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08-14-2004, 08:24 AM
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The Savior

*Setting: The large castle shook with every impacting boulder hurled from the catapults of the enemy. Dust and stone floated down from the ceiling and, every so often, the worrying sound of walls falling somewhere in the castle echoed throughout the Throne room. Knights ran back and forth throughout the fortress, hoping to fend off any invaders who believed they could infiltrate with ease and kill the King with a flurry of swordmenship techniques. Mages would teleport to and from different areas of the large castle, checKing for intruders and, if upon finding them, scorching them in a blast of intense heat. The King however was growing desperate, sat upon his black and silver throne, at the top of five small steps that led to it, the velvet padding slowly being soaked in sweat, he looked around nervously, clutching two round, Ruby rocks that protruded from the ends of the thrones arms. The silver crown adorning his head glinted softly in the speckles of Sunlight that shone down from above, the saphires inside reflecting the light beautifully. His green sunken eyes shot around the room, scanning the surfaces of the large Throne room and eyeing up his three most strongest Knights. Tapestry hanging on the walls flitted in the slight breeze briefly and the six torches lighting the room even brighter flared softly.
*Boomsshhh*
The wooden doors shook slightly and in response the three Knights tensed up, their silver armour polished and scratchless, the black feather plumage from the top of their helmets wavering slightly. The Kings lined face contorted slightly as he stood to his feet, his black goatee shining with sweat. His long black and red silk robes seemingly dominating the brightly lit room.
*Boomsshhh*
The door juddered once again, the hinges spitting out rock and dust this second time round. Shadows from beneathe the door stood strong, not moving...
*Boommssshhh*
The door cracked, pieces of wood flying outwards as the Knights gripped their long, fiercesome swords tightly in their hands, their visors down as they studied the breaking barrier inbetween them and their foes.
*Boocrkkkk*
The door was flung forwards, dust and rock swirling into the room, accompanying the splinters of wood that scattered across the stone floor. The Knights waited for a few seconds, studied the doorway before they charged headlong into battle. Two Knights stood in the doorway, both holding two bloodied swords in each hand, their shoulders scuffed from charging at the door. Their white shining armour giving off an aura of goodness, even though their Souls were the purest of evils. Behind them stood a Mage, a female. Her ears pointed and crowned with jewelled earrings. The sides of her face tattooed with black spirals. She stepped into the room, gliding past the two Knights who had just hacked down the door, her bald head catching the Sun and her pink eyes studying the three Knights before her.*


Mage: "Step away..."

Her voice was distorted yet soft. She looked at the warriors, looKing past their armour and skin, looking deep into their Souls. Studying their Souls rhythmic pulses and smirking. Her sleeveless purple robe, which was stitched up in the middle with brown thread, bared her toned arms. Her muscles flexing slightly. The Knights didn't move. They stood their ground, their fingers tightening over the hilts of their swords.

Mage: "Very well."

She nodded softly and upon raising her head again, revealed that her eye colour had changed into a deep red. The two Knights behind her charged, taking on two of the opponant Knights as swords clashed and armour clad bodies ducked and weaved. The remaining Knight merely looked at her, not moving, not flinching, only barely breathing. Her eyes were cast towards the King, he stood still, watching her. His hands gripping the two rubies at the end of the arms of his Throne. Slowly the Mage took one step, her eyes still locked on to the King, but as the Kings strongest Knight attempted to subdue the approaching enemy, the Mage quickly shot up her hand, palm facing towards the him, and stopped him mid-step. Her eyes then slowly travelled to the Knight himself.

Mage: "Abeo."

She spoke softly and clearly, her eyes seemingly flashing slightly as she muttered this Latin incantation. The Knight in response staggered backwards, his armoured feet clunking heavily on the stone ground before he fell, heavily, on his back. Red blood spurting from the visor that was still covering his face. The Mages eyes then shot back up to the King, who was now pulling at the rubies in his throne, revealing the hilts, and then the viciously sharp blades of two grand looking swords. He spun them in his hands, staring at the Mage with intense hatred and terror. A smirk crossed the Mages lips, her arm outstretched as she formed a ball of fire that danced inches above her upturned hand. It glowed red, the flames licking the air around. Then, with a barely motioned flick of her wrist, she sent the ball of fire shooting towards the King. Raising his swords to his face, as if instinctivly trying to stop himself from being harmed, the Kings Heart exploded with overwhelming fear. But as he awaited the feeling of his skin being scorched away, an overwhelming curtain of smoke and darkness unravelled infront of him. The ball of flame hit the mass of smog, dissipating instantly into sparks and smoke. The Mage stepped backwards, growling lowly as the four fighting Knights all turned, wondering what this appearing essence was. Seconds passed and the Mage still looked on in hatred at the mass of black, but as the smoke began to implode and form a shape and the Knights reverted back to their fighting, the King let out a relieved sigh - allowing himself to sink into his sweat soaked velvet cusion. The smoke solidified now, revealing a gaunt man dressed in completely black robes. His skeletal right hand gripped a large staff which had a large blue stone gripped by the wood of the staff. The mans small black beared just beneathe his chin glistened in the light being reflected from the armour of the Knights. He cast his black eyes to the left of him, looking at the dead Knight in distaste.

Sorcerer: "I'll spare your existance, Mage, if you tell your lord to let our Kingdom be."

The skin on the robed beings face seemed to hang off, like clothing too big for him. Slowly he stepped forwards, leaning on his staff and studying the Mage as he did so.

Sorcerer: "You have not been infected, unlike them..."

He nodded to both of the enemy Knights, one of whom seemed to be winning the fight with its dueller.

Sorcerer: "And so your life shall be spared...until we meet again."

The Mage did not move, instead she glanced at the four fighting Knights and smirked.

Mage: "It won't take long before this world falls. I have seen it. You must have seen it. This world will crumble beneath the Lord himself and all sha..."

Quickly the male raised his left hand, his palm facing upwards and his fingers squeezing inwards as if he was squeezing an invisible ball. The Mage in immediate reaction rose a few inches from the ground, her throat obviously being crushed by some invisible force.

Male: "You will go...NOW!!"

He threw his left hand outwards and the hovering Mage was flung backwards towards the door which she had previously broken down and into the dining room area which was now filled with goodly Knights, but before she left the room she had screeched an incantation.

Mage: "LUPUS ACCENDO!!"

In an instant the flaming torches flailing around in the Throne room had began to belch out large, firey Wolves. Their form waving around slightly as the flames coiled and wrapped around their bodies. Their eyes shining a bright and fearsome red as they snarled and barked viciously. Six in total had been created and as the first rushed towards one of the Kings Knights fighting off his opponant, another two rushed towards the King himself. The first leapt through the air, hitting the Knight in the back and, with a sick sizzling, went right through the armour and body, appearing from the chest of the Knight, who's visor was now unleashing a mass of smoke as the body inside burnt and cooked. The intruder Knight, now free of his attacker now turned his attention to the King and rushed forwards, taking to the steps with his sword brandished as the King, in response, stands and prepares to duel. The two Wolves who were going for the King to begin with are quickly dealt with by the Sorcerer, who, with a wave of his left hand, extinguishes the beasts in seconds. Leaving the howling smoke to gently disappear in the air. The third Knight of the Kings, still battling tiresomely with his opponant, is soon kicked to the ground and left for the three remaining Wolves as they quickly shove their flaming heads into the Knights coat of armour and began lashing at his tender skin, seemingly encouraged by his screams of agony. The fourth Wolf is now nowhere to be seen, after dispatching its first Knight. The second enemy Knight however rushes towards the Sorcerer, who in a blink of an eyelid raises his staff, gripping it tightly in both hands, and brings the bottom down hard on the floor. The blue stone at the top of the staff shines brightly and in a milisecond a blue ball of energy is thrown at the Knight, hitting his chest and throwing him backwards were he then skids along the ground, a foul black substance spurting from his mouth, like a mass of Flies [like in 'The Green Mile']. Twitching and convulsing on the ground as the last spec of blackness escapes his visor, the Knight is left dead. Turning, the Sorcerer turns his attention to the three Wolves, now finished mauling their prey, waving his left hand towards them he attempts to destroy them in one fell swoop, but as he does so the third dives into the stoney ground in a flash of fire and smoke, leaving its cohorts to be snuffed out like mere candles.
*Clattering*
Turning the male sees the enemy Knight rolling down the few steps that lead to the Kings Throne, the King sweating heavily as he carefully negotiates the steps to finish the fight. However, as the Knight attempts to stand, the Sorcerer blasts him with the same blue energy ball, and in the same fashion, the intruder drops to the ground, twitching and convulsing as black Fly-like specs spurt from his visor, dissipating into the air upon reaching a certain height.

Male: "Sire, are you alright?"

The male steps forwards, his arm outstretched as he fears for his Kings life, but as he does so the King screams out, pointing behind him as the two missing Wolves leap from the floor and take to the air, lunging for his back.

King: "LANIAS!! LOOK OUT!!"

The foul growls and barks of the beasts as their flame wrapped claws dig into the robes and skin of the Sorcerer echoe throughout the Throne room, their jaws latching onto the shoulders and arms of the male as he screams out in agony, dropping to his knees.

King: "LANIAS!! NOOOOO!! BACK, BACK I SAY!!"

Jumping to the bottom of the steps, the King swings his swords at the beasts of flame, ignoring Lanias' pleas to stay away. The second Wolf upon Lanias' back, however, unleashes the male from its grasp, and instead leaps towards the King, who slices through the Wolf as it does so. This however has no effect, as the metallic sword merely goes straight through the firey animal, not hindering it at all. Landing just infront of the King, the jaws of the wolf leap up at his face, snapping inches before his face and singeing his facial hair slightly. Staggering backwards the King repeatedly swings his sword at the Wolf, yet again to no avail, but as the first Wolf rips into Lanias' flesh, Lanias still manages to wave his hand at the being threatening the King, destroying it in a wisp of smoke and howling. The first, now knowing it is the only one alive to do the job it was summoned to do, releases Lanias and makes a quick, galloping beeline for the King, but even though, through the Wolfs maullings, Lanias is weak and in pain, he is still capable of killing the last. Which he does, with much effort and pain. Slowly, as the howling of the last defeated beast, subsides, the King steps over his his protector and holds out a hand. Taking it, Lanias painfully stands, groaning in agony as his scorched skin cracks and sends flash after after flash of pain coursing throughout his body.

King: "Thankyou, Lanias. Once again you have saved me from certain death, and once again i am in debt to you."

Patting the Sorcerer softly on the left shoulder, the King looked deeply into the beings night-black eyes.

Lanias: "Sire, i...must leave...the battle is becoming heated...our best warriors are falling and the...enemy is *coughs* sending out wave after wave of Sirenels."

King: "And...what of my...sons?"

Looking at the King in a vaguely worried way, the Sorcerer nods softly before replying.

Lanias: "They...they do well, sire, but i fear...that, that their strength and stamina are waning. I will...do my best to help them...though, my Lord, even if it means...putting my life on the line."

Upon saying this a large crash echoed behind them, the dining area seemed to scream out with agony as a large burning boulder sits squarely in the middle, all Knights and warriors strewn around the rubble ridden floor as bodies roll on the ground, burning horribly. Dust from the caved in ceiling swirls around the room, imparing the sight in a wave of dusty fog. Gripping his staff more tightly, Lanias leans on it for suppor, the blue stone glowing more prominently as his wounds slowly begin to heal.

Lanias: "Sire...i feel it best if you settle yourself on the wall walk of the Castle. I have a protection charm on the wall to stop the...boulders from hitting the Archers, it will be safer for you there."

Nodding the King proceeded to walk towards the door which leads to the stoney stairs that would eventually take him to the wall walk, but as he did so Lanias stood infront of him, wrapped an arm around him and muttered an incantation that made them both explode in a mass of black smog...
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08-15-2004, 05:16 AM
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Part 2

*Setting: Seconds later the King and Sorcerer had appeared in the left tower, were the noise of battle was alot crisper than previous and the stench of death alot more apparant. Nodding his head slightly Lanias then dispersed in a mass of smog, leaving the King alone in the dark room with only the small slits in the wall to let light through.*

Voice: "Ahh, our master has arrived."

The voice was fairly highpitched and came from the floor somewhere, turning the King cast his eyeline down, scanning the floor whilst squinting. As he did the left, yellow eye of some feline beast stepped into the light beaming in from the slitted hold in the wall.

King: "Radcleff? Is that...?"

Radcleff: "Yes, master, yes it is me. And Jolas too."

Even though the King could not see the mouth of his small Summoner, he knew it was smiling. Its visible eye seemed to beam happily upon seeing its masters face.

King: "What are you two doing here, why aren't you outside fighting?!"

Radcleff: "But, master, if we were to fight, we would surely perish. Tiny Summoners such as ourselves cannot fight the evil that presides in those...things."

King: "You are immortal, Radcleff! You have no need to fe..."

Jolas: "There are much worse things than death...master."

The Summoner known as Jolas spoke, its voice was deeper and wiser and as it finished its sentence it added the word 'master' on the end with utmost resentment. Upon finishing its sentence, Radcleff seemed to gasp in horror, speaking hurridly and in panic as its visible eye glanced to a darkened part of the room and then at the King again.

Radcleff: "JOLAS!! Do not interrupt our master!! I beg your forgiveness master, it is the heat of the battle!! It is turning our Jolas bad. He didn't mean to interrupt you, master, i promise he didn't!! I swear, master!!"

King: "Quiet, Radcleff!"

The Kings voice was full of aggitation and for good reason, in the distance he could hear screaming, a screaming far more disturbing than from the rest of the battlefield. Turning to one of the narrow windows he gently stepped upto it, looking out over the battlefield at the bloodstained mud. The Sirenels were closing in. Their foul screeches only being emitted before they attacked. The beings were women, their long white hair flowing behind them in a non-existant wind. Their beautiful physique laden with see through silk and satin robes. Their bodies sailing through the air slowly and gently, only the tips of their toes touching the ground as they seemed to glide effortlessly over the ground, their delicate looking hands gripping large, bloodstained swords. From the distance the King was at, he could not hear their hypnotizing song, but he could hear their bloodcurdling screams of brutality, as his dazed soldiers were cut down easily, the Sirenels swords slicing through armour as if it was bread.

Radcleff: "Don't listen, master, they'll get you that way. Like the got the rest of them. Look, master, cut down like corn."

The wrinkly skinned paw of the small being was cast into light as it stretched out to point behind the Sirenels, its black claw unsheathing slightly. The King looked out behind the females, looking at the mass of sliced metal and bloodied steel.

King: "I should be fighting them. Side by side with my sons, fighting for good and not here, hidden away like some kind of...of..."

Jolas: "Animal, master? Pathetic, cowardly animal?"

King: "Exactly!"

The King, unaware of the bitter tone in Jolas' voice turned to the wooden door that led out onto the wall walk and pulled it open, light cascaded into the room, revealing Radcleffs form. The small being was no bigger than the Kings foreleg. And infact looked immensely like a Sphinx Cat, apart from the small, red jewel in the middle of its forehead and the metallic cuffs on its boney wrists. Its wrinkled furless body saggy and pink. Its Cat-like face, crowned with oversized ears, nervously happy and its big, yellow eyes with slitted pupils darted around anxiously. Quickly it bounded after the King, its legs digigrade [bend the other way], stretching out to grasp his robes, all the while weaving in and out of the Archers who were bustling around, trying to get into the perfect position to fire. Finally grasping the back of the Kings robes with its frail paws, it pulled, trying to stop him from going towards the ladders that led to the ground below.

Radcleff: "NO, NO MASTER!! PLEASE, MASTER!! YOU COULD DIE!! YOU COULD BE KILLED, MASTER!!"

The King turned, swiping at the small beast with his left hand and just clipping its left ear.

King: "GET OFF, RADCLEFF, AWAY!!"

Once more he swiped at the creature, this time hitting it on the side of the face and sending it staggering into the legs of an Archer.

Jolas: "Radcleff is right, master, you could perish. And then where would your Kingdom be? Your sons, if alive, will be shamed. With your death your promise would be broken, your promise of peace and the powers of good ruling the land will surely be meaningless to the other Kingdoms...and slowly, but surely, Evil will take this world, as it has taken so many others."

Jolas stood leaning on the doorway, barely distinguishable from Radcleff, except that he had a narrower face and green eyes.

King: "What do you expect me to do, Jolas?! Sit and wait!? I have to be out there, for my kingdoms sake!!"

His face contorted with desperation, a few Archers seemed to snap out of their attack mode and turn, fairly surprised the King was stood behind them.

Jolas: "I have a solution, master. It will give every kingdom throughout the land cause to...bow to you. Your power would be unrivalled. Your legacy forever told."

He stepped forwards, looKing deeply into the Kings eyes as he spoke, ignoring Radcleffs tremblings as a large boulder hurtled towards were they were stood and then suddenly exploded into dust and rubble upon hitting the magickal barriar that Lanias had produced.

Jolas: "We Summoners are some of the most powerful creatures around, master, only restricted by our masters hold on us."

He slowly raised his wrists, and then slowly pointed to the red jewel in the middle of his forehead.

Jolas: "Giving us permission to use our powers would be...almost certainly beneficial to the battle. The war would surely turn and...the Princes would surely live."

The King looked at the small beast, pondering for a moment, then slowly cast his eye to the battlefield, to were it was clearly visible that Lanias was fighting.

King: "But i have Lanias, and the other Mages, surely th..."

Jolas: "They are mortals, master. Born on one world and destined to stay there...until they die. We, however, can leap into different worlds. Radcleff and i have the power to make you a legend. To crush the enemy like Ants. If only you, our master, would let us."

Radcleff let out a small murmur, looKing into the deep green eyes of Jolas.

King: "Still, i thi..."

Jolas: "What is that i hear, master? The screaming of one of your sons as he perishes on Evils own whim?"

He interrupted the Kings objection and instantly the King rushed to the wall of the wall walk, barging two Archers out of the way as his eyes squinted into the distance. He was quickly followed by Jolas, who gripped the wall with his sharp claws and leant over, looking into the distance also.

Jolas: "No - but it could have been. Or, what if he were to be devoured by the Seeds? His Soul being eaten away as they slowly used him to battle your soldiers. You are losing many-a-warrior, master, it is going to be close even if you do win it, and if you do...what will people say? 'There goes King Rolan - the King who barely won'. I can bring back the dead warriors and make it so you crushed the enemy without losing one..."

Radcleff: "But Jo...ahh!"

As he attempted to speak Jolas' left foot kicked out, impacting with his face and sending him staggering backwards.

Jolas: "A victory such as this one, is no victory at all. But i can make you the King with the flawless victory...you will be told to the children of good as a means to make them brave and train hard and told to the children of evil as a boogie-man story..."

The hairless beast spoke in the Kings ear now, whispering hushly as it smirked out these words. Slowly the King began to nod, seduced by the mere prospect of becoming a figure to look upto, to aspire to. To be known as the King who won the flawless victory against evil.

King: "O-Okay, Jolas. Do it. Do it all."

Jolas: "You must grant us permission, master, tell us we can use our powers."

Grasping Jolas under the arms, the King set him down upon the walk way next to Radcleff and spoke firmly.

King: "I give you two my permission, to use your powers, and crush my enemy."

Jolas' mouth widened, revealing his pointed teeth. Radcleff however merely cast a worried glance at Jolas and gulped heavily. Moments later the red jewels in both their foreheads began to glow, closely followed by their eyes, then, with a bright burst of red light, it was gone. The small rock that had kept them from using their powers had disappeared, leaving them free to use one power between them. Naively, Radcleff quickly hurried to the wall, wanting to use their power and destroy the enemy of his master as soon as possible, but Jolas stopped him, kicking out his leg and tripping his cohort over.

Jolas: "Our kind have endured this pitiful suffering for long enough, and here, it ends. We shall be free from this day forth, and i shall be the savior, no longer will Summoners be mere servants for the mortals. No longer will Summoners like i be forced to give a bit of our Souls to certain Demons. No longer will we live in shackles."

Before the King could react, Jolas had pointed both palms at him and in an immense wave of heat, sent bluey-purply blasts of fire towards him. The King roared with shock and agony, looking down as his robes seemed to be scorched away quicker than a blazing strand of hair. The flames shattering through his chest and blasting out of his back, colouring his pink, wrinkly skin black and dark red. A smile crossed Jolas' lips as he pulled back his arms and watched the King fall to his knees, blood seeping from the corner of his mouth.

Radcleff: "No!! Jolas, what have you done?! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THE MASTER!! No, no, no, no, no, no...we will surely perish!! His Soul will pass through and inform the Elders!! They'll know of your treachery!! They'll...they'll..."

But Jolas stepped calmly forwards towards the King, looking him in his green eyes and smiling softly.

Jolas: "It is okay, Radcleff, i'll look after his Soul..."

And upon saying this he placed his paws on the side of the Kings head and moved his lips closer to his, he then sucked. Small light blue particles began gently floating into Jolas' mouth, steadily the mouth began to glow a bright bluey-white, but in seconds the mass bulk of the pre-formed Soul had been devoured by Jolas, who's mouth and eyes glowed white for a brief second before returning to normal. Pulling his mouth away from the Kings, he smirked viciously and then let the body drop, falling face first onto the wooden walkway. The Archers had not heard the scream of the King, nor the roar of the bluey-purply fire, for they were too absorbed in the heat of battle, firing their arrows at the nearing Sirenels, desperate to hit them, desperate to stop them. But Jolas cared little for their ignorance and with a wave of his paw caused a blast of fire to explode from beneath them all, many toppled over the wall, others flailed wildly, eventually stepping over the walkway and falling to their deaths. The body of the King lay, motionless and horribly burnt on the wood, Jolas looking down upon it with a severe hate. And as he did so his and Radcleffs metallic cuffs simutaneously snapped off, falling upon the wood and disappearing in a bright blast of light.

Jolas: "We are free, brother. We are free."

Radcleff whimpered, his eyes upon the corpse of his once master.

Jolas: "Now we leave this retched world, freeing more of our kind..."

He brushed past Radcleff, ignoring his muffled cries and hoisted himself up onto the crenelation, placing both of his paws upon the merlon and then his feet on the crenel.

Jolas: "But first..."

He raised his paws into the sky, which immediatly reddened, purple forks of lightening darted across the red horizon, some Knights and other warriors cast their eyes upwards, wondering what was happening. But in seconds they knew and, with a Heart shuddering blast, white hot fireballs fell from the sky, evisorating anything caught in their path. And as Jolas watched, he suddenly vanished in a mass of yellow particles, closely followed by Radcleff...

(OOC: REALLY-REALLY-REALLY LONG i know, and sorry. Also sorry for the crapness of this fic. T'is poo, i know. Get over it, heh.)
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Part 3

*Setting: Two bright flashes of light and the sound of two pairs of feet hitting the paper strewn ground was cause for the mounds of sleeping homeless to stir, drunk and high on whatever it was they could get their hands on. The darkened night sky masking them in shadow, so that the new beings to this world could barely see them. Radcleff looked around nervously, never before leaping from one Dimension to another without the Elders knowing. Jolas, however, was enjoying his new found freedom and steadily walked towards the end of the alleyway, which they had materialised in, to get a better look at the new world they had travelled to. Cars sped past, honking their horns at pedestrians that got in the way, who then shouted explicitives in retaliation. Turning to look at his bestfriend, and the only other Summoner he had laid his eyes on for a good three centuries, he smiled. His green eyes seemingly aglow with happiness.*

Jolas: "Come, Radcleff, this is what freedom has to offer. A world of opportunity and fortune. A world free of mortals with more power than they deserve and their fickle ways."

He beckoned Radcleff forward, who tentatively stepped to the side of Jolas and whimpered. Lights and loud noises were blazing from everywhere in the large street, yet none of the people seemed to be afraid. Aggressive shouting and screaming could be heard from certain individuals, yet the vast majority of people ignored them. It was like war, just...not.

Radcleff: "W-Where are we Jolas? Why did we have to come here? W-Why did you have to harm our ma..."

Jolas: "He is not our master anymore, Radcleff. No longer do we have to suffer his shoutings at us for no reason. Or his Sorcerers cursings as he attempted to hit us with that staff. We are free. Like we shall all be."

He leant out of the alleyway briefly, looking around with his large eyes as if trying to sight something important or dangerous.

Radcleff: "We are not meant to be free though, Jolas!! We are meant to serve! That is our purpose! If the Elders find out about us, they'll send those...those...th..."

Jolas: "Shhh."

He placed his paw upon Radcleffs mouth, looking deep into his eyes with a caring gaze that Radcleff had not seen for years.

Jolas: "By the time the Elders are aware of our escape, they will be in no position to send...them."

He snarled these words, thinking back to when he first saw the shadowy figures. Their bright, slitted red eyes glowing intently as they watched him from the shadows.

Jolas: "But, if you fear them so much, you may leave. We are no longer binded to one another anymore, and even though our bond is strong, we can go our seperate ways. Feel free to leave, Radcleff. I won't stop you."

He took a step away from him, as if inviting him to go, but the meak, hairless, Cat-like being merely sniffled and shook his head.

Radcleff: "You have stood by me on so many occassions, Jolas. So many. Now it is my turn to stand by you."

Jolas shook his head slowly, stepping closer and placing a paw upon Radcleffs left shoulder.

Jolas: "No, do not be apart of this, if all it is, is a chance to repay me. If in your Heart, you want to leave, do so. I will not think any less of you, friend."

His voice was full of sincerity, and as Radcleff looked into his eyes, he could see that he meant it. He could leave at any time, and Jolas would never resent that.

Radcleff: "You are my bestfriend, Jolas, and we have been together for so many centuries. You are the only being i can trust, the only being i can truly call a friend. I will stand by you, Jolas, and if needs be, i will sacrifice my life for you. Wherever it is you go, i will be close behind."

He smiled weakly, only half believing what he had just stated. But Jolas didn't seem to notice this half-Heartedness and grasped him tightly in a hug before holding him out at arms length and looking at him, his face beaming with happiness.

Jolas: "Then let us free our kind..."

He turned, letting Radcleff go and stepping a few steps more into the alleyway, electricity darting around his arms.

Jolas: "...and give the mortal world Hell."

Holding up his arms, fingers outstretched, he smiled evilly as blue and white strands of electricity sprang from the tips and coiled around the sleeping and drunk homeless, ripping away their delicate skin and slowly, but painfully, burning them to a crisp.

(Edited OOC: Blech, crap. But still, spaced out. I was thinking of doing it anyway, but i wanted to make sure people thought it was too long before i did so, so thanks for the feedback, Fez.)
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*Setting: The mortal world carried on with its daily routine, with the mortals themselves going about their boring, unexciting lives. All passed by the small shack of a trinket shop without so much as batting an eyelid or giving it a second glance. The main reason for this being that the shop was protected by a spell designed to mask it from the eyes of all who did not seek it. Shelves on either side of the store were lined with dusty books, their pages yellow and their spines cracked and fragile. The middle of the store had large tables pushed together and on the tables were metallic charms and bracelets, some rusting, some looking as if they'd just been bought. The back of the store was were the owner sat, behind a large desk, with a large black and silver chest situated just to the right of it. The owner of the store was a tall, and rather menacing looking, Katterwol. It's fur a deep shade of bluey-purple and its tail long and healthy looking. The beings small, yellow eyes blinking from beneath a clump of fur hanging over them. Large boots protected its feet from splinters from the wooden floor and the clothing that it did wear, a dirty, grey t-shirt and blue, raggy jeans, seemed to be better suited to someone homeless. Sat upon a small, rickety, wooden chair the being flicked through a small book, resting its head upon its hand as it did so and yawning every couple of pages, looking up as if expecting to see a customer, but knowing full well it would never get one on this continant or world for that matter. It knew this because the majority of the inhabitants were mortals who had no desire to delve into the strange world of magick and sorcery. And thus to them, this store was pretty none existant. Infact, the few creatures that were interested in such magickal things hardly ventured towards the store either, since it didn't even cater for many of their needs. The shop, as small and insignificant as it looked, only sold one thing - Summoners. Cat-like beasts with the ability to summon certain, powerful Demons. Summoners were created for the sole purpose of summoning Demons and serving powerful, magickal-orientated beings. Usually coming in pairs, one Summoner would be the Soul giver if, in a particular situation, the Demon desired needed a Soul as payment. Obviously the Demon doesn't take the whole Soul, but just a bit, leaving enough to regenerate slowly and keep the creature alive. The other Summoner would be the one that actually did the majority of the summoning. Both creatures being needed for the act of bringing forth, certain Demons, to work. Because of their role in the world of magick, the Elders who had created them, gave them untold power, only to be used when their owners allowed them to do so. To guarantee this, the Elders embedded a small, red jewel in the center of their foreheads, this jewel stopped the beings from being capable of using their powers without their owners permission. And to ensure that the Summoners didn't run away, the Elders decreed that all sold Summoners be forced to wear cuffs which stopped the creatures from running away or parting from each other. If the beings tried to do so, the cuffs would glow, cause the Summoner pain and force them back to their owners vicinity. Finally, for extra security, the Elders made sure that if the Summoners owner [or seller] ever died, that when the Soul passed into another body, it informed the Claimers, who then reclaimed the Summoners and placed them back in the ownership of a Summoner seller. The sellers themselves could keep the small, fragile beings were they liked, but due to the growing distrust between sellers and Summoners, many decided to cause the Summoners to go in their particle form and then keep them in confined spaces...much like large chests.*

Seller: "Book."

He finally closed the book he was reading and held up his right hand towards the overflowing bookshelf, saying the word loudly and firmly. Instantly one lone book in the middle of the shelf began to jitter around, before finally flying off and quickly spinning into his hand, which grasped the spine firmly. Snorting upon opening the book as a thick pile of dust bellowed outwards, he then began to skim through the first page, looking more bored than ever.
*Thump-Thump*
Looking up quickly and with vague excitement of the sound of a potential customers footsteps, the Katterwol was met with the sight of nobody. Slowly he stood, his large ears twitching, trying to pick up the slightest sound. Moving around to the front of the desk, the Katterwol gave a wary glance over at the large chest and then back to the store, were he sniffed the air readily.

Seller: "Who's there?"

Slowly he walked over to the trinkets, looking to see if anything was missing and then, as if by instinct, shot up his right to block a ball of blue energy being sent at him from his right. Turning as he did so, he caught a glimpse of a small, Cat-like being. A Summoner. Jolas. The ball of energy immediatly deflected off his hand and was sent towards the book shelves, which, upon being hit, shook violently and sent a few books flying forwards, smoking heavily. Before the Katterwol could take up the offensive however, Jolas had disappeared in a mass of bright yellow particles. Realising that the Summoner could use its powers, the store owner was sure that this being wasn't one of his, and so was in two minds whether to fight it or inform the Claimers. He knew, however, that Summoners were powerful beasts, more powerful than some Demons even, but as he dived away from another ball of energy which was coming at him from behind, he realised that the only choice he had was to fight it, as it would certainly not allow him to get in touch with the Claimers. Rolling on the ground, the Katterwol studied what he could of the small being before it disappeared once more in a bright flash of yellow particles.

Seller: "How did you escape, Summoner? Hmmm?"

Slowly the Katterwol got to his feet, electricity darting up and down his right arm as he listened out for any give away signs of attack. Turning around quickly, he sent a strand of electricity hurtling towards, were he believed, the Summoner to be, only to hit a pile of books and set them alight.

Seller: "Dammit, OUT!"

He waved his left hand at the books and the flames immediatly changed into smoke, which softly drifted upto the ceiling.

Jolas: "Why do you want to know...?"

The Katterwol span around, charging up some more electricity to unleash upon the smaller being, but once he was facing the direction where the voice had been, he saw nothing.

Owner: "Curiosity, i s'pose."

He slowly walked upto the table of trinkets again, waving his left hand over it he then muttered some foreign incantation, the table immediatly disappeared in whisps of dust and red smoke, giving him more room to move around. Pacing around the area were the table once stood, he looked around the room, trying to spot any sign that the Summoner was still there, then the small, bright flash of light of a Summoner appearing from another area appeared infront of him, he didn't give the beast time to react, and immediatly sent three strands of electricity soaring towards the creature... Towards Radcleff. In seconds of teleporting to the area where he could sense Jolas, he was hit by the burning volts of electric. Throwing up his paws infront of his face, Radcleff staggered backwards, whimpering as the pain grew with every second.

Jolas: "NOOOOO!!"

Leaping up onto the desk from behind it, Jolas sent a blast of red energy hurtling towards the Katterwol, who quickly dived out the way and sent three balls of electricity towards him. Radcleff staggered around woozily, knocking into a shelf and causing a few books to fall.

Jolas: "RAD!! RAD ARE YOU OKAY?!"

He shouted frantically, looking from the owner of the store to his bestfriend, all the while throwing energy balls at the Katterwol, who was reflecting them all around the room.

Radcleff: "Y-Yes, you-you said you were only going to be a few minutes. I got wo..."

Whilst reflecting the balls of energy with his right hand, the owner of the store formed a ball of his own with his left, and flung the spinning white sphere straight towards Radcleff, who, although moved out of the way seconds in time, still got the brunt force of the energy as it exploded to the side of him. This sent him flailing forwards briefly before hitting the ground.

Seller: "Doesn't look well, does he? Heheh."

Jolas continued throwing energy balls towards the Katterwol, now aware of his left hand and purposely trying to make him use both hands so he didn't try the same trick again.

Jolas: "RAD! RAD GET UP!! GET OUTTA HERE, NOW!!"

Looking down at the Summoner as it slowly pushed itself up, the Katterwol quickly dived to the side and sent an uncharged pulse of energy towards Jolas, this hit him in the chest and sent him staggering backwards and off the desk. Now free, for a few seconds at least, of the Summoner causing him the most problems, the Katterwol quickly gets to his feet, walks over to Radcleff whilst smirking and places his heavy boot upon the weakened creatures back, pushing him to the floor.

Owner: "VIAL!"

Raising his right hand like previous, he watched as a small glass vial filled with glowing blue liquid span towards him from behind a stack of books. Grasping it in his hand, the owner then pulled off the corked top with his teeth, spat it out, and prepared to tip the vial of dispelling potion onto the back of Radcleffs head. However, as the hand slowly tipped, a ball of blue energy hit the bottom of his wrist and caused the vial to fly from his grasp, sail through the air behind him and smash upon the wooden floor - making a thick, glowing blue puddle. The Katterwol growled lowly at Jolas, who was standing beside the desk, and sent a flurry of energy balls soaring towards him, Jolas however dispersed from his current position and reappeared infront of the Katterwol, were he then lunged up at him, claws outstretched. Roaring with anger as the Summoner quickly clambered up his body and to his face, where he then proceeded to swipe viciously at his cheeks, the owner staggered backwards, trying to prise the creature off of him. Radcleff, however, now free of the foot that was pushed down upon his back, staggered to his feet, looking in worry as his bestfriend duelled with the Katterwol who was atleast four times his size.

Radcleff: "JOLAS!! NOOO!!"

Though still woozy, the arms of the small creature began to course with red electricity. He stepped forwards, wanting to act but too fearful of hurting his friend. He watched as the Katterwol grasped Jolas under the arms, tug him off his chest and then throw him to the ground. With a loud thump and small splash Jolas hit the puddle of dispelling potion and immediatly felt as if the skin wettened by it was on fire. This feeling crept right across his body, until his eyes were aglow and with a loud, room shaking, 'whoosh' a bright ring-wave of light had expelled from his body. His powers had gone.

Seller: "Gotcha."

He smirked maliciously at the Summoner that had caused him the most problems, watching as Jolas tried to stand but was too weak to do so. He then slowly turned around to face Radcleff, who was now shaking with fear and struggling with speech.

Radcleff: "L-L-Let us go..."

He raised his paws, pointing them at the chest of the Katterwol, the creature smirked.

Seller: "Fine...just get past me, first."

Edging slowly over to the limp body of Jolas, Radcleff whimpered. His bestfriend raised his head slightly, mouthing for him to go, for him to leave, but once the Katterwol had noticed this he gave him a swift kick to the stomach and sent him skirting across the floor and into a book shelf.

Seller: "VIAL!"

He raised his right hand and caught another vial of glowing blue liquid before Radcleff had chance to react, this vial though had come from a different place in the room.

Radcleff: "D-DROP IT!!"

He shouted these words before he even knew what he was saying, and it was obvious by the tone that they were shouted in desperation more than anything. The Katterwol knew this and felt confident because of it. Smirking nastily he nodded.

Seller: "Okay..."

Crouching down slowly, the vial still gripped tightly in his hand, he lowered himself on his knees. He then slowly stretched out his arm to the ground and slowly placed the bottom of the vial on the wooden surface, his fingers still gripping the top of it. Then, as he studied the creatures worried face, he flicked his wrist, flinging the vial of potion towards Radcleff, who, in a kneejerk reaction blasted a mass force of red electricity towards the Katterwol, who looked at the oncoming mass in sheer horror, watching as the glass vial was oblitorated before his eyes and then feeling the intense heat and pain the blast caused as it impacted with his chest and sent him rocketing towards the wall, which he hit with such force that dust floated down from the ceiling. The red electricity darted around his body, causing him to twitch every so often as it gently continued to cook his organs. Shocked by what he had just done, Radcleff slowly moved closer to Jolas, his eyes and paws still concentrating on the Katterwol, who's head was lolloping to one side. Blood seeping from the corner of his mouth.

Radcleff: "J-Jolas?! Jolas!? Come on!!"

He nudged his friend with his foot, who moved slightly, still conscious but in too much pain to move. And although the dispelling potion is only temporary - when used on a Summoner it can cause much pain and distress, since their powers are part of them and not some acquired ability like mortal magick users.

Jolas: "Rad...you have...have to take his Soul!"

He rolled on his back and looked Radcleff deep in the eyes, knowing that if the Katterwol died, and its Soul escaped their reach, the Claimers would be all over the place.

Radcleff: "But i...But...no...i-i don't know how, Jolas! W-What if i do it wrong! You should do it, you did our...master."

He sighed as he said the last word, thinking back to his old master and how everything would've been okay if only Jolas hadn't done what he had done.

Jolas: "I can't, Rad! L-Look at me! My...powers are gone...i'm weak...please, Rad, if you...don't, they'll come for...us!!"

Looking fearfully at the body of the Katterwol, which already looked dead, but wasn't due to the fact they hadn't seen the Soul leave the body, he slowly took a tentative step towards it.

Radcleff: "B-But what do i d-do?"

Jolas: "P-Put your mouth...over his...and just...suck."

Radcleff turned, casting Jolas a worried glance, and gulped. Placing each foot down softly on the floor, he slowly but surely made his way closer to the owner of the store. With each small twitch made by the unconscious beast, Radcleff jumped, fearful that the creature may suddenly jump up and grab him. Tilting his head slightly on one side, so he could look at the face of the being easier, since its head was resting on its shoulder, the Summoner slowly stepped closer, making his way steadily for its mouth.

Jolas: "H-Hurry...!"

He gasped this word as he manouvered his body so he could watch Radcleff and encourage him if needs be. But as he watched and saw Radcleff lower his head to the Katterwols mouth, he noticed the right hand of the creature which was out of Radcleffs sight, twitch. The fingers rose slightly and small particles of white energy began floating around them, slowly making their way to the palm of the hand were they then began gathering together. Jolas opened his mouth to shout, to call out to Radcleff and warn him, but before he could, the left hand of the Katterwol had quickly rose up and grasped the back of his head, gripping the skin tightly as Radcleff let out a panicked scream and struggled backwards.

Seller: "You...Ba..."

Knowing that he couldn't kill the Katterwol without risking losing its Soul, Radcleff decided to lunge forwards and placed his lips on the Katterwols. Within seconds he took a great breath inwards, small blue and white particles travelling out of the creatures mouth and into his own. Now, instead of trying to hold the Summoner closer, the Katterwol was trying to pull him off, keeping the steadily forming ball of energy in his right hand as his left struggled with the beast as it now grasped the sides of his face to stay attached. Another sharp, intake of breath sucked more tiny particles of Soul out of the mouth of the Katterwol. Then another, with each intake of breath and with each particle of Soul, no matter how small, Radcleff took, the small energy ball forming in the mortals hand dispersed more and more. Another intake of breath. Then another. Now the ball was nothing more than a single particle and the Katterwol knew he had to get the beast off him, gripping the creatures long ears he tugged at them, Radcleff pushed his head forwards however, determined to do this one thing for Jolas who had already done so much for him over the past centuries they had known each other. Gradually the steady stream of particles became a river, with more and more pouring out of the mortals mouth. The eyes of the Katterwol began to glow - he could feel himself slowly being dragged out of his body, could see the darkness closing in on him. He was cold. He was weakening. Radcleff was sucking harder than ever, each morsel of Soul steadily leading to the whole thing.

Jolas: "YOU'RE...YOU'RE NEARLY THERE!! KE-KEEP GOING, RAD!!"

Radcleff could feel his eyes burning, could taste the warm glow of each small particle dancing in his throat. Could feel the warmth from inside the Katterwols mouth steadily grow stronger. The Katterwols arms were doing nothing more than twitching now, barely enough strength in him to move his fingers. Then finally he inhaled one last time, a mass lump of sparkling bluey-white partiles flew down his throat, his lips parted from the Katterwols and, although the world around him was now a bright blur, he could see its limp body, lifeless and dead. Staggering backwards he coughed, the taste was foul and it seemed to fight inside of him, wanting to escape. He could feel something in his throat, feel a pulsating. Falling backwards he coughed and choked, trying hard to close his mouth which, under no circumstances it seemed, was going to shut. Turning his head, he looked at Jolas, who had concern written all over him. Slowly, Jolas tried to move towards his struggling friend, but was too weak to even do that.

Jolas: "SWALLOW!! S-SWALLOW!!"

He cried out these words, knowing that the sooner he did so the sooner the uncomfortableness would end. But all Radcleff could hear was a blurred muffle. He was watching what looked to be a film, it was in fast forward however and was going at such a speed that he only had time to make out what certain images were. The room seemed to be varying in temperature also, going from warmth, to cold, to boiling hot with every couple of seconds.
*Gulp*
The room seemed to spin gently, his eyes still burning as they glowed softly, along with his mouth. Then as the seconds past everything returned to normal. He was weak. He was tired. He was confused. But he was alive. Tilting his head upwards to look towards the desk, he spotted the large black and silver chest and sighed, closing his eyes, knowing that he now had to open that.

Jolas: "T-That can...wait. You...rest...you, you deserve it."

(OOC: Longevity!! Crapness!! Poopilly!! Dammit!! Comments? Critisms? Thanks for the ones thus far!!)
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Meh, i would attempt to edit it but i can't be bothered to find a decent place to do so, so i won't.
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Good story. Too many words for me to take in though.
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It's odd, with the fics set on Oddworld they're always a nice length. But with the other fics, they're immensely long. Perculiar.
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Part 4

*Setting: A day had passed since Jolas and Radcleff had infiltrated the Magick store and saved their fellow Summoners from enslavement. Eight had been rescued in total, and now they stood united under their common goal of freedom. Jolas' strength had returned to him now and many of his powers were once again useable. Radcleff, on the other hand, was not as well as his counterpart and was constantly coughing and retching, if not muttering ramblings to himself. The conditions in which they lived were by far unsuitable for such an ill being also, for they were now living in a large, abandoned house. The wood rotting and the bricks cracked. Rats scampered in and out of the gaping holes in the skirting boards and Cockroaches scuttled up and down anything remotely climbable. The newly freed Summoners were eager to save more of their kind before the Elders realised what was going on and cared little for Radcleff, who many deemed the first of many casualties in the war against enslavement. Jolas however cared much more, so much infact that he dared not leave his side throughout the night when he was spluttering and choking whilst the others slept.*

Summoner: "But, Jolas, we must make a move! All it takes is one customer to enter our old shop and we've had it! Our freedom is no more!"

The Summoner was a dark brown colour, her skin scarred and dirty and her ears torn and ripped. Her large pink eyes seemed to plead with desperation, but Jolas merely bowed his head, shaking it slowly as he cast his eyes towards Radcleff, who had now finally drifted off to sleep on an old matress.

Jolas: "I cannot leave him. It is my fault that he has become this ill, i told him to suck the Soul out of that mortal even though i knew there was a chance he wouldn't be able to do so. I forced him, practically."

Summoner: "Jolas, you forget. We are immortal and invincible beings. No mortal or Demon can kill us. Radcleff may be ill, but he will soon become well again. And whilst you wait for this, you may as well free more of our kind."

Jolas' eyes still lay upon Radcleff, who was mumbling slightly under his breath.

Jolas: "You do not know that for sure. I could have sentenced him to a torturous death. A death beyond our mere com..."

Summoner: "NO!"

She growled this word firmly, grasping Jolas by the head and forcing him to look her in the eye.

Summoner: "You are our Savior. You are the being that will relieve all Summoners of our slavers. You will be in history, Jolas. You will fight for our cause and win! You cannot allow a casualty to sway you from your task. If you wish, go to a Seer and ask them what will become of Radcleff, otherwise tell us now, are you going to lead us to victory? Or will we have to lead ourselves?"

He stepped back, looking into the creatures pink eyes which were obviously anxious of his answer.

Summoner: "If it is the former, i say we elect a Summoner to stay with Radcleff and aid him until he is well again."

She added this quickly, only just thinking of it and knowing that it would be a good reason for Jolas to continue his work. But slowly Jolas shook his head, gazing down at the floor with feelings he had never felt before...guilt and shame.

Voice: "No!...*Coughs*...N-Not for me!"

Jolas turned, Radcleff was sat up on the matress, his breathing hard and wheezy and his mouth shining slightly as he spoke. His eyes were red and sore, watering more with every blink he took.

Radcleff: "Do not...*Cough*...G-Give up for...me, Jolas!"

The female Summoner turned to the corner of the room, looking into the shadows were now the other seven creatures were emerging, intrigued to what was going on, their eyes alight with interest and hope.

Jolas: "Look at you, Radcleff, i cannot leave you like this, and i will not leave you like this! I will sta..."

Summoner: "He will suffer in vain then. Like you said before, he was forced to take the Soul due to your inability to do so. If you do not carry on helping our brethern, surely Radcleff will be suffering for no reason?"

Slowly Radcleff nodded, knowing that somewhere in the females voice was a hint of coldness and conceit, but believing that, due to his illness, he was imagining it and that she was merely saying what would be best.

Voice: "Nageel is right, Jolas."

One of the other Summoners had spoken, his voice low and gruff and his skin as black as coal, clashing with his eye colour which was pure white. Upon his speaking there was a mumur of agreement, mirroring Radcleff's nodding.

Nageel: "And the more we save, the more can stay and help Radcleff."

She smiled broadly, her face half masked in the shadow.

Radcleff: "Please, Jolas. D...*Coughs*...Don't give up...f-for me."

Crouching down Jolas smiled and patted Radcleff on his shoulder firmly.

Jolas: "Then if you are sure..."

Radcleff nodded and smiled, wincing as he did so.

Jolas: "...we leave day break tomorrow. Harool and Cajun shall stay with Radcleff, the rest of us, heh, will give our enslavers Hell."

(OOC: Crap-holious.)
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*Setting: A violent blast of white-blue light exploded from the centre of Nageels paws as the seller of a different store was brutally attacked. The light washed over the Coroclies face, blinding its three eyes and rendering its attacks useless. It stomped around, screeching, calling out for help, blasts of energy erupting from its hands as it tried to subdue its attackers. But, in no time flat, Jolas had leapt onto the beasts chest and had placed his mouth over its own, and slowly began sucking its Soul out. The others proceeded with shooting minor balls of electricity and energy at its legs, weakening it so the Soul suck would be quicker. One Summoner even teleported itself to the back of the Coroclies legs and scratched at them viciously, clawing at the ankles and causing the beast to fall sprawled out on the floor, where the other Summoners then took advantage and leapt upon him, clawing and biting into his skin. Causing him to bleed out and weaken within minutes.*

Nageel: "You two - go open the chest, let our brothers and sisters out!"

She shouted at two Summoners who were gouging their claws into the stomach and groin area of the mortal, they quickly looked around, spotted the chest and bounded on all fours towards it. Fiddling with the lock anxiously as Jolas slowly started draining the beast of its Soul.

Nageel: "Jolas, hurry!!"

She sent a volt of electricity coursing through the creature as Jolas quickly gulped down more particles of its Soul, his eyes gently glowing. The other two Summoners began blasting small amounts of energy at the lock, causing it to judder slightly and spark. Knowing it was in fatal danger however, the mortal being unleashed a blast of black energy from one of its hands, hitting Nageel in the chest and flinging the female backwards and into the air. She turned violently in mid air, before hitting the wall...hard. The dent revealed where she had made impact and as she dropped to the floor, electricity rippled over her furless body. Jolas knew how desperate everybody was now, and quickly sucked the main bulk of the Soul out of the creatures body and staggered off of it, his eyes glowing briefly. He smiled. Triumphing once again.
*Explosion*
The lock of the chest exploded with a mass surge of energy, forcing the lid to open hard and fast and reveal a beautiful glow of white, shimmering light. From this light, strands of particles a couple of feet long flew out and danced around the room before rushing together and, in a bright flash of pink light, forming a Summoner. Each of the 12 beasts that had been kept in the chest materialised quickly, yet felt weak upon doing so. Their bodies being formless for so long that it was draining to actually take their material form.

Jolas: "Nageel, are you alright?"

He had just noticed the female lying in the corner of the room, seemingly unconscious. Bounding upto her and grasping her tightly he shook her slightly, wondering how badly hurt she was. She stirred, woozily, dazed but perfectly unharmed.

Jolas: "Nageel, we have done it. More of our bretheren are free!!"

He smiled happily at her and cast a glance behind him, looking at the figures of the weakened Summoners slowly getting to their paws and knees and acclimatising themselves with the world around. With their new freedom. With their new lives

***

*Setting: He lay on the matress, curled up like a child and whimpering as he saw things he had never seen before flash before his eyes. Sounds he had never heard before rang in his ears and on the occassion he attempted to shout for help, his mouth ran dry and hot and all he could do was croak hushly. His skin was moist with sweat, and with muffled cries he shivered violently, tears gently running down his face.*

Harool: "Think we should help him?"

He scratched his pot-bellied stomach and sniffed. Looking over at Radcleff with a certain anxious worry. Harool's face was very child-like and innocent. However, his wounds which were littered across his body showed that he had been through a tough time, the worst of these wounds being his two ears, which were nothing more than shredded skin.

Harool: "Jolas said we should an' all."

Cajun looked into Harools grey eyes and smirked, forming a ball of white energy in the centre of his paw. Cajuns skin was a light grey colour, his eyes a deep blue and his skin was in good condition.

Cajun: "How about we put him out of his misery? Heh."

Harool looked shocked, and quickly knocked the sphere of energy away from the Summoners paw, it hit the floor and exploded in a flash of light.

Harool: "Idiot! If Jolas heard you say that he'd have your head. And mine too!"

His counterpart merely shrugged and leant on a beam of rotting wood.

Cajun: "He's in another Dimension doing his...thing - we're here. We could easily say they got him."

Harool: "Jolas isn't stupid, he'd know you were lying before you even said a word."

Cajun shook his head slowly, chuckling to himself as he looked over at Radcleff.

Cajun: "You shouldn't worry about our "Savior" so much Har, he's nothing. And we're going to prove that, Naggie and i. Heh, we have a...sense, when it comes to things like that."

Harool took a step away from Cajun, worried about the vicious glint that had suddenly swept across his face.

Harool: "Don't. Just...Just don't."

He turned away and walked towards the quivering Radcleff, placing a paw on his shoulder and talking gently to him. Cajun kept his distance however, glowering nastily at the two of them whilst stamping on any Cockroach that neared his feet.

(OOC: Poo!)
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