My new stories

Smell · #1 07-03-2004, 12:35 AM

Hiya, well, I've had a few Ideas for Oddworld stories, set after Munch's Oddesey involving Abe and his Wife Minnie, but I need some more ideas. Maybe we could all work on one together. This is a crap topic right? Anyway, let me know

Dipstikk · #2 07-03-2004, 04:39 AM

I have a few little thoughts on Abe having a wife. I don't think it would work.

All of the Mudokons we've seen in the games are of the worker class (like, worker ants, in a way) and the only real females are the queen (in this case, it would be Queen Sam), and they give birth to all the workers. All worker class Mudokons are non-reproducing males (i.e. they have "the thing" but they are without "the other 2 things").

Also, in m opinion, Abe is far to busy to worry about a wife. He's out there risking his ass for the necks of other Mudokons, and he can't worry about being hme in time for dinner.

These, of course, are just my opinions coupled with facts out of Mr. Lanning's mouth. I'm not saying don't write it, just remember what Oddworld has taught us.

WiLL the Wander · #3 07-03-2004, 05:34 AM

But there is too much FanFics and arts have female mudokons... So I have an other thing: The 3 sex race! They have 3 sexes: Male, Female and Matriarch (or sg...). The male and the female are gather their DNS, mix it and give it to the Matriarch (Queen), and she will lay an egg...

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I have a few little thoughts on Abe having a wife. I don't think it would work.

Me too! It doesn't work!

Smell · #4 07-03-2004, 06:01 AM

Abe has no sexual organs and can't reproduce so we'll scrap that idea....NEXT

Cyber-Slig · #5 07-03-2004, 06:06 AM

does anything in oddworld have sexual organs.I feel sorry for when they have to pee....or worse

Smell · #6 07-03-2004, 06:22 AM

Abe with a ladyfriend would just not work, let's make him homosexual

NOT!!!

Sekto Springs · #7 07-03-2004, 06:26 AM

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does anything in oddworld have sexual organs.I feel sorry for when they have to pee....or worse

Just because he has no reproductive organs doesn't mean he can't urinate, it just means he can't transfer sperm.

Smell · #8 07-03-2004, 06:32 AM

I don't want to think about abe going for a piss. How come we never see him do those things, eat, sleep poo etc???

WiLL the Wander · #9 07-03-2004, 06:59 AM

Write the story after my fanfic (damn, I forget to write today!!!!).

I have an other idea... uhhh... no... this is in my second fanfic (Experiment: Succes)... i don't have idea... maybe they're follow a giant feeco train with thousands of scrubs and they're travel from Mudos to an other continent with never seen wildlife and natives.

Smell · #10 07-03-2004, 07:10 AM

Or, Big face sends abe a vision, then he has to go to a feeco type place and go into the wild to rescue some muds and new creatures.

WiLL the Wander · #11 07-03-2004, 07:17 AM

Or Abe seen in a vision Will the Wander again from my fanfic (he is going to save the wildlife) and after go to an other continent save wildlife and natives.

Smell · #12 07-04-2004, 02:22 AM

But he needs help from special beings like enhanced Fuzzels or something

Smell · #13 07-05-2004, 05:49 AM

Got one Idea, Abe is sent a vision from Bigface and sees muds being attacked by warped scrabs in a strange land. Munch and Abe work out what the vision maybe telling him and they go on a journey to the land to rescue the muds. Their land is in danger of being over run by srabs/paramites(scrabamites) (thanks will)

What do you think????

WiLL the Wander · #14 07-05-2004, 06:09 AM

Well, Ok, it's good... Do it!

Smell · #15 07-05-2004, 06:20 AM

Thanks, I'll start to write the 1st bit, I thought of his vision happening at Alf's Rehab and Tea while he was drinking tea with Munch? Is that ok???

WiLL the Wander · #16 07-05-2004, 06:23 AM

Just write it, don't ask questions...

Smell · #17 07-05-2004, 06:26 AM

Hee Hee will do,I'll keep you posted on what happens. *shuffles off*

*Shuffles back*
Here is the first part,it's not my best but anyway:

Oddworld: Vaykaliah

Abe sat at his favourite table at Alf’s Rehab ‘n’ Tea and stared into his empty tea cup and sighed deeply, he was very hot and not feeling to good. “Hey, Abe” Munch said sitting down opposite Abe.
“Oh hello, Munch, didn’t see you there”
“I wonder, you look a bit peaky today.”
“Yeah, well I’m a little hot and, AAAAH”
“Abe, Abe, what’s wrong”
Abe put his head in his hands, his whole head felt like it was on fire. His eyes went out of focus, everything was blurry but then it came clearer and he could see BigFace nodding and pointing at a large bubble. “Huh, what, OOOOW” Abe could feel his chest tighten as he looked into the bubble and saw a what he thought looked like a mudokon being attacked by what looked liked a Scrab, a large Scrab that was sort of disfigured. The bubble became bigger and Abe felt his stomach lurch as a fork of purple lightning flashed out of the grey sky and struck the strange landscape below. The pain stopped as suddenly as it had started, Abe felt shaken. As Abe saw Munch come slowly back into focus, he let out a loud fart.
“Munch, what happened?” Abe said, his voice barely more than a croak
“That’s what I want to know” Munch replied, looking at him with confusion.

Well, what do you think?