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02-24-2002, 08:18 PM
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My Poem

Ha ha, time for some rivalry sligface202 ...

I was working late one night...
And thats when they came...
With machineguns and rockets....
now thats shame...

They told me i was lunch...
They told me i was brunch...
Whatever they told me...
They told me a bunch...

They said i was tasty...
How could they know?
They said it quite hastly...
Then I took a blow...

I woke up in a yard...
Surounded by fence...
They wouldent let me out...
Not even for a pence...

Then came saint nick...
And said yo ho ho...
He oferd a lift...
And i said: "lets go!"

After three feet of flying...
The shoot us untill...
We started crying...
And pore old nick... almost was diyng

They catched me again...
Gave me a hen...
Told me to eat...
But i went to sleep...

Then they took out the saw...
And cuted me raw...
I dont remember anything at all...
SENCE IM DEAD

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02-25-2002, 08:07 PM
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That's quite good, the first four stanzas are the best, in my opinion.
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02-26-2002, 06:39 PM
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yes,your poem is...good!,let me write a little poem on how good it is!
That was a great poem!
You are a great poet!
That was a good poem!
You are a poet...and ya didn't even know it!
BTW:Rivalry eh?...,Ha don't make me laugh!
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02-27-2002, 09:02 AM
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lol
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