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: Fan Corner 12-12-2009, 07:13 AM
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What could these objects be? Good chapter :)

What could these objects be?
Good chapter :)
: Fan Corner 12-11-2009, 08:14 AM
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hmm, the letter D is contained in many evil words...

hmm, the letter D is contained in many evil words I agree.
: Fan Corner 12-10-2009, 11:50 PM
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Oh ek D8

Oh ek D8
: Fan Corner 12-10-2009, 02:33 PM
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More bed material, more hunting, darkwings not...

More bed material, more hunting, darkwings not attacking, craving of meat, canine size increased, THIS CAN ONLY MEAN ONE THING.......
: Fan Corner 12-10-2009, 01:14 PM
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Yes, but now she is using kickass moves for evil...

Yes, but now she is using kickass moves for evil D8
: Fan Corner 12-10-2009, 12:17 PM
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Hmm, I don't really know Good chapter :)

Hmm, I don't really know
Good chapter :)
: Fan Corner 12-10-2009, 08:44 AM
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Chapter 4 Strange Technology The trio were...

Chapter 4
Strange Technology

The trio were in an abandoned laboratory covered in moss and bits of plant. “Surely plants couldn’t have gotten in here” said Zaypher inspecting them. Admeet pointed...
: Fan Corner 12-09-2009, 12:49 PM
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Good chapter I'm not really a critic to be...

Good chapter
I'm not really a critic to be honest, so I don't really pick out the errors and weaknesses. I just read it and say "Good chapter"
: Fan Corner 12-09-2009, 11:00 AM
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Hmm, I can't really pick out any weak spots in...

Hmm, I can't really pick out any weak spots in it.
Good chapter
: Fan Corner 12-09-2009, 08:13 AM
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That's okay :)

That's okay :)
: Fan Corner 12-08-2009, 02:42 PM
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Good chapter :)

Good chapter :)
: Fan Corner 12-08-2009, 10:58 AM
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Good chapter :)

Good chapter :)
: Fan Corner 12-08-2009, 08:20 AM
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Sorry i'm late on this, Good start :) Wonder...

Sorry i'm late on this, Good start :)
Wonder what will happen next
: Fan Corner 12-08-2009, 08:15 AM
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Oddey: Far fetched, but very interesting indeed...

Oddey: Far fetched, but very interesting indeed :)
AlexFili: Thanks :)
: Fan Corner 12-07-2009, 12:49 PM
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I'd like to hear them please, It may give me some...

I'd like to hear them please, It may give me some ideas
: Non-Oddworld Art & Literature 12-07-2009, 08:29 AM
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This may have to go on hold as i have other...

This may have to go on hold as i have other fanfics to go on with
: Fan Corner 12-07-2009, 08:28 AM
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Chapter 3 Enemy to Friend “I escaped...

Chapter 3
Enemy to Friend

“I escaped through a maintenance shaft just before the C4 went off. I just sat down to think while the flames lashed out from the shaft. Why was I doing this? Why did I...
: Fan Corner 12-03-2009, 11:30 AM
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Thanks :D

Thanks :D
: Fan Corner 12-02-2009, 01:40 PM
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Thanks

Thanks
: Fan Corner 12-02-2009, 12:55 PM
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Chapter 2 Journey’s beginning Without...

Chapter 2
Journey’s beginning

Without further a due, Admeet went on to talk about what was said in his dream. At first, Solister didn’t believe him and said that visions can sometimes lead to...
: Fan Corner 12-01-2009, 10:20 AM
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Could be

Could be
: Fan Corner 11-30-2009, 02:04 PM
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That might just do it :)

That might just do it :)
: Fan Corner 11-30-2009, 12:12 PM
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Thanks, but I kinda like the way Temptation (Part...

Thanks, but I kinda like the way Temptation (Part 2) ends. It gives a sort of cliffhanger. but obviously yes, the beginning doesn't really link in with the end of that chapter. But I think you can...
: Fan Corner 11-30-2009, 08:20 AM
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The new story is a go. Here is the first chapter....

The new story is a go. Here is the first chapter.
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Evil Consequences

Chapter 1
Pack Introduction

Lying in a leather...
: Fan Corner 11-27-2009, 09:25 AM
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AlexFili: Thanks and nice picture MeechMunchie:...

AlexFili: Thanks and nice picture
MeechMunchie: Thanks
Oddey: Thanks

I thank you all now for encouraging me to continue with this installment. New installment comeing soon :D
: Fan Corner 11-26-2009, 02:57 PM
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Last chapter now ...

Last chapter now
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Temptation (Part 2)

Admeet ran towards the general. “Now now Admeet” he said quickly,...
: Fan Corner 11-26-2009, 02:56 PM
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second to last chapter of this installment ...

second to last chapter of this installment
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Chapter 11
Temptation (part 1)

Another half-an-hour went past...
: Fan Corner 11-21-2009, 10:27 AM
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Maybe

Maybe
: Fan Corner 11-21-2009, 08:10 AM
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Who knows....

Who knows....
: Non-Oddworld Art & Literature 11-19-2009, 12:55 PM
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We'll just have to wait and see

We'll just have to wait and see

 





 
 
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