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Dark

Guess who's back...? *backflips* Yaay, Uni is started again... (now all I have to do is pass these bloody re-takes and I'll be a happy merf - if I don't, I'll vanish again. But that's another story)

AAAAAaaanyway... I thought I better post "Dark" here - I was hoping to be able to get my other fics finished before then (apologies to those who are getting confused - I always have too many fics on the go at once, but hey *looks in Rett's direction*), but as Drag will otherwise be posting spoilers, of a kind... *rolls eyes* Here we go, I guess....

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Chapter One


Dren was late getting back home.
Aalu sat out on the platform in front of her tree home, impatiently waiting for her son to arrive back. I’m only going out for a walk, he’d said. No need to worry about me… And normally she wouldn’t worry about him, knew he’d be okay, he was smart enough to keep to the trees, so he could nip up one the moment danger threatened – a lot of the sligs around the town had gone back to their “wild state,” these days. Perhaps it was the freedom it gave them, unencumbered by those heavy pants and mask, or perhaps it was a determination not let the natives that lived nearby get any sort of sense of superiority, the natives with that fierce pride and grace in their natural environment. Whatever the reason, more and more of the ex-industrials were learning the ropes, getting the hang of living in the trees, and the muds felt less threatened by them that way, which was a bonus.
Some, like Aalu and her mate, Rek, had the best of both worlds, so to speak. Rek had a ground-based job – he was one of the chemists down Medcentre, the flourishing “hospital” on the outskirts of town, and needed to keep his pants. But their children – Aalu had only found out she was a queen something by accident – had been brought up almost entirely in the trees, like the natives’ children were…
Even if you ignored his dark skin and those eyes like black marbles, little Dren had always been different, had always been something of a loner, so unlike the species, and yet… and yet… he’d never been out so late, not alone… Aalu was fretting, scouring the dusk until she couldn’t see any more. After all, even though sligs matured far faster than the muds did, Dren was still young – he wasn’t even a year old yet, was still essentially a child, no matter what he said…
It was dark by the time Dren finally crawled in, covered from snout to tail in fine silty dust and hairline scratches, panting exhaustedly.
“Where have you been?” Aalu demanded, worriedly. “Your father and I have been so worried about you…”
“I don’t see why that’s any business of yours,” he snapped in reply, pushing past her and heading towards the curtain that formed a doorway between the main living area and where he slept.
“Dren!” she exclaimed, angrily.
“Jus’ leave me the frack alone!” he snarled, briefly showing her his teeth, and was gone, leaving her staring speechlessly after him.

Aalu was still fretting when she and her mate retired for the night, but for an altogether different reason this time.
Rek gently pulled her closer, nibbled at the back of her neck. “You worry too much,” he told her, with a gentle smile. “He’s probably just trying to fit in with the rest of the industrial youngsters; they argue about anything and everything. He’ll soon grow out of it.”
“I hope so…” she huddled closer, and shivered. “It was… oh, I don’t know…” she shook her head. “Scary, in a way… I’ve never seen him behave like that…!” Maybe…” she sat up. “Maybe he’s sick…!”
He clicked his tongue, rolled his eyes and gently pulled her back, and nuzzled her, gently. “If that’s the case, then he’ll probably be fine, after a nights sleep.”
“Is he asleep now?”
“Yes, I checked. He’s fast asleep,” Rek yawned, and showed all those fine, sharp teeth. “As I’m hoping to be, shortly…”
He was just starting to drift off to sleep when she asked, softly; “You think he’ll be okay then?”
“If you’re that worried,” he said, sleepily. “Take him to see Foggy tomorrow morning; I checked the rota, and he’s not busy…”

So, next morning found Dren scowling blackly in one of the examination rooms, making Xar’s job difficult. The little medic was trying to check his heartbeat, but the stethoscope was cold, and Dren didn’t like it, kept squirming.
Will yer damn well sit still?” Xar snapped, sharply.
“That stupid thing’s cold!” Dren replied, equally sharply, and showed his teeth.
“Dren!” Aalu scolded, but Xar was already reciprocating in kind, wrinkling his lips away from his teeth, so she gave up after that.
After half an hour Xar could only shrug and tell her what he’d told her at the start – he couldn’t see anything wrong with the youngster; maybe he was just being bloody-minded, but there was certainly nothing physically wrong with him…
“I don’ like ‘im,” Dren told her, sullenly, head on her shoulder, as they walked away from the health centre.
“Oh, shush Dren,” she replied, tiredly. “There was no need for all that nonsense…”
Dren pouted. “Well, I still don’ like ‘im. He oughtter be careful, he’s goin’ to get in the neck one o’ these days…”
“Dren,” she warned, raising a finger. “Watch your manners. If you keep this up you’re going to be the one getting it in the neck…”
He shrugged, snorted, and looked away.
At a sudden commotion, the two looked up, argument forgotten, for the time being, at least. There were two mudokons, arguing by one of the elum pens.
“Well, it was all right last night!” one yelled, pointing at a fallen shape in the pen. “It wouldn’t just keel over and die, just like that, so you must have done something to it!”
“I didn’t do anything to it!” the other replied, arms folded across his chest. “You must have fed it something dodgy last night, I thought it had been acting weird…”
Aalu looked into the pen as they passed; one of the elums lay on its side, unmoving, – dead? she wondered. Yes, it looked it – its tongue lolled out and there was a look of pained fear in its soft eyes…
She shivered, involuntarily, and hurried on.

In the dim twilight of evening, a dark, brooding presence lay, dozing fitfully. He was hungry – he was always hungry – and weak. But then, cooped up for so many years, he supposed he shouldn’t be surprised he was weak… Weak, and hungry. Hungry and weak.
After all, that elum had been healthy enough, but the lower intelligences never sustained him for long; never quite sated the ravening hunger that always burned in his mind… He needed to hunt for stronger prey.
He pushed himself to his feet, and padded off in search of a more… suitable quarry.

Chapter Two

It was early morning; the rising sun was busily painting the landscape in washed colour, and the dew was still heavy on the air. Not many of the adults were up yet, but most of the youngest generation, slig and mudokon alike, in a typically childlike manner, were up and active, and Aalu’s children were no different.
“Hey… hey! ‘Aura, c’mere!” it was Dren’s voice – high and excited.
Aura made her way over as fast as she could. “What is it?” she asked, watching as he rustled about in a patch of waist-high ferns and trying to see what he was up to.
“I found someone’s pants!” he said, excitedly. “Heh, now I c’n keep up wi’ th’lads…!”
“Yeah, an’ when their owner finds out yer nicked ‘em, yer fer the chop…” she said, dryly, then sniffed the air, thoughtfully. “I c’n smell blood.”
Dren emerged from the tall fronds, dragging the pants with some difficulty. “Prob’ly drunk,” he said, dismissively. “An’ cut ‘imself on a briar, or summat.”
“I dunno, Dren…” she shook her head. Can’t yer smell it?”
He sniffed, noisily. “Nope,” he shook his head. “I can’t smell nothin’. Well, not blood, anyroads,” and turned his attention back to the cybernetic legs he’d found. “C’mon, gimme a hand here…”
“Not until yer help me figure out why I can smell blood!”
“Fine, I’ll do it meself, then,” he pouted, and struggled into the dark metal contraption.
Aura scowled back, and turned away, padding into the tall vegetation. The scent of blood was stronger here, she was sure of it…
She followed her nose for a good while, pushing through the plants, until the tall plants thinned out to close cropped grass – one of the summer grazing paddocks for the elums, she guessed – and came to the first dull red patch, staining the short plants an ugly brown – she shivered. There was quite a lot here – no wonder the smell was so strong… she circumnavigated it, padded along the scent trail, knowing she should be going back now, knowing that she wouldn’t like what she’d find at the end of the trail, but unable to stop herself, all the same…
The tree the trail led to had another of those dull stains at the foot of its trunk, the scent of the dry blood now sharp and pungent – it was a fear scent, she realised…
Then, with her eyes, followed the trail of red up the tree.
The horribly mutilated body of one of Xar’s medics, suspended mudokon-height off the ground and impaled on a broken tree-branch, shattered ribs visible where the branch protruded, stared blindly back down at her, a look of utter terror frozen into his features.
She screamed.

The brooding malevolence watched with a smile as the medical team lifted their comrade’s cold, mangled body from where he’d hung it – the unfortunate creature had still been alive, at this point – on the tree. It had been fun, he mused, finally getting some better, more sustaining prey, even though he’d had to torture it a bit to get its Lifeglow a little brighter… And it was nice to know he still knew all the tricks, that all those long, long lonely years of imprisonment hadn’t stolen his skills…
He licked his fingers, cleaning the last traces of blood from below his blunt nails, not needing the life-fluid to survive but liking the taste, and giggled.

Bea went with Drek down to Medcentre the instant she heard what had happened.
Xar met her at the ward doorway, a haunted expression on his pinched features. “Through ‘ere,” he said, sharply. “We, uh… we finished examinin’ him… uh, he, uh…” he swallowed, and the words came out in a rush, as though they couldn’t get out fast enough. “He ain’t too pretty a sight, Boss Lady, whoever killed ‘im didn’ do it quick, an’, uh, Bea, mebbe I, uh, mebbe I better stay out here wi’ yer…”
Bea looked at him; he wouldn’t meet her gaze, at first, but when he did there was a stricken expression in his eyes. “Are you all right, Xar?”
“I, uh…” the medic said, but his voice was suddenly dry, and the words caught in his throat. He coughed, tried again. “I autopsied ‘im,” he jerked a thumb at the doorway, and heaved a shaking sigh. “I’m meant ter be his Alpha, an’ I autopsied ‘im… He was one o’ my pack, an’ I had ter cut ‘im t’pieces…!” That seemed to be the last straw – his face crumpled and he turned away, one hand going to his mouth.
Bea stayed silent, at first – what could she say, after all? Anyone who’d lost a brother would find it tough to cope – and it was especially tough for such a social creature… “Xar…” she tried at last, padding over and putting a hand on his shoulder. “Xar, don’t blame yourself…”
He drew a shuddering breath. “I’m tryin’ not ter…” he said, in a hoarse whisper. “But it’s tough, y’know…?”
She nodded. “I know…” she gave him a sad smile. “Why don’t you go home, Xar?”
“They need me here…”
“Not right now they don’t. Go home, and get some sleep, and if I find you still here in five minutes,” her voice took on a hard edge, although both knew it was just for show. “I’ll get Tank to carry you. Okay?”
Xar managed the fleetingest of smiles in return. “I’ll try, Boss Lady…” he replied, hoarsely, shrugged off his jacket and left.
Bea turned to Drek – found he’d already gone through, and was trying to read Xar’s hideous scrawl, but kept getting distracted by the body, still laid out on the plastic covered bed in the empty ward.
“Drek…?” she said, gently.
He looked up, a sickened expression on his old face. “Who could've done this…?”
“I don’t know,” she shook her head, solemnly. “But we’ll find out…”
“What if they kill again, though…?!”
“You think they will?”
“I’d stake my place in th’council on it, Bea… whoever could've done somethin’ as… as hateful… as this – and obviously enjoy it! – I’d be surprised if they didn’ kill again, and soon…”
She nodded, sorrowfully. “I was hoping you wouldn’t say that, Drek…” she said, voice choked. “Because it’s the exact same thing as I was thinking.”
Drek put the clipboard with Xar’s notes back down on the bench and covered the body with a sheet, unable to stand seeing it any more. “How th’frack are we goin’ t’find ‘em, Bea…?” he asked, hoarsely.
She shook her head, helplessly. “We’d better call the council.”
“Yeah,” he turned away, headed for the door. “I’ll go tell ‘em…”
Bea was about to follow, but something caught her eye. She paused in her stride, backtracked a few steps. “Drek… come take a quick look at this…”
“Aw Bea, I don’ want ter look at that… that thing… no more…”
“Please, Drek…”
He winced, but went to her shoulder. “What?”
“Do you see those burns?” she pointed at the dead medic’s temples.
He squinted – his eyes were rheumy, and his eyesight was failing even more rapidly. “I think so… what about ‘em?”
“What could have made them, do you suppose?”
“Frack, I dunno. Can we go now?” He hated the way he sounded – like a bored child – but wanted to get out of there… “It’s givin’ me th’creeps, an’ makin’ me feel ill…”
Bea nodded, dropped the sheet back into place. “Yes… yes, certainly, I want to get out of here just as much as you do…” she replied, but she sounded somewhat absent, lost in thought.
Drek gave her a worried look, but vanished off to go and call the meeting.

Drek sat in his usual place at the far end of the massive stone table, and surveyed the faces before him. On his right sat Bea, studying her fingers, which were laced in front of her, and on his left was Arrik, a bad-tempered twelve-year-old slig, scowling as usual. Across from Arrik was Ben, a mud of an equivalent age, who seemed to enjoy verbally sparring with him. Next to him, discussing things in hushed voices, were Sker’rikka and K’zen (Sker and Zen for short), two of the fiercely proud slig natives that had set up home close to town. Tay and Rin, two more mudokons, sat opposite, silently brooding. There were a handful of lower ranking councillors clustered at the far end, all chattering worriedly and quietly, and, behind Drek, Hak was a brooding presence, there more to act as a calming influence on the younger, more excitable councillors than anything.
Drek cleared his throat. “I’m sure yer all heard what happened,” he said, calmly. “So I don’ need to explain, other than one o’ the medics was killed last night. I want ter discuss our options, gentlepeeps,” and sighed. “If we have any.”
There was a murmur of agreement. “Yeah, we all heard about it, Drek,” Ben said, sadly. “I met Xar, too – he looked pretty cut up about it.”
“So would yer be,” Arrik cut in, softly. “If one o’ yer brothers had just been murdered.”
Ben opened his mouth to shoot back a suitably scathing comment – Drek raised his hands, “Come on, lads, please… don’ go arguin’ already…” he said, tiredly. “We need some ideas. I’m guessin’ our culprit will strike again at some point, havin’ seen his, uhm… handiwork…” he winced. “An’ we want ter be able ter catch ‘im before he kills.”
“I don’t see what we can do, yet…” Tay said, softly. “Pains me to admit it, but our search teams didn’t find even a scrap of a clue at the site, today. It’s as if he killed himself.”
Sker nodded agreement. “We didn’t find anything, either,” he said, in that sharp, reedy voice. “Our best hunters found nothing. No scents. No scraps of weapon. Nothing. Just a…” he frowned, shook his head. “Just a somewhat… burnt, almost metallic smell on the air.”
Bea gave him a curious look. “Burnt, you say?”
Sker cocked his head. “Yes; why d’you ask, Bea?”
She shook her head. “Nothing. Just… a little odd…” and smiled, wanly. “Don’t mind me, I’m not making much sense to myself at the moment. And, uh, forgive me for telling you how to do your job, but shouldn’t you ought to start coming up with ideas…?”
Drek leaned closer, while the others brainstormed – or tried to. “Bea… Didn’ you find burns on his temples…?” he asked, softly.
The old lady nodded, solemnly.
“Think it means somethin’?”
“I don’t like to hazard any guesses yet, Drek, but I think it may do.”
“Yeah, but… what?”
She just shook her head, and wouldn’t be drawn further.

Hak strode along next to Drek as the two made their way over to the ‘police station’ on the outskirts of town; the meeting had come to, in Drek’s mind, a very unsatisfactory conclusion – nightly patrols were being doubled, and that was it. But then, he mused, it was pretty much all they could do, really…
“Reckon we’ll find ‘im very quick?” Hak asked, softly, rousing Drek from his reverie.
Drek looked up at his giant pack-mate. “I dunno, Hak,” he replied, softly, chewing on a fingernail. “I hope so, but…”
“Yer don’ think we will, do yer?”
Drek shook his head, solemnly. “No,” he admitted. “An’ I’m worried he’ll kill a lot more before then…”

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Anyway. Comments welcome, as usual... *grins*
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*looks up from where he was tucking into a bowl of pasta and cheese, hearing the mention of his name* what? someone want me? *sees Teal staring at him* oh, hi Teal, welcome back! now, what are you staring at?
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well like a told you before...it will be a bit before i get to the point where the spoilers would start happening. Very nice Teal...can't wait to see the next chap.

Malice: hmmm this dude is my kind of guy...*grins*

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Aura: *watches Malice, and whispers* Hey Boss Lady, can I toast 'im again...?

*rolls eyes* If you want to get eaten, all right then.

Aura: *blows raspberry in Malice's direction and goes off in a huff*
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Well, if anyone's interested, here's some more...

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Chapter Three

And, as though to prove Drek’s doomsaying, even with the increased patrols, the next night another of the town’s inhabitants was killed. A mud, this time, as horribly mutilated as the medic had been, hung by his arms on a tree on the outskirts of town, his head lolling on a broken neck.
And there, on his temples, were those confusing little burns. Drek could see that Bea had her suspicions about them, but she wouldn’t be drawn, and he didn’t like to push. All he could do was try to keep the peace, and try to keep the townspeople calm.
Which was proving ever harder to do, after the third night and the third death. Three murders in three nights – four, if you counted the elum – and everyone suddenly feared that they’d be next. Mud or slig, it didn’t matter what you were, because you knew he didn’t care who he picked… Drek had tried to be pragmatic – no-one knew he’d even kill again, he said, vainly, maybe it was just a rogue scrab unable to kill anything else, that in its hurry to feed had by some fluke managed to throw his victims into the trees… He managed to keep most of the adults calm, but the youngsters were all jumpy, expecting this unseen, unknown, terrifying creature, this bogeyman, to come get them when they were asleep in bed…
And a lot now flatly refused to go anywhere without an adult with them. Where four days ago they’d been happy to romp around unwatched, and the adults had reasoned they were pretty safe and didn’t worry, the children now refused to even cross the street without an escort – in case it was hiding in the trees somewhere…
Aura and Dren were no different. The little female in particular had suddenly got very clingy, and tended to stick close to Hak, when she could find him.
She was with him that afternoon, perched on his massive shoulder and leaning against him. “I’m scared, Uncle Tank…” she whimpered softly into his ear. “What if he comes t’get us…? Me an’ Dren… how we goin’ t’protect ourselves…?”
Hak raised a hand and patted her, gently. “Aw, c’mon, Aura,” he said, in that deep, brassy rumble. “No one ain’t goin’ ter get you while I’m here.”
“Still scared, though…” she huddled closer. “What if he gets yer?”
Hak rumbled a laugh. “He could try, but that’s as far as he’d get. I’d sit on ‘im.”
That prompted a tired giggle. “Yeah, fat old Tank’d squish ‘im ter a pulp…” she said, nudging snouts.
“Watch who yer callin’ fat, kiddo,” Hak chuckled. “Now, how ‘bout no more o’ that nonsense, huh?”
She drew a breath. “I’ll try,” she said, resolutely, and added, more quietly. “He wouldn’ get me wi’ you here, huh?”
Hak smiled, but didn’t reply, wondering if either of them were right…

Xar was working late, as usual, trying to keep his mind off things. It was one of those stifling hot days, and even the air conditioner the last raid team had staggered back with – he hadn’t liked to ask how they’d got hold of it – was struggling to keep the surgery cool.
So when he went out and asked the duty nurse to make sure they remembered to get some gob swauzes in for the next day and got a blank look, he decided it was finally time to turn in.
Outside was at last getting cool; dusk had painted the landscape in a dull monochrome, and a fine mist was falling, stealing the heat out of the air. He shrugged his jacket off and leaned back against the cool outer wall of the building, closed his aching eyes and let the chill air take some of the heat out of his skin. He felt sticky, uncomfortable, nearly two days worth of grime on his face, and wanted to go home and sleep, but had to wait for the night patrol to get there, to escort him back. He was content to wait – it was far nicer out here than indoors, where it was still stickily uncomfortable.
But… abruptly, something disturbed him. He stood up straight, nerves suddenly alert for action, for some reason… “Someone there?” he asked, anxiously.
No answer.
He felt the eyes, though, burning into him like hot coals. “Please…” he back closer to the doorway. “C’mon, quit playin’ games, if there’s someone there then show yerself…!”
Still nothing.
Come on, Foggy, his sensible side chided. You’re over-reacting – there’s no-one out there, it’s just your imagination playing tricks.
That’s it, that’s all it was. A trick. His mind, playing tricks. That was all… Xar swallowed, thickly, concentrated on trying to get his heartbeat back to normal.
A thin, high, insane little giggle echoed from somewhere in the trees nearby.
Xar almost leaped out of his skin, staggered backward. “Whosat?” he demanded, shrilly, hands flat against the cold wall and looking for the door.
The giggle again, from the other side, this time. “Who…?” it enquired, thinly.
Breath coming in gasps, Xar realised with a sense of horror that he’d somehow missed the doorway, that it was the other way, closer to that… that creature… “Leavemealone,” he whined, faintly, wondering if Esk had had to suffer this torment before it killed him and strung him up… no… No! No, mustn’t think that, he wasn’t going to get you, he wasn’t, the door was here…
The voice giggled, softly, a sharp, nasal sound right next to his ear. “I scare you, slig…?” it asked, in that thin, insane voice, as the head medic gave a sobbing, panicked yelp of fear and leaped away as though stung.
“Who are yer?” he demanded, breath coming in short, panicked gasps, struggling to see the doorway. “Show yerself!”
There was that giggle again, from ahead and to one side. “Would seeing me make you fear me less, slig…?” the voice asked, tauntingly.
He jumped, backing away from the sound, shaking his head. “Leave me alone…” he whined. “Please, fer Odd’s sake, leave me along… I ain’t done nothin’ ter yer…”
“I’m hun-gry,” the voice said, in a singsong manner, right next to his ear, and before he could lurch away something dealt an excruciating blow to the back of his head, pitching him forward with a cry of panic.
Damnit, where was Night Patrol, he wondered, desperately, kicking out and trying to flip himself upright again, and then abruptly remembered his best weapon – his voice. “Help!” Xar howled at the top of his lungs, like the Foghorn he was nicknamed after. “HEEELP!!”
His unseen assailant gave a snarl of fury, as though sensing his prey would give him the slip, and gave him another of those smart clouts around the head; Xar’s wail for help turned into a startled choke of pain, and he staggered, blindly, nearly fell. Senses swimming, he could hear the night patrol approaching at a run at his cry, but sensed it was too late even as he tried in vain to fend off his unseen attacker.
There was the sudden touch of ice at his temples…
…and a blistering, tearing sensation tore into his mind, like savage nails ripping at his consciousness; he gave a tortured scream as his world exploded into black and violet stars.
And then there was nothing.

Damn those guards, he thought, watching from a distance as they yelled for help and carried the insensate head medic away. He hadn’t managed to completely consume that one, there was still something of an essence left in its mind, but no matter. It wouldn’t be telling anyone what happened…
He giggled, softly, and rippled that dark fire over his limbs, the dark fire that made him all but invisible, let him waltz about and feed on who he chose. Perhaps he ought to go for one of those bigger ones, next time – maybe even try for that great mountain of a soldier – their Lifeglow would keep him going for a long time, make him stronger, for when The Time came…
He licked the droplets of blood from his fingertips, and giggled.

The medic gestured. “I don’ know what’s wrong wi’ him,” he said, sadly, watching as the readings tracked steadily across the screen. “He should be awake. There’s no reason fer ‘im ter still be like this, but…” he spread his hands, hopelessly. “He is.”
Bea nodded, tiredly. “I’m sure you’re doing all you can do,” she said, gently, gazing down on Xar’s calm, placid features and watching the slow in-out sigh of his breathing.
The medic hung his head, as though his helplessness was a shame, weighing his shoulders down. “We’re meant t’be good doctors here,” he said, softly. “An’ we don’ even know what’s wrong wi’ ‘im, Boss lady…!”
“It isn’t your fault,” she tried to reassure him. “And I think there’s more at work here than someone with a grudge.”
Drek, who’d been silent until now, opposite her, dragged himself up through the murk of his sorrow. “What d’yer mean, Bea…?”
She shook her head. “I’m not sure myself, Drek…” she replied, softly. “And I don’t want to say anything until I’m sure.”
“Y’can trust me, can’t yer?”
She looked up at him, across Xar’s still form, and held his gaze for a second. Then looked away, again, sadly – it was all the answer he needed. His shoulders slumped; but then, he should have expected it, shouldn’t he? Everyone was a suspect, and anyone could be the one they were looking for – even her. It pained him to imagine it, but even dear old Bea could be the killer, as unimaginable as it sounded – but then, he knew the old mud was much more powerful than she’d ever let on, just by the way the visiting shamans treated her.
But it still hurt, to have the finger of suspicion pointed at you, to know you couldn’t be trusted just in case. “I understand,” he replied, faintly.
“Oh Drek…” she rounded the end of the bed. “Please, don’t be like that, you know you’re the one person I wish I could trust… but…” she spread her paws.
He nodded. “Yeah, I know. Y’can’t trust no-one…”
“Uh, Boss lady…?” the medic spoke up again, weakly. “D’yer know how we c’n wake ‘im up…?”
Bea sighed, softly, and gave her head a tired shake. “Until I know what’s going on, there’s not a lot I can do.”
The medic nodded. “So he’ll jus’… stay like this?”
She met his gaze, could see the sorrow there; it was the second of their brothers this pack would lose. “Can you keep him alive like this?”
A nod. “Pretty sure we can, anyway… y’think he’ll wake up, then?” there was a painful hope in his voice.
She summoned a tired, wan smile up from somewhere. “I think he will, eventually. I’m not sure when – I fear it could even take months – but I have a feeling in my old bones that he’ll be all right, in the end.”
The medic managed a lopsided smile. “Y’think?”
She gave him what she hoped was a reassuring smile. “Yes, I think.”
Yet in her heart, she didn’t think so, not really. Xar would likely remain this way until he died; she could see the tiny burns on his temples, and knew in her heart who the killer was. But finding him was the problem.

Chapter Four

Hak was out on patrol. It was well past midnight, and the stormy sky above made the night even inkier and oppressive than normal, but Hak didn’t mind, not overly much. He was the only one out on patrol alone, these days; most of the patrol teams were pairs or more, but he’d reasoned he was big enough to be pretty much safe, and Drek had reluctantly agreed with him. Both the old slig and Bea had advised caution, though, so Hak had ensured he didn’t stray far into the trees; but then, he guessed he wouldn’t have done so anyway.
The heavy sky spoke of a storm brewing, and Hak could smell the richness of damp earth blowing in on the wind from the east. He guessed they’d have the mother of all thunderstorms late the next afternoon, which was good, in a way – it would keep everyone indoors, in the dry, and out of reach (he hoped) of the whoeveritwas.
He strode onward, scouring the shadows for anything that might be suspect, when he felt eyes on the back of his neck. He paused, straightened, and scented the air, thoughtfully, but couldn’t smell anything.
“Hello…?” he enquired.
There was no answer, but then he’d have been very surprised if there had been. He went on, more cautiously, now, listening intently, trying in vain to see into the shadowed dark and catch a glimpse of what he’d sensed…

He watched, silently, as the massive brute cast about for the scent he’d never find, and silently giggled to himself. While it was almost blind in the velvet dark, he saw things by their Lifeglows – as though they were translucent beings filled with a vibrant purplish light – and the stronger the glow the stronger its owner. The elum he’d first preyed on had been a sullen, dirty purple; the medic, too, had been a dingy mauve, although it had burned a far brighter violet when he’d impaled it on that tree branch before sucking the pathetic life out of it…
But this… this living mountain of a soldier… who somehow knew he was there but couldn’t quite put his finger on where… it glowed a savagely bright purple-white. Such raw power… It was enticing, he had to very nearly restrain himself from chasing after it and attacking it there and then…
He flitted after it in the shadows, hungrily. The power he’d get from this Lifeglow would sustain and strengthen him more than the energy from four of this soldier’s rather pathetic little worker cousins…

There was a thin, insane giggle from somewhere behind him.
Hak gave a start and span almost full circle, as though stung. “Who’s there?” he demanded.
“Who…?” asked the voice; thin, somewhat reedy, but nasal, too – impossible to tell what it was, could have been a slig but could equally have been a mud or something else. A giggle. “I scare you?”
Hak frowned. “Nope. Where are yer?”
The voice spoke again, this time from behind him again. “I don’t scare you? Better fix that…”
Hak kept still, listening as the thin voice tracked round him, weaving closer and then further away, in and out, maddeningly. “So yer the one that’s been killin’ th’residents…”
Another giggle. “Oh so very tasty, they were, too. I’m hungry, you know.”
Hak sensed it was approaching him. “I guessed. Y’know, we could help yer find food, if yer that desperate…”
“Oh, but it’s not food,” it demurred, weaving around again, but inching closer. “It’s something from the spirit that I take…” and another giggle, thin and maddening. “You would satisfy my hunger for some time, my tall friend.”
“I’m sure,” Hak tensed. “But yer not getting’ th’chance t’find out.”
As he’d suspected there would be, there was a touch of ice at his shoulders – his nerves were already taut, so that lightest of touches was like touching a hair trigger. He exploded into movement, and in one smooth, powerful movement, backhanded his unseen assailant cleanly away.
There was a low, annoyed hiss from the other side of the square. "Ooh, I'll get yer next time, fatty..." the voice promised, in a snarl so low and hateful it sent a chill up Hak’s spine, and next instant he caught the fleetingest glimpse of a shadowwy figure darting away, gone in seconds, too fast to see its species.
He stared in the direction it’d gone, then lifted his muzzle skyward and gave the low, thunderous boom Patrol had agreed on as a panic call.
Pru and one of her Razors were there in half a minute. “Tank! Wassup?” she demanded, urgently.
He gave her a concerned look. “I jus’ got attacked.”
Her eyes widened. “But yer-”
“Alive? Yeah, I gave it a smack round the chops an’ it ran off,” he was already headed over in the direction he’d seen it flee, swinging his massive head back and forth, questing for the scent he knew should be there and unable to smell anything but the sun-scorched earth.
“Yer hit it?” Pru sounded impressed.
“Yeah,” he turned, stared at her. “It ran off this way, an’ I can’t smell nothin’.”
“Yer sure?” Pru was casting about as well now, head low. “Mebbe it was further over…”
“Naw, it was here, I tell yer…” he insisted. “It ran down between th’buildings here.”
The Razor lifted his head. “Can’t smell nothin’, Boss lady,” he said; he looked like a younger version of Hak, smaller and with a thinner voice, but with the same almost ponderous air and very deliberate manner. “Mebbe we best split up, cover more ground that way.”
She shook her head. “Don’t yer even think it, Sker’,” she said, sternly. “He won’t have gone far, I’m guessin’ – whatchoo reckon, Tank?”
“I’m reckonin’ the same thing, lady,” Hak was already halfway down the narrow alleyway, baffled at the lack of scent. He knew it had been here, dammit…
Pru padded after him. “I don’ get it. Surely there should be some scent?”
Hak nodded, tiredly. “Naw, I don’ get it neither. I reckon Bea’s right, there’s somethin’ weird goin’ on-”
His words suddenly cut short at the hideous, blood-curdling scream from behind. They both span as one, to see Sker crumple to a silent heap on the grass, and a shadowed figure flit away into the night. A few sparkles of black fire danced through the grass and faded away like dying fireflies.
“Right under our Odd-damned noses…” Hak croaked, looking stunned.
Pru just looked shellshocked.
And, as if to rub salt into the still raw wound of losing a pack-mate, there came that thin, insane giggle skittering over the night air, sharp as shards of glass from a shattered glass.

He watched from the shadows again, watched as the two large Patrol Guards gathered up the fallen form of their late comrade, and smiled, silently. His shoulder ached from where the stupid brute had struck him, but already that was fading, as the life he’d stolen strengthened and nourished his twisted mind.
He nursed his shoulder with one hand, and hissed softly through his teeth, annoyed that he hadn’t managed to steal the larger one’s essence, but no matter, he’d get it in the end, by Odd, no question about that… He licked his fingertips, more by habit now than anything, and silentlylaughed into the darkness. He’d got that damned noisy stupid little medic, just as he’d sworn to himself that he would, and he’d get this one too, just see if he didn’t…

Drek arrived at the council building early next day; Hak met him at the main doorway, looking harried.
“Y’hear what happened?” he asked, solemnly.
“I heard,” Drek replied, with a nod. “I’m sorry, Hak…”
He nodded, following the smaller slig inside the building. “Pru’s getting’ over it, I think, but she’ll be off Patrol fer a night or two.”
Drek pushed the door of the main chamber open, to find them already in session, flinging ideas around and arguing with each other. “Aw, frack, can’t they do anythin’ right wi’out me here?” he groaned, walking tiredly round the massive table and to his seat, listening to the other councillors verbally sparring.
Ben was standing up against the table, leaning forward across it and nearly touching snouts with Arrik, who looked similarly infuriated. “Just cause you can’t find him, there’s no need to take it out on me!”
Arrik was all but standing on the table. “Yeah, well I don’ see yer findin’ ‘im, neither!” he barked.
“Not through want of trying!”
“Excuse me,” Drek tried, vainly. “Can we have a little decorum, here?”
“How about that crossbreed thing?” Ben and Arrik carried their argument on regardless. “I notice he vanished rather quickly a while ago!”
Arrik gave him a condescending look. “Don’ be such a twat, we’d have smelt him,” he spat.
Drek cleared his throat. “Aw, fer Odd’s sake yer lot, can’t we get on wi’ what we’re here for…?”
“What did you call me?” Ben ignored him.
“A twat,” Arrik replied. “’Cause that’s what yer are.”
“Why you…” Ben had his hands balled into fists.
Hak glanced down at his Alpha – Drek had his head resting in his hands, having given up trying to make himself heard, and by now most of the other councillors had joined the verbal melee – and so decided to lend a hand. Literally. He leaned forward over Drek’s shoulder and crashed a massive fist into the stone tabletop.
Everything on the table suddenly jumped; argument forgotten, a circle of wide-eyed faces swung to face him. Hak straightened up and gave a low rumble of approval. “I think,” he said. “That th’boss tol’ yer ter shut up.”
Drek managed a smile. “Thanks, Hak,” he said, mildly. “Now, gents… if we can discuss this like councillors an’ not fight like slogs we might get a lot more done, agreed?”
“Uh…” for once, Ben was the first to back down. “Yeah, I guess we just, uh… over-reacted, a little.”
Arrik nodded, already sagging back into his chair. “That’s an understatement if ever I heard one,” he said, faintly. “Sorry, Drek.”
Drek nodded, tiredly. “Yeah yeah, let’s jus’ all get on, shall we…?”

Hak’s storm showed up right on time, just as council was calling it a day. There was an earsplitting boom and lightning stabbed down, shattering one lonely tree into flaming fragments, but the bits didn’t burn for long. The first heavy drops of rain plopped down from the laden sky barely seconds later, sending the last couple of the town’s inhabitants still outside scurrying for cover, and then it was as though a dam had burst somewhere.
Hak lounged against the doorframe of the council building, arms folded, the post sagging slightly with his weight, and watched the rain fall in heavy curtains outside. “One thing’s fer sure,” he rumbled, like a stray thundercloud, hearing Drek mooch up behind. “Our li’l Pain-in-the-Ass ain’t goin’ t’be goin’ out in this tonight.”
Drek leaned back against the other side of the doorframe, and lit a cigarette.
Things must be worrying him something chronic, Hak mused. I ain’t seen him smoke in months.
“Hope yer right,” Drek said, at length, exhaling a cloud of blue and watching the wind tear it to ribbons.
The silence was uncomfortable. “Reckon we’ll catch ‘im soon?” Hak tried, vainly.
Drek shrugged, and heaved an exhausted sigh. “Bea reckons we’re getting’ close,” he said, softly. “But she ain’t tellin’ no-one anythin’.”
“Yer worried it’s her?”
“Kind of, I guess. I don’ see how it can be, really, but that ain’t helpin’ my heart.”
Wisely, Hak decided to change the subject. “Glad it’s rainin’.”
“Why?”
“Well, who’s goin’ t’want t’be out in this lot?” he gestured with one massive hand. “It’d nearly drive yer into the ground, I bet.”
Drek nodded, managed a watery smile and flicked ash into the rain. “An’ it’ll wash ev’ryone’s scents away,” he mused. “Give us somethin’ of a clean sheet t’work wi’. Just best make sure we keep ev’ryone indoors until th’search teams have been out.”
Hak grimaced. “Y’do realise how early we’d have ter get up t’do that, don’tcher, Boss?”
Drek chuckled, dryly. “I’m sure you’ll cope.”
Hak just rumbled inarticulately with disgust.

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Chapter Five

The air was clear, next morning. The heavy downpour had dampened all the dust down, and the heady scent of wet vegetation seemed to cheer a lot of the locals. The Patrol teams were out early, each mud-slig pair taking a section of the town and scouring it from top to bottom for any clues.
One by one the teams reported in; no scents or signs other than their own, was the most common report, although there were a few that had found other scents, fresh from that morning, where one of the town’s inhabitants had strayed outside to ask what was going on.
Gradually the teams got back. Drek was pacing, anxiously; he wanted all the teams back and a clear report before he dismissed them, and a lot, the younger sligs in particular, were starting to get vocal about it.
That was, until Drek sent Hak out to find Patrol Fifteen, who had the smallest section of town to check and were almost excessively late getting back. The massive soldier reported back in minutes, his muzzle crimped, and informed them that Fifteen had made a grisly discovery.
It was Councillor Tay, laying in a crumpled bundle behind one of the low buildings in the town centre, both his legs snapped clean through and his ribs torn open, his face a frozen mask of fear.
“What in the name of…?” Drek had to use the doorframe to prop himself up. “I though ev’ryone waited fer a Patrol escort…?”
“He did,” Rin supplied, looking weak at the knees. “He went with Patrol Six.”
Drek turned. “Where is Patrol Six…?”
“Uh…” the pair exchanged uncomfortable looks. “Here, Boss…”
Drek gave them a stony look. “Come with me.”

Bea watched from her seat as Drek grilled the two youngsters for information. He was being a little harsh on them, she felt, but then could understand his worry. You couldn’t be too careful, and there was nothing to say they weren’t the culprits…
“Please Boss,” the slig – a very young one, probably only just adult – cringed under his superior’s harsh words. “We tol’ yer what happened, an’ we ain’t done nothin’ else, honest…”
“You know Tay was murdered las’ night, don’t yer? The one you were tol’ to get back safely.”
“But… but he…”
“He was fine when we got him to his house…!” the mud finished off his sentence for him. “Honest to Odd, he was fine…!”
Drek just stared at them, for a while. “An’ how can I trust yer, huh?” he asked, at length.
“Wh-what you mean, boss?”
“How do I know yer tellin’ the truth, huh? Either of yer got an alibi?”
“Uh…” the mud hunched his skinny shoulders. “No, sir.”
Bea hauled her old frame up off her chair and hobbled over. “It’s all right, Drek, I think they’re clean,” she said, gently placing a paw on his shoulder.
“Y’do?” he asked, doubtfully, keeping his gaze on them, arms folded. “Mebbe we best keep ‘em back fer a day or two, jus’ in case.”
She nodded. “Yes, do that, it’s a good precaution. And I think a curfew for everyone else would be a good idea, as well.”
“I was goin’ t’suggest that at council later,” he agreed. “All right, yer two, wait here an’ someone’ll come tell yer what’s goin’ ter happen.”

The malevolence watched and laughed. Oh, it was fun this, spreading the seeds of anarchy in the town… No-one was safe from him, not now, he could do as he pleased
He remembered running up to the young councillor’s door, last night, some time after Patrol had left, taking the form of a young slig, and hammered on it for all his worth. When the mud had answered he’d been almost overly happy, crowing they got ‘im, they caught ‘im, come on, Boss, Drek wants ter see ev’ryone…!
Tay had rubbed his eyes sleepily. But it’s gone midnight. Can’t it wait ‘til morning?
No no, can’t wait, Mister Tay, we got to go NOW… and the mud had followed him, stupidly.
The second they were out of sight of the Patrol teams he’d struck, using his strengthening magic to first deaden its voice, then taking his time killing it, getting the Lifeglow to burn bright as he could…
He giggled that thin laugh; he felt strong, now, knowing soon it would be the Time.

Even Ben and Arrik were in accord, this morning. They agreed to the curfew readily enough, but were in that frame of mind where nothing else Drek suggested seemed good enough.
“I say we go out and round everyone suspicious up,” Ben snapped, coldly. “You’re going soft, Drek, we’ll never find our killer if we keep hiding like this and hoping we’ll catch him eventually…”
“What you’re suggesting,” Bea said, calmly. “Is a witch hunt. And you won’t find him that way.”
“Yer say that as if yer know who he is,” Arrik challenged.
“I have my suspicions,” Bea agreed, softly. “At least, I have suspicions on what might be causing the deaths.”
“Who?”
She shook her head. “I daren’t say, for fear he gets wind of it and hides. We’ll never find him, that way.”
Ben was watching her. “How can we trust you, Bea?”
“You can’t,” she said, solemnly. “You can’t trust anyone. At least give me a few days to try and find something out before you go off on this foolish venture of yours.”

It was evening, and the curfew was in place; Drek sat out on the platform in front of his home, and watched as the patrol teams sprinted about, ensuring everyone was indoors… somehow, he didn’t think the curfew would take much enforcing. Were they ever going to find him? he mused. Would they ever find the little killer? Some days it felt so hopeless. And even with the curfew in place he knew, somehow, that someone was going to die tonight, that someone would meet their end under the killer’s skilled and unkind hands, and that they wouldn’t be able to prevent it…
There was the pad of soft footfalls – he glanced up and watched as Bea stepped out onto the platform and stretched.
“I won’ tell anyone,” he said, faintly.
“Tell anyone what?” She looked at him, a little confused.
“If yer… if yer tell me what yer suspect… I promise I won’ tell a soul, yer know that…”
She sat down next to him, cross-legged, and smiled, wanly. “I know, Drek, but… it’s so hard to know who to trust and who to suspect, he could be anyone, anywhere…”
He sighed and leaned his head in his hands. “I know, I… just… never mind.”
She put an arm round his slumped shoulders. “Please understand…”
“I’m tryin’,” he said, with a soft laugh, and his features twisted into a sad grin. “But my tired old brain’s getting’ confused.”
She smiled. “No more than mine,” she said, and teased. “Besides, you’re just a child compared with my advancing years, you know that…”
He leaned against her. “Yeah, I know…”
For a while they just sat, and watched the sky darken.
“He’s goin’ ter strike again tonight, ain’t he…?” Drek said, at length.
Bea didn’t reply, at first. Then she spoke, but her voice was soft, cracked. “Yes. I think he will.”
“An’ we can’t do anythin’.”
She shivered, and shook her head. “We better go inside,” she pushed herself to her feet and went to the door. “We don’t want to be next.”
He followed her, pulled the curtain across the door as she lit one of the little oil lamps at the low table. “Bea…?”
She looked up at him. “What?”
He settled on the low mat of reeds. “Oh, nothin’. He waved his hands dismissively. “It’s a stupid idea, ferget I said anythin’.”
“What is?” she sat back down beside him.
He shook his head. “I though maybe someone should try bargainin’ wi’ it. But first yer gotter find it, ain’t yer? An’ then it’d kill yer before yer could say a word…”
She gazed at her paws for a while, then reached up and caressed the white stone at her throat. “Drek…? I’m not sure if… I think we’re dealing with a malevolent spirit of some kind.”
He looked up, sharply. “A spirit?”
“Yes. And I think he’s possessed someone.”
“So… how in frack do we find him…?”
She shook her head. “I don’t know. And I daren’t tell anyone else because he’ll kill that host and move on to a new one if he finds out I suspect that’s what’s happening… And from then on he’ll continue to travel around changing hosts every few days, and we’ll never catch him.”
“Yer got my word, lady, I won’t tell a soul,” he promised, solemnly, closing his hands round hers.
She gave him a smile. “Thank you, Drek. It’s a weight off my chest, I think, now I’m not the only one who knows…”

Hak was out late, helping Patrol Nine. One of the muds on the team had gone hysterical and flatly refused to go out, so he’d taken his place. Patrol Nine was only out to ensure everyone else was in, and they were going in themselves when the moon was just above the horizon – about half-an-hour later, Hak had guessed, even though it was already dark.
“Don’ like it out,” the smaller of the two worker sligs said, hovering as close to Hak as he dared get away with.
“Me neither,” Hak shook his head, watching the shadows for anything suspicious. “Sooner we make sure everyone’s in th’better.”
“I don’t think that’ll take long,” the mud said, swinging the torch-beam in a smooth arc and infecting the shadows with its brilliance. “There’s no-one out in this district, at least.”
“Yeah. In which case, one more circuit an’ we’ll go in,” Hak agreed. “I jus’ want t’check wi’ Patrols Ten an’ Eight at th’main square.”
Patrol Eight were waiting at the square when Nine arrived.
“Find anythin’?” Jas asked, going forward to meet his massive pack-mate.
Hak shook his head. “Nope, no-one out; far as we c’n tell, anyroads. Jus’ waitin’ fer Patrol Ten, now?”
“Yeah,” Jas stared off into the shadows. “An’ I’m worried, they shoulda been back a while ago…”
“Think we oughtter go look fer ‘em?”
“Give it a few minutes more…”

Skan sat up with a groan. “Who ‘it me?” he slurred, holding his temples.
A circle of worried faces crowded in on him. “You don’t remember anything?” Bea asked, worriedly.
Skan shook his head. “Uh-uh. I was jus’ goin’ t’find Hak when pow, someone sneaked up on me an’ knocked me out. Who found me?”
“Patrol Five,” Ben supplied. “What d’you mean, anyway, going to find Hak…?”
Skan looked at him. “Well… someone said he was missin’,” he said, feeling a knot of worry forming in his throat. “That he was missin’ an’ yer said go look fer ‘im.”
“Who said?” Bea perched on the side of the bed.
Skan shook his head. “Youngster, tha’s all I r’member before takin’ a dive into that buildin’.”
The councillors exchanged looks.
“Wha’s goin’ on?” Skan asked, feeling a knot of worry constricting on his throat.
“Patrol Ten met up with Eight and Nine at the meeting place – you weren’t with them. They split into pairs to look for you,” Ben supplied, softly.
“Oh damn,” Skan leaned his head in his hands. “That means… have they all reported back?”
Drek shook his head, solemnly. “All but one.”

The malevolence skimmed through the shadows like a wraith. He was hun-gry, oh so very hungry tonight, and – with luck – he’d get the big prize tonight. He’d followed the patrol teams, watched them split into little groups to go and look for the one he’d knocked out – it had been hard to resist simply consuming that one there and then, its Lifeglow had been a brilliant gleam in the darkness – but he needed bait for the trap…
And the trap had been sprung. That big one – Hak, he recalled, grinning silently to himself – had gone towards the outskirts, stupidly alone; well, when were big brothers noted for their thinking capacity? And he’d followed, fast as an elum and silent as the shadows he flitted through.
He giggled, thinly, hungrily. What a feast he’d have tonight…



Chapter Six

Sketh was pacing, rhythmically. Back and forth, back and forth, like a ticking clock, chewing his nails. He and his sister, two adolescent demi-godlings, had been put in charge of a trio of youngsters – one sliglet, only hatched a few days ago, a mudokon pup about the equivalent age, and Aurora, who’d gone along as well as she felt safe with her “cousins.” Sketh had liked the feeling of responsibility – maybe the adults were starting to see them as more than children, at last – but now he just felt sick with worry, a dull nausea gnawing at his insides like a canker.
Jai'ana watched her brother pace with a vaguely annoyed but at the same time concerned look on her face. "Will y’stop pacin', Sketh!" she whispered, hotly, trying not to wake the three youngsters. "Yer makin’ me all nerves, an’ yer makin' a trench in the floor!"
"Sorry…" Sketh chewed his lip, briefly pausing in his pacing, but not for long. "I'm jus' worried 'bout Da… he should've been back by now, said he was only goin’ out ‘til moonrise, then he’d be back, an’ he ain’t…"
"Yeah, well… Pacin' abut like that ain’t goin' t’make Daddy come home no sooner. All yer doin’ is annoyin’ me."
"I know it ain’t helping. But it’s dark out now... an’ what if that… that thing… what if it got ‘im? Got ‘im an’ killed ‘im?”
"You know Daddy knows better then t’stay out when it ain’t safe. He’ll be at th’pub, prob’ly."
"Yeah, I know. I jus’…” He waved his arms, unable to put a name to it. “Jus’ got a feelin’.”
“What kinda feelin’?”
“Oh, I don’ know, Jay, I jus’ have. An’ I’m worried ‘bout ‘im.”
Jai’ana remembered the last time her younger-by-five-minutes brother had had one of his ‘feelings’ only too clearly. Last time their father had been shot and killed – it was only by pure luck that Ishtar had got back to him in time to snatch his spirit back to the mortal plane. She watched him pace about for a while longer, tussling with her emotions. Finally;
"I'm goin’ t’look fer ‘im," she said, resolutely, and headed for the door.
"Y’can't! Jay, fer once jus’ lissen to me, willyer?” he followed her to the door, held it closed – while she’d inherited her mother’s fiery temper, he’d inherited his father’s brute strength, didn’t find it hard to foil her efforts to get out. “Yer not goin’ out there! Not wi’ that… that thing…"
Riled that he was for once stopping her doing something she wanted to do, she stuck her chin out and said, belligerently. “Oh yeah, an’ what can it do t’me, huh?”
“Yer don’ know what it is,” he insisted. “What if… what if it’s another one o’ them…?”
She shivered, involuntarily, a sensation like an icy finger drawing up her spine. “We’d have know that, wouldn’ we…?” she stuck out her chin, speaking with a lot more confidence than she felt. “An’ Mum said that was a fluke, that one getting’ through th’net an’ killin’ peeps…”
“So what is it?”
She looked down at her hands, thinking. “I don’ know. But hey, Sketh!” an idea coalesced in her mind. “It don' like bright lights, r’member?”
“We don’ think it like bright lights,” he corrected, faintly.
“Well, if I got meself a light…” she turned her hand palm up, spoke a word of power and a tiny bright ball of light bloomed in her palm.
"That spell only lasts an hour, sis," Sketh reminded her, seemingly resigned to her going outside. “Jus’… be sure ter get yerself ter a safe spot before it runs out... Da’s friends’ll take yer in, won’ they?”
She nodded, staring at the Glowball bobbing just above her hand, and looked up, meeting his concerned gaze. “I’ll go find Skan,” she said, managed a wan smile. “That good enough fer yer?”
He didn’t smile back, just let go of the doorhandle and went back to his nail-chewing.
"Wish me luck, huh?" She said, pushing the door wide, and took a step out into the chill night air. The wooden shelter looked suddenly the most inviting place in the world to be, she decided, standing out on the wide platform outside and staring back in to where her brother stood and chewed his nails.
He managed a faint little "Good luck...." at last. “An’ please don’ go get inter trouble, sis…”
She smiled wanly, and leaped lightly down off the platform to the ground a few feet below.
Sketh gazed out into the night and watched the Glowball bob off down the wide street, casting odd shadows up the trees on either side. When it was out of view, he pulled the door closed and hunkered back down next to where his young charges were sleeping soundly in a blanket next to the magic fire that gave heat and light without burning. He hugged his arms round his knees, and wished, silently, that his mother was there.

Jai'ana padded through the town streets, looking for any sign of her father. She’d found plenty of people out – the Night Patrol teams, charging about with an almost manic speed, high-beam torches cutting wide swatches of brightness through the inky night. She guessed they were trying to enforce the curfew, although she was getting agitated vibes from most of them – maybe they were looking for someone? They pretty much ignored her, though, guessing she was powerful enough to protect herself… She felt vaguely reassured by their presence, but still… she couldn't help but feel scared, not entirely sure her small ball of light would hold off the killer if it decided to come after her…
After all, what if it was one of Them…? She’d have no defence against it… for once she wished she was completely Rolite, like her mother. She’d never thought this before, enjoyed the benefits of both species, and yet… her slig half was making her more nervy than she thought she ought to be… She huddled her cloak round herself and fled onward.

The malevolence watched as the Patrol teams skimmed about, and giggled. The web of magic he’d spun kept them running in circles, completely missing the area he and his quarry were in and completely unaware that they were missing out a wide arc of town… And the other web of dark magic he’d spun made his quarry careless, bolstered his flagging confidence that he was safe from Him, and blocked the yells of the Night teams from his prey’s ears, kept him as good as deaf, oblivious to the search, unaware they were looking for him and not the one he thought he was looking for…
He watched from his shadows as his quarry strode heavily down the gap between the elum pens, then giggled and fled after him.

It was dark. Too dark to see anything apart from the moonlight frosting the trees and bushes and buildings, and certainly nothing in the deep gloom of the shadows, but he still had his other senses, so that didn’t matter… Hak leaned against the top railing and sighed, softly, debating going back. It was well past the time he’d meant to head back, but he guessed another few minutes wouldn’t hurt… after all, what if Skan was in danger? What if he hadn’t just got lost, what if he was in danger…?
He straightened himself up, headed on a little further. He’d just go as far as the stables, then he’d head back. Just as far as the stables, maybe a little look round the buildings, then back.
From behind there came a thin echoey giggle.
Hak spun to the sound. "Yer...?!" Oh damn; suddenly he realised how stupid it was still being out, he hadn't meant to still be out, and now it seemed time had finally run out...
There was that thin, insane giggle again, somehow behind him again. "Me again," the reedy voice agreed, "Small world, huh, Fatty?"
"What is it yer want...?" Hak demanded, gruffly, backing off, scouring the velvety darkness in the hope of seeing something – anything...
"What do I want...?" The voice seemed continually on the move, weaving around him like mist, thin and ethereal. It giggled again, and the next time it spoke there was a hint of a snarl in the soft tones. "No one t'hear you yell this time, hey, Fat-Boy...?"
Hak span sharply at an icy touch at his shoulders, startled, and flung out an arm, but connected with nothing but air.
The giggle skittered through the night air, thin and as unpleasant as the sound of nails down a blackboard. "Missed me, Fatty..." the voice mocked, in a singsong manner.
He stood breathing softly, trying to listen to where it was going as it span its dance of sound round him. "Listen..." he tried, vainly. "What is it yer want...?"
"What do I want...?" it asked, in a surprised tone, as if it was the first time it had ever been asked that.
Hak didn’t know whether to feel encouraged or just more worried. "I'm sure we could work somethin' out…” he struggled on. “Th'boss is on th'council, he could try et yer whatever it is yer want…" he still couldn't see the damn creature, but sensed it was up to something…
It giggled, thinly, and Hak’s faint hopes spiralled back down to rock bottom. "I've already worked something out..." it replied, ominously, and next instant there was a low roar on the night air, like distant thunder...
Hak twisted violently back and to one side just in time; the column of black, sparkling fire that ripped the night air asunder almost missed him. As it was, instead of ripping into his mind it tore through his throat.
Stars exploded into his vision at the sudden explosion of savage pain in his neck; the dull bellow of pain and anger turned into a strangled wheeze in his throat.
“I said I’d get yer,” the voice said. “An’ this time I will…”

Jai’ana was beginning to get pangs of the same feeling she guessed her brother got. She’d gradually got jumpier and jumpier as she’d run, getting totally lost in the maze of interlocking streets, lighting sending weird shadows racing up opposing walls, and though she felt sick with worry now she was getting the definite feeling something bad was about to happen…
Over the wind there came a low rolling boom, as of distant thunder, making her really jump this time, almost leaping out of her skin, and the air fairly sang with something akin to magic… Like she often sensed when her mother got mad, or when her brother put her fire out, and yet… And yet… and yet it was cold, totally unlike the magic she knew and used herself… made her heart hurt, her eyes ache, and all her muscles complain as though she’d just run a marathon.
Yet… maybe the unpleasant feelings were useful. They were getting stronger in the direction she ran – presumably towards the source of the alien magic. Using it like a homing beacon, she fled onward, toward what she hoped would be its source, hoping she wouldn’t be too late.

Hak backed away, wheezing for the breath that seemed to keep catching in his throat. The creature was weaving a dance round him again, giggling thinly and singing something in a weird, ancient tongue, while he backed away, wondering it he could get into the stables and whether the doors would keep his unseen assailant at bay…
There was another of those icy touches, light as a caress, on his arm – reactions like hair-triggers, he managed to connect the back of his hand with it this time, sent it flying.
This time it didn't hiss fury and promise retribution - it laughed. "Oh, scary, Fat-boy..."
Hak still backed away from the broken-glass voice, feeling his heart pounding against his ribs like a steam-hammer, knowing in his heart it was futile and that it was simply playing with him, drawing the torment out, biding its time until it struck and delivered the killing blow- All of a sudden, fate seemed to smile on him. He backed squarely into a very solid, very tall post.
For a second, he forgot where he was, but one of the elums housed outdoors lowed noisily from behind; damn, the pens had floodlighting…! Drek had remembered that an old raid had managed to procure some lights from somewhere; they'd been languishing in a dusty supply crate until now. They’d finally got round to installing them yesterday, in the hope that maybe the brilliant lights would keep the Killer at bay, and what with the day’s events they’d forgotten to switch them on.
The thin voice snarled, inarticulately, all of a sudden sensing his prey was about to give him the slip again; this time Hak saw it, watched the ball of sparkling fire pooled between unseen hands… he lunged for the power switch.
The blast of raw power screamed through the air between them in a vicious shockwave, tearing into his shoulder and seemingly dragging the life forcefully out of his entire arm. With his last ounce of strength, he heaved on the switch and crashed it all the way into the “on” position just milliseconds before his hand went numb, and his nerveless fingers lost their grip.
But the floodlighting was on – with a low whoom of power it lit the entire area in blinding daylight. The voice gave a squeal and fled – Hak caught sight of it running, a dark little figure shrouded in mist, running as though the light physically hurt it, would burn away its shroud of darkness…
But then the pain was back, a river of it that spilled from throat to shoulder to fingertips, blinding him to everything. He could feel his throat constricting again, scarcely able to breathe… leaned his weight against the post beside him and struggled to keep the air moving in and out of his lungs…

The magic vanished as quickly as it had burned into Jay’s consciousness. The godling staggered, suddenly afraid. What if the source has finished what it was doing…? What if… what if I’m too late…?! She hugged her cloak round herself, nearly in tears. The Myrikon had scared her, but she’d known in her heart it would be defeated; this unknown… this magic she didn’t recognise and didn’t understand… it bit deep into her sanity, in a way she wouldn’t have believed if she hadn’t experienced it…
Her Glowball suddenly flickered. Oh damn. Oh damn… only lasts an hour… don’t be out after it goes out… She whimpered, inarticulately, trying to recast it, realising her brother had known she’d be too scared to form the words and gestures properly… The Glowball was a pathetic fading candle-glow in her palm.
But… there was a light. She’d been too preoccupied to notice it before, but there was a light… desperately hopeful she gathered up her cloak and bolted towards it, forgetting her fading Glowball, knowing the light was pretty much her only chance, now…
She collapsed on the sturdy railings, breathing raggedly, choking on breathless sobs, wishing she hadn't left home and that her mother was here, because Mum would know what to do, she’d make the bad things go away, like she’d made the childhood nightmares go away with a motherly smile and a wave of her long fingers…
Come on, girl, she scolded herself, faintly. Something turned these lights on and got rid of the magic that made your teeth ache… She swiped a paw across one amber eye, jogged an unspilt tear away, and stared about the deserted pens… Wait a minute – not deserted. Over by the master switch…
“Da…!” She ran forwards, vaulted over the railing as though it wasn’t there.
He didn’t appear to have seen her – simply cradled one massive arm across his chest, leaning his weight against one of the lighting support poles, breathing with some difficulty; ugly, faintly-smoking burns were stark and black on his suddenly pale, waxy skin…
“Da…?” she staggered. “Oh, no… oh no, no… Daddy?” She touched a hand to his unburnt shoulder, gingerly.
He flinched, visibly, but dragged himself up through the murk, straightened up, as though preparing himself to face whatever danger this might be… Then the scales fell away from his eyes and he recognised her, reached out his good arm.
She didn’t need to be asked twice, fell into his embrace and sobbed against his chest.

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Thoughts? Nah, who am I kidding? Don't want to break the long standing tradition of almost no-one ever replying, after all...

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aaawwww poor Hak...

Anywho...great fic Teal...keep it coming.

Ishtar: *growls* just wait until i get my claws on that merf...

um ut oh...*pins Ishtar* RUN TEAL RUN!
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Oh well, I suppose ONE reader is kind of reassuring... *sighs*

Maybe get some some more done over the weekend and have it ready to post by Monday... Oh well.

Suddenly I see why Rett gets so pissed off with people-in-general - always whining read-my-fic-read-my-fic but never read anyone else's. And this is, I think, one of my better efforts (I've never been very good at mysteries).

Oh well. Thankyou, Dragadon. If YOU are still reading I'll post more on monday.

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Bleh, I’m not sure I like this chapter, it feels rushed. *shrugs* Oh well. And no, I didn’t proof read it very well... *grins* Feel free to nitpixel, all you invisible readers… Prrt.

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Seven

Bea headed down Medcentre when she heard Hak had been attacked, fearing the worst… Drek had wanted to go with her, worried for his huge pack-mate, but Council had made its usual demands and he’d reluctantly gone there instead.
Hak was in the main ward, looking tired and old. He watched the elderly mudokon pad over, his eyes dull, glazed; one arm lay lightly bandaged across his massive chest. A young mudokon nurse was just heading out for more bandages.
She offered up a wan smile. “How are you feeling?”
Hak shrugged with one shoulder, made a ‘so-so’ gesture with his good hand.
“May I see…?” she asked, gently.
He nodded, turned his head to one side and tilted his muzzle sideways, wincing slightly.
Bea frowned sadly – the burns were stark and black against his oddly-pale, waxy skin. She recognised the symptoms – every single corpse had had similar ones, usually on the temples and less noticeable, but they’d been there all the same. They’d heal, of course, like any other burn, given time, but the very nature of the burn meant it was unlikely he’d get his voice or the use of his arm back… So her suspicions were right; someone was practising a very old, very dark art…
She lay a gentle hand on his good arm. “I’m sorry, Hak… for not getting things worked out a bit quicker…”
He summoned the tiniest smile imaginable up from somewhere buried deep inside him, and gently touched his massive snout to hers, as if to say he didn’t blame her, understood she’d done what she could. Then gestured behind her, pointing.
Bea turned; Jai’ana was huddled up in a little blanket-covered bundle on the bunk in the far corner, talking in a hushed voice with Skan. She looked like she’d been crying for a long time, judging by her puffy eyes. Bea glanced back to Hak, nodded. “I’ll go talk to her.
He nodded back, once, wincing tightly and rubbing his dead shoulder.
Bea padded over to where his daughter sat, sniffling. Skan glanced up at her approach, stood up to go, but Bea just smiled, sadly, and motioned for him to stay if he wanted. “And how are you feeling…?” she asked, gently, perching on the side of Jay’s bunk.
The godling sniffled, softly. “Cold,” she replied, petulantly. “An’… an’ Da’s hurt…”
“I know,” Bea replied, softly. “But…” she sighed, and spread her hands, helplessly. “Until I figure things out there’s not a lot any of us can do… I don’t suppose you remember anything, do you?”
Jay wiped at her eyes with her hand. “A bit…” she sniffed. “It made my teeth hurt.”
“There was magic at work…?”
Jay nodded, hugged her blanket tighter round her bony shoulders. “I didn’ understand it…!” she whimpered, and shivered. “I didn’ understand it, an’ it scared me…!”
Bea nodded. “I guessed there must have been… for no-one to see anything until it was too late to do anything…”
Jay looked up at her. “Can we get rid of it, d’yer think…?” she asked, faintly; the spark of hope in her amber eyes had nearly gone out.
Bea gazed at her cupped paws. “Yes,” she said, measuredly. “Yes, I think we can – I can. But… it’s not going to be easy.”

It was getting late. Bea had visited council once on her way home; Drek had met her, looking haggard and vastly older than his already-pretty-ancient seventeen years. Council had been bickering as usual, and he’d been trying to referee, but without Hak’s forbidding presence at his back he’d been struggling to make himself heard. A little disappointed he wouldn’t be able to get home for a long time, she’d gone on her way, alone. She’d excused herself from her duties, on the pretence of feeling unwell, but really she just needed time alone to think, time to think and try to get her head round what she thought was going on…
She was home now, sitting cross-legged out on the broad platform in front of her home, and sighed. The town was so quiet it might well have been a ghost-town; usually there would have been people sitting round the base of the ornamental fruit-tree in the centre of the square, talking amongst themselves, people hurrying about and getting provisions… Entire phalanxes of children of both species would have been charging round, being generally noisy and causing mayhem…
Now there was none of that. The children were all safely hidden away indoors, too scared to go outside, and the adults were keeping indoors as much as was physically possible. Only the Patrols were a regular feature – Team Fourteen passed under her tree roughly every half an hour or so.
She cupped her hands round a squat mug of tea, and shivered. A brisk wind had whipped up outside, and was chasing leaves across the stone-paved square below. Drek would still be at council for a long time, yet, probably…
She felt dreadful, keeping all this information from everyone, but she couldn’t risk it getting out… it had taken more courage than she’d realised it would to even trust old Drek, and she’d ordinarily trust him with her life… but… She stared down into her mug and sighed, watched the steam curl up off the surface of the scalding fluid it contained.
And poor Hak…! How the mighty had fallen. Just went to prove that everyone was in the same danger as everyone else, at the moment…

The malevolence sat across the square, in the shadow of a building, and watched her brooding, with a thin, unpleasant smile on his face. Soon, lady, he promised her, silently. Soon.

Night had drawn in very rapidly, and Bea had retired for the night. She’d thought of putting candles out, but then guessed it would have been pretty academic – if He’d decided to attack her He’d have just done it, as she was alone, candles or no candles. But then… if her suspicions were right, he’d be steering well clear of her…
She curled the blanket round herself, and shivered. It was a long while since she’d felt this way, a long time, years certainly, probably getting closer to decades…
There was the murmur of voices from outside, and the muted clatter of slig pants – That would Be Fourteen and Drek, then. She listened as he called out after the Patrol team – there was a nervous laugh from two of the Night-guards – and then the clatter faded off into the distance. Drek left his own pants at the base of the tree, in a small padlocked safe-box – they weren’t particularly conducive to tree-climbing at the best of times, and certainly not at his age…
There was the soft slap of long hands on wood, then she felt the mattress shift, slightly, and a soft grumble of effort. She smiled, involuntarily – she was vastly older than Drek, and yet he was suffering his age more; mildly diabetic and having trouble with his joints.
“Y’shouldn’ be here alone, Bea…” he admonished, gently.
“Hello to you, too…” she replied, with a smile that quickly faded.
He sighed, tiredly, and rubbed at his eyes, stretched his arms and tried to work some of the soreness out of his right shoulder. She was very quiet, he noticed – usually she’d want to know what Council had discussed, but she was silent, and curled up facing the wall. He gently lay his chin on her shoulder, put a hand on her arm. “Bea…?”
She turned her head slightly to one side so she could see those concerned amber eyes. “What’s the matter…?”
“Yer upset, lady.”
She chuckled. “Oh, don’t you worry about me. I’m just feeling my age a bit.”
He didn’t smile back. “That’s a lie,” he said, sadly. “There’s more on yer mind than that…”
The smile slid away. “Yes,” she sighed, let her gaze drop back to the spot of moonlight on the wall. “Yes, there is. I’m worried, Drek.”
“What about? Whether we’ll catch ‘im?”
“Oh, no, I know we’ll find him, and I’m guessing it will be soon… no, I just…” she shook her head. “I’m worried I won’t be strong enough.”
“To do what…? Bea, c’mon, we can help yer, can’t we…?”
She patted his hand. “I wish you could. But… no, this is something I have to do alone.”
He didn’t reply, at first, just kept his chin on her shoulder; it was somehow an oddly reassuring gesture. She could feel the soft thud… thud…thud… of his heartbeat against her shoulderblade.
“It’s more’n jus’ that, too, ain’t it?” he said, at length. “Bea, I ain’t seen yer so worried since… since…” she felt him shake his head. “Well, ever. Bea… frack, I’m worried ‘bout yer…! An… well, don’ yer even trust me enough t’tell me why yer so upset…?”
She watched the silhouette of tree-branches play across the moonlight-spot on the wall. “I’m sorry, Drek, I just… I’m just…” she sighed, rolled onto her back, dislodging him from her shoulder. “I don’t think I’ve got long left for this world.”
He was silent.
“Perhaps if I’d been strong enough… perhaps if I’d done what I should have done back then… maybe all this wouldn’t be happening now,” she went on, gazing at the ceiling. “But I wasn’t brave enough. I was stupid; young and foolish, I thought I could do it a different way, but now… an old mistake, back to haunt me…” she sniffed, wiped at a tear, angrily. “Why was I so stupid, Drek…? I’m supposed to be the one anyone can turn to with a question, when they need help, and yet… I can make such a stupid, terrible mistake…”
“Yer was young, lady…” he said, curling into her side and tucking his head under her chin. “Anyone makes mistakes when they’re little… frack, I made more than me own fair share of them…!”
She put her arms round him, sighed. “I know. But how many of yours have come back to haunt you, to kill the people you care about…?”
He didn’t answer, at first; couldn’t think of a suitable reply. “I…” he sighed. “Sorry, Bea, I guess… I guess this whole counselling lark ain’t somethin’ we’re made for…”
She laughed, softly, but there was no humour in it. It was a painful sound – almost closer to crying than laughing. “Almost second nature when you’re old as I am,” she replied, softly. “You best get some sleep. I think we’re going to find a lot out about our dark little friend, and very soon, too…”

It was morning, and the sun was just below the horizon. It would be starting its daily voyage into the heavens, soon, but at the moment it was still just far enough below the treeline to throw deep, velvety shadows under the trees, around the buildings.
He was hungry, as ever. Last night He’d been lazy, hardly bothering to get that pathetic little slig’s lifeglow to burn brighter, just sucked it dry of all the light it contained… He’d left it for all to see in the centre of the Main Square, its ugly little face a mask of terror, lips drawn back from its teeth in a rictus of agony… and now He was hungry again. He was strong, stronger than He’d ever been, but He was slothful, and greedy.
He grinned, darkly – and went off on the hunt.

Aura was dozing fitfully by the fire. Rek and Aalu had already left for Medcentre, when the Early Morning Patrol went past, as the busy little hospital needed all the staff it could get at the moment – the little killer seemed to have taken a dislike to medics, and had killed five of them… It had been a tough decision to make, leaving their children alone at home while it was still dark, but guessing they’d be pretty much safe if they stayed together and kept the fire lit… Aura had a blanket draped round her dark shoulders, and her eyes, with their odd copper aurorae, were closed. Dren sat opposite, watching the flames dance.
“Aura…?”
She opened one eye a fraction. “Wha-…?” She asked, half-asleep.
“I heard somethin’,” he replied, discarding his blanket and going to the doorway.
“Heard somethin’?” she was immediately awake. “What like…?!”
“I dunno…” he had his back to her, staring out into the lifting gloom. “I can’t see nothin’ out here… mebbe it was my imagination.”
She huddled her blanket closer. “Hope so…”
“Mebbe I better go out and check, just in case…?” he suggested, turning his head and scrutinising her with eyes like round black marbles.
“No…no, Dren, you’re not!” she told him, shivering. “You ain’t goin’ out there.”
He scowled at her. “Jus’ cause yer five minutes older don’ mean yer can push me round, y’know,” he said, belligerently. “An’ I wanna go see what made that noise…!”
“There wasn’ a noise, yer doin’ it ter scare me,” she whined. “So cut it out!”
“Huh. Yer was asleep, what would you know about noises?”
“Please, Dren, please don’ go out there… don’ leave me alone, here…!”
He padded back to the fire, head held low. “I guess I better stay…” he replied, faintly, and looked up through the flames at her.
She looked back, and shivered.

Rek was busy. He was getting frequent demands for medications, and half the time wasn’t getting time to finish making up preparations before the next demand came in… He had been furiously pounding a mucky grey-green root to a pulp in a pestle and mortar a few seconds beforehand, and had just picked up a bottle of distilled water when-.
A high, strident, glass-etching scream rang out across the still-mostly-asleep town.
Rek jerked his head up. “Oh no…” he moaned. “Oh no… Aura!” And literally dropped what he was doing; the bottle of water shattered on the tiled floor. He ignored it; broke into a gallop, as fast as his legs would carry him, and fled homewards…

Hunter Ch’ekk was there already, arms protectively round Aura, knife held lightly in his long hand. She had her arms tight round his chest, head buried under his chin, shaking and sobbing.
“You!” Rek choked out. “What the frack…? It was you…?!”
Ch’ekk just wrinkled his nose in an expression of distaste. “Don’t be stupid, industrial – would she permit me to remain if I had attacked her?” he snapped, showing his teeth. “I found her like this. You should be out hunting the one that did it…”
They whisked her straight down to Medcentre to get her checked over, while the patrol teams split up to look for their culprit. He couldn’t have got far, after all…
“I think,” the mudokon on morning surgery duty said, calmly. “That her scream must have scared her attacker away. I don’t think he had time to do anything to her.”
Aalu sat on the bunk next to her daughter, arms protectively round her, trembling. “You only think…?”
The mud nodded. “Yes, but I’m pretty sure. There’s no burns on her skin, and she’s not complaining of any numbness anywhere, so I think we’re in the clear. She was just very lucky.”
Rek leaned his head in his hands and didn’t comment; Bea put a hand on his shoulder – she wasn’t entirely surprised when his arms went round her. He was exhausted, and emotionally totally drained. Bea gently returned the gesture, and watched Aura, hoping for some clue at last to who was doing all the killing…
Aalu gently cradled her daughter in her arms. “Aura… Aura, can you hear me…?” she asked, softly, fighting against the tears.
Aura managed a weak nod. “I c’n h… hear you…” she whispered.
“Aura, who did this…?” Aalu rocked her gently back and forth, as though her child was a hatchling again. “Please, sweetheart, just tell me… who did this…?”
Aura managed to get one word out before slipping away in a dead faint;
“Dren.”

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*would be interested to know if anyone (if anyone except Drag reads this) had guessed who it’d be before now, and whether she left any/enough/too many clues, as she’s usually pretty pants at mystery-type stories*
*would also like to know if anyone (except Drag, who knows what’s going to happen) has any ideas what comes next…*
*just… wonders*
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(Oh my good ford, I have now officially scared myself. I counted up all the words for all the chapters I've written and finished for one fic or another since January, and the total came to, wait for it...

103,125 words...!

*faints*)

Anyway. Back to business. Just to prove I can finish a fic when I choose to put my mind to it, here are the last two chapters of "Dark". It'd be nice to know people's thoughts on the finished article, (ie whether I wrote semi-understandably or whether I just confused them) but hey. *shrugs*

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Oh. Well, I would post something, but my computer has decided to fall out with every single word processor I own and not let me open the damn thing. I'll try restarting...

O-kay, so now it's crashing EVERY programme. Hm. *hits reset*

Bzzt.

Edit: Trying again...

Aha, Word is happy again. So, here we go...

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Chapter 8

Rek just gawped, for a second. Then choked out. “My… my son…?! My son is the raving psychopath that’s been murdering everyone…?!”
Bea shook her head, leaning her weight back onto her crutch. “No. Your son is possessed.”
He staggered backward, stared at her. “You… you know…? You’ve known all this time and haven’t told anyone…? Bea, how… how could you do this…?!”
She sighed, sadly. “I’m sorry, Rek… I knew someone was possessed but not who. And I daren’t breathe a word, for fear he got wind of it… If he suspected I knew it was him doing the killing, he’d start to swap bodies every few days, and we’d have been chasing shadows while he waltzed about and killed who he liked when he liked.” She started for the door. “Come on, we’d better go and find him, before he has the chance to figure out we know who he is…”
He pursued her. “But… what’s going to happen, Bea? You said he was possessed? Will he be killed when the possession is dropped…?”
She shook her head. “Probably not. Things are a little different to normal possessions.”
“They are…? How so?”
“Your son,” she said, making her way as fast as she could over to the main square, “Is possessed, yes, but not in the usual manner… the mudokon who has taken command of his mind has been dead for a hundred and eighty years.”
“He-… dead-… what? Are you sure? How can it-… no, that can’t be right…!”
Drek joined them. “Saw him headin’ that way,” he said, out of breath, and pointed towards the outskirts of town, then jerked his head in a follow-me gesture and headed off in that direction.
“Was he looking worried at all?” Bea asked, following him.
“No,” Drek glanced back, watched as Aalu and two of the medical staff – Xar’s Second, and a mudokon – joined them. “Just looked bored. What we goin’ to do, Bea?”
She had a resolute look on her old face. “I’m going to do something I should have done many years ago.
“Bea…? If we destroy him…” the mud asked. “Will the sleepers wake up?”
Bea shook her head, solemnly. “No. For that someone will have to find my old tutor, and learn The Healing… He was an old mud when I was young, maybe he’s finally died, but I somehow doubt it… Someone will have to go and find him.”
“How? And where is he?” the other medic asked, looking up at her.
“I don’t know,” she admitted, sadly. “He never stays in one place for very long. Last I heard he was somewhere south of the Great Forest, but that was a few years ago now… he leaves clues to his whereabouts, though, if you know where to look, and his attendants tend to spread themselves over a large area round where he is… I would try to find him myself, but it would take too long. Besides, I have something I need to do…”
“There he is,” Drek interrupted, softly, nodding at a little figure ahead of them, walking lazily down the broad main street towards the forest.
Bea narrowed her eyes and hobbled a little faster, trying to catch up. “Hey!” she called, “You there! Stop!”
Dren startled, turned to face her, and offered up a friendly smile upon seeing who it was. “Hey, auntie Bea,” he said, brightly.
“Please, don’t try that tactic any more,” she said, quietly, halting a few feet away from him. “I know who you are, so you can stop playing the games.”
He cocked his head. “What…? Games? Of course you know who I am, auntie, you’ve known-”
“I know who you are,” she repeated, firmly. “I know the mind that’s inhabiting the child’s body.”
Dren laughed, and it was like someone had pulled a mask from his face – the grin was one of utter cruel insanity. “Oh, lady, you took your time finding me…” the voice said – it was thinner than Dren’s mild tones, and whiney. “I’m ashamed of you,” he sang, dancing round her.
“Ashamed? Ashamed that I’m still strong, and that I’m still in command of all my faculties, Renetheska?”
The possessed slig paused his bobbing, turned to look at her, curiously. “What was that?
“So you don’t remember your name…” Bea shook her head, sadly. “I doubted you would.”
He resumed his can’t-stand-still dance round her and her entourage. “What does a name matter?” he asked with a giggle; that thin, insane laugh that had so many times struck fear into the hearts of his victims… “Lady lady, my dear sweet Lady of the Light,” he crooned, weaving about her. “Are you tired yet, Lady? Tired of living that life you can never end without me…?”
Drek had drifted closer to her by now. “Bea…” he asked, worriedly. “Bea, what’s he on about…?”
“He’s right…” she replied, softly, looking suddenly strangely haggard. “I am tired…”
“Bea…?”
She managed to summon up a tiny smile for him. “Hasn’t it occurred to you just how old I am…?”
He shook his head, baffled. “But… Bea, yer a queen… didn’ yer say that queens always-”
She cut in with a soft laugh. “Oh Drek, if only you knew. I’m nearly two hundred years old…”
He took a visible step backwards; she could very nearly see him mouth the words, stunned. Two hundred… two HUNDRED…!
She turned her attention back to Renetheska. “And all because I cannot die until he does.”
Renetheska giggled, thinly. “That’s right, me dear lady… how does it feel to have been wrong? Nearly a hundred and eighty years ago you and your cronies split my body from my mind and imprisoned me, thinking I would fade and die, and you could die as well, but no, I didn’t fade, did I? The body withered but the spirit went on, couldn’t fade, couldn’t die, just went a little mad with the solitude…” another giggle. “And now here I am, a mistake returned to haunt you…” He put his face up close to hers. “And now I can do what I wanted to do all those years ago. I’m as strong as ever, lady, and you? Weak, and frail, and withered…” he giggled and span away.
She stared at him, and drew herself up straight. “I’m not so frail and powerless as you like to believe,” she said, proudly. “The world has changed, and so have I; I am no longer the young, foolish child you could confuse without even trying…”
“Bea…” Drek folded a hand round her arm, worriedly. “Bea, who is he…?”
She shook her head. “He’s an old nemesis of mine. Used to be a very close friend, and a powerful shaman; we studies together, and our spirits were somehow linked by the most powerful of our tutors… We were destined to be mates, until he started to dabble in the dark arts… Soon we were so different from each other we were like opposing poles of a magnet, and we hated each other…
“We should have destroyed him. Instead we freed his spirit from his body and imprisoned his mind in a tomb where we thought it would wither and fade and eventually die… but it didn’t. It got weak, yes, faded, yes, but it did not die – couldn’t die, not while I still lived. And I couldn’t die while his spirit lingered on in its own silent hell…”
“Silent hell, oh yes, you don’t know half the meaning of that insignificant little statement…” Renetheska drew his lips away from his teeth and snarled, softly. “Do you know what it feels like, lady? To be imprisoned in darkness for nearly two centuries? Unable to do anything except think? Where there are no distractions from the most horrible thoughts you can imagine, chipping away at your sanity…?” Then he giggled, and danced round her. “But then, some thoughts were nice… dreaming of us…” another giggle. “You should have taken up my offer all those years ago, Beatrice…” he sang. “Partnered me and ruled as we should have done, and saved all this trouble.”
“I didn’t want to rule with cruelty,” she replied, stiffly.
“Oh lady Bea, I’m ashamed of you, you don’t remember your old saying… where there’s darkness, where there’s shadow, there’s always light, remember that one? And where there’s Light,” he stared her in the eye, pausing that bewildering bobbing around he was doing. “There’s always Dark…” his voice ended on a thin, snarling note, and she realised with a sudden shock that all this talking and bewildering bobbing had been a distraction from what he was really doing… Preparing himself, gathering his strength, ready to attack and to try and defeat her before she had a chance to defend herself…
He snapped both long dark arms in front of himself and discharged the power that he’d been building up in his hands all this while.
Damn, he’s strong, too… Bea thought with a sense of hopelessness as a shockwave of dark, sparkling fire ripped through the air toward her. He may not be able to kill her but he could certainly send her into the same silent oblivion he’d sent Xar… Barely milliseconds before it hit her, though, something rammed into her side, briefly knocking all the air out of her lungs and staggering her sideways, well out of the way…
It was Drek; the fire tore straight through the elderly slig’s chest. He managed a somewhat startled exclamation, gazed downward in startled surprise, then tottered forwards…
Bea caught him as he went over. “Oh Drek, oh you stupid…”
“Hey…” he wheezed, with a faint grin. “I couldn’ let ‘im get yooouuuuuuuuu…” and went limp in her arms.
“Drek…” she whispered, one hand over her mouth, as one of the two medics dropped to his knees alongside, touched fingers to Drek’s throat…
Bea knew what his answer would be before he’d even spoken. “He’s dead,” the medic rasped, faintly.
Dead. Dead. All those attempts on his life that he’d survived, and yet… in less than a heartbeat he was gone, simply snuffed out like an unwanted candle, never again to smile or laugh or cry or… it was like a knife in her heart. She never realised it would affect her so much, or hit her so hard, but… it did, it hit hard, and it hit deep.
She looked over to the possessed slig, who was grinning at her, insufferably pleased with himself, dark fire pooling at his hands, sparkling at his eyes, and knew what she had to do. A hundred and eighty years ago she’d known the same thing, but she’d been young, young and foolish, and had let this evil creature live, reasoning some punishments were worse than death… And had let him grow bitterer and bitterer, cooped up in his tiny prison, hoping for the time he would escape… And now he had escaped, escaped and ruined not only one young life, but so many lives, had torn apart the fragile peace in this town… And Drek’s untimely death had been the last straw…
“You’ve had your fun, Renetheska…” she said, softly, rising to her feet and closing her fingers round the pendant she always wore at her throat, the pendant with its pure white stone. “Now it’s time to send you to the oblivion you deserve.”
“Oblivion? Who’s going to do the sending, hey, old lady?” The dark one sneered. “While I just get stronger, you get older, and weaker…” he scoffed. “You were too weak and afraid to do it back then, and while I stay in this pitiful little creature’s mind you’ll never do it…”
She smiled, sadly, pulling her pendant off over her head. “I may surprise you yet,” she said, softly. Now she knew what she had to do, a remarkable sense of calm had descended upon her. “Now take your best shot at me, if you dare…”
The grin twisted into a snarl, and Renetheska lifted his hands, sending out another of those savage beams of black fire toward the old lady.
No one watching was ever entirely sure whether the bolt of brilliant white fire jolted from the white stone at her palm or from the elderly lady herself. What they were sure, however, was that when the two bolts struck there was a deafening boom and the ground quivered.
When the smoke cleared and they’d blinked away the afterimages in their eyes, Dren was himself again, at last, a huddled little bundle on the floor, sobbing and shivering, scrambling backwards and trying to get as much space between himself and the old lady as he could… A tall, ethereal figure seemingly composed entirely of dark mist stood before him, facing Bea.
The old queen looked like she was standing a lot straighter than she had for weeks, as well, her crutch lay discarded to one side, and she held up the white stone in front of her. An aura of faint, pulsing white power beat in time to her heartbeat around her. “Now we’re even,” she said, calmly. “If there’s any sense of fair play left in that twisted black mind of yours, you’ll play it fairly, and leave that poor child alone.”
“Fair?” Renetheska scoffed. “There’s only one way you can defeat me, old one…” The dark one sneered, his mist-form twisting, coiling. “You weren’t prepared to do it back then, so why would you be prepared to do so now…?”
Bea just smiled. “It ends,” was all she said.
Onlookers found it hard to follow the events of the next few seconds. The aura of power around the stately old queen seemingly coalesced into a column of brilliant white mist, burnt onto the air like an afterimage – her body crumpled silently, as though discarded.
The dark-mist figure suddenly twisted in on itself, began to writhe like a snake through the air, as though desperately searching for another body to inhabit, almost attempting to flee, but the column of white lanced out like a cobra and was upon it…
They spiralled together and lanced up into the clear blue of the morning sky in a violent movement that seemed to warp time itself. The world bowed outward, almost as though looking through a fisheye lens, then snapped back straight and with an earsplitting boom! the air exploded.
When everyone picked themselves up off the floor, the two columns of mist were gone, leaving only an ugly black scorch mark in the grass. Xar’s Second crawled over to Bea, gave her a brief examination, and shook his head, sadly. “She’s gone,” he said, softly.
The other medic sat down, hard. “Gone,” he repeated, faintly, and bowed his head. Aalu gave a sob and gathered her son into her arms; Rek joined them barely an instant later.
“It’s over…” he whispered, faintly, hugging his shivering mate and child close as he could, feeling the tears stabbing at his eyes like hot needles. “Oh Odd, please, let it be over…”

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Nine

It had been a few days since Bea had destroyed the Killer, and the town was in mourning, slowly coming to terms with what had happened.
Dren lay on a tree-branch outside his home, and wondered how he could have been so stupid as to go out exploring on his own…

The place was big; he wasn’t sure how he’d managed to get here, as the place looked deserted, overgrown, and probably hadn’t been visited for years… Maybe he’d managed to activate an old well, somehow, or maybe he’d missed a sign, or…
The floor crumbled away under his weight. With a yelp he fell, landed on his back and slid… he landed with a
whump! on a heap of sand and stones at the bottom. Wincing, he picked himself up, and looked around himself for a way out.
He appeared to be in an antechamber, of sorts, with a high, vaulted roof and long thin windows on the far wall, looking out over the forest below… On the opposite end of the room to him was a massive stone slab, covered in tiny, intricately carved glyphs, a hole like a gaping wound at its centre. Curious, he padded closer.
There was an odd metallic tang on the air, he noticed, as he got closer to the hole, and wondered what it was… The hole was just big enough for him to have climbed through, if he’d been that way inclined; as it was, he hoisted himself up and put his nose into the opening-
Something wet hit him smack between the eyes – he gave a shriek and fell backwards, and the wet thing that had struck his face lunged for his open mouth, snatched out with long wet fingers for his nose… It was like being suddenly plunged into an unexpected bath of icy water, every last square inch of skin suddenly chilled, and the
Thing was plugging his nose and mouth and effectively stopping the screams that were boiling in his throat…
It was like someone was filling him with water, his mouth and nose, his throat, all his airways and his gullet, even his stomach, every tiny part of his insides, pumping it in until every last tiny airspace was taken up by it… He was trying desperately to scream, eyes bulging, hands curled into claws, back arched against the floor, trying all he knew to get the fluid out but it was no good, he was dying, slowly being suffocated by something that he somehow knew wasn’t even there…!
But… Suddenly it was gone, just like that. He lay on his back on the icy stone of the antechamber floor, gasping hoarsely for breath, baffled and scared, wondering what in frack had just happened… Maybe it was a ghost, he’d heard about them from Bea, when he’d made her tell stories to him and his sister on late blustery autumn evenings…
He sat up, blinked, rubbed his nose with one hand. Then, for no reason he could see, picked up a rock and slammed it down on his opposite hand, giving voice to a soft hiss of pain.
Ah good, it all still works, a soft voice said in the back of his mind.
Dren froze.
All still works… what the…?!
No need to be concerned, my boy, you’ve just taken up a lodger.
A… a lodger? He pressed a hand to his temple, as though it would be possible to feel through his skin the other intelligence suddenly in his skull…
That’s right. I’ll be living here in your mind for the next few days – or weeks, or however long it takes…
But I… frack, I don’t want-
I don’t care what you want. The voice had taken on a dangerous, hard edge. I am here, and here I shall stay until I see fit to give you control back.
What?!
A laugh. Oh, don’t be scared. I won’t harm you. I just needed to borrow your body, as mine seems to have got lost in transit.
But I don’t want-
You have no choice in the matter. I am in control now, and I will stay in control until such a time as I get bored of you.
And with that he’d felt himself pushed to the back of his brain – the other, the thing, it had taken control – like he’d been relegated to passenger status, he could shout and scream all he liked but the glass window between him and the front was closed and soundproof…

Dren watched as the children played in a somewhat more hesitant manner than usual down on the far side of the square below, his dark eyes shining with tears. All he wanted was to be normal again, to run and play and shout and fight and get into trouble like any normal child…
But… in spite of knowing what had happened, the adults were understandably a little wary of him, and gave him a very obvious very wide berth. And the other children were openly scared of him, would run away if they saw him…
He couldn’t handle it, had tried to endure the torment for a week, but there were pointing fingers, pointing fingers and whispers and cruel stares… And every time he heard a whisper or felt someone’s eyes on the back of his neck, one of Renetheska’s victims – one of his victims – would stamp themselves onto his conscious… Their screams, their horrible anguished cries, they reduced him to a shrieking, sobbing bundle on the floor and gave him the most horrible nightmares… He remembered every second of every day that Renetheska was in his mind, and knew it was driving him mad…
And yet… and yet, what was possibly the most terrifying was, well… he had to admit it to himself eventually… he’d enjoyed a good part of it. Not the killing, or the screaming, but the thrill of raw power in his hands, the intoxicating sense of being near-on invincible, of knowing he was strong, he was dangerous… And what if… what if he wanted to feel that heady power again…? What if he himself chose to dabble in the same dark arts, and had them overpower him, just as they had overpowered the ancient shaman? What if, when he was older, he became the same as the dark one that had possessed him…? Or worse?! And there was no Bea to stop him??
He couldn’t let that happen – wouldn’t let that happen. Which left him one option.

Dren got to Medcentre relatively easily, even though he knew his mother had got worried and followed him… He went round to the back of the hospital – it had been built just back from the edge of a cliff, as it was easier to defend – and gazed out over the landscape, at the trees below and the river gleaming off in the distance.
Then looked down. The cliff was high, so high he felt dizzy, staring down into those wicked stone teeth below, the frost-shattered rocks forming a vanguard of spikes at the bottom… And he could hear his mother, running for him, screaming his name, screaming Dren, no…
Dren didn’t look at her, couldn’t look at her, not now…
…just stepped out from the cliff edge, and into eternity.

When Rek found him, his son was still alive, although only barely. He collapsed by his side, scooped Dren’s broken body into him arms, and sobbed. “Oh Dren, oh you stupid boy, why…? Why, Dren?”
Dren managed a faint smile. “I’m sorry, Dad…” he rasped, in a cracked voice. “But I couldn’… couldn’ go on… *cough*… not with what I’ve seen… not… not with what I did… what he made me do…”
His father just rocked back and forth, shaking his head, almost helpless with grief. “We could have helped you Dren, we wanted to help you…!”
Dren coughed a laugh, and a fine trickle of blood drew a dark line through the dust on his skin. “I’m sorry, Da…”
“You don’t have to be sorry…” Rek gulped out, between the tears. “You don’t have to be sorry for something that wasn’t your fault… Oh Dren… why did it have to be you…?”
Dren coughed, wheezingly; his breathing was getting strained, and bubbling as his lungs gradually filled. His obsidian eyes were dimming. “Tell mum… I love… her. And tell Aura I… never wanted… to hurt… her… and that… I’m… sorry…” he coughed again, a sobbing wheeze. “I’m… sorry, Da…”
“Stop keep saying that…” Rek hugged him gently, feeling the first spots of rain on his back, and a faint roll of thunder echoed in the distance. “There’s no need to be sorry…”
Dren reached up a heartbreakingly weak hand and closed it on his father’s arm. “I… I love you, Dad…” he managed, in what was scarcely more than a whisper, then his grip went lax, and his body sagged, and he was gone.
Rek nodded, and sobbed his heart into the rain that fell in curtains around him.

The ceremony was small, barely more than twenty attending it; the Guardians were there, of course, an honour guard for their fallen Alpha – even Hak, massive and silent, his dead arm bandaged across his chest, but his head was up and his shoulders back. The more important councillors and Hunter Ch’ekk were there as well, Arrik and Ben apparently having set aside their differences.
Bea was laid out in state, swathed in a stunningly embroidered shawl, her pendant back at her throat, although the pure white crystal was admittedly a little blackened, now. And Drek lay beside her, just as any queen’s consort should, in full hunter regalia, and the councillor’s cloak he’d worn so proudly in life was back around his bony old shoulders.
And nearby they laid the shattered form of a half-grown male slig, with skin the same blue as midnight sky and eyes like polished black marbles. And the carved stone plaque they lay above his head read, simply:

“In our hearts, always.”

~end

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[ October 08, 2001: Message edited by: Teal ]
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