Chester the Meech

[Abe16]

The mother looked down at her new born baby meech "What should we name him?'' Said the father "I like the name Chester" Then a army of sligs came on meech island and were killing all the meechs the mother and father quickly got away and found stuff too make a basket.

The father and mother gave a quick kiss to the little meech and was
floating on sea.

one slig found the father and mother and killed them, the baby Meech landed near a paramite nest and the paramites decided to raise him.

Odd looked down seeing the baby meech was safe.when he was seven years old he was a spunky one always going on small adventures and was always greedy.When he was 15 he was always carving writing and pictures and when he was 16 he was making stuff out of rocks.

When he was finally 23 They let him go.He was looking for one more kind of his species, but were all killed in the slig war.But! there was one Female Meech still alive somewhere on Oddworld but was deep inside the valcano stuck she needed to be rescued quick so he wandered around a little.

When he reached the sea he made a raft so he could sail around Oddworld.He reached another Paramite nest and asked them "Is there any other female Meech?" He asked. "yeah stuck in the depths of the valcanos needed too be rescued" One of the paramites said. "Well I'm on my way" There is that how you guys do it?

[thebomb372]

i think its good u should write more

[Abe16]

thank you the bombChapter2:He was close to the valcano but not that close the valcano was only 90 miles away on the way he met too other paramites and they joined his crew

When they were hungry they found a dead scrab half ate, but good too them.They were close to the valcano it was only 40 miles away they had already encounterd like 70 enemy and found clues too there quest.

The valcano was now 20 miles away but when they fell down a trap hole it went back too 90 miles away.They still didn't know who the mystery female was.

Who captured them?who is this female meech?and will they ever get out? tune in next time for another adventure of "Chester the Meech!"

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two sligs said "we got'em!Put'em in the back and get in!"They were working for the soulstorm brewery and taking them with'em.'Boss is gonna be so proud he'll give us a promotion for finding a meech!"The second slig said.

Chester got free from the truck and so did the other too paramites and snuck out.They looked at the valcano far away "Com'on lets build a raft to sail to the valcano!" Chester said."Good Idea we could get there faster and theres no sligs!" It was raining and Odd said "LET THERE BE LIGHT!" and there was light.Chester knew it was Odd and said Thank you Odd.

They were at the foot of the valcano and Chester said "This is hard but maybe if we drill a hole through the valcano we could find her faster!" Chester said There is Chapter 3

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Chapter 4:"Hey stop thinking of fast ways we have to find her the apropet way,like...The stairs next to the foot" So they went all the way up until they reached brim stone "Ewww! whats that smell!" One paramite said

"Its brim stone,We must be close" Chester said "Good my feet are tired and its stinky up here" As soon as they reached the top there was a rickety bridge leading them down to the lava lake.

"Okay,the way i saw it in my mind was NOT leading us in the boiling lake of lava!" One paramite said."Hey guys I found writing its leading us in the valcano!" Chester said "Yeah But how do we get past the burning lava?"

"Say five times fast Ohh gaga" Chester said."Ohhgaga ohhgaga Ohhgaga ohhgaga ohhgaga!" They all said at once Then The lava opened up by Odd and all went in the door leading them in the lava.

Once they were in they hid behind a rock and saw thousands of slig armys and were hitting the meechings one hit at a time and had to get back in line he saw his sister about to get hit He couldn't stand his own kind getting hit so the slig was about to hit her when he yelled out "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaait!" Chester yelled.

The slig said "Well well well well, your just in time." Chapter 5 tomarrow.

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So you never ever replied eh?Last chapter then I'm gone!:Chapter6:"In time for what!?" Chestr yelled."here boys!" the slig callede to his slogs,"RrrRRRRRRRRRRagragraragggggggggggg" the slogs barkede."CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!!" barkede th two paramites."Sic'em!" the slig commanded.

The two paramites were K.Oed and chester was on his own."No where to run!"said the slig.Chester had faith and rammede into the slig,the slogs,slig and female meech died in the lava.Chester was disapointed but he still had family inside hisd heart.

THE END

[CarboN]

I like the idea!
You should write another story