The ratz's story

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THE RAT

Rat: Hello,I'm a rat that is telling my story to you.

*lights appear, shows forest.*

Rat: I was born here, three years ago in the second largest forest on Mudos
With slightly larger brain than most rats. I was adopted by The shiny White Scrabs that are realy nice and don't fight, no, not fighters but prophets, yes,
prophets.

*shows small, white scrabs with gleaming red eyes.*

Rat: I remember my first meeting......

Scrab Leader:*speaks through mind*Greetings, creature. Welcome to the sacred caves.... remember you are welcome here.




more coming soon.............

[sligster]

I don't get it..........when you type more, I should be able to read your mind through the computer screen and tell everybody how it ends!

[mudflub2]

This story will become much more clear by the end of the day.

Rat: who are y-y-you?

*Scrab Leader laughs*

Scrab leader: Relax, you will be safe here from the threat of the outside world, from the Pitiful sligs, evil glukkons and horrific vykkers.

*Rat looks confused as scrabs walk away, then scuttles off to look for food.*

Rat: yes thats what happened. Afterwards I learnt about the world I, we, live in. I was told to go to the Industrial World to find my purpose for life, but I would need help. I set off the next morning to look for the best friends a rat could have. FUZZLES!

I will think about something new soon.

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Rat: I hate having one leg.
It difficult to control because I was mudokon in life before, yesssss,
mud I was.
We ratz can tell what we were before we died in other life.
* shows fuzzles chasing fleech away.*

Rat: *comes up to fuzzles*Do you speak Basic?

Fuzzle1:Yeah, rattie, why do you care?

Rat:I want to form a party to go deep into The City.

Fuzzles all together:What???

Fuzzle1:Thats suicide!

Rat: No, it isn't. I think that plenty of creatures make a living in the City.

*young fuzzle comes out of crowd*

Fuzzle2: I'll come. I wanna see the world know matta what.

Fuzzle1: Not without me, you won't.

Rat: O.K. meet me at the edge of the forest caves.

Okay I want other people to finish this story while continue from here

[mudflub2]

Help guys! I'm running out of ideas!

*forest edge, bunch of fuzzles ready to say goodbye*

Fuzzles: Bye Sam, bye Tuff!

Rat:Hmm, I need a name too.

Sam:We'll think of one, later.

Tuff:*jumps around*I'll be back, I need to tinkle.

Sam and Rat:Hurry!


.................................................................................................... ....................... gimmie alternate stories!!!!!!!!

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Chapter3

*three days later*

Sam: Time to think of a name.

Rat:well, what?

Tiff: zeebo?

Rat:great!

*later.......*

Sam: shush, I here sligs.

*gh-r gh-r gh-r ghhh*

Tiff: thats sligs alright.

Zeebo: what do we do now?

Slig1: heh heh, I told ya that chump would surrender easily.

Slig2: I love this job!

*rustling, squad of bigbro's jumps out with blitzpackers jumps out.

Bigbro1:get'em!

Bigbro2pen fire!

*blitzpackers blast, sligs killed.

to be continued......


please reply!

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Chapter ?

Zeebo: whats going on?

Bigbro2: now to get that moolah.

*reaches down grabs bag from sligs, then all bigbros walk off*

Tiff: yay! slig for dinner!

Sam: Okay, lets eat!

*in the next morning*

Zeebo and Tiff: SAM!!!!!

Sam: hang on, I got something in my teeth.

*Hour later.......*

Zeebo: I hear muds.

*Lights flash*

To Be Continued.............

[mudflub2]

If I don't get no feedback, I ain't finishing this till I do!

[Splat]

Thats a good story. I tried to reply after chapter 2 or somethin but my PC was in a bad mood and it crashed. I think they should meet Abe and Abe should get em to help him on a mission to blow somethin up

[Splat]

i gave you feedback, now i want a chapter! Pleeeeeeeeeese!

[Strike Witch]

Could somebody else finish this?