Joe: Worse Slig

[Reptile]

This is a fic about Joe, he's one of my characters from the Rupture Farms RPG in Oddworld RPG section. It shows how Joe, who is now a mean slig, was turned into a brutal killer...enjoy

It was 3:00, the sun was beating on the young slig who had to do something that he did not want to do. "I don't want to do it.." mumbled the young slig holding a gun aiming at a Mudokon. General Dripik laughed. "Hey! You betta do it! or I'll do it to you!!" Joe gulped. The other Sligs stood watching. Dripik, who whos anger was about to lash out, done the right, or possibly wrong thing.
"Okay, you can all shoot at targets.." Some Sligs laughed with joy, others were angry. Then a row of guns were layed on the table. "Okay, all of you shoot that target! Go!" Dripik ordered. The Sligs took a gun, except for one slig..a small one. "You, eh, whats your name, uh?" The little slig looked up and replied "s-Smudge sir.." Dripik looked at him with his one good eye. "C'mon we ain't got all day." The little Slig known as Smudge couldn't pick up the gun. Everyone laughed, except for Joe.
When Smudge was lead out, Joe stood up to Dripik and the other sligs. "What are you all laughing at? That's not funny! Making fun, of a Slig who has A.D.D. Would you like it if it happened to you. One Slig shouted. "Get stuffed!" All the Sligs laughed. One slig, by the name of Forder, who sort of knew Smudge as a 'Cabin Buddy' just sat with glumness.
Back at his room, Joe was shining his black, steel baton. Then, two Big Bros walked in, with Dripik. Joe looked up, half terrified, half brave. "What-what is this?" A Vykker followed Dripik in, "It's okay little slig, where not gonna hurt you, the Barracks think, you are a good slig, fit and all, but.....your personality....isn't right" Joe looked at him with his glazed eyes under his mask. "Then wha-" The Vykker interupted him, with ones of his hands, he brought out a needle. "Just relax" The Vykker injected him, as Joe, gradually....went to sleep. The Vykker got a saw, cut through Joes brain, implanting a device.
Joe awoke, looking at his roomate. Forder was talking to Smudge, then, a scream was heard. From Joe's room....his roomate. When they arrived, they found he had been beat to death, and the window broken, and no sign of Joe.
Joe was instantly hunt down the next day, he was diagnosed with having an agressive disorder that made him un-normally angry. So they shipted him to the only place fit for him.....Rupture Farms.

And that is when Joe came. His anger wasn't as bad as it used to be. He might be revived.

While Joe was still at the barracks, Smudge thanked Joe, but Joe made fun of him, stereotyped and bullied him. Forder was the only slig brave enough, to accompany Joe to Rupture Farms.

The End.
What you think...

[Abe16]

I liked It put chapter2 I love chapterbooks you should be a writer.