snegh. "Fly to it with your vykker pod, and go get her..."

At the same time at Slig barracks...

"Well, that's the whole story." Said Murck. "Wow! You are really heroes! But... we haven't seen that flying train! And you are not fired for not defeating those mudokons. And where are the others?" Said Stan. "Yeah, general Drippik was bussy with other things, but he said: "One more fault, and you are fired! We have hide the train close by the FeeCo Depot. The others are tranfered to other regions, sadly we had to say goodbye." Said Flir. "You know, Kneth was right!" said Morck. "We live boring lives! They are happy, and we... slaves of the glukkons! We gonna escape tonight! We seek the train and when it becomes day, we will fly away!" The three other sligs accepted. They would go to Muun forest....

Chapter 3: The escape!
It was night at FeeCo Depot. 4 sligs were sneaking trough FeeCo Depot. They were Morck, Murck, Flir (his wings were swaped for pants as punishment when they returned at Slig barracks) and Stan. What they were doing was extremely dangerous. After a while, they find the exit. "There is a door." Said Stan. "Let's go." Around the FeeCo Depot were barren fields, overrun with slurgs, and maybe fleeches... "There it is!" said Flir. He pointed at a big gap. And there was the train. It looked like a normal FeeCo train, but smaller, and with windows and solar panels. They opened the door and entered the train. "Tommorow, we will fly away." Said Morck.

It became morning. The sun came up. And the sligs awoke. "Time to fly." Said Murck. "I hope we will succeed without Marck. He pushed some buttons and the train began to take off and flied away. At the same time, Hykker the vykker was flying away from the FeeCo Depot at top speed. To the Muun forest. A beginning of a new adventure....

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!
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I WANT OPINIONS OR I WILL NOT POST THE NEXT CHAP!
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Please i want opinions.... Chap 4 and 5 are waiting for you if you post OPININIONS!
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Good story. Please continue.
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Glad to see you like it. I won't post the next chaps now, because they need a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiitle finetuning. It contains a conversation between Kneth and his friends (yep he makes a comeback!) about the sligs being a superspecies. You got what that means? By the way, this story is much better then SIMF. SIMF was just rapid writing. This story has more interesting characters and conversations. Stay tuned!
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