The ratz's story
THE RAT
Rat: Hello,I'm a rat that is telling my story to you. *lights appear, shows forest.* Rat: I was born here, three years ago in the second largest forest on Mudos With slightly larger brain than most rats. I was adopted by The shiny White Scrabs that are realy nice and don't fight, no, not fighters but prophets, yes, prophets. *shows small, white scrabs with gleaming red eyes.* Rat: I remember my first meeting...... Scrab Leader:*speaks through mind*Greetings, creature. Welcome to the sacred caves.... remember you are welcome here. :) more coming soon............. |
I don't get it..........when you type more, I should be able to read your mind through the computer screen and tell everybody how it ends!
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This story will become much more clear by the end of the day.
Rat: who are y-y-you? *Scrab Leader laughs* Scrab leader: Relax, you will be safe here from the threat of the outside world, from the Pitiful sligs, evil glukkons and horrific vykkers. *Rat looks confused as scrabs walk away, then scuttles off to look for food.* Rat: yes thats what happened. Afterwards I learnt about the world I, we, live in. I was told to go to the Industrial World to find my purpose for life, but I would need help. I set off the next morning to look for the best friends a rat could have. FUZZLES! I will think about something new soon.:D |
Chapter 1
Rat: I hate having one leg.
It difficult to control because I was mudokon in life before, yesssss, mud I was. We ratz can tell what we were before we died in other life. * shows fuzzles chasing fleech away.* Rat: *comes up to fuzzles*Do you speak Basic? Fuzzle1:Yeah, rattie, why do you care? Rat:I want to form a party to go deep into The City. Fuzzles all together:What??? Fuzzle1:Thats suicide! Rat: No, it isn't. I think that plenty of creatures make a living in the City. *young fuzzle comes out of crowd* Fuzzle2: I'll come. I wanna see the world know matta what. Fuzzle1: Not without me, you won't. Rat: O.K. meet me at the edge of the forest caves. Okay I want other people to finish this story while continue from here :rant: |
Help guys! I'm running out of ideas!
*forest edge, bunch of fuzzles ready to say goodbye* Fuzzles: Bye Sam, bye Tuff! Rat:Hmm, I need a name too. Sam:We'll think of one, later. Tuff:*jumps around*I'll be back, I need to tinkle. Sam and Rat:Hurry! .................................................................................................... .......................:) gimmie alternate stories!!!!!!!! |
Chapter3
*three days later* Sam: Time to think of a name. Rat:well, what? Tiff: zeebo? Rat:great! *later.......* Sam: shush, I here sligs. *gh-r gh-r gh-r ghhh* Tiff: thats sligs alright. Zeebo: what do we do now? Slig1: heh heh, I told ya that chump would surrender easily. Slig2: I love this job! *rustling, squad of bigbro's jumps out with blitzpackers jumps out. Bigbro1:get'em! Bigbro2:open fire! *blitzpackers blast, sligs killed. to be continued...... please reply! :( :( :( :crying: :crying: :crying: |
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Zeebo: whats going on? Bigbro2: now to get that moolah. *reaches down grabs bag from sligs, then all bigbros walk off* Tiff: yay! slig for dinner! Sam: Okay, lets eat! *in the next morning* Zeebo and Tiff: SAM!!!!! Sam: hang on, I got something in my teeth. *Hour later.......* Zeebo: I hear muds. *Lights flash* To Be Continued............. |
If I don't get no feedback, I ain't finishing this till I do!
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Thats a good story. I tried to reply after chapter 2 or somethin but my PC was in a bad mood and it crashed. I think they should meet Abe and Abe should get em to help him on a mission to blow somethin up:devil:
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i gave you feedback, now i want a chapter! Pleeeeeeeeeese!:(
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Could somebody else finish this?
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