WOW, pretty good! this fic is similar to mine in body form! good ideas, but i feel more detail is needed to get the effect acrossed. ah, wat the helll am i talkin about?! my fic has hardly any detail! now, im not sure, but i dont think yer old fic is done. is it?
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