Akitt's Excape

[Monkey-Man2000]

Location: Lotsa Fish Industries 345 Prison Cell #12
Time: Sundown


"Now what exactly did you say pile of crap!" Malkis yelled angrily.

"I said that Mudokons should'nt have to be slaves sir." Akitt said trembling.

"And who did you say that to?" asked Malkis.

"Vice President Lapik sir." Akitt cried.

"So..." Malkis said

"I punched him in the face sir." Akitt whimpered.

"I'm sorry sir! He..."

"Don't talk back to me!" the Glukkon CEO yelled.

"He was on break and you just punched him huh? Malkis asked.

"Well he was telling me to work harder and was kicking me so I punched him and said we should be free" Akitt said worried.

"That was a mistake you little crap!" Malkis exclaimed.

"You will be executed tommorrow first thing in the morning." Malkis said turning to the door.

"Open that door Kerf!" Malkis said addressing his Slig assistant.

"Ok sir!" Kerf exclaimed.

The CEO then left with Kerf leaving Akitt alone in the dark cell.


More to come soon!

[Monkey-Man2000]

Chapter 1

Location: Prison Cell #12
Time: Early Next Morning


The time for the execution had come and Akitt was scared out of his mind. Staying in a cold, damp prison cell for the night and getting executed in the morning surly was'nt an idea of a good time.

The door opened and Akitt was blinded by the sudden burst of light. He could see two silhouettes through the light.

"Come on you stupid Mudokon!" a Slig like voice said.

Akitt sadly got up and approached the two figures. The Slig jabbed Akitt's back with the end of his gun.

"Follow me." Malkis said leading the way.

Malkis led them through a door leading to a balcony.

"It sure is convenient having a factory floating in the sea. Especially for executions." Malkis said with a smile on his face.

"Anything you want to say before you die Mudokon." asked Malkis.

"No? Then..."

"You can't keep using Mudokons as slaves! If you keep on enslaving us someday there will be a resistance! Akitt yelled.

"Nonsense! Kerf!" Malkis exclaimed

Kerf nodded and struck hard on Akitt's back with the end of his gun causing him to wobble at the edge. Akitt slipped off the balcony looking for something to hold on. He saw a pipe and reached for it but it was too late. Akitt fell into the ocean.

This is my first attempt at an Oddworld fic if it's not good. More soon!

[Monkey-Man2000]

Does anyone like my story?

[•[cyrus]•]

I'ts good but very short

[Monkey-Man2000]

It'll get better and much, much more longer.

[Rich]

It's great

[Monkey-Man2000]

Chapter 2

Location: Unknown
Time: About Noon

Akitt woke up with a headache, bruises, and sprained arms and legs. His mouth tasted like salt. He had survived. Akitt slowly got up stumbling on his limp legs. Seaweed was all over his body along with a starfish on his face. He was so weak he tripped and had to crawl. Akitt crawled over to the edge of a cliff near the shore. Once again he tried to get up and saw a huge jungle with colorful birds flying in the sky. He felt weightless as the brisk wind blew on his bruised body. There were birds singing, insects squeaking, and Scrabs howling. Mountains surrounded the beautiful landscape. Reds, blues, greens, yellows, everykind of color imaginable was before Akkit's salty eyes. With the birds singing him into a daze he fell asleep.

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"Chief we have wonderful news!" a Mudokon native said as he bursted into the chief's hut.

"What is it Pakot? the chief asked alaramed.

"A god is among us!" Pakot exclaimed.

"What?!" asked the chief.

"I was getting firewood when a Mudokon rose from the ocean covered in plants and had a star on his face." Pakot said quickly.

"What are his intentions?" the chief asked quite intrigued.

"I don't know. I ran away right when I saw him!" Pakot exclaimed.

"Get our finest warriors out there to investigate! exclaimed the chief with his eyes wide open.

"Yes chief." Pakot said as he ran out the door.

"A god huh? I hope this is a blessing rather then a curse." the chief thought to himself.

There! BTW this happens before the games. More soon!

[•[cyrus]•]

Cool ........ have you read my fanfic it's in the New : Omni's Story Go there and check it out

[Monkey-Man2000]

Chapter 3

Location: Jungle Valley
Time: Night

Akitt awoke to a loud screeching noise. His leg felt better but he still could'nt walk very well. One of his sprained arms rubbed a large bruise on his chest when suddenly he got trampled by a Paramite who then screamed to alert the other Paramites. Two more appeared with saliva dripping from their fangs. They started biting Akitt, ripping flesh from his body. Akitt felt for something he could use again'st the Paramites and found a rock that perfectly fit in his palm. He rose his hand in the air and slammed the rock on the middle Paramite's head. The Paramite was knocked out as Akitt kicked a Paramite away. By this time Akitt rose and threw the rock at the remaining Paramite. He slid down the cliff and ran for it. His leg hurt extremly bad now but he kept on going. Akitt was so excited by the moment he ran into a tree where just like the Paramite was knocked out.

[Monkey-Man2000]

Chapter 4

Location: Jungle Valley
Time: Mid Morning

"Hey, wake up!" a voice said.

"What?" Akitt asked as he opened his eyes.

"You have awoke great god of the seas." another Mudokon said.

"God...what?" Akitt looked suprised from the statement.

"Are you sure this is the god, Lonsao?" a Mudokon whispered into anothers ear.

"We will take you to our village so our shaman can see you." said the one reffered as Lonsao.

"Well I am kinda hungry." said Akitt.



"How can that be a god! Gods can't be hungry!" a Mudokon mumbled loudly.

"The shaman will see if this guy is a god or not. And if he if he isn't we have to shelter and feed him. I mean look how wounded he is!" Lonsao told the mumbling Mudokon.

Akitt's body had flesh ripped off of it and bone was showing in some places.

"Follow us. We will take you to our village." said Lonsao

Akitt started to follow the strange Mudokons. He was very hungry and needed food soon so he had no choice.

[Wise Abe]

Pretty good. You guys should all work together and write a huge Oddworld novel, lol.