Welcome to Odderworld! What is Odderworld you may ask? Odderworld will be an Illustraited fanfic. Each illustraition will depict the scene in the chapter I wrote. So basically its a story that will have pictures to go along with it, pretty much artwork. I give you the preview!
In The 26th age............................
ODDERWORLD!
It is the future on Oddworld. And all is well but for how long? The invasion begins in two weeks! Get ready!
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(This is just a short teaser before the story. I am doing the illustraitions now for the first chapter so it will take me at least about a week and a half or two weeks to get it all completed. There will be at least two weeks between chapters because I am doing the artwork. so if anybody thinks I am not doing this don't mind me I am currently produceing the next chapter. The chapter is written already I am just doing the illustraitions right now.)
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Last edited by paramiteabe; 11-04-2003 at 03:32 AM..
Well my fellow forumers in regards to the illustraitions and story unfortunately I will post them as soon as I get my digital camera back. You see eather my parents or my brother took the camera and right now I don't have a camera. I was going to get this started today but obvieously I can't because I don't have a camera. As you can tell thats an inconvience. My brother is in Howaii getting married and my parents are away in Canada for the weekon and they will be back Sunday night but my brother won't be back for two weeks. So we are just going to have to wait on that part. But it won't be long I see Monday being the day I will start this but if I find out my brother has it I will find some other means of takeing the pictures. So in light of this unfortunate delay I ask all of you to be a little patient here and wait till Monday. I am hopeing I will have the camera then so I can take the pictures but if not I will find some other means of takeing the pictures. Even so the story is starting Monday, everythings completed the Illustraition for Chapter1 is all done the only thing is the digital camera and no I don't have a web cam. Odderworld begins Monday!
Thankyou for your patients
Paramiteabe...
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Last edited by paramiteabe; 09-06-2003 at 04:53 PM..
All was quite on the barren lands of the last remaining frontiers of Oddworld. For Oddworld has diped into its industrial age. The few sounds of wildlife still persist thoughout this natural enviorment, heard throughout the canyons.
A lone Mudokon Monk named Lazerous was out and about finding food to bring back to the Industrial complex inwhich he lived. As he was harvesting some food he found himself high upon a cliff side looking out into vast frontier when something unusial caught his eye. The strange object streaked across the sky like a comet landing far in the canyon. This made Lazerous carious but also a little on edge for what he saw fell out of the sky that day was not a typical occurance. It seemed more sleeker than a comet which made it unusial.
"Whats that?" said Lazerous holding his staff and looking into the canyon. He only knew then he had to investigate.
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Last edited by paramiteabe; 09-08-2003 at 03:42 AM..
Ehehe- t'was good*cough*brilliant*cough*perfect*cough*supreme*cough*--damn this cough--anyway, I love this idea--seriously--I love your artwork and all...
Ya are my hero paramiteabe! *sighs*
Yayness...
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Nope I did that in Pencil a 2B Pencil that is. That is why its looks nice and dark like that. You can come up with that effect very easily with a 2B Pencil thats all you need. That and a neaded erasor and a rubbing stub.
While Lazerous was approaching the position inwhich the object landed the site became errie. Lazerous approached to what appeared to be a vehical or a ship beyond repair. It was old almost ancient looking that looked like an intertanglement of pipes and wires. On the left hand side there was two openings or holes in the ship. With Lazerous being cerous he approached the ship and was about to enter when suddenly he heard a noise comming from within. He stoped.
Meanwhile in the darkness of the ship a creature blended in with its surroundings knowing Lazerous was near.
"Hello?" said Lazerous.
"Anybody there?"
Suddenly the creature mimiced Lazerous own words.
"Hello anybody there?" replied the creature.
Lazerous was frighten for he did not know what was in there. Only something odd was happening. He was scared but determined to find out. So he entered the ship and the only light was the light from outside of the ship filtering through. He entered into a chamber where at the center was a ball of intertangled wires and pipes that seem to connect to the floor and the walls and the cieling. It was as if the ship itself grew from the center of this chamber which gave a rather alive feel to everything. Lazerous knew this was a strange technology but it seemed to be organic and mechanical at the same time.
Suddenly Lazerous saw the wall beside him begin to move as the wall suddenly came at him and wraped its body around him. Lazerous struggled to free himself from this so called trap.
But soon he realised it wasnt a trap but a creature that seem to blend in with its surroundings. The creature scared him its mechanical and organic body moved and tightened its grip upon him.
"Get off of me you freak!"
"The creature let loose and mimiced him again.
"Get off of me you freak bzzzzzk!" replied the creature as his head twitched.
"What are you?"
The creature mimiced him once more but then said his name.
"What are you? I GaMork."
"What?" replied Lazerous
Suddenly the strange creature called GaMork heard a noise comming from outside of the ship as it turned away from Lazerous. In an instant it swiftly with its body slithered out of the ship so quickly that Lazerous was in shock.
Here is the picture of GaMork and how he has evolved. As for the scenes look during the next week and a half for the scene illustraitions. In the mean time take a look at GaMork. Basically I wanted something organic and mechanical half and half. But I also wanted him to be a worm like creature that moves around much like a fleech. This first design was based off of a hand but I dident like it. So I redesigned him in the next picture.
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Last edited by paramiteabe; 09-28-2003 at 09:47 AM..
This second design is the final concept of GaMork. This design is what I originally wanted. I got rid of the hand concept and then changed the face around and made it more penguin like on a worm like mechanical body. GaMork moves very much like a fleech. And he is 12 ft in size. So here is the final concept of my character not to mention the one I am useing. basically I wanted him to be very alien to what the creatures of Oddworld are like. stranger than anything on Oddworld because he is actually from one of the moons of Oddworld. Basically odd in its appearence and the way it interacts with the inhabitants.
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In the light of this expierence Lazerous sat in the ship wreck confused and feeling embarressed but cerious. The creature GaMork was gone and Lazerous knew he had to find it in order to figure him out. Meanwhile outside of the ship within the industrial landscape of what was once the prosperous land of Paramonia, GaMork wonders the land alone and confused. He began to mimic the strange industrial low lifeforms that inhabit the many nooks and crannys within the shadows among the pipes. But nothing would answer GaMork for he knew he was in a doomed world of dibolical danger. He also knew he needed to get back to his home world which was one of the moons of Oddworld known to him as Odderworld. His people was expecting him for he knew he did something bad that made him a traitor to his kind "The Bionics". And he had to fix the problem by proveing himself to the rest of the Bionics.
"Bzzzzzk! as GaMork's head twitched "Must find help!"
GaMork wondered for miles through the industrial landscape approaching lifeforms that wouldn't respond to him. Just then GaMork knew he was lost.
Meanwhile Lazerous was getting out of the organic looking ship in hopes to find GaMork. He yelled out.
"Helllllllo! I know you are scared but please I won't hurt you!" yelled Lazerous. But nothing would answer. Just then he sat on an old slig create as he talked to himself.
"Mann this is useless I can't find that creature. I probabally scared him off. Then again what a fascinateing creature he was. I dunno maybe I should give up. But what a discovery this is I can't give up in finding this creature who calls himself GaMork. Indeed I will search all of Mudos for him." thought Lazerous. And so Lazerous took his staff and got up as he vowed to himself that he will not sleep until he finds GaMork but that could very well be his undoing.
Look for Illustraitions for these last two chapters soon.
"Odderworld!" The Illustraited Fanfic!
