Awesome fanfic, Dave!! It had a great ending that is set up perfectly for a sequel as well.
Yeah, I can't wait until Dante's Exoddus, either-I bet it'll be even better than this one. (and that's saying a lot because this one was excellent.
) If I were to rate it on content, character development, and tone, I'd give it a 10/10 in all areas as well. Great work!