Wow, thanks Alpha! Didn't think it was that good, but yeah, thanks..
~Danielle... |
Danielle, undiscribable poems. Very touching and heart felt. I love them. Keep writing from your heart;)
-Kai |
Thank you Kai.. Glad you liked them..
~Danielle... |
Grrrrrrr... Danielle, stop writing poems that are better than mine!!!! Grrrrr!!!!! How can I stop you? How, how? I know... *Grabs a sledghammer and creeps up behind Danielle*
Seriously, though, you poems are really good. Liked that last one, very nice. *looks to see Kai's name on a post*. O_O Oh hello Kai!!! You have returned!!! Nice to see you again....after so long. So, Mr Military, got any poems of your own inventions? After all, you did say to me that you're good at 'em :p. Oddchick P.S. By the way, how come Kai and ferill comment on Danielle's poems, but not my own? *sniff* Oh nevermind....I'll just go on....unnoticed... *sniff* |
Awww, actually I did read your poems Chicky. Simply forgot to respond to them:p Sorry. Your poems are very good too. I see you have progressed in your writings. It's getting allot more mature everytime I read them. Keep up the good work:)
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*sobs*
...All your poems are soo great!! Makes me wanna cry, you know... Life is unfair, isn't it. I can't even rhyme and you people are masters in the making... Oh well, nobody is perfect. (A small side-note: I've written only one poem during my short life... It was my literature homework :P. It was simply labelled as "Yö" (a.k.a Night). My teacher prob laughed when she read it...) :D |
Awwww, thanx Red Muse :). I bet you can write poems.
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Complete.
I'm so lucky to have met you You're the sunshine in my life And the reason I dream at night I look to the heavens above And give thanks to my God Who brought you into my life You've turned my skies to blue For no matter what they may be I stop and say I'm so lucky Because God must have known We were made for each other To fill the emptiness of our lives ____________________________ Ummm, another poem, you might have guessed that.. Danielle... |
Hey Danz, nice poem. Very thoughtful. The poem suits it's title very well. Good job.
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Thanks Kai,
*skips off giggling to think of another poem* Danielle... |
okay then odd...you poem were incredibly amazing and deserve an award of some kind... better?
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Heres a poem, I wrote for Danz, it has no title...
We've seen our good days And we've seen our bad Sometimes happy feelings Others sad What keeps us going Where is the fire that glows that holy beam of light It's in my heart, yours and mine It's our source of eternal might My heart sings out to yours saying Love me until the day that life fades Life will fade But that light That I see in your eyes Will burn there always The north star may die But our love will be with us For all time... -Kai |
Wow, Kai, great poem...:fuzwink: hehe.. I loved the poem, it was very touching..
-Danielle |
wow kai! i didnt know we could get such a good poem from the guy who made me do 50 push ups 'cause of a joke...
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Here is another poem...
The Last Letter The time goes by slowly, In the night I was so lonely, Between the autumn leaves, I said, "I want to leave." After I wrote my last letter, Wishing to you a good life, Inside me bad weather, Telling you goodbye. Behing this smiley mask, I saw the ugly truth, Question in my mind I will ask. Why I loved you? Be happy forever, Now you broke another heart, This is my last letter., And the end will start. _________________________ I don't know why I wrote that, but yeah.. Please tell me what you think of it. Danielle... |
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wow.... deep... meaningful... Ever considered to write a book with poems??? |
Or better yet, a book with all the poems on this thread.
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wow sorry i know this might be like spamming but i thought of a poem....
Goodbye Someday i'll disapear And Fade from minds Ony thing left of me Is the river I cried I know you tried to be kind But I'm still dying inside I wished you had just left me there I wish I hadn't even tried Can't think of you now Without crying out loud If I said I was alright I would be lying But I have no where to turn now Left out in the cold You laugh at me Leaving me alone I'm scared in this world i was thrown I don't understand what i feel Or how it isn't real Nothing will go right as i run from your mind As i leave now Try not to cry I know you won't You never said it but i will.... Good bye ---------- How rubbish is that! oh well |
That wasn't rubbish... Actually is was pretty good. :fuzsmile:
Danielle... |
mann! why is every one so negative here! these are good poems, just live with it!
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