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Bob the Fish

Some of you may or may have not been on my Bob the fish website. Yo ucan find out more about Bob at www.bobthefish.bravehost.com, but first, heres my story:

Bob The Fish

Hello, my name is Bob. Bob the fish. I’m a blow fish who lives in the Atlantic ocean. If you can promise to keep it a secret, I’ll tell you the story of my quest for the Killer Shark!

Chapter 1: The beginning
It all started when I was a tiny little blow fish, wandering around the ocean, my Dad came home. He had went out to catch some of his prey, so that we could have some for dinner, but he came back with nothing.
When my Mum came to ask him what had happened, he told us, he told us something that I would never forget. He came face to face, with a great white shark. It chased him until, it, my father decided to try and scare it, so, he puffed up and released poison from his body. The shark swam away noticing the poison, but my Dad, had been swimming for so long, he had ran out of breath, he was exhausted. He couldn’t swim. He inhaled his own poison.
That night, he was asleep inside our cave that we lived in. I could see him tossing and turning, and then, he blew up. Floating around like a big balloon. He was sick. Three days of misery and no food passed when I decided that I would go and hunt for the food. We had had no food for 3 days because my Dad was sick.
So, I travelled, Puffed out my chest, and swam out. I looked strong and scary. Like I was going to kill any fish that I saw, even if it was a fellow blow fish, however, I need to find food for my family.
But I thought
“What if I look weak? What if, a shark would try to eat me, and I inhale my own poison. I turned back looking incredibly weak, swimming as fast as I could, when I suddenly felt sad. Something wasn’t right. I felt like something was missing. I felt empty (And know, it wasn’t that I’d released my poison.)
I came back to my cave, to hear my Mum crying.
“Bob! Go, to Dr. Barracuda!”
“Why, what’s wrong”
“ I think, that your father has, died!”
She burst into more tears, along with me, and we puffed up to show that we were sad.
This was when I decided that, I would catch the shark that killed my Father. I would destroy him and all his family, show him what it’s like, to loose something important! I’ll kill every shark, in the Atlantic Ocean if I have to… Or maybe I’ll just chop off his fin”
So, in the middle of the night, I tied a rope around my head, put on a Ninja gown, and grabbed a spear. I was gonna catch this shark, even If I were to die trying.
So I set off, with the reflection of the moonlight coming through the sea, the raindrops patting on the top of the ocean, making a silent tapping sound as I travelled. As I was a few feet away from my cave, I wondered if I should tell my Mum. Weather she would be scared that I was gone in the morning, weather she would call the Local Anemone, to ask the Reef Police to go and search for me. If she would go and tell Principle Wray that I ran away from home for no reason. And just after what happened to Dad, it would be to much for her to take. I would go and tell the police at the Anemone, to tell them I was off to kill a shark. Maybe they would be happy, or maybe they would arrest me, it was just a chance that I would have to take.
I turned into the reef, swimming at top speed to get to the Anemone before it closed. I scarped myself a few time on Coral, one of the times I released poison. I released poison, but I was worn out. I knew that this wouldn’t work, I was going to die, just the way my father had, but before I knew it, I had swam away from my poison and was sitting in the Anemone talking to the Chief Police.
The Chief police was a clownfish. He was covered in a glowing gel. A glowing gel is quite natural for clownfish; this stops them from getting stung by Anemones and Jelly fish.
“It’s a bit late for you to be up young man”
Said the Chief, eating reef gunk that he had scraped off.
“I came here to tell you something”
I replied looking very scared, as this police had a jellyfish tentacle in one of his hands.
“Could you not point that thing at me, it’s kind of scary!”
I said starring at the tentacle.
“Don’t worry about this, We’ve just had a major accident three days ago, a Shark nearly murdered a blowfish! That shark is now hiding in the White Water reef, that’s our village kid, I suggest you either stay here with me or take cover!”
I started to cry. I was hoping he wouldn’t mention anything about my Dad. But he did. He then realised that the victim was my father. I heard something. It was coming from the Chiefs Walkie-Talkie.
“Chief, do you come in? I’ve found the Shark. He’s been hiding in the Coral Pub! I’m in here with I’m in here with Agent Cooks! Hey, Cooks, get away from the coral, you can get caught!”
The chiefs eyes lit up. He grabbed the Walkie Talkie and yelled in it at the top of his voice “ No! A shark can sense blood over two miles away, your not even 12 metres!”
“Chief, He’s woke up, no get away from me, no stop Ahhhhhhhh…..
The signal went. The Shark, had attacked…


Well, hope you like it, I'll post more soon
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