I'm about to write a story, but I need inspiration!!

[Loup Garou]

*God ye Good den* to thee! (*Greeting used after midday*)

I'm having problems with alot of things and the major problem is the story writing part. I have two good ideas, but which one should I write about and what should happend in each of them??

1: It's about Gneor. He's an High Priest in the Temple of The Moongod, (There are a several moons, and each moon is home to each moongod). He has sacrificed his mouth in order to gain the Elder Moongods power, to destroy an ancient evil that the mudukons have released from a Temple of Darkness. While fighting the Elder Cheftains son was missing, so Gneor and his best pupil is about to bring back the body. But something is very wrong...

2: It's about Gneor! A brutal and a savage, he was born on a battlefield and he died on a battlefield. 300 years later he was rescurrented by the Elder Moon god. The evil has returned. The same evil that Gneor defeated 300 years ago has returned!

The second one is inspiered by Legacy of Kain:Soul Reaver!

What do you think?

[Al the Vykker]

This would probably fit much better in Non Oddworld Art and Literature, if its nothing to do with oddworld.

So Im sure Xav will be able to move it there for you.

[Fez]

hey Garou, your sister told me you wanted to write a story with me. Is this still on?

[Xavier]

move...

[Loup Garou]

I forgot to say that Gneor is a mudukon, and every creature in the story is from oddworld!

Well Ferill, we'll see, we'll see. i need to finish this first!