Romantic Poems
 

Hiya fellow forumers, this is my first post, so I'm sorry if I make an ass of it :lol: .
Right, to buisness, Romantic Poems, got any you wanna post? Plz do, here is a poem of my own:

My Love

To my truest darling,
I love thee,
And for a whole eternity,
This is how it shall be.
I know when you touch me,
That your heart is true,
And that you'll always love me,
Whatever I do.
Whenever I look,
Deep into your eyes,
I can always tell,
That they'll tell me no lies.
I only hope, that the day that I fall,
You shall hold me,
Darling, love, one and all...

Lol, pretty stupid, huh? I hope to see you posts soon!

oddchick
:D :D :D

I've written some love poems of my own...for certain people. Maybe I'll post them here sometime. But about your poem, nicely writen. Good job miss.:fuzwink:

Cool poem odd, I dont think I'll send any in, as i cant write poems...

well done odd!:fuzgrin:
Keep the good posts coming!
Good work

wow the chicken has talent! But no poems from snape miss chicken. You know the consiquences. Muhahaha! But kee up with the poems!

GREAT work odd couldent'ev done it better my self well done

even though I'm a boy...I'll post! Hey! I have a dream-girl, too, you know!!!!!!!


The Way You Look at Me

The way you look at me is so nice,
It reminds me of the smile of Jesus Christ.
It reminds me of how I used to be;
A big jerk, yep, that was me.
It reminds me of all things I don't know,
I hate to see your mouth bend low.
Everything you've done to try and help me,
Always worked...to you to be my being.
The way you look at me fills my spirit with pride,
That's why I want you to be my bride.


Tell me if you like it or not! Make fun of it
if you wish

Wow, we acctually have a poem! Thankyou Abe-gun, that was truely beautiful, really. That's quite something to have come from a nine year old, well done! *claps*

oddchick

:) :) :) :) :) :)

you're just sayin' that...shucks! it was nothin'

Cool poem Abe Gun... You have a lot more talent than me, like i said i cant write poems..

C'mon Blue...I want to see ure best poem....give it all ya got....by the way, I'll be writing more poems at a later time

Me? Write a poem?lol! i cant write, okays, I'll write one, next time I post its gonna be the poem..

Another Poem
 

Here's another one!

My Dream-girl (true story...er....poem)

In her eyes,
All the beuty shines
Into mine.
All the time I can't stop seeing
Her face while I am dreaming.
The way I see her soul
Is so great,
I'd squash someone teasing her,
Like a grape.
She'd have to say I'm hers,
For I know,
That she can't not kiss me
before I go.
Now I'm out and miserable,
'Cause now to me she's not visible.
Now I say goodbye,
And we look each other strait in the eyes....
And now I'm gone,
And mom tells me to mow the lawn.........

Like it?

lol bro!:lol: Wow..two poems for Ryan...zero for Kai. Well we will see about that. However I like your peoms. It has humor in it. Soon you shall see my works of art, and you will gaze in disbelief that I am the author. But you'll see soon enough;)

shurrup Kai....I know you might be good...but don't let it get to your friekin' head!

Now now bro...tis only a friendly competition. Besides you seem to be good at these peoms;)

WoW , thou do some more....

who, me?

Canned Gabbiar
 

Well, I've finally attempted a love poem... I've written fan poems, but never this. Well, here I go:

What's this feeling?
When I'm around you,
My heart beats fast,
My cheeks turn red,
My legs turn to lead,
I can't lift them,
I start to sweat,
My head swims,
With a thousand thoughts,
All of them are of you,
My heart beats faster,
My legs suddenly melt,
Your hand brushed against mine,
I've lost my voice,
I give a smile,
You smile back,
My universe collapses,
What's this feeling,
I get around you?
What is it?
What?

Well done, Canned Gabbiar! It seems that you can write poems as well as draw! Nice work, keep it coming guys. I can't believe that so many ppl reply to a romantic poems thread...thats cool.

oddchick

Ok guys this is the promised poem, that abe gun requested... But not to abe-gun.I personally think it is rubbish.... You will probably think it is too...

You're my guardian angel,
My angel from above,
My heart fills with joy,
And your words fill me with love.

Your love circles around me,
Like nothing before.
I will always be yours,
For eternity and ever more.

When I’m around you,
I feel as if I can fly,
I love you ever so much,
That I'll love you until i die..

I think that was really bad...

Well done, Blue (89da11). That wasn't rubbish at all. Here is another poem:

I Think I Love You

I think I love you,
I really do,
And that love will be
Wholesome and true.
It is when you touch me,
My heart trembles and leaps,
And you stay in my mind,
Even when I sleep.
It is when you hold me,
I know that you care,
It seems that I love you,
Totally unaware.
I really think I love you,
It's in my heart that I do,
Please, please tell me,
That you love me too.

oddchick

Thanx Odd, well that was another good poem... Keep them coming in:D

Love poems...ahhh...so sweet they are. Well I still have yet to post one of my own. But so far nothing but nice poems;)

Really great poems Miss Odd! : P Im sorry I didn't reply earlier but I.....forgot...*runns off for fear of gumpy attack*

Nice
 

Nice poems Blue and Oddchick.

Oh....very good. You obvioisly got some talent there.
And I'm not just saying that. I do actully read some poetry from time to time. *Blushes*

You're as forlorn as...
A lover without a love,
A below without an above.
A heart without a care,
A basalisk without a stare.
Hmm....made it up on the spur of the moment. Heh...oh well.

Good job, Blue! Really! I'm not just saying that!
Here you are!

When Two Hearts Connect

When two hearts connect
Things change.
When two lips connect
Nothing at all is plain.
When two loves connect
Everything is rather rare,
And when two Lives connect
Everything goes smooth and fair.


Together

Together our hearts shine
And everything is fine.
I now shall get you to be mine. Fine.
Now I tell you,
With you there, I'll never whine.



The Love I Used to Have

The love I used to have,
Did all she could for me,
And when I looked deep in her eyes,
I knew she would be completely "lie-free."
She would be free of lies.
And when I figuered out,
That she faked me, now,
It was not pretty.
And now we break our life-promise,
To be together long,
And now that she's gone,
It is the end of my "love-songs."

Heres goes nothing...I'm making this up on the spot.
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I Need You...

I toss and turn in my sleep,
thinking of nothing more then you,
loving you is what I do best,
making you smile, making you laugh,
your like a song in my head that I can't get rid of,
your name is the sweet chorus,
and your kiss the memorable verses,
is there anyone sweeter then you?
is there anyone who compares?
I think not,
for you are special,
my play girl,
play toy,
lover,
my friend,
I want to spend eternity with you,
hold me in your arms,
and don't let go...

That was good but I didn't gape in jealousy like you said I would! :p

You are the one,
My heart, my soul,
My true love,
For, whenever i am close to you,
I feel whole,
The chosen one,
For you see,
Its in my heart,
To be with you,
All the way,
For now, and forever more..

And, i just made that up right now, so its kinda rubbish...

good job, Blue! (meet me in Oddchat on January 28! Any time!)

I say I did a fairly good job for listening to bloody techno music while thinking up a poem:| But it was directed to a special girl, I hope she liked it;)

Yes i did like it Kai, and AG stop pretending you like my poems, cause they are rubbish.. I put down anything that comes into my head...:D

Well done, everyone!
Another nice poem Blue (89da11), Spectacular Abe-gun! Erm.....Kai...a nice poem, shame it didn't ryme, though. I love poems that ryme. Now, the thing that I wasn't quite sure about in your poem, kai, was this:

was that appropriate!? :fuzconf:. But all in all, great poems, everyone! :D

oddchick

Odd, why did you say that? Over all Kais poem was good, but i didnt really like that bit... Sorry.. :(

Critisism, critisism:rolleyes: Number one, not all poems rhyme...reason, it's a bit of a kidish thing, so to speak. Two, so my poem was a little "sexual" but love isn't all about hugs and kisses is it :| If you ask me, making that up on the spot, was brilliant. However, some people don't appreciate the feel of certain poems:fuzemb: I will now go about my life making poems that rhyme and talk about hugs and candy...and compare lovers to the sun and the moon:o But you haven't seen the last of me:fuzvamp:

I wasn't criticizing, merely comenting. And Kai, you said that not all poems rhyme, that is true, but, you said it was kidish when they do.....the best poem i have ever read rhymes, it is called the rime of the ancient mariner, and it is NOT 'kidish'. Oh, and Kai....the fact that the poem was 'sexual' was NOT appropriate, especially over the internet, and im sure blue didnt approve of it...ik. Oh yes...and kai, you said you made it up on the spot...i made both my poems up on the spot :p . And all that rubbish about hugz and candy....that is not at all what i write, ok? jesus, man...no romance at all.... :p

I was gunna post one but you guys blew it to peices so never mind

Grow up people. If you dont like something then try to avoid it. Yes you are commenting on what he said. But how do you know he meant it in a sexual way. Is it because your mind's have not expanded beyond a certain point because of your age. Or that you dont take time to just let people have poetic freedom. Your going to have to learn that there are some things in this world that you will not like and you will deal with them. Plus if you notice there are some older people on these forums too, we dont just listen to one group and please them, we work together for the well being of these forums, and all different types of people young or old, etc.

Kai do not worry about the critisim, there are worse problems in this world, and I think they will eventually have to learn that. Keep up the good work everyone with your writings.

To add also, the main purpose of these poems as the title leads everyone to believe are romantic poems, dealing with love. And if his works were meant in a sexual way, sex is defined as also making and creating love, thought I might refresh what it was originally conceptualized as.

Thankyou for listening to me once again, and your time for reading this.

-Sincerely Al the Vykker