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Maeko Siu

Maeko Siu
The Tournament Of The Warriors Of Old




Book 1


Prologue
"In Oddworld" is how i will start this story. This story is about the great past, and the great but grave events that occured which would decipher the fate of the future. The great but grave events that made Oddworld what it is today. Long before the mighty moons were shaped, and the very ancient markings were mere infants, long before time was time. Older than ancient, younger than creation. The world was but a new world with a great prophecy that it's new inhabitants must fulfill. The cataclysmic event that shaped the very body of this known world was to take place a second time by the hands of a living being. This being is the one destined to complete Oddworld and sacrifice his life at his own free will in exchange for the one piece of that puzzle that was lost in creation, and will forever ensure that it's future will be a peaceful one.
The great king of the Elders Maeko Siu was destined to be the one as said the prophecy passed along from the stars, to the tree tops, to the tree roots, to the rocks, and to the Elders across the world. But Maeko was blinded, for there are others who seek the cataclysmic power for themselves, evil beings. Evil beings who would use the power to his bidding and recreate the world in hellish chaos ruled by him. The Elders have used there elemental powers of the earth, wind, water, and fire to forever guard this power and open it only for the destined one, Maeko Siu. But Maeko was killed and the prophecy was no more, the elders dropped their sheild and all hope was lost. For some reason, noone was continuing their search for this great power. The Elders had died off making the power useless until the Elders could restore it with their souls, but they chose not to. The Elders used their souls to guard the dying power instead of restoring it in hopes that prophecy was incorrect and that a champion would rise up and complete the fractured world.......but....like the Elders predicted, it never happened.



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In a word...Intriguing. I want more!

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Pretty good.I like!I like!
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Chapter 1
Maquettes On Strings Of Destiny

The night was dark and cool. The air was humid and somewhat cheery. The only alumination was the great torches that spewed fire like maddened dragons and the moonlight reflecting off the crystal water below. An eerie silence covered the land like a black cloak, not even a skrikit chirped. Silence.........Then suddenly the silence was broken by the sound of a massive, heavy mallet striking hard on metal followed by the hissing sound of sparks and then.....silence. The mallet struck again, and again, and again! The mallet came down, down a final time hitting the burning iron spitting up sparks and embers. The sword had been shaped. The hand, brother to the mallet hand, lifted the smoldering sword and cast it into the water, steam rose like an angry god billowing and curling toward the sky looming over all that was grounded. The newborn sword was lifted once again, "it has been baptised and now to be clothed" said a voice, he tightly wrapped a rope around the hilt and tied it at the end. The sword was then sheathed into it's scabbard and placed on a belt. Almost immediately the sword was drawn for the first time and was swinging, the sword seemed to slice the air and pierce the wind. This sword was weilded by Gidinthal, the creator and first to use it's power to fight off any and all enemies that stand in his path. "I have made my sword, and I am no longer a boy" he said to himself, "today, I AM A MAN!" he shouted, hoping the whole world would hear.
Dawn came, and Gathilicas climbed up into Gidin's house. "Gidin get on up, tis dawn and we are expected to have Kcaeon's armor polished by brunch!" said Gath hastily, "the armour was to be dont today? Ohhh, but i am too tired" Gidin moaned as he shut his eyes again. "the sooner we polish the armour the sooner we get breakfast" said Gath in a sly tone, knowing that food would get Gidin out of bed, but Gidin was still as slow and as dreary as a slurg which was not usually like him. "are you alright?" asked a concerned Gath, "it's not like you to drag yourself so". "I was up all night finishing this..." Gidin reached for his hilt and drew his magnificent sword. Gath looked in amazement, "you could be a squire and a black smith" exclaimed Gath awing the mighty weapon. The two friends laughed and they fetched the armour that was to be polished. Gidin and Gath were two great squires, they never failed their duties, never. If they were to polish armour--they would look like mirrors, if they were to fetch armour--not a link of chain-mail would go missing.
The two squires had finished the armour and their breakfasts and were off to find Kcaeon, the mighty warrior of the village. Gagion, Kcaeon's rival, had challenged Kcaeon to a joust. The joust was the talk of the town for a while and everyone was excited, they would set up small events of other warriors and give multiple surmons between fights. The brusque manner of many townsfolk frightened the two overlooked squires, ever since the event was announced; the squires had become quite popular, but in no good way whatsoever. The villagers would pile around the two weapon keepers and ask them chains of difficult and annoying questions about Kcaeon. The Squires did not like all of the attention and had gotten used to taking secret routes to the weaponry stable to avoid any more cluttery crowds. It was almost brunch when they arrived, they searched for Kcaeon all over but found no sign of him. "There he is, drinking wine, I recognise his shape anywhere" said Gath. They approached the mighty warrior with a hunched gait, almost as if they were afraid of him, "oh great lord, he have finished polishing your armour, and before brunch as we promised...", Gidin said quietly, "may we now receive our payment?" Gidin mumbled presenting the armour to him. "why, certainly! Such a good polishing requires a well-earned payment!" he shouted cheerily. The warrior reached toward his belt and pulled out a sack of coins and emptied near half the sack into the two squires hands. "There! Payment for a job well done!" he said with a large grin on his face. "thank you sir!" said Gidin, he and gath jumped and laughed and were off like two jack rabbits dancing and singing the whole way back.
"What shall we do now?" asked Gath happily, "Singing and dancing all the way home sounds good to me!" laughed Gidin, so that's exactly what they did. They skipped and jumped down Main Street with happy thoughts about their heads singing every happy folksong they knew. They then ran into Gruelgho, the town's butcher, a real fat,crusty, grumpy man who was blind in one eye.
He looked town at the two joyful squires, "what likes 'ave you got to be 'appy about" he growled, "you been stealin' money! And i 'ave copped ya red 'anded". "Nothing of the sort!" cried Gath "We just received our payment sir". "You two er liers, tremendous ones!" He snarled "If you aint the thieves, ain't it purty convenient that two of yer size and cloth were seen stealin' from my butchey shop!". "I actually find it quite inconvenient seeing how we're innocent to this crime!" Gridin retorted. The butchers glass eye lifelessly rolled around in his warted eyelid. "why you little..." the butcher raised his hand as if to slap the measley squire, but the abuse was cut short by a guard who happened to be passing by, "what's happening here?" the guard asked, "these two little scuts were stealin' from me butchery" the flabby butcher spat. "It's not true my fine guard, we are being framed!" shouted Gath, "well butcher Gruelgho, is there any evidence to this crime you claim they committed?" asked the guard. Unfortunately for Gruelgho, there was no proof of this crime and the two squires were free to go. "I wonder who did steal from the butchery" said gath.
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Chapter 1
part 2

"yesterday was short" said Gath, "But we received our payment, and for a short day it sure was liberating from all our work" replied Gidin. The two squires were settling in two a nice hot lunch of potatoes, biscuits, jam, cakes, ale, and salted red meat on the bone. The two bit into their meals fiercely, it had been quite some time since they could afford a meal of this size and taste and they were both very contented to have it. Gidin had just settled in to his meats and was enamored by it's sweet and juicy taste and texture. Gidin always faced down when he ate, he always looked at his food and his hands, he never looked up, this was an advantage to Gath--Gath was usually a crude eater and it was almost perfect that his best friend naturally didn't look at him when eating. It was like this all the time, the two fit together like jigsaws, one's actions was always uplifted and accompinied by the others. Gidin was munching a potato when something small bonked him on the head, it was a small tomato, Gath had started it and Gidin knew he must finish it. "Foolish mortal, no tomato can stand up to a potato!" Gidin shouted with glee as he chucked the spud at Gath. Gath dodged it, "I may be mortal but i shall not give up" he replied as he tossed a meat ridden bone at the friendly-fire. Both friends had left their seat and were leaping around the table throwing an assortment of foods at each other. "you shall never take alive foul demon!" Gidin retorted.
Both Gidin and Gath were asleep, the food fight had leached their energy and deprived them of consiousness.
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