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In case you didn't know my fan-fic is already in the Fan Corner. 
Great chapter. I really like how the scrab flew out. And then there's also that bit where his father travelled in the temples... I wonder if his dad is Abe.  I really like those smilies. I'm going to bed now. |
Impossible, this is set before the oddworld events, it's telling of how things started, I didn't make that very clear...but hey I can still make a dramatic star wars scene of fatherness
But Magnus will reveal to be quite special, whether I will explore his father or not I don't know (Although it's impossible since no mudokons have dads xD)
And off to read your fan fic now
