(see this is what im daydreaming about in class, if only my teachers could see...)
Chapter 2: So I see you've changed a bit
The Xebnaz (Zeb-Nahzz) weren't what you could call a peaceful race. There thin figures, covered in a pale blue carapace, the joined areas a purple fleash were the the segments moved..like a machine. There head like a lizards, 2 glowing yellow eyes on either side of there face, 2 long horns coming forward and curving to there snout from the section were there jaws conect. They used organic weapons (
Example )
Kai got up the next morning in the sweat he'd be staying in until they finished his royal quarters. The sweat was more than enough to acomadate Kai, it was elegent, and almost everything was gilded. Many crystles hung from the ceiling and there was a large crest with 3 swords all crossed on the front of his door, a couple of times he wondered what that ment, but usaly ignored it and went back to "work". On the sixth day of his staying at the ostentatius sweat, he was given a uniform, he was also told to "tidey himself up.". The uniform was a pale gray and the shirt went below the belt line, many creasts and other bages were on it, the pants were slightly baggy and his boots went up to his ankles. He left after cleaning himself up to the lobby were 2 men in black robes waited for him. "Come, we have much to do." Said one with a dark ominus voice. He was led out to another flitter and was wisked away to a large dome shaped building. He walked in and 2 strange creatures dressed finely walked up to him with a gray over coat and put it on him, it went to his feet and had the same 3 sworded crest like the one on his door.
Wonder if that means Im a royal general or some crap like that he thought, but then was interupted when a generals cap (think the German kind, he's going to look like a German General when this is done) with a gold crest with anubis's face on it was slamed down on his head. He was quickly rushed over to a room and given and sheath, wich he cliped onto his belt, and then was given a long silver sword, wich his sheathed. He was then given a horse whip, the ends slightly split so it would make people move. He left and got into the flitter. "Well that was abrupt..." he said as the flitter took off.
The flitter came to a large tower, huge, and gothic (Gothic means pointy thank you very much) it was bluish black. He walked up to the doors were to heavy soldiers incased in there armour like crabs steped aside and let him through. He walked in, then saw a women fly right past him and out the door, he didn't get a good glimps of her but he ignored it and walked up to an elevator, it automaticly went to the top floor.
When the door opened he saw Oni sitting behind a desk with a girl in green light armour with red hair and some gold wearings, a sword was sheathed at her hip. "Kai I would like you to meet my girlfriend...Rane, I belive you 2 have met before breifly?" Oni said. "Hi," said Rane extending an arm to shake. "I'm Rane." Her voice was sweet and comforting, he put out his hand and shook hers. "Hello Rane, I'm Kai, Oni's new General." "Grand High General actualy Kai, and I want that to be known..." said Oni. "You see that sword at your belt...and the crest on your coat...that means your part of the 3 swords brother hood, thats the top guys..were at the top of there pyrimid...only 3 people out rank you, me, Rane, and Xavier, my dark arts profesional, and my good friend. He's a creepy fellow but you'll get used to him." Oni got up. "Well...we have an apointment, with the Xebnaz to gather there forces." "Oh so your going to your allies to get them ready for anything." Oni turned to him. "Who said they were my allies? I'm going down there to give them a choice, join me, or die..." Oni turned and left, Rane fallowing him out.
Ok.. Kai though
So the kid grew up to be a sick demented bastard who kills for fun He fallowed them out
Shit...
Epoch
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