Instant Karma

[oddling]

Hey guys! This is my new fan fic! Sorry that I didn't finish my last fan fic, I kinda had a writers block and stopped writing for a while, but I'm making a comeback with this one! In a way, I guess it's kinda like AO but with wolves, I didn't mean for it to be like AO, but it'll still be pretty good. Well, heres the first chapter, enjoy!

Chapter 1: Ready or not, here I come

July 7th, a warm summer day. The cool, almost tropical breeze drifted across the air, carrying along with it the sweet fragrance of dafodiles. Midnight, a young wolf as black as, well, midnight, licked her new-born cub. Nitro, the father of the cub, snuggled up next to Midnight. Midnight licked his face and looked at the pup. "Nitro, look at him, he's so perfect. He's our perfect little puppy." Midnight nudged the new pup and cuddled closer with Nitro. "He's so cute, look at that little tyke go, he's gonna be the alpha male in no time! Just like his pop! Say little fella?" Nitro rolled the puppy on it's back, and that's when he realized their mistake. "Holy crap! He's a girl!" Nitro retreated in shock, and looked at Midnight surprisingly. Midnight laughed at the look on Nitro's face, and soon had him laughing too. The new baby she-wolf inched across the cave floor to her father and drooled. Nitro tickled the soft under fur of her stomach until she giggled. She made a comeback by pouncing on her father snout and trying to sink her fangs into his nose, too bad she didn't have any yet. "Well, she doesn't look much like a Stan any more. What should we call her now?" The pup pounced on a large beetle scuttling across the ground. The beetle sprayed dark, smelly black crud all over her face. "Hmm, how about Karma?" Midnight suggested. "Yeah, instant Karma..."

Like it?

Oddling l:c l

[The Red Muse]

I liked the beginning--it gave me a warm, fuzzy,pony(don't even bother to ask) -feeling.

Errh... right, continue ,please.

*sits back cross legged, crossing her hands too and starts waiting for a new chapter*
Please hurry though--I get easily hungry.
Oh and--when you reply, could you bring me a coffee?
Thank you!

[Canned Gabbiar]

Ah, sounds like one of those Lion King type stories. You know what I mean. Heh, sorry if that sounded like an insult (and it's not an insult or anything), but that's just what I thought since it had that (and I quote from Red Muse) "...warm, fuzzy, pony..." feel to it. But anyway, it's nice. It'll make a nice animation script ... especially if you put some violence/gore into it .

[oddling]

No offense taken canned gabiar! I like the lion king! *gets red muse her coffee* here yahs go! *accidently spills it on her lap* ack! Err.... to the bat cave! *runs to cave and writes another chapter*

Chapter2: Something smells

Karma lept across the plains in hot presuite. Her target was a jump's length away from her. Her paws clawed at the ground as she ran as fast as her little legs could take her. She almost had her prey, she could almost taste it's fur in her mouth when suddenly she tumbled head over heels and her victim got away. The victim, who was actually just her friend Deputy playing tag with her, made a u turn back to her, laughing his little puppy butt off. Blitz, who had tripped her, tumbled on the ground giggling so much he couldn't breath. Karma brushed herself off and smiled a playful smile. "You may have gotten away that time, but you're goin' down tomorrow!" Karma shouted to Deputy. "Oh there won't be a next time Karma..." Blitz growled playfully and tackled Karma, who retaliated with a snap to the shoulder. Deputy cocked his head confusingly as he watched the two zip around the field like lightning. Deputy leaped where he thougth they were, then they weren't. They continued this for quite a bit, until Karma stopped and sniffed the air. Even though she was a puppy, her sence of smell was extraordinary, even for a wolf. Karma followed the scent, causing the rest of the entire pack to follow her over a hill. Karma stuck her nose in the air until they topped over a particularly large hill, ending in a sheer, bottomless cliff. Karma stopped at the edge of the cliff, and looked down. There she saw many things, strange things, no tails, extremly tall, only two feet, and didn't have fur except for on their heads. Very odd indeed. the pups jittered among themselves, along with the adults, until Deputy spoke. "Daddy, what are those things? And why are they here?" Sarge, Deputy's dad, looked down fearfully at the strange beings. "Those, Deputy, are humans. Never go near them. No matter what." That was all he said. The adults walked back to the camp, the pups following suiet. Karma looked back at the humans for a moment. Her ears perked up. She heard barking. Loud barking. Just like a wolf but somewhat different. They shouted to her, "Come with us! Play with us! Live with us! We'd love you to stay!" but she simply howled back to the strange barks saying, "No thank you, I like my family. But I might come by to play sometime." With that she ran back to the end of the pack, and followed her family home.

Oddling l:c l

[Canned Gabbiar]

Ooooo... Humans are the villains by the looks of it. MUAHAHAHAHA!!!

[The Red Muse]

*frowns*
Thanks for the coffee... tch...

*clears her throat*

Ahem!

I really like this story.
Really.
Keep on writing oh Odd one!

*takes out a hairdryer and starts drying her clothes*

[oddling]

Ack! Sorry this chapter is so late! Darn you homework! *throws homework in shredder* o_O The show must go on! *puts on dunce cap and types chapter so fast her keyboard sets on fire*
o_O

Chapter3:The loyalty of jackals or dogs?

Karma trudged back to the den. Those strange sounding wolves called to her, yearned to play with her. They were probably so bored out of their minds that their eyes were about to pop out, and needed soemone to play with, regardless of species. Maybe they wanted to get in touch with their kind? Afterall, the humans probably had them copped up all day with nothing to do. Karma looked back at the human development below the cliff, then back at the pack. "Maybe I could sneek out or something, they'd never know!" Karma followed her mother back to the den. She waited until nightfall when the pups were supposed to be asleep, and the adults out hunting. Karma pretended to sleep and waited till she heard her parents paw steps fade away into the night. She peeked out of the den, her green eyes glowing yellow in the moonlight. When she was sure they were gone, she dashed out of her den to Deputy's. "Psst, yo, Dep, Deputy! Get up you dork!" Karma shook Deputy until he woke up. "You know Karma, normal kids are sleeping at this time!" Deputy growled and rolled over. "Come on Deputy! I'm sneekin' out and going over to the humans to play with those pups they have there, you wanna come?" "Are you crazy?! You heard my dad! We're not allowed to go down there no matter what! Who knows what those things could do!" "Well fine be a scaredy cat! Don't go! But....I'm warning you, if by some chance you don't go and I somehow accidently tell your dad about that skunk you're keeping in the old abandoned den......" All right, all right allready! I'll go with you!" Deputy slowly got to his feet and shook off. The two drowzy pups then made their way to Blitz's den. "Yo, Blitz, wanna go to the human's place?" Blitz shot up in the blink of an eye. "Are you kidding?! Of course I will! I'm not some sort of baby!" Blitz wagged his tail and pounced out of the den, bolting across the field to the cliffs. Karma melted right into the shadowy night with her pitch black fur, save the two zig zag striped of white down her cheeks and snout. Blitz didn't blend in too well with his muddy brown fur, but was way better off than Deputy, who's snow white fur showed like a beacon in the twilight. "Damn your fur Deputy! you're gonna get us all caught!" Blitz growled. "Hey! Don't blame me for my own genetics! It's my dad's stupid white genes! Not mine!" They ran until they got to the sandy desert-like cliffs of the prairie. They stared down off the cliffs, trying to spot out their canine companions. Suddenly they heard a howl and a bark. "Thats them!" Karma shouted, and bolted down the gravely, less steeper side of the cliff. They stopped at the bottom with a grinding sound, and followed the sent of the nw pups. It was strange though, they smelled like wolves, but a bit different. Maybe spending too much time with humans made them smell like them. The three pups found their new friends tied up to trees with what smelled like peices of cow skin. They wagged their tails and greeted eachother happily. They were two pups, about a year old each. Both midnight black, and looked and smelled almost identical. "Hi! I'm Raven!" "And I'm Shadow!" "And we're twins!" The two brothers said in unison. "Hi! I'm Karma, this is Deputy, and this is Blitz!" "Nice to meet you!" They both chimed in together. The five pups played and chased eachother as far as Raven and Shadow could go on their leather leashes, until Blitz, with his big mouth, popped the question. "Why do you guys smell funky?" The twins looked at eachother and laughed. "Because we're not wolves, we're Labs!" Shadow said. "You're what?" Deputy questioned. "Labradors! Thats a type of dog! We're like wolves, except tamer, friendlier, less aggressive, and not to mention cleaner." Raven said with his snout in the air. "Hey, are you calling us dirty?!" Blitz growled and bared his tiny fangs. "Of course not! It's just that we don;t take baths by rolling in the dirt!" Shadow snickered and they both rolled on the ground laughing. "Well if you're going to make fun of us then we won't play with you!" Karma yelled and walked off with her nose in the air. Blitz and Deputy followed her lead. "Well they just made a BIG mistake!" Raven growled. "Oh yes, a big mistake indeed. No one insults the Twilight brothers and gets away with it!" Shadow howled in pain as his knees buckled in false agony. He rolled on the ground yelping as if something had attacked him badly. Karma and the pups ran back to see if he was allright. Just as they did, the whole village woke up, got out of their tents, and saw two things. 1, a dog rolling on the ground, howling and yelping like it just got hit by a car, 2 three wolf pups surrounding it, sniffing it and pawing at it. If you saw this, I think you'd think the same thing happened that the villagers did. "You stupid animals! Get away from my dog!" The man took out a rifel and started shooting at the pups. "Randy stop it! Animals or not they're puppies! Besides, if we can declare them dangerous and catch 'em, then we can sell them to the zoo or something for money!" Shouted a short, elderly woman. "Hmm, you're right Maud, next time I see those varments I'm acatchin' 'em! Maud dearest, I think we just made ourselves rich!"

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[oddling]

Hey! Can I get some replies here!

Chapter4: Sarge's last stand

Karma ran as fats as her puppy legs could take her. Sarge was right, they never should have messed with humans! What was she thinking?! She knews those... those... dogs didn't smell right! She went through all that trouble to meet those two jerks and what did they do? Stab her in the back. All that trouble for nothing. Now their parents would probably know they snuck out because of the gunshots, and they weren't exactly trying to be quiet as they all ran for their lives across the meadow. Once they got back to the pack hill, each of them went their different ways to their dens, and slid to a stop and flopped over exhausted, just as their parents arrived. "What happened?! I heard gunshots! If those humans were after you, I'll..." "Calm down Sarge! This is no time to panic. Now let the kids explain to us what happened. Go ahead guys."

"Hello? Is this animal control?" Randy spit into the phone receiver. "Yes it is sir, how may we help you?" "Yes, I'd like to report three little varments attackin' my poor dogs out there, this place ain't safe to start a new city in with those dang wolves runnin' around like crazy! Howlin' at the moon and growlin' and whatnot!" "Uh huh, and what would you like us to do with these, 'varments' sir?" "I wan' you ter lock 'em up and get 'em away from my dogs! Dang things scared the willickers outta my lil' Shadow!" "Uh huh, and where will this be?" " On the outskirts of Nome, Alaska. Just pick those darned things up and do whatever yahs want with 'em!" "Allright sir, we'll pick those wolves up soon. *sigh*, rednecks." The man hung up.
"Well Maud, looks like we got our wolf problem outta our hair, now we can set up camp here and start adiggin' fer oil." Randy walked outside with a shovel and jammed it into the permafrosted ground. "Hehehe, yessiree, not gonna be a single dang wolf around here after I'm done. When I strike that oil, I'ma gonna be so rich, I'ma gonna have all those dang varments locked up ferevers!"

Nitro motioned for the pups to speak as they looked up at the adults with innocent looks on their faces. "Umm..... we.... had a nightmare! Yeah! So... we went out looking for you.... and.... ended up going towards the human village a teeny tiny bit, and they all freaked out on us! Then this HUUUUGE big mean human started chasing us with that big bang thingy, so we ran back!"Karma nudged the other two and motioned with her worried smile and shifting eyes to follow along with the story. "....... You went down there to play with the dogs, didn't you?" Nitro glared at them. "We're sorry! we just wanted to go play with them because we were so bored and we wanted to cheer them up because they're cooped up with humans all day!" Blitz pleaded. "How many times have I told you, never go near humans! No matter what! Now who knows what they're going to do!!" Just as Nitro shouted this final scolding at the pups, a loud roar was heard overhead. A large metal thing with whirling blades flew over the pack hill, causing everything to blow over. Sarge knew exactly what this strange thing was, the same thing that had killed his wife, Deputy's mother; a helicopter. "Run!!" The pack bolted across the hills, swerving left and right out of the way of the chopper. Nitro, the leader, used every trick he knew to outsmart the helicopter, but no matter what it followed them right on their tails. The adults were allready starting to get a bit tired as the pups started to fall behind from exhaustion. Their steady sprint turned into a lathargic jog as they ran for dear life from the copter. Suddenly, the copter sank low, and the door opened. A hand reached out grabbed at Blitz. Blitz, instead of running faster, bit at the hand and attacked it. His futile strength was no match for the human's hand. It scooped him up and threw him into the helicopter. Deputy was next to go. The run was too much for a puppy his size. He gave up out of pure fatigue and let himself be captured. "Deputy!!" Sarge shouted. Sarge ran back and attacked at the hand.He sank his jaws deep into the human's arm, blood gushing out and trickling down his finger tips like little red streams. The human pulled the copter up higher in the air and shouted in pain. He beat Sarge over the head with a crowbar until his face was a bloody mess, but he did not let go. His wife had allready sucumbed to the evil of humans, he was not going to let his son go too. Eventually his grip satrted to loosen. His weight was too much for him to hang onto much longer. With one final attempt to get his son back, Sarge grabbed into the human's flesh deeper and got a better grip. "GIVE..ME..BACK...MY...SON!!!" He growled through a mouthful of mangled arm. With one last blow to the head with the crowbar, Sarge could not hold on any longer and fell from the helicopter, 20 feet in the air. His head banged against a tree with a loud thud, a splat of blood marking where he hit. There he lay on the ground, unmoving and silent. Sarge's last stand. Even after Sarge's couragious attempt to save his son, the helicopter sunk down closer to the ground, the hand reaching out towards Karma. Karma ran as fast as she could. The sight of Sarge being defeated like that in his last attempt to hang on to the last bit of happiness he had burned in her mind, perminantly scared there for life. She was going to avenge him, she wasn't going to stand there and run like a coward! If she was going with the human, then she might as well put up a good fight! "You hurt my friend! i'm not letting you get away with that!" Karma sank her tiny fangs into the human's finger. She heard the flesh break a little with a satisfying pop, and felt the victorious taste of blood in her mouth. The human snarled and tried to shake Karma off. He threw her into the helicopter, banging her against the opposite door with a clank, and then everything went black.....

Oddling l:c l

[Seargentbig]

Good story. But I think it is in the wrong forum. I think it should be in the sub forum.

[oddling]

Chapter5: Blitz's nightmare

Karma opened her eyes drearily and squinted through her hazed vision. Once her eyes adjusted to the light and saw where she was, she bolted to her feet in shock. She was in some big metal cage and had no clue where she was. She was on what looked like a conveyor belt and was being transported through a series of boxes. One of them shot out funky red lights, and she looked over to see a picture of her skeletal structure. Once she calmed down, she started to wonder where Blitz and Deputy were, and if the human took anyone else. Somewhere in all the chaos, she heard a little voice calling for her. "Karma! Karma! Where are you?! Karma!!!" Karma searched for the source of the voice. "Deputy?! Is that you?! Blitz! Deputy! Where are you?!!" Just as Karma started to try and sniff out where her friends were, she has lifted up in her cage and put on a small cart with other animals in cages just like her. This included dogs, cats, rabbits, birds, and many more wild creatures. the man that put her on the cart put two more cages onto it and they drove off to where ever these monsters were taking them. Karma examined the lines of cages on the cart. Everyone seemed very upset or frantic. Then she heard Deputy calling out to her. "Karma!! Karma! Over here!" Deputy bounced around in his cage to indicate where he was. "Deputy! I'm so glad to see you! Where in the world are we?!!" "An airport....." Blitz cut in with a disgusted snarl. He layed on the bottom of his cage with a look of pure hatred upon his face. "It's an airport. They take animals out of the wild and put them in cages. Then they put them on those things," He motioned to a large moving metal structure that resembled a bird. "and they ship you off to whatever horrible place they want to. But no matter where they send you, weither it's a sausage factory or paradise, you'll never see your family again. You'll never go back home, and you're life will never be the same....." Blitz layed back down and growled deeply. His muddy yellow eyes burned with the fires of hatred. A few minutes later the cart came to a stop and they were unloaded into the back of one of the metal bird things. As the man picked up their cages and put them into the cargo hold, Blitz glared at him with such lazer intensity it seemed like her was going to burn a hole in his forehead. Karma wondered why Blitz hated humans so much. She was really ticked off at them at the moment but there was just something about Blitz glare that told her that this was much more than just taking us somewhere else. After the guy finished pakcing everything into the cargo hold, he slamed the door shut. Suddenly there was a loud roaring noise and Karma felt strange. It felt like she was being lifted into the air, but she was still on the ground. She felt shaky and layed down for a bit. Blitz just layed there with his unmoving glaze, while poor Deputy had just hacked up his lunch. About a half an hour later, a lady came with three bowls of some hard crunchy brown stuff, and placed inside their cages. She gave different variations of the food to the other animals, and cleaned up Deputy's mess. Karma sniffed the brown food and licked it a bit. It wasn't exactly caribou, but it was okay for airline food. She took a bite out of it and hungrily devoured the rest. Deputy took one look at the food and inhaled it ravenously. He must have been starving after loosing his lunch on the floor like that. Blitz didn't even look at the food. He just layed there like that for the past few hours until there was a loud screeching noise and the metal thingy stopped. The funny flying feeling stopped and Deputy's stomach calmed down. The man opened the back of the cargo hold and a blinding light filled the area. Blitz gave the man his now trademark glare and growled the most evil, hatred filled growl Karma had ever heard. Deputy just rolled over on his back wearily and slept, probably from exhaustion. Karma looked up in fear at the man that was handling her. She looked deep into his eyes and searched through them. Between the bordness and weariness, she actually saw a hint of sorrow and sympathy for her and her friends. Maybe he was just tired. She'd never now, because the next minute her, Deputy, and Blitz were set out of their cages and into a strange factory looking place. This was where they were destined to stay for a very long time. The Northern California Puppy Mill.

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*Cheers*
Good Chapter! More! More!

[oddling]

Blarg! Late chapters! Sorry dudes, I just got new furniture in my room and we had to move my computer oyt and didn't know how to hook up my internet. I should get it back in soon, until then I'm using my moms computer. Enjoy!

Chapter6: Welcome to the puppy mill California

Karma was tossed out pf her cage onto a cold hard floor. A man in a big fancy swivel chair smoking a cigar faced the other way from her. The man who brought them into the room looked nervous and shivered at the sight of the big fat guy in the chair. "I got those three arctic wolf pups you wanted sir." He wrung his hat nervously in his hands and stepped back as the guy in the chair turned around. He had a look of evil on his face, the look of greed resonated in his cold brown eyes. Karma could almost see dollar signs flash on his face as he glared at her. "Good work McHenry, you'll get paid double today...." The greedy looking man got out of his chair and inspected Karma Deputy and Blitz. Blitz growled deeply and snapped at his fingers. "Oooh, a vicious one, perfect. We can sell his pups to the police force, or dog fighting rings." He then looked at Deputy and picked him up. Deputy was the opposite of Blitz, and cowered terrified in the man's palms. "Hmm, this one is good tempered. A family animal. We can sell his pups to pet stores and make tons of money.Then he looked at Karma. Karma was neither frightened, nor vicious. She simply held her ground and let him now he didn't scare her. Well, actually he did. Very much. She just didn't let it show. He picked he rup and turned her on her stomach. "Ah, a female. Not cowerdly, yet not agressive...... what a horrible mixture. It disgusts me. It's not good for anything!" He threw Karma on the ground, cracking her shoulder painfully and causing a loud yelp to escape from her mouth. Karma put her tail between her legs and hid behind Blitz. The man glared evily at Karma. Then his glare seemed to soften more into a scanning stare, then into a smile. He laughed and picked her back up. "Who gives a rats ass about temperment when you have a coat like that! Look at the marking on this one! Beautiful!" He kissed Karma and lifted her in the air. "With fur like that, you're perfect for show breeding! Sweety, you're gonna make me millions!" He hugged Karma tightly, the stench of cigar smoke clinging onto his pinstripe tuxedo like a magnet. "McHenry, show our new residents to their new rooms...." The man put them back in their cages, and brought each of them to seperate cages, Blitz and Deputy on one half of the building, Karma on the other, with the rest of the females. It was fairly large, with a little doggie house with a blanket for cold nights, and two bowls filled wth the same brown crunchy stuff on the plain and some water. Karma gorged herself, then went to explore the rest of her new territory. She noticed other animals around her, all girls, some wolves, some dogs. All in the same enclosures as her. Karma figured she had a pretty good life going. Then she heard a voice from behind. "Psst, hey, kid, ovah here." Karma whirled around. "What? Who said that?" "Me kid! Ovah here!" A scragely looking wolf with mangey, yet beautiful white fur called her. "So, yo the newbie 'round here I'm guessin'." "Yeah, I just got here." "Well guess what kid, you got a long life here ahead of yeh. It ain't all that bad, once you gets used to Margaret." She pointed to a twitching Heina with flies buzzing around, cackling like it just saw Martha Steward get kicked off the show. "The name's Sasha kid, and lemme just tell yeh that yous got a great future comin' for yah." "Hi Sasha, my name's Karma. Um, does anyone know exactly whats wrong with Margaret?" "Nice ta meet ya Karma, we're not entirely sure whats wrong wit Margey, just that she's ran inta the electric fence one too many times." "Haha, you don't need a rocket scientist to tell you that!" "Hahahah! I like yous kid, you ain't half bad. You and me are gonna be good friends." A few months passed. Then about a year did. Karma was now a year and a half old, and was pretty happy. She saw Blitz and Deputy now and then at feeding time, but not much. Then that little bit turned into less, then that into nothing. But who cared, she had Sasha. She was always by her side except for every day at 12 to 1 where she went into the building for something. Karma never found out what she did in there, whenever she asked her she would change the subject. Until one day, she found out.....

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[Gryph the Slig]

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[Abe16]

Yeah I like it write more!

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[Jacob]

Yours and PA's are two of the stories i've read briefly but so far they're highly thooper. Keep up the good work and shtuffs.

[oddling]

Wow! Jacob likes my fan fics! Thats a first. Hey, i'm so sorry about the late chapters again, I had the latest one all typed out when I hit a button that took me to another site and erased it. So sorry. Well, here it is! So sit down shaddap and read it bastitch!

Chapter7: Paradise revealed

Karma was living a very good life at the moment. Much better than she thought any wolf ever had in the wild. She had found out that not all dogs were as horrible as the Twilight Brothers were. Not to mention tacky. Most of them were really good hearted creatures. She had gotten to know a few pretty good, but never loved any of them as much as Sasha. For all she knew Sasha was her mother. She barely remembered anything about her puppyhood in the wild. She assumed it was horribly dreadful, or her mother was neglectful and evil, so she abandoned her and was found by humans. Humans were the wonderful, they were the best creatures ever. They would never hurt her. The humans would never do anything to her. Why would they? The humans were her friends. As she lay staring up at the starry sky, Margey's insane cackles fading into the night, she wondered if life could be any better. She figured that she had nowhere to go but up from here. She was wrong. She was horrificaly wrong. Little did she know what this place was. Or why Sasha and all the other dogs and wolves older than her went into the building from 12 to 1. She figured it was a different feeding time, or something to keep the older animals healthy, like special medicine. As she closed her bright, lime-green eyes, and resigned herself to the night's dark pillowy blanket of slumber, she questioned herself about what really went on in the building? What did happen from 12-1? And why wouldn't Sasha tell her? It would make thinks alot simpler than just waiting confusingly and thinking. The next morning she woke up to the racket of the Food Man opening her cage door. He had a long black leash with a silver chain collar attached to the end. Karma shook her head, ruffling up her pitch black fur, and allowed the Food Man to put the collar on her. He tugged on the leash to make her get up, but she was too tired. She gave Food Man a nasty look that ment "Hang on a sec, I'm getting up!" when the collar suddenly tightened around her throat so she could not breath. She gasped for breath, digging her claws deep into the ground as if it was vertical and she was falling off of it. She collapsed in a heap on the ground, panting like she just fell off a 10 story building onto a trampoline. What spell had they put on this collar?! This was certainly the work of dark sorcery, bewitchment of the evilest kind. This collar was tainted with a terrible hex, no other collar had done this to her. But yet again, they had all been made from pleasently soft leather or woven thread collars, not the harsh, cold, merciless steel links like this one. As she lied on the ground, the collar relaxed and let go of it's death grip on her throat. Food Man tugged on the leash quickly and harshly, the collar tightened menacingly for a split second, then fell limp. She discovered the collar's spell only activated when Food Man pulled on her leash. Surely he must have seen this by now.But if he had, why had he continued to do it? And why when she struggled and whimpered helplessly and painfully in the cold dirt, had he just stared blankly at her, had not come to her rescue when she was a mere foot away? Maybe the collar's hex included that he could not see her. Yeah, that must have been it. Other wise he would never have done this to her. After all, Food Man would never hurt her. Food Man was her friend. He led her past the dog cages, past the wolf cages, and past the storage shed. He took a ring of shiny, tinkling keys off his belt, searched through them, and inserted a small copper one into the keyhole on the door in front of them. The door opened with a creak and he commanded her through it. Into the building. He shoved her into a room full of wolves, all girls, all around her age. She ran around the room, wondering where she was, sniffing other wolves. She found three wolves cowering in a corner. Well, actually two. A snowy white and grey wolf lay with her head in her paws with a mournful, worried look on her face, and a pure grey wolf was extremly upset, whimpering and howling loudly on the verge of tears. The third, a dark, rustic red and brown wolf, sitting on her haunches with her head in the air, an angered, distant, tough look on her face, sat with the others, often looking at them with a pitiful glare. Karma strode up to the grey wolf to comfort her. "Are you okay?" She asked. The grey wolf jumped several feet in the arm and landed on her feet in a threatening stance, growling menacingly with her fangs bared. For such a small wolf they seemed awfully large. Once she saw who it was she relaxed and layed back down with an embarassed look. "Yeah, I'm fine. Um, sorry about that. I'm really paranoid, can you tell? Hahaha, is it me or is it hot in here? Hehehehe, hot, haha, paranoid..." She rocked back and forth with a crazed look in her eyes. "Don't mind Luna, she's always like this. You should see her when it's feeding time, licks her bowl off before they fill it up to sanitize it, then she sniffs it to make sure it's not poisoned, then eats her food one kibble at a time." The rustic red wolf replied. "She sort of reminds me of Margey the heina." Karma said. "Well, some people do say she's part heina, maybe they're distant cousins. Anyway, I'm Berzerk, nice to meet you." Berzerk smiled, looking slightly evil with the sorrowful, yet tough, rebelious look resonating through her dark, earth brown eyes. Karma looked at her suspiciously for a split second, wondering why her smile looked so distant, why she looked so hard core as if the world had stuck her into a kiln to bake until she got so hard, and tough that she cracked. Like it had dried out all her love and abilities to make strong attatchments like water out of clay. But the fiery kiln the population of the world had placed her in may have hardened her, made her rough around the edges, but she had not cracked yet. No, she would crack much later, as Karma would find out soon enough..... Karma let go of her gaze at her and replied to her greeting. "My name's Karma, nice to meet you too." "I'm Blizzard, and don't mind that Luna doesn't introduce herself, she's been through alot and is really paranoid, and, um...." Blizzard, the white and grey wolf, leaned in closer to Karma's ear. ",she's about snapped if you ask me. Don't let her fool you, when she gets mad, she can cause some nasty damage. Luna clawed at the base of the wall and sniffed it. With a dissapointed look, she moved to another part of the wall and scratched at it, sniffed it again, and moved on. After watching Luna for several moments, Karma asked a question. "So, what do you guys think they're going to do to us?" Blizzard and Berzerk lifted their heads and looked at her. Blizzard cocked her head confusingly and answered her question with her own theory. "Well, my friend says that they take you into here when you start getting too big and turn you into dog food. some people think thats what they feed us!" "They don't turn you into kibble," Luna interrupted calmly. "they turn you into spam." Everyone looked at her oddly with questioning looks on their faces, their heads cocked in their trademark look of confusion. "What in the world is.... spum?!" Blizzard shouted. "Spam, not spum, thats what my owner fed me. All my friends didn't like it and told me what it was made out of, but I thought it was tastey." Karma grimaced at the thought of humans eating ground up animals. Blizzard looked sick and turned the other way with her cheeks bulging threatiningly. Berzerk just gave a small disgusted snarl and returned back to her normal cold glare. "You're both wrong." Everyone turned to Berzerk, even Luna paused her pawing of the wall and looked at her. "Oh yeah? what makes you think you know more about whats in there than we do?" Blizzard snapped back. "Because I've SEEN what goes on behind these walls. I've been to another place like this, except much much worse. They did the same excact thing to us, except they didn't pamper us like defensless puppies, they treated us like dirt, like the animals we were. they didn't give a damn about what happened to us, as long as we made puppies. Big, fat, healthy puppies. If any of us gave one unhealthy puppy they beat us and left us to die. They cared nothing for us, and thats exactly what they do hear, they just sugar-coat it so it looks better..... but they're all the same. Each and everyone of them is evil to the core, filthy horrible beasts who care nothing for you or anyone else except their amount of money and how much they can stuff their mouths with food that should have been OURS until they get fat and even more hidious, if that was even possible. It's the same excact thing, they're all the same. Not a damned thing different..." Her glare became even more icyer, and had a certain fiery, laser-intensity she had seen in Blitz. Her eyes almost seemed to be on fire with hatred as anger resonated and echoed through them like caverns. Just then, Food Man came back in with the black leash and hexed collar and placed it around Karma's neck. All the other wolves ran, except for her, and Berzerk. Berzerk had a look of upmost hatred upon her face. If it had not been for her quick glance at his gun straped onto his belt with many other various items, she would have attacked him and ripped him into bloody shreds and tatters that very instant. Karma followed Food Man through another door that led into a long hallway. There were many large steel doors on the walls, yelps, barks, snarls and howls could be heard out of many of them. she could have sworn she recognized Sasha's voice coming out of one of them. Was Berzerk right? Was her story true? It sure seemed to be, not many creatures could have such a look of such pure hatred and anger upon their faces without meaning it. But Food Man was her friend. He would never hurt her. He was probably just under the collar's spell or something. He reached a large steel door near the end of the hall and took out one of his keys. The door rumbled and scratching and growling and snarls could be heard inside. It sounded as though a very mad wolf was trying to make his way out of there fast, desperate to get to the other side and sink his teeth into Food Man's flesh. Taste his dark, crimson blood, slash open his fat, pudgey, bulbous stomach. Food Man placed the key in the door. he opened the door slightly to see where the wolf was. He opened the door fully open to find he was on a chain at the other end of the room. Karma discovered that it was not a wolf at all in there, it was a dog. It was very large, black with orange markings, and a very short stubby tail. His fangs snapped menacingly as he foamed at the mouth with saliva. His long claws scraped up large amounts of metal from the floor, leaving gigantic marks upon it's scuffed, bloodstained surface. Surely Food Man was not going to put her in this room with this crazed dog? He would never do that. He was her friend. He would never hurt her. This thought she had thought almost her whole life and beleived truley with all her heart started to fade a bit as he pushed her into the room with the manic dog. He kicked her in the room painfully, her paws sliding on the scratched, polished floor. He toom off her leash and collar hastily and slammed the door shut behind her. No, he couldn't have done that on purpose. He was her friend. He would never hurt.... she saw him in a window in the back of the room. He pressed a button and the insane dog was let off his leash and charged at her full force. He smiled at her pleasently as the Rottweiler galloped after her. So it was true. This was what happened to Berzerk. What happened to Sasha everyday from 12-1. Thats why she hadn't told her what she did in there. The Rottweiler bursting at full power seemed to be as slow as a snail as she stared at Food Man. His happy grin haunting her. Her mind racing. Nothing was right anymore. Nothing was logical. Her world was upside down. Then the Rottweiler charged into her, knocking the wind out of her, and causing her to fly hard against the wall, putting a large dent into it. And then the Rottweiler forced himself onto her, and they mated....

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[Kesiah]

ok... Is this actually an Oddworld fic though? You might have to move it to the sub-forum, Oddling.
*is still reading*
Interesting.... I'll have to finish it later though, still working on one of my fics..

[oddling]

Bleck, that lats chapter was sort of nasty, as you see, I do not want to write anything too mature, or yucky for my audience, so I left the chapter at that. sorry for the late replies!

Chapter8: The Rogue Revolution

Karma woke up back in her pen. Her head was spinning and everything was swirling in a cyclone of confusion. She waited until her eyes focused and feebily attempted to stand up. Her legs trembled and she colapsed into a drunken heap on the concrete ground. She had not known how long she had been asleep. The sky was farely dark though, indicating she must have been out for a while. She staggered wobbily to her paws and shook off. She stared up at the moon, it's cold gray surface reflecting off her bright green glare. As she gazed hypnotized into the moon as if it were a campfire in the middle of a woods, she tried to remember what happened. She scratched up as much memory as she could and dug through the files of her mind like a cabinet. All she remembered was that horrible Rottweiler snarling and growling and barking and then..... oh no. She hadn't. She couldn'tve. Did she? As she watched her shattered memories flick through her mind like an old film, she remembered the horrible black and brown dog pinning her to the ground. But it must have been true. How else would she have ended up here like this? But.... that would mean she would be having puppies. Oh no, oh no indeed. She did not like this at all. She didn't want to have puppies, she didn't want to be a mother. She had no idea how except for the few instincts her heritage had given her. Karma lay back down on the cold cement and howled. Her head was swirling with a tornado of thoughts. What will happen to me? What will happen to my pups? Will the humans do this to me again? She howled and whined some more until she had woken up Sasha, who had been sleeping in the pen next to her. "Whats the matter tootse? Did you have a bad dream or something?" She yawned and stretched while she shook off her beautiful white fur. "Sasha, something terrible happened." She said, her voice trembling. "Food Man took me inside the building today and..." She burst into tears. She could not bear to relive that horrible moment. Sasha was taken aback by what she had said, almost as if she knew what happened to her. Maybe she did. "Oh sweety, I'm so sorry. I was going to tell you around when you were two but I guess they started you early this year..." Sasha went up to the edge of the fence and stuck her nose through the links to comfort her. "I'm so sorry honey, I should have told you." Karma sniffed and looked at Sasha, her eyes brimming with tears. "So thats what you did in the building. Thats why you wouldn't tell me what happened in there. You were trying to protect me from the truth..." She burst into tears again and howled. "This is all my fault. I shouldn't have kept the truth from you. This is all my big stupid mistake." Sasha lowered her head in sorrow, a look of upmost sorrowness in her deep blue eyes. "It's not your fault Sasha, there was nothing you could do. You were just trying to protect me." She sniffed and wiped her fur with her paw. "But we have to do somehting about this. We an't just stand by and let the humans do this to us." She looked around the other enclosures to find several other wolves and dogs her age, either looking very shaken or howling the same way she was. She couldn't just sit and wait while the humans did this to them. She had to do something. Her eyes flared with determination as she barked to all the wolves and dogs in their half of the yard. "Allright, listen to me! We obviously all know now what goes on inside that building, we can't just stand by and let them do this to us! We have to fight back! Now who's with me?!" The yard was filled with silence. dumbstruck looks on each and everyone of them. Not even the crickets were chirping. Karma lowered her head in defeat and knew she had to accept her fate the humans had made for her. She turned away back to Sasha, but then a voice cried out among the silence. "Karma's right! We can't stand by and let them do this to us!" Karma turned around to see everyone looking at a rust red wolf with a rebelious look on her face. She knew those muddy yellow, flairng eyes anywhere. Berzerk. "What these humans have done is cheated us from our life in the wild! They have fooled us into thinking they were our friends, by giving us food and water, and then they turned on us did this. Are we going to give them the satisfaction of knowing they won?! Are going to let them treat us like this?! I say we go with Karma's plan and blow this place! Leave this all behind and start our own pack in the wild! We are creatures with a cause, and we need to make it happen!" There was a cheer from the crowd and a look from Berzerk that seemed to say, "I'm always there for you bud". It was the first time she had ever seen Berzerk smile. Karma beamed at Berzerk with thanks and started hatching up a plan. They would leave in 8 weeks, after they were sure that none of them were going to have pups. The last thing they needed was a good plan foiled because of puppies. Once they were sure of that, they all prepared themselves for the big day. The excitment was almost unbearable. The next day Karma woke up to Food Man walking passed Sasha's cage and stick his nightstick through the chain link fence and yell at her. Food Man. He's the one who did this. She remembered watching in horror at his glee when he unleashed the Rottweiler on her. How he laughed and pointed when the dog charged into her and knocked her against the wall. This was all his fault. He wanted this to happen. It was all his fault.... Karma charged full blast at him, but was stopped by the chain link fence. She growled and snapped menacingly as he laughed and teased her through the fence. She saw him gte out his circle of tinkling keys, and open Sasha's door. She cowered in front of him and allowed him ot put the evil silver choking collar on her. He lead her out and into the building. Karma was not going to let him do to Sasha what he did to her. Out of sheer determination, or insanity from rage, she stuck her paws in between the links in the fence and climbed up it. She leapt off at the top and bolted for Food Man. Food Man saw her and ran for the door. He fiddled with his keys nervously, Karma still charging madly at him. He finaly found the small copper key, shoved it in the door, and opened it. Just as he was closing it, Karma stuck her snout in between the crack, keeping it form closing properly. She pushed with all her might, Food Man grunting and trying with all the strength he had to close the door, and Sasha looking at her through the opening in the door, a fearful look hidden behind the muzzle Food Man had placed on her. Finaly, another man came with a long stick. A stick, heh, it would take more than that to have her let him take her friend. The man jabbed her with the stick, and she suddenly felt the searing hot pain of 1000 volts of electricity surge through her body. She flew backwards, her fur singed, and the door slammed shut with Sasha on the other end of it. Karma growled and scratched at the door al she could, but it would not budge. She ran down the side of the building, looking through the window at Food Man forcing Sasha into a room. The room at the end of the corridor. No one who went in that room came back out alive. On the door was a red sign with a skull and cross bones with an electric bolt through it. Everyone called it the 'deep fryer'. Karma scratched at the window with all her might. She jumped on top of a nearby crate of food, broke the window, and jumped in. The broken glass left a deep, dark red cut on her shoulder blade, but she didn't care. They had allredy put Sasha in the 'deep fryer' and who knows what they were going to do to her. Karma jumped up and pulled the lever on the door that the Food Man pushed to open it. She charged inside, just in time to see Sasha with a strange metal dish on her head, Food Man pull a lever, and Sasha yelp as the helmet sent electric waves through her body. She shook a bit, then went limp. The smell of burnt hair wafting through the air. Karma jumped up and licked Sasha's face. She didn't move. She sniffed her and licked again while she whined. Sasha still lay limp and lifeless, the tips of her beached white fur singed black. No, she couldn't be dead. That was impossible. Sasha? Her best friend in the world? Dead?She howled and whimpered as the impact of it hit her. Sasha was dead....... and it was all Food Man's fault........ Karma charged at him, teeth bared, snarling like a wild demon. This time she had him cornered. The door was closed and this time there wasn't any man with a shocking stick. Just Her, him, and Sasha's lifeless body lying on the table. She was going to make him suffer for all he did, and she was going to make sure he was going to feel it.... She rammed into him as hard as she could, knocking his fat rubbery body over, hearing his scream in terror emit from his fat buldgy mouth which uncountable cheeseburgers were probably stuffed into. She sank her her teeth into his cheek, shaking her head around until his flesh became ripped and torn to bits. The taste of blood, meat, and fat curdling in her mouth, she leapt onto his chest and started gnawing on his arm. He tried to get up and shake her off but barely managed to drag her. He cried in pain an agony as Karma tore out a chunk of his arm, turned around, pinned him on his back, and sunk her teeth into the back of his neck. She could feel the tendons and muscles snapping under all the bubbling fat. She wanted hm to suffer for all he had done to her and all the other wolves and dogs that had ever been here. He wanted him to feel their pain, every single one of theirs over the accumulative years. Food Man grabbed at her and tried to swat her feebly with his uninjured arm, only suceeeding in having her bite straight through his pudgy, ham like hands. He screamed as she shook and tore them to shreds. She let go and gnawed on a chunk for a while, as he started to crawl for the door. She abandoned the meat blob, and went back for her target. Food Man was shaking horribly, totaly drenched in blood, as he crawled on all fours to the door. His hand was reaching for the knob when Karma pounced onto him, flipped him over, and went straight for his throat. He half screamed, half gurgled as she ripped out his throat and voice box, and started digging into the gaping hole with her claws. Food Man gurgled and shook violently, spat out blood, then lay silent. Karma spat out his voice box and stared at what she had done. Her steely, enraged glare transixed into his still open, unblinking brown eyes. This guy was sure to win a staring contest any day from now on. Karma dug into his face again and shook his head around a bit more, then returned to Sasha. She was still lying on the table, still as an inanimate object, lifeless and cold. She nuzzled her and licked her cheek, then opened to door and went back through the broken window, leaving bloody paw prints on the shiny steel floor. She climbed back into her pen as she had earlier, and sat there licking her bloodstained fur. Everyone stared at her in awe as she licked the chunks of Food Man out of her teeth. everyone knew what had happend in there. They heard it all. Some looked absolutely horrified. Some looked dumbstruck. Some actually grinned evily, Berzerk being on of them. Karma turned to the crowd staring at her and stopped licking herself for a moment. "We leave tonight at midnight. We won't have to worry about Food Man catching us either now." Karma said in an icy tone of voice. "But how are we going to get out of our cages? Not all of us can climb the fences like you can." Said a small dog over in the corner. "You think I forgot about that?" Karma lifted her tail to show Food Man's ring of keys dangling from it. "Like I said, we leave at midnight tonight, any questions?" The crowd didn't say a word. "Right, let's do this thing..."

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[The Red Muse]

Lovely work oddling! This is getting better all the time! YaY!

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Touché!

[oddling]

Ooh! Joe! *watches Joe scream in her cup as she spoons him out and eats him* Well, sorry for the late replies again, and thanks red muse for replying, no one has been for AGES. Sorry if that last chapter was gruesome, I just loooove gore. Enjoy the next chapter!

Chapter9: How to Become Alpha in Three Easy Steps

Karma waited until the shadowy darkness of night fell upon them to use it as camoflauge to hide themselves before sneaking out. The humans would be asleep, with the exception of a few night gaurds, which usualy sat in the lounge eating donuts or sleeping. No one had found Food Man yet, since no one ever really went in the "deep fryer" that often, and the door was closed tight, so no one could see him.... or smell him for the fact. The entire time we was being attacked by Karma, her good nature desintigrated and her insane raging fury unleashed upon him, no one had heard a single scream. Not when she tore off the chunk of his arm, which had come off farely easily since it was mostly fat, not when she dug into his neck, not even when she gored out his throat, his final gurgling cries fading like smoke into the night and never to be heard again except echoing through Karma's mind like a cawing raven soaring through a desert canyon. Finaly, their time had come. It was the hour of judgment, who would escape and be free, and who would perish amongst the many others who had there before them. Karma didn't need to worry about puppies, it was too early for them to have any side affects from them that would slow them down. Most of them probably didn't even have puppies, since the males they hated with where either farely old and starting to deteriorate, or young and unexperienced, as most of them were. As Karma climbed the chain link fence with Food Man's tinkling ring of keys slipped around her bushy black tail, she lept over the top and landed firmly on her paws. In the shadows of the dark blanket of night, all you could make of her were two peircing green eyes, and two zig zags of white fur, running down her cheeks like lightning bolts. She ran to the nearest cage and tried to figure out how Food Man had used his keys. She stuck a small copper one in the keyhole on the cage door, like she had saw Food Man do, and turned it, but it would not budge. That was strange, she did exactly what Food Man had done. Why wasn't it working? She suddenly remembered the several other shiny metalic keys clinking on the ring. She tried several keys, all of them either failing to turn, or not fitting into the key hole at all. Finaly she came to a long silver one, jammed it in the door, and turned it. A satisfying click resonated through the mechanical lock, and the wolf imprisoned on the other side lept out like a wild animal set free. The young gray wolf jumped happily and tried all she could to keep from howling with joy. The other wolves and dogs who were bigger and stronger had started to climb out of their cages up the chain link fences too, as Karma did. The whole yard looked like it was filled with monkeys rather than wolves and dogs, trying to flee from their cruel masters. Karma ran to the cadges of the few young ones who could not climb the fences, Luna and Blizzard being amongst them. As they lept from their imprisoning cells, the shook off and welcomed her. "Thanks for that Karma!" Cried Blizzard. "I'd climb it myself but I'm afraid of heights." Blizzard lowered her head a bit and smirked shamefully at her phobia. "And obviously Luna couldn't climb out because she's too crazy. She probably doesn't even know what's going on!" Karma and Blizzard laughed together as they searched through the stampede of escapees for Berzerk. Obviously she was one of the stronger, larger wolves who could climb out of their cage by themselves. Karma shouted amongst the howls and barks, but her voice was drowned out and blended in with the rest of the background noise. "Berzerk?! Berzerk?! Where are you?!" Suddenly, the magestic, rustic colored wolf poked her muzzle through the crowd and spotted Karma with her muddy earthen brown eyes. Had she actually heard her over the crowd? Naw, she must have just stumbled upon her by chance. No wolf could ever hear that good, or be able to pick out one specific scent amongst a crowd this large. Berzerk smiled, the rebelious, fiery look resonating through her eyes like a laser bouncing off a bunch of mirrors. "Well well, if it isn't the little freedom fighter." Her fierce, determened grin spread from ear to ear as she snickered. "Those gaurds must be really stupid if they're still sleeping through all this. A nuclear bomb could go off and destroy the whole world and they'd still sleep through it!" Karma and Berzerk laughed and suddenly remembered that there were gaurds, no matter how fast asleep or into eating their donuts they were. Karma ran to the front of the group and shouted. "Okay people, let's try not to make that much noise. Beleive it or not, there ARE gaurds. No matter how stupid they are, they could still ehar us, so let's try to keep it down a bit, okay?" Karma's small lecture had no effect on the shouting, excited creatures. They kept right on barking and howling with glee. "I said, let's try and be quiet!!!.......HEY!!! I SAID QUIET!!!" Karma shouted as loud as she could to no prevail. She had only added to the risk of them being heard. She was about to hop back down off the crate she was standing on when Berzerk came to her rescue. She growled fiercly, so fierce it sounded more like a roar than a growl. Her sparkling canines as white as Sasha's fur shown behind her furry red lips, which had withdrawn into a snarl. The roar had gotten the crowd's attention. They stopped chatting immediatly and stared dead struck at Berzerk. "Didn't you just listen to a word she said? HUH?! Karma had the courage to do what you stupid pathetic wimps couldn't. Stand up for your idiotic selves and fight for your freedom!!! I doubt any of you dubious fools could ever even think up a plan, let alone put it into action! If you want to keep talking, be my guest, but you'll be spending the rest of your lives here, having no further purpose but to have puppies. Mate, have puppies, and mate, thats all you'll ever be good for. Now, if you want to get your weak pathetic butts out of here, I recomend that you respect Karma as your alpha and leader. Anyone gets out of line, and they will have to answer to me and Karma's jaws. Now I suggest you shut up and start taking orders from her, or you'll be pushing up daisys. GET IT?!!" The crowd stared in awe at Berzerk, her snarl intesnified and the rebelious glint in her eyes shining more fiery than Karma had even seen before. Berzerk broke her laser intesnity glare that seemed to be boring into them like a drill, and turned to Karma. "Well, you're the alpha leader aren't you?" She asked calmly. "Well....I guess so." Karma replied meekly. "You guess? Well our alpha must be sure of herself and make her own desicions. Not guessing all the time. So, are you alpha or not?" Karma stared at the ground worredly for a moment. Did she want to take responsibility as alpha? Could she handel it? Surely Berzerk would make a much finer alpha than she, I mean, look at the way she just handeled the crowd, making them dumb struck for the second time that day. Karma then remembered that when she got herself into this, she made a promiss. A promiss that she would protect her fellow friends and would fight with them until the bitter end. Karma's worried look became a determiend glare, not too different from Berzerk's, and she looked back at Berzerk, straight into her muddy brown eyes, looking into her very soul, and smiled the same rebelious, fiery grin that Berzerk always had. "Yes, I am alpha leader of this pack." She said firmly, and the crowd cheered. She pounced on top of the crate Berzerk was standing on, and liked her muzzle in thanks. "Thanks so much Berzerk, you're the greatest pal I could ever have." Karma smiled warmly, her eyes shinign with all the thanks she could ever give. "No problem Karma. You're the one who freed us all anyway, you deserve respect and honor, and no one can take it from you." Berzerk replied, and her tough, hardened glare softened for a moment, and she suddenly looked more like a playful puppy than a fierce, adult wolf. "Oh, and one more thing Berzerk." Asked Karma. "Ask away bud." "Dubious?" Karma tilted her head and laughed lightly. "Hahaha, you'll find out some day. After you hang out with British people more." The both laughed together and talked a bit more about their plan. "Well, I guess all we have to do know is go to the boys' pens and get them out." Said Karma. "Allready did that for you bud. All the males made it out easy, except for two of them that we have to go grab." Karma was surprised. Not only by the fact that Berzerk ahd gone through the trouble to climb over to the male's pen and tell them about the revolution, but that only two couldn't make it over the fence. "Really? Only two? Who were they?" Karma questioned. "A little tan chihuahua named Peso, and this big wimpy white wolf. He was pretty strong looking and big, but he was just too chicken to climb over. Heh, pretty boy. Probably worried about staining his," She imitaded how a fashionable girl walked, and fluffed her fur. "beautiful good looks, and white fur. Or he might stub his claw. Oh what a tragety that would be!" She pretended to act dramatic and acted out a girl flipping out at a scuffed claw. "Hmm..... a white wolf you said? Heh, probably WAS afraid he would get his coat dirty. What was his name?" Karma asked. Berzerk scratched her chin with her paw and thought deeply for a moment. "Deputy..... or something like that." Karma was taken back by the sudden rememberance of her old childhood friend. Suddenly, it all came back to her a flash. The games of tag with him, herself, and Blitz, the Twilight Brothers at the human settlment, the helicopter, Sarge, her parents, the parents that Blitz never had, it all came flooding back to her like a dam that had been blocking her memories had finaly broke, and the water crashing into her like a tidal wave were her hidden memories and knowledge that she hadn't seen in so long, stored in the catacombs of her minds and burried beneath the sands of her memory like an ancient Egyptian tomb. Suddenly, she felt horrible about calling her childhood friend a coward and a pretty boy, and realized that she had been still seeing him all these years as glimpses of him at lunch time through the chain link fence, seperating the girls from the boys. And all this time she hadn't even noticed him. The snow white wolf with the electric blue eyes. The only reason the Boss hadn't bred Karma with him was because he was a wolf too, and he wanted wolf dog hybrids only. Karma suddenly felt her heart leap with excitment at the thought of meeting her best friends once again. Her paws left the ground as she howled with joy and she skiped amongst the front of the crowd, not noticing everyone staring at her. She felt slightly embarassed, then remembered her place as alpha. "What are you looking at? Get going to bunch of mangey slobbering mutts!" She barked at them. Her glare turned back to the sweeping monitoring look of an alpha as she searched the crowd for anyone saying mutinous things of her or Berzerk, but secretly, she was as happy as she had ever been in almost a year."Deputy!" She thought to herself. "I'm going to see Deputy!"

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[MunchOnThis]

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