short... something... :/
STORY ABOUT ABE AND Molluck
Abe: hello molluck Molluck: intruder intruder intruder Abe: crud Molluck: get him Abe: what is that in the background Molluck: ow crud Abe: yes Molluck: arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr poof Abe: ha ha ha Computer: Alert Alert RuptureFarms will selfdestuct in 2:00 minutes Abe: get me out of here!!! Slig: help help help RuptureFarms: kaboom!!! Abe: ha got all 99 Mudokons out of there Slig: hay plz help me abe Abe: ok Slig: help help help help splatter Abe: he he he THE END the story is about abe talking to the badies but geting in troble. a longer one is going to be on when i make it. |
Uh...wtf? No offense, but what the hell is that?
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gust a funny story with extras.
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I second what Zerox said. What the hell. :rolleyes:
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I'm afraid, I don't get it. :fuzconf:
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whell? i was bored and had nothin to do.
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It's not in story format, and rather difficult to understand. It's all dialogue and there's nothing telling us what's happening. Make some changes, and I think it'd be pretty funny.
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don't ever write a book
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Don't quit your day job.
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Unrelated Question: How old are you Mathew9r?
Seriously though, that isn't a story, merely a collection of words, punctuation and ideas. |
I... barely have words for this...
GET A HAMMER AND DESTROY YOUR KEYBOARD! DO IT! DO IT NOW!!! /Arnold Accent |
I lol'ed at the story, not with it. But seriously, WTF was that all about?!
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