Zuzu's story

[T-nex]

T-NEX Presents:

ZuZu'S StOrY

Chapter 1: The beginning.

Zuzu had one of those wierd dreams again. This one was about him, standing on a field with alot of dead modukons and sligs. He was just standing there with a bow. "Noooooooooooo!!" He screamed "Noooooo!" until he woke up, and realized that a slig just slapped him "SHUT UP!! you no good idiot" he yelled "Ya know modukons aren't allowed to talk at the night" he said, and pointed at him with his gun. "No, sorry... I won't talk anymore" suzu said, with a scared voice. "Well now that your awake, you can start at your work." the slig said "And be quiet!". The slig slapped him agian before he left. Zuzu started sadly to wash the flore in the big hall. He was thinking at the slig he just met, Zuzu knew that other sligs would have beaten him up, and in much worse way. What was wrong with this slig? He was unlike the other ones.
It was 14 o'clock and Zuzu just started his lunch break. He must have worked at least 5 hours, when he overheard some sligs talking: "He is really angry " said one of them "Yup! Modukons keep desappear" said another. "It must be that abeguy" said the third one. Zuzu was ligtening up, "Abe? can that be??" He thoght.
"Hey you there!!" one of the sligs looked at Zuzu "Get ta work" He said loud. Zuzu rapidly did what the slig said, he didn't want any trouble.


What is going to happen??? find out in the next chapter.
Sounds good??

[T-nex]

Please reply, If you are here

Come on... i wanna know if something could be better

[T-nex]

Well it seems that no one is replying
See... Now you made them cry :-(

But here's the next chapter: Chapter 2: Zack the slig.

Why did he scream so loud?? Zack couldn't stop thinking about it.
Zack walked away from Zuzus room, to his best friend Joju. "Hi" zack said "hi" Joju anwered, and asked: "What's up? Ya look terrible". "Nah... It's just a little fever." He whispered, like he was talking to him self. "Come on" Joju said "Are you still thinking about that time executtion??" He asked. "Yes" Zack cried "I couldn't bear to hear them, theyr screams. I ain't even a real slig anymore". Joju looked helpless at him, when 3 other sligs appeard: Gockle, Knockles and Dald. "OOH! Look guys... The mud lover" Gockle said sarcastic, he and the other laughed. "Leave him alone, he's sick right now, and needs peace" Joju said. Gockle looked at the other, pushed JoJu aside and looked at zack.
"Let's have some fun" gockle said and hit Zack Right in the eye, and Zack felled backwards, but came up again. He didn't wan't to show any weakness, but he knew he had to run, and that's what he did. He ran away, but the other where still behind him. They chased him out of the big building into a dark corner. Gockles Took his gun and sighted at him "Bye bye! Yo skunk" He said, when something wierd happned. Sudently Gockles lost the control of himself, then he turned around and shot his two friends, and then he just splatted out. Zack could hear some steps, he couldn't move, he just stood there, scared and helpless.
A blue modukon ran past zack, and in to the building(BObo's meat farm).




Ok this was Chapter 2, maybe not as good as the first chapter...
But it'll get better. What wil happen to Zuzu and Zack???
Find out in chapter 3

[Jacob]

T'is good so far, carry on, i'm intrigued.

[T-nex]

Reply yo skunks!!! That was a comando.
Well anyway(I love the word anyway) here is a freshly squeezed chapter :

Chapter 3: The Surprise

made by T-nex


"Hey! Zuzu!" A modukon called, that Zuzu never thoght he would meet. "What!!! Who...? how...? wha..." Zuzu stuttered. "No, don't speak, just listen. I need your help" the modukon said "I won't be able to get outta here, and thats why i need your help. I know that you're the right person to do it..." he stopped, and then asked: "Why are you crying Zuzu??". Zuzu saw at the proud modukon. "Your not ab... Are you?" He said confused. "Yes, I am Abe. Is that so hard to believe?? I came becous your the only one who can help me" Abe said. "But what can i do?"Zuzu asked, he was still confused. Abe answered: "You have an ability, that not even I have." Zuzu saw at him with an angry face and said: "Why are you doing thism to me? Can't you just leave me alone. Don't you have any modukons to save, then making fun of me??" Zuzu couldn't be any more angry now. "No please believe me. Why do you think all those dreams came true?" Abe asked. Zuzu's face changed into a cold face. He was right, they DID come true... Why haven't he ever thought of that? Yes, that dream with the slig coming at the night, he had the dream before. "you mean that i can...??!?" he stopped right up and said with a low and cold vice: "Run Abe... Please. This was my dream too." Zuzu saw scared at abe. "You mean..." Abe finaly understood the danger, "I knew it... BigFase told me to give you this letter" Abe gave a red letter to Zuzu, then he started running. Zuzu hided the letter in hi clothes, then about 10 sligs came running, obviously after abe, but 3 of them stopped up right beside zuzu. "Ya better come with us " they said.
Zuzu was taken to some sort of basement, but something smelled really bad. They where keep going, but he couldn't see see were, it was too dark.


Where are thay going??? The answer is: Stay tuned and read the next chapter :-)

AND REMEMBER TO REPLY!!!!!!!!!

[Kesiah]

Yipe! Fuzzles with big, sharpsharp teeth.... O.o
It's pretty good, though I might advise getting someone to beta-read it for you, checking for spelling, and grammar... Most of my fics need that alot.
Also, it would read a little better if you started a new line for each time a different character spoke.
Otherwise it's rather good, and I might keep an eye on this one.

[T-nex]

Thanx for the advice Kesiah!!

[T-nex]

Sorry for the waiting, but i'm a little busy in the weekends.
I'm done with next chapter tomorrow (For shure)

[T-nex]

Sorry for the waiting, but i've been busy in the weekend.
But here it is:
Chapter two

by T-nex

The sligs keeped punching him forwards, then turned right. It was so dark that he couldn't see. Zuzu wondered how the sligs were able to see in this dark place, must've something to do with their masks. They keeped going a couple of minuttes, then they reached the end of this long walk, and opened a door. Light came out, Zuzu turned his head to see how long the path was. He couldn't even see the other end. One of the sligs hit him with his gun, and so did another.
"KEEP GOING" they shouted.
The room was not so big, probaly10 square metres. There was a single desk, some bookcases and a door behind the desk. They waited a little bit and a glukkon came out of the door,
"Hi! boss we've got him" one of the sligs said.
"Very well" the glukkon muttered.
He looked at the pitty modukon, who didn't seem to care about what was going on.
"So..." the glookkun mutterd agin "... your the one? I... We saw you on the tape... Well i only cheked them a few sekunds until i saw you and HIM" he looked at zuzu with his scary look and continued:
" he know that he can't save the slaves here" the glukkon tarted laughing, and then talked again:
"This may be something big."
Then he turned to the sligs
"I can't stay for af minut longer, i have som bussines to do. I'll be gone for two weeks, and i want this slave in ONE piece" he looked at all the sligs, one by one.
"and i know just the one for the job" when he was done talking he pressed his head on the wall where there was a button, and then talked in the microphone:
"#2455 also named Zack, would you please get to my office??" he said calm. In about a minute, zack came storming in.
"What??" he asked looking around.
"Bring this slave... i don't know his name ... in the waiting cage" the glukkon said.
"Ok but i still think it's a stupid name" zack said,
"So... His in my charge or what??" he asked.
"Yes" the glukkon answered.


Done..... Be here for the next...
AND WHY THE ---BEEEEEEEP-- DON'T YOU REPLYY

[T-nex]

Ok... I think i was too shoft before.
A new rule in this thread:
At least ONE reply after each new chapter, or NO new chapter
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[T-nex]

Ohhhhhhh....
OK... I give up... But i'm only giving you this new and fresh brewed chapter, cuz' i like to write.

Zack took Zuzu back, to the dark path were Zuzu came from. This time they didn't turn the direction were Zuzu and the sligs came the first tim, but the other direction. Zuzu walked and walked, until he felt someone touch him, "DON*T TOUCH ME YA EVIL BASTARD" He shouted and went on: " YOU CAUSED TROUBLE ENOUGH". Zack saw surprised at him, and coulden't find another solution than leaving him alone.
After some minutes they stopped. Zack opened a door, and Zuzu walked in. It was a room with some cells. There were all kind of creatures like scrabs, parmites and modukons. All of them were looking at them with their sleeples eyes. "You will share cell with a modukon called Cole" Zack said, trying to sound mean, but coulden't hide his sad mind. "Whatever..." said zuzu indifferent, and walked inside the cage. Zack walked away, and when zuzu heard a door slam, he turned to the scared modukon. "Soo... Your name is Cole??" Zuzu asked. "Y-yes" Cole answered, with his squeaky voice. "Why are you stuck in here??" Zuzu asked again. "I... I'm waiting for my punishment" Cole answered sad.
Zuzu looked at him, he could see that cole was beaten much.

Zuzu was never beaten to much. The sligs were allmost afraid of him. Zuzu was allways the one who seaked trouble and fights. When he and a slig were in a fight, zuzu allways won, even against two. So zuzu never experienced what the other modukons did.

"What did you do??" asked Zuzu, and Cole answered: "Well, i... i killed a slig." Cole's voice shaked. Zuzu looked surprised at him "WOW!!" He shouted, and continued: "You must be proud!"
"No.. Not really" Cole ansered, he looked even more sad than before "Do you know what they do with modukons who kill?? Do you??" Cole asked. "N-no..." zuzu answered. "Have you ever been to one of those executions??" Cole asked again, but more furious. "No" Zuzu answered again "I usually sneak into the kitchen, when the way is cleard " Zuzu answered. They didn't to each other anymore that day. Zuzu spent his days thinkin on how it would be if he was free. Then he remembered the latter abe gave him. He took the letter and looked at it. "what's that" Cole asked curiously. "Nah... probarbly the reason why i'm here" zuzu answered with his usually careless voice. He wasn't really interested in the letter. "Why don't you read it?" asked Cole. Zuzu didn't answer, but he knew that he was a bit scared of what it would say. Zuzu and cole didn't talk much the next few days, and Zuzu was busy with thinking on his "Gift". He tried to foretell what meal he would get the next day, and was allways correct. It was a bit scary, and he keeped dreaming his meaningsless dreams. One day he asked Cole if he could try to foretell his future, but Cole only gave him a stupid look, like he was insane. Suddently some slig came, and cole looked frightened to death. "Help me!!" he said. Zuzu felt sory for him, but what could he do?? One of the sligs opened the door, and Zuzu jumped at him without thinking over it. The slig didn't do anything to help their pal, they wanted to see who would win. The sligs laughed while Zuzu and enemy fighted. Luckily for Cole the other didn't notice him sneak away. After a while Zuzu finally won the battle, and then looked at the other. He smiled. The sligs obviously must have forgotten why they where here, cuz they run away like the chikens they were. Zuzu opened the othe cells and released his friends. They ran away in different directions. Zuzu felt a relief, and ran away too.





Well...... Will you PLEASE REPLY NOW????
Hope you like it.

[Fajah]

Makes you wonder where Zuzu is gonna go now, since he doesn't have possessing powers like Abe will he just beat thigs up with a stick? i think that would be awsome

[T-nex]

Weeee!!! Someone replyed!! Thanx Fajah!!
I think that you deserve This Newly Chopped chapter.

Zack was on his way to the cells, to chek how things were going(He had obveously not heard the terrible news). He entered the room and heard a sligs voice shout: "LET ME OUTTA HERE YA TRASH HOLE!!! ARRGH!"
Zack saw very surprisly at the slig. The slig looked familiar. Zack locked him out rapidly and asked what had happened.
"That STUPID Modukon, Zuzu i think, he..." he didn't finish his sentence. "What are ya' lookin' at??" He asked "It's your fault, Zack" Zack's temper rised "What?? Why's it my fault now?" He asked. "Why?? i'll tell you why" The slig said angry and hit zack in the face. Zack couldn't do anything to stop him from crying. The slig was prepared for a fight, but when he saw Zack he began to laugh. "HAHAHAHA!!! Ya know what's gonna happen now?? They'll kill you" He said harsh and walked away.
Zack was now alone in the raoom with some scrabs and paramites, that looked hungry. He was frustrated. Didn't know what to do. Then he thought at something."No Zack. Ya know it's impossible" he said to him self. Escaping was one of the thing that coused the most terrible deaths. He walked away against the dark hall...
When he arrived the 3rd floor where he normally kept his duty he saw a slig. It was asleep and had the most wonderfull wings. "NO!! Forget it! you can't" Zack muttered to himself. But he did it. He looked around if anyone was nearby. He pointed at the sweet sleeping slig and shot him.
When Zack finally made the wings fit him he flew away. He flew through the 3rd floor to the 2nd then the 1st and reach the outdoor.
He couldn't belive it. He was finally free.



It may be smaller than the rest. But ive gotta sleep now *Falls asleep on the keybord*zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[T-nex]

Weee!!! I like to write!! From now on i don't care if you reply, but i hope that you read it.

So here it is, the newly reported chapter!!
"WHAT!!!!" a scaried voice shouted in the telephone. "How could it happen??" it asked.
"I don't know, but the next thing I knew was, that I was locked up in that freakin' cage" a slig said angry.
"I'm on my way. Tell Zack that he can't expect good things" the voice said.
"Ermm... I... It's just that it's impossible to say that to him" the slig said nervously.
"Why??" the voice asked.
"Well.... He killed a hellicopter slig, stole the wings and ran away. I short words he escaped" the slig said even more nervously. He could hear the voice mutter angryly, very angryly.
"I'm on my way. I wan't that slig tortured to death." The voice said, trying to sound calm.
"What about the modukon??" The slig asked. "I wan't him alive, he might be the biggest treasure we ever had" the voice said.
"Yes Sir, Bobo!!" The slig said. He couldn't imagine his boss's face, he would hear that ALL the prisonners escaped.

Zuzu managed to get past the sligs in the farm, but he knew that i would get harder outside. He opened the door. A Big Bro Slig looked him straight in the eyes. It gave Zuzu a big shock. After a moment of silence the Big Bro began to talk: "Betta' come with me" Zuzu didn't think, he just jumped at the Big Bro's haed and past him. He ran as quick as he could. He knew that Big Bros weren't quickly enough, but he ran. He looked back and couldn't see him, so he slowed a bit up, and after a while he climbed up in a tree where he fell asleep.


Well, hope ya like it couse im writing more.

[Fajah]

heheheheheh that would have been something i would have done, just leave the Bid bro slig in the dust and if they can't catch you thats just too bad for them, huh?

[T-nex]

Ok... Lets jump straight to the story!!!

Meeting with Bigface


Next morning was beautyfull, but something was missing. He was too lonely, no sligs he could beat up, no muds to chat with. He had a headache. He climbed down of the tree, and walked away from the tree. He was a little excited of what would happen now.
He must've walked at a couple of hours, when he started to be thirsty and hungry. But he wouldn't give up so easy. He walked in his thoughts until he heard voices. He hided quickly in some bushes, but in a half second he found himself hanging about 3-4 mtres in the aÃ*r. He would have screamed help, but was too scared of who would hear him. Instead he tried to realize what just happened. He was tied with a rope around his feet. He tried to untie it, but he knew would fall down on his head, so he gave up and tried to think up another solution. After a while he discovered that the ground came nearer and nearer. Or it was him who came nearer the ground. He finally reached the ground. He layed there on the ground, not moving at all. Hewas shoked.
Then he heard a voice speak to him, "Hey!!! What are you doing in that trap???"
Zuzu raised from the ground very quick, and starred a light-green modukon i the eye.
"You... Are not from here, are you??" The mud asked.
"No" Zuzu answered, "I've just escaped Bobo's farm"
"WOW.... Funny, I think Abe went in there to rescue a modukon. But-" the mud started to sound sad, "- He hasn't come back yet"
The modukon looked at Zuzu and talked again, "He should've been back now"
Zuzu knew exactly what the modukon was talking about.
"Oh umm... Well i didn't go as planned i think.... The modukon that was supposed to escape didi so, nut abe... Ithink-" Zuzu was interupted by the other.
"WHAT?? How do you know??" The mud asked.
Zuzu explained all that happened.
"You must come quick" The mud said seriously.
"Ok" said Zuzu.
Then they began to walk, Zuzu after The mud known as Dawn.

They arrived Dawns village.
"So... You must be Zuzu" BigFace said with his calm voice.
"Yes" Answered Zuzu
"You know why you are here??" Bigface asked.
"N-No" Zuzu started to be nervous.
"Hmm... You haven't read the letter, have you?" Bigface asked again.
"Err... No" Zuzu felt guilty.
"Why?" Asked Bigface, yet again with his still calm voice.
"Errrm... I didn't want to. I was afraid, angry" Admitted Zuzu.
"Hmm." Bigface muttered "I see, but weren't you a little exited of what it would say"
"Nope" Zuzu answered.
"Well, i wan't you to open it and read" Bigface comanded
"Why?? You know what it contains. You can just tell me" Zuzu said.
"Your quite wrong Zuzu" Bigface said, " It wasn't me who wrote the letter."
"Ok" Zuzu said defeatedly. He searched for the letter and found it.
He opened it:
Hello Zuzu,
Bigface advised me to write a letter in case that i had to run(Wich i probarbly did). You have the abillity to fortell the feature, and thats why you will get into big trouble if you don't escape. you may have other powers as well, some we don't even know.I can't imagine what would happen if the glukkons got their hands on you, that's why you need too escape. You have to hide in dark places where sligs don't see you. If you have to sacrifice modukons or even me, you have to becous your life is wórth 10 times more than other. I hope you'll understand.

"Hmmm. Doesn't give me much information" Muttered Zuzu.
"Well? What does it say?" asked Bigface
"Oh... Nothing special, you may read it by yourself i you want" Zuzu said with his usual indiferent voice. A mutter from the modukons who was listening was realised. A modukon came and whispered angrily Zuzu in the ear: "Be gentle, don't speak to him as a nothing"
"No, That fine" said Bigface, "I wish to read the letter."
Zuzu handed over the letter. A silence fell in the room.
After a while, bigface had readen, "Hmm, I know" He said "Abe was never very informative. But usefull he is"
Zuzu would more than everything get out of this room filled with listening modukons.
"So, should i go now?" Asked zuzu.
"Oh. No, i wish to have a word with you" Said bigface, and leaded Zuzu to a privat room where they could talk in peace.

Whew!!....
Keep up and see what happens next. (This one's got a title)

[T-nex]

YaY!! NEW CHAPTER!!

The return

"I wan't him NOW" Shouted Bobo at the silgs.
"Y-yes" said one of the sligs Kake, scared "B-but I... I mean, I think that he is with Bigface right now... And you know how strong bigface is"
"I DON'T CARE" Yelled Bobo much louder this time, "I WAN'T HIM!! I WAN'T A HUGE SLIG ARMY AGAINST BIGFACE! AND I WAN'T ZUZU ALIVE"
"Yes sir... But is a war not too much to ask, for a modukon?" Asked Kake.
Bobo saw at him, trying not to yell, and forced him to talk calm, "You know that only he can kill Glape."
"Yes, but..." Kake turned around and walked out muttering, "Ok... A War. Bobo the War.crazy glukkon".

"Now, what was i saying" Bigface asked, "Oh yeah. You know that you have a gift."
"Yeah. It annoys me very much" Ansered Zuzu
"Why" asked Bigface "I would be very pleased if i had such a great power."
"See, thats what you think, but i don't think you wan't to have all these horrible dreams about death and stuff" Zuzu said irritated.
"All these dream eh??" Bigface said "You know that some of them are only warnings. You know, ridiculous things. They actually means something"
"Yoeah so?? Why does Abe say that I am 10 times more woth than others?" He asked annoyed.
"Well you are..." Said Bigface without looking at him "You see... Your the only one that can defeat Glape. I don't know how, but you must have something we don't." Bigface took a deep breath and said, "Glape was a time, a simple glukkon. But something happened. A day he walked in peace and quiet, and overheard a discution. All this happened before the Modukons were enslaved. He was the one who made it possible for the glukkons to use muds as slaves. But how he became the monster he is today, no one knows. It has to be something with what he heard, cuz he killed them right after he heard it"
"WHAT?!?" Zuzu shouted "WHY?? Why, couldn't you just leave me at the farm? At least i didn't know about this big grape thing. I refuse! I don't wanna waste my time at fighting monstersd".
He runned out of the room, and away from the village. Modukons stared curiously after him. When he got out, and made sure that Bigface didn't followed him, he stopped and breathed. His anger raised. "Hey where are you going??" The modukon that he meeted the first time v´came running.
"Does it matter?" Asked Zuzu furiously.
"Not sirous, why did you run...??" The modukon stared at Zuzu.
"AHA!! I know! Bigface said something, didn't he?? Something that made you angry" The modukon laughed.
"It's not funny!! I'm NOT going to defeat some grapefruit" Zuzu said angry.
"It's Glape, and he is not a fruit. He's a monster that deserves to be destroyed. I even tryed a couple of times. But it never worked. It always ended up that he tortured me. But i always escaped" Said the modukon with pride in his voice.
"Well, congratulates" said zuzu.
"I don't think you know me, do you? My name is Spout" said the modukon. Zuzu loked at him. It seemed that he couldn't get away with Spout.
"Ok... I have in mind rescuing Abe"
Said zuzu, in a better mood.
"Ooh... How do you know that Abe is captured" Asked Spout.
"Well. my special gift seems to telæl me that is captured" said Zuzu, and muttered something about cruel visions.
"Well, i s'pose we are getting back to the farm??" Asked Spout.
"Yes" Said Zuzu and sighed, "It's just that... I don't know if want to join or fight them"
"Wha- What do you mean you don't know??" Asked Spout desperate.
"I mean... If we join them, they'd probarbly think that i'm really on their side. Thats what they wan't, don't they? But if i choose to go against them, they'd kill abe, i think" Answered zuzu.
"OOOH... I understand. But can i follow you? Be your gúide?? I know all the secrets behind Bobo's Meat Farm. They won't kill me if i'm your friend, would they??c'mon, if they kill me, you would probarbly take revege on them." Said Spout happy.
"Yeah whatever." Answered Zuzu.

"Boss!" Kake yelled happily after Bobo., "I have the greatest news ever"
Bobos eye lightened up.
"Look who we've got"
Some sligs came in the room, with Zuzu and Spout in chains. Zuzu couldn't help it, but he always laughed for him self, he could recinize one of the sligs, it was the one he had beaten up, and escaped afterwards. Spout looked at the room, "I've been here before" He whispered in Zuzus ear, "It's here where Bobo had to give me a special punishment. But that was after i had beaten about 6 sligs at ones" He laghed.
"Did you stop beating sligs after that" Asked Zuzu.
"Oh no... I keeped getting punishments, but he gave up at last." Answered Spout.
"So... I won't go away this time. I'll get straight to the point" Said bobo, and looked at Zuzu and then surprized at Spout.
"What do we have here? Another trouble maker. When was it you escaped?? Some years ago, i think. But that's not the matter. You know that Abe has been captured, Zuzu?"
"Yeah. I know that" Zuzu said with the most evil look he could ever give Bobo.
"And now my precious guards have captured both of you." Said Bobo, and let out a horrible laugh.
"No. Actually, Spout and me CAME here, to ... Well, join you. So please save you luagh to later." Zuzu said and tried to sound angry, "Well, those nasty sligs were gonna take us to you, so i just followed them."
There was a big silence. A slig came running in, "HEY! Boss!! I've just heard that Abe escaped" he yelled. The words gave a flip in Zuzu's stomach.
"DON'T COME RUNNING IN!!" Bobo shouted. It gave Zuzu a shock
"HAVEN'T I TOLD YOU NOT COME RUNNING IN!! USE THE BELL"
"Uh..... Sorry but i just felt that you should know." the slig sqeaked.
"Anyway, Zuzu... What was you saying?" Bobo asked.
"Uh... That i-i.... i mean we w-will join you." Zuzu said. He just couldn't belive it. Was Abe already escaped?
Spout looked at like he wanted to telll something.
"Ok.... Kill the other! And leave me alone, i wan't to talk to Zuzu in peace and quiet.." Bobo comanded.
"NO!!" Zuzu shouted "Spout stays alive. If you hurt him, you'll wish you'd never been born" he looked at them all, with angry eyes.
Bobo looked surprised at Zuzu.
"Ok.... If he wants to be alive, he will have to live like a slave" Bobo said.
"NO!! He will live as MY friend, and that'll meen that he will not do you work. Why don't you just use sligs as slaves?" Zuzu shouted.
"Very well" Bobo muttered, " So Cain, how did Abe exactly escape? From 20 of my bedst slig guards??"
"Uhh... well, ummm... I just wanted to chek how things were going, so i entered the room... And... And the only thing i saw was a bunch of dead sligs and a crashed cage." Cain said.
Zuzu could see how hard Bobo tried to not shout again.
"But... But how? I mean, no one hasn't ever managed to crash it. Not even that experimantal beast, you made" Spout said.
Every one looked at spout.
"How do you know about Krack?" Bbo asked.
"Well, to get straight to the point, I been spying you" Laughed Spout. Zuzu couldn't stop laughing too.
"SHUT UP!" Bbo yelled. The laugh stopped.
"I know almost every secret about this ugly farm" Spout said.
"Think your smart eh??" Bobo asked.
"Oh yeah.... Very smart" said Spout, in a nasty voice.
"OK THATS IT!! GUARDS TAKE THEM AWAY!!" Bobo yelled angryl, "OH!! And please give them-"
"Yeah we know" said the sligs. They took something that looked like digital watch, and tightened it on their hands.
"Now go" Bobo said.

"What are these anyway?" Zuzu asked, when he and Spout finally were alone.
"Well, lets just say that youdon't wanna go too far out of this farm. You'll get an electrik shok. He doesn't trust us yet" answered Spout sadly.
"I just CAN'T belive my stupidy!!" Zuzu yelled.
"What?" Spout asked.
"Why did we came here anyway?" Zuzu asked, "Becous we wanted to rescue Abe!"
"NO. Don't blame yourself" Spout said, "If we didn't came here, we wouldn't know about Abe."
"I almost kiled you" Zuzu snarled.
"Look, i don't care! What i care about is that Abe didn't escape" Spout said.
"But they just said that he did." Zuzu said.
"I know. But not even he is strong enough tom brake that cage. It's made out of a special metal, it was made special for Abe... What i'm sayng is that someone strong enough broke the cage." Spout said.


MUHAHAHA
I used 3 days on this one. I didn't have much time to write these days, when im at floatsliding school.

[T-nex]

I’m sorry for waiting som much time, but my Word crashed, and i couldn’t find the CD with it(DAMN IT)

Well, Here’s the next chapter in this story, Please comment grammatic mistaces and stuff:

It lyes behind

�Oh man! We’ve been here for how long? 1 month?� Zuzu complained �Bobo� he laughed, �What kind of baby-name is that? He should change his name...�
�Well, you know glukkons these days... Out of their mind� Spout laughed.
They layed down under the last tree that was near the farm.
�Why haven’t we escaped yet?� Zuzu asked while he studied the sky.
�Well, i wanted to say hello to my friends, and ask them if they wanted to come with us...� Spout said and looked at the air for a while.
�Well are they?� Zuzu asked.
�Nah! They are to frightned� Spout said.
�Hmm� Zuzu muttered.

Zack flew high up in the skies. He had never seen a land so beauty. He flew over the green flub forrest, over the sea and then over a field. Then he saw something, someone big. Then he realized what it was. His eyes lightened up, dived down. He landed somewhere near. He crawled over to the place where he had seen it. A big dragon/glukkon looking creature looked at him.
�ZACK! Is that really you?� It asked.
�YOU MORON! You promised to get me out of there! I risced my life for it� Zack yelled angrily
�Well you did get out, didn’t you?� The creature said.
�UURF! I just cant believe my ears! Your so stupid� Zack yelled even louder.
�Oh c’mon! You know i have been busy lately. Forgive your old friend Glape...� He said calmly. His eyes glowed yellow.
�Ok� Zack said a little more friendly, �So what’s been happening lately?�
�Nah... Still trying to find the last protector.� Glape said.
�Is Danny here?� Zack asked.
�Oh yeah, he’s been missing you� Glape answered.
�Can i see him?� Zack lightened up.
�Yes shure! DANNY!� glape called.
Danny came running and stopped right up when he saw Zack.
�ZAAACK! IT’S YOU!!� Danny shouted happily.
They hugged each other.
�OH! Stop it you make me sick� Glape laughed and walked away.
�Wow... It’s been a long time havn’t it?� Zack asked.
�Uh... Yes. We have got more allies now. We were only 43 when you left for your mission. Now we’re 109 including you� Danny smiled.
�Huh! Then i have alot of people to meet� Zack said and they walked off to the meeting place.

�I’ve had enough! We’re running away� zuzu shouted, as some sligs were on their way.
�Bobo wants to meet you� one of the sligs said.
�Well, tell him that i don’t have time right now� Zuzu said indifferent.
One of the sligs raised his gun �NOW� he said.
�Fine... FINE! Whatever you want� Zuzu said angrily.
Spout and Zuzu looked at each other and followed the sligs.





That’s all for now folks, more will come soon. YEEEEHAAAA!

[T-nex]

I haven’t had time to update the story, since i’ve spend all my time just reading Splat’s, 4 page long story....
Well, well.... The next chapter is called.... hmm, help me on this.... I can’t find a name for it... Well, who cares......

Chapter somthing...

�So, you’ve been here for a hole month without trying to escape...� Bobo said, �I now trust you more� He looked at Zuzu, who was just scrathing himself in the butt.
�Uh! What?� Zuzu asked, who barely would listen. Hi’s mind wandered every whare else than here,�Did you say something?�
He could see that Bobo was almost exploding. No one has ever been so respectless, Zuzu thought to himself, smiling.
�Look, if you and I are gonna have a good relationship, you’ll better start respecting me. If not, well, Odd knows what would happen� Bobo said, and he calmed down a little bit more.
Bobo just opened his mouth to say something more, but the phone ringed.
�Whait just a moment� Bobo said and walked to the phone.
�Hello.... blablabla...� Bobo said, and so on.
�Shouldn’t we get away?� Zuzu whispered to Spout.
�Ive all ready got my Zapper off, let me get yours off.� Spout whispered and showed the zap-thing.
�OK� Zuzu whispered back.
Then Spout took Zuzus arm and did something wierd to his zapper, CLICK, it said and it fell off. Bobo hadn’t seen it, while was tlking to the phone.
�Ok! Bye!� Bobo was done with the phone.
�So where wa.....� He didnt get to say more.
Zuzu and Spout were gone.
�Run!� Spout shouted.
They were running on a corridor, there was an upper platform, they could jump up to.
�Jump up to the platform� Spout shouted again.
Zuzu jumped up, and quickly helped spout up. To theire luck, there was a shadow they could hide in. They heard some sligs and a glukkon run under them. Something hit Zuzu on the neck.
�Auch!� he turned around.
A slig pointed his gun at Zuzu.
�Get him!� Spout yelled.
Zuzu jump at the slig, hit him, and took the gun.¨
�You have three xeconds to run away!� Zuzu said.
And the slig ran away.
�CHIKEN!� Spout yelled to the slig, he turned to Zuzu, �We have to get outa here, they know where we are�
In the same moment a strong, blue light apeared over them, and then a blitz stroke down at them.

Zuzu opened his eyes he looked around. He wasn’t at the Farm anymore, but somewhere in the nature. He had a headache, and he couldn’t see very much. He’s eye hurted. He closed he’s eyes, and opened the again. Webs, he looked again, he saw webs, BIG webs. They hung in the trees. And then he saw spout, tightened into the webs, still unconscious. Zuzu himself couldn’t move aswell. He found out that he too was tied up in the webs. He still couldn’t see 100%. He’s headache was almost killing him.
�Spout,� he whispered.
But spout didn’t move. Zuzu tried to loosen the grip from the webs. He couldn’t.
�Paramites, paramites� he whispered to himself, �Well, it’s better to die this way, than being shot... I think.�
�I don’t think so...� He hear another voice whisper.
Zuzu turned his head, Spout had opened his eyes.
�Oh, you’re awake� Zuzu smiled.
��Yes, and i’m not going to let you give up.� Spout said, smiling.
He did something wierd with the web, and loosened himself from the grip, and in notime he was standing up. He helped to get Zuzu out of the web.
�Oh! And remember, only walk on the straightened web strings, they don’t have that gooy stuf on them.� Spout said.
They tried to walk away from the webbed place, but before they realized it, paramites was sorrounding the.
�Not good...� Zuzu mutered.
The paramites would just attack, a big howl sounded, and the paramites remained at their places.
A very big Creature appeard. It was all mixed up as paramite/scrab/Mudoken.
�Greetings� It said with its squeaky voice, �I’m a shrykull. Don’t be afraid, we won’t hurt you.
Your tribe leader, Bigface sended me a message. He has never really spoken to us, we are natural creature. You know, the ones that are looking for food and try to survive. Life is hard against us.
He wanted us not to kill you if you arived here, but was against it, i won’t spare anyones life just becous someone says to, but when Bigface told me that you were the last protector of the Zunku cave, i din’t really have any choise.
The evil mutated one, is exterminating us. He Kidnapps baby paramites, and turns the into evil dark warriors, kills all creatures, that stands in his way. He’s destroying the nature. Someone must stop him.�
Zuzu was all confused, every thing happened so quickly, even Spout seemed a little confused.
�Well.... Wo...w...w...� was the only thing Zuzu could say, but he pulled himself together and asked: �What can i do?�
�Your the last one, Zunakin.� the creature squeaked, �You have to destroy the sacred stone that lyes in the Zunaku cave. The evil one wants it, he wants you to take it for him.�
�Why can’t he take it himself?� Zuzu asked.
�Becous that the cave is protected by a spell. Only The Zunku tribe can enter the cave. All other will get zapped� The creature answered, and said: �Will you accept the task?�
Zuzu didnt what to answer
�I don’t know...� He said.
�If you do, i will help you on your journey, give you a new power.� the creature said, �you may choose one. There is Floating, possesing, invisibility and Shrykulls power.�
�Can i have one too??� Spout shouted, lightening up.
�Of course, you may have one too.� The shrykull said.
�OH SAY YES!! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!� Spout shouted happily.
�Oh, OK� Zuzu said.
�YAAAAY� Spout shouted again.
�Very well, you and your friend can choose a power.� Shrukull squeaked.
�I choose Floating� Spout said happily.
�Hmm.... I think i wan’t invisibility� Zuzu said.
�Okay� Shrykull said, and hissed something.
Then a paramite ran away to a nearby cave, and the rest tstepped back.
�What’s gonna happen now?� Zuzu asked. But he didn’t get an answer.
The paramite came back with a long staff in it’d mouth. Shrykull took it, said some wierd voices, and raised the staff. Then two lightenings stroke down at them. Both Spout and Zuzu yelled in pain.




Well hope you’re enjoying it... And that you’ll reply

[lindsey]

I like your story. I have just been to laze to reply. Don't stop just becase no one reply.

[T-nex]

Does anyone remember what chapter this is.... In number... ????
And sorry for the waiting-time....
Anyway, let the story begin!!!!!


Zuzu woke up in a hut of some sort, by the sound of Spout’s laughter.
�WEEEHAHAHAHAHHA!!!� Yelled Spout.
Zuzu went outside of the hut and found spout in the air, floating like the shrykull promised.
�Hihi�Zuzu grinned, �Practising huh?�
�Yeah, comon, try your new power� shouted Spout.
�But how?� Zuzu asked.
�You have to be able to connect with the power, or it will be useless.� the shrykull said.
He tried to concentrate but nothing happened.
�It doesn’t work� Zuzu said, but suddently Spout flied into him, and they both fell onto the ground.
�MAN!! Watch your step� ZuzuI said.
�It’s not my fault� Spout said, �Your the one who’s invisible and stands in my way. Where are you anyway?�
He set off the ground again.
�Well, I learned that very quick...� Zuzu said.
Some time later, Zuzu and Spout went into the hut again. The shrykull joined them.
�Didn’t Abe used to be a shrykull?� Zuzu asked, while he examined some bugs on the ground.
�No.� said Spout.
�He only had the power of shrykull� The shrykull said, �And by the way, i have some food for you. You haven’t eaten for hours�
�Oh GREAT!� Zuzu said, �I’m starving.�
The shrykull gave them something that looked like grilled meat. It smelled good and tasted good.
Both Zuzu and Spout ate it with pleasure..
�MMMM! Tastes good... What is it?� Zuzu asked.
�Elum meat� Said the shrykull.
�WHAT???!!� yelled both Zuzu and Spout.
�Urf... C’mon... You said it tasted good. And it’s the only thing the hunters found� Said the shrykull calmly.
�Well, i guess it’s good anyway... But it’s kinda nasty eating an Elum...� Zuzu said, And ate the rest of it.
�So... How are you gonna handle Glape??� Asked the Shrykull.
�Well, i’m still trying to figure it out.� answered Zuzu.
�Well you could go and spy on him, and see what he wants.� said Spout.
�Yeeeeaaahhh... That’s a very fine idea!!!� said Zuzu with a happy voice, then yelled:�EXEPT THAT WE DON’T KNOW WHERE HE IS!!�.
�Relax... What’s wrong with you?� asked Spout.
�Oh, sorry.... But all this drives me crazy... I haven’t ever met this guy, and now he wants me dead.� said Zuzu.
Spout looked at him. Zuzus skin had really gotten healthy and green, but Spout could tell from Zuzus expresion that he needed a break. He had only known Zuzu for a couple of months and now he was hes best friend. He smiled.
�Well, i think think we’d better get going, we have already spend too much time on nothing.� said Zuzu.
So they slept a last night at the Shrykulls place.


SO?? Have you enjoyed it?? Cuz the best part hasn’t even showed up