Abe: hello molluck
Molluck: intruder intruder intruder
Abe: crud
Molluck: get him
Abe: what is that in the background
Molluck: ow crud
Abe: yes
Molluck: arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr poof
Abe: ha ha ha
Computer: Alert Alert RuptureFarms will selfdestuct in 2:00 minutes
Abe: get me out of here!!!
Slig: help help help
RuptureFarms: kaboom!!!
Abe: ha got all 99 Mudokons out of there
Slig: hay plz help me abe
Abe: ok
Slig: help help help help splatter
Abe: he he he
THE END
the story is about abe talking to the badies but geting in troble.
a longer one is going to be on when i make it.
It's not in story format, and rather difficult to understand. It's all dialogue and there's nothing telling us what's happening. Make some changes, and I think it'd be pretty funny.
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"Sick cultures show a complex of symptoms such as you have named . . . but a DYING culture invariably exhibits personal rudeness. Bad manners. Lack of consideration for others in minor matters. A loss of politeness, of gentle manners, is more significant than is a riot."
-- Robert Heinlein in Friday
short... something... :/
