well, i have to admit i thought it was kinda below your usual standard, but that is probably just a by-product of my instinctive dislike of Very Powerful Characters, of whom Dragadon is undeniably one. i think the problem with having Dragadon in this is that she is so strong and powerful that very little poses a threat to her, so there is never really any suspense when she's around. no offense, but if i were you i would try and use her as little as possible...
hmm... well, i seem to have the 'criticism' part all right, now i just need to work on the 'constructive'...
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