Steel city
 

Oops. I must have meant to put Survived instead.

We had been walking for 2 hours now, and still we hadn’t accomplished anything. Exept for Ziggy and Jick were arguing.
“QUIET!” I yelled. “Look Ziggy, I’m trying to concentrate here. And Jick, I know you’re new here, but just Shut up! Ziggy, if you don’t put your act together, you’re going to be arguing for the rest of your life!”
“Why?” The Big bro slig asked.
“I’ve been thinking…We found Jick, and I thought we could welcome him into the gang?” I told him.
Jick’s face lit up.
Ziggy’s angry face turned into a sulk.
I carried on my work.
I was trying to contact Maniac. He could get us to Boneworkz much faster.
A face came up ontothe screen.
“BBS! What can I do for ya?” Maniac asked.
“Can you get us a helicoptor? We’re about five miles away from Splinterz.” I asked.
“Ok, but they’re all running out of fuel. You’ll have to stop off at my base to re-fuel.” Maniac said.
20 minutes later, a Helicoptor landed.
3 other Sligs were on board.
I jumped into the Pilot’s seat.
We took off.
In the first time in my life, I saw Oddworld’s natural area.
I saw Scrabs feasting on a dead Slig.
Ewww. It was probably a slig trying to escape from Splinterz.
The co-pilot looked shocked.
“We’ve got three animals on our tail.” The co-pilto announced.
The two pulled up beside, leaving one behind.
Two Mudokons were riding on a Stegrious. A Stegrious was an endangered flying reptile.
The mud on the right side picked up a spear.
The mud threw it like a javelin. It went through one of the Slig’s heads.
The slig fell backwards, and fell off.
The Muds pulled in closer.
The mud on the left pulled out another spear.
He fired aswell, hitting the co-pilot in the arm.
He screamed, as another slig went to take his place.
The co-pilto was dragged for medical attention.
The Mud on the right pulled in too close, and was caught in the rotor.
The one at the back pulled up onto the right side.
A ghostly figure was riding.
He smiled and waved.
I knew who that was.
The Guru.
When he said, “nobody could kill the great Guru!” I saw what he meant.
“Hold on!” I screamed.
I bashed into the Guru.
I noticed that he was a spirit as a robot, not his normal self.
The guru wobbled, and pulled out a rifle.
He whistled to the Stegrious, and aimed.
He wasn’t aiming at somebody. He was aiming at something.
I found out as a bullet went into the fuel supply.
Gas went everywhere, making everyone cover their mouths.
The helicoptor shook.
“There it is. Steel City. All we need to do is get past the borderline and the Police will shoot him down.” The co-pilot pointed out.
I pressed on the pedals harder, and we reached the border.
The Guru turned away.
We smashed to the floor, sending crowds of Sligs, Wolvarks, un-wanted Outlaws and Glukkons screaming.
A group of firemen came out of the crowds.
They started spraying.
I smashed the window so I could get out.
I looked behind me.
One of the sligs on board had fallen out, and had been stabbed by an Ariel.
The crowds looked scared as the armed Sligs got out.
They were obviously were a peaceful town.
I picked up the Vomit gun.
A slig smiled.
He walked up to me.
“You know Monty & Richy?” The Kid asked.
“Yes. I did. But now they are both dead. Because of a Damn evil Bastard named Tyronus!” I screamed, storming off with the rest.
The Speared Co-pilot directed me.
“Ow…Turn left and into the hanger.” He howled.
I walked into the hanger.
I saw maniac.
“I’ve already heard what happened. Word spread fast.
You obviously need a new helicoptor.” Maniac asked.
“How do they know Monty?” I asked.
“This is his home town. Come. Sit down and I will show you the helicoptors.” Maniac replied.
I walked off having no idea or warning that I was being spied on…

Wow...that was pretty long! Anyway, it was a good chapter-so the Guru's back!! Wow!! I didn't think I'd be seeing him again! Anyway, nice. ;)

The blue helicoptor zoomed off.
The Guru trailed after us.
“Biggy bro, look down below us!” Slug shouted.
I was currently piloting. I looked below.
Armies. But not on our side. Humanoids and Robolice roamed the sandy ground.
Silver tanks hovered infront and behind. They aimed their guns at the helicoptor.
“This is Commander Droy. What side are you on?” The radio came on.
I didn’t answer.
The commander got annoyed with that. They fired.
“Ziggy! Launch the Magma Bomb!” I shouted.
The Magma bomb was the worst bomb possible. When dropped, the red-hot magma stored inside melts through oddworld’s crust, then into the core. It then turns into Chaos.
Then the floor opens up. Sucking up anything. After a while, it closes again.
We dropped the bomb.
It didn’t explode.
The army scattered.
“I never liked those bombs.” Ziggy said.
We flew away.
I saw Boneworkz in the distance.
We flew off...

I'm sorry it wasn't much of a peice of writing.
I couldn't think of anythign to write exept this.
Make the next chapter longer.

It's ok...I get writer's block a lot myself-I've even got it now and can't think of anything to write for my fanfic. :D

Cool, 2 updates while I was gone. Yeah, writer's block is tough, luckily I know what'll be in my fic's next chapter. Good work though BBS, keep it coming!

Hell
 

The (new) Gang and me walked towards the Gate after we had landed the helicoptor.
I knocked on the door. "Hello?" I shouted.
There was a loud creak, and the door swung open, knocking Jick off his feet.
Two Robo-lice were staring at us.
“That was stupid.” Said Ziggy.
Before any of us had a chance, the rapid fire of bullets pulsed through the Air.
I knelt down, and covered my head.
Then I realised that I still had my behind as an easy target.
Of what seemed like a hundred bullets went into my mechanical arse.
I yelped, and tried to crawl away.
My legs had shut down again.
Why me? I thought.
Ziggy yanked out his gun, and started defending himself behind a piece of rubble.
The group moved towards the door.
Ziggy made a dive to help me, but I said “Find Splinterz, leave me here.”
Ziggy stepped back, and the three ran indoors. 1 Robo-louse rolled towards me.
The door slammed, and I excepted the rest.

Ziggy ran down the large corridoor. The only light was the red glow from the bullets that the Robo-louse was firing.
Suddenly, the three tripped up, and Ziggy crashed to the floor.
The robo-louse repeated. Except he was a pile of twisted metal.
Ziggy got up. He heard faint sounds of bullets.
Poor Biggy Bro Slig, Ziggy thought.
The rest had got up now, and Ziggy turned around.
“We have to get a wagon or a train now. Either that or your boss is doomed.” Jick said. He climbed up the ladder.
The others followed him.
Jick switched on his night-vision. He glanced across the tunnel. He saw along the wire and lines, explosives tied to the far end of the wire. In the middle was a wagon.
Jick smiled.
“I think we’ve found a way to get across.” Smiled Jick.

Wow, it's been awhile since this story has been updated! :D Nice chapter, BBS. ;) It was really cool and had just enough action to do it justice. ;) I can't wait until the next update! :D

Yes, an update after nigh on 2 months of agonizing wait! As odd chick said, very actiony, and a nice cliffhanger. Good work, I look forward to seeing how this develops. Also, a little request, could you please please please read and reply to my fic?

Explosives
 

Jick grabbed his backpack batttery, and yanked it off.
He suddenly lost his vision, and climbed up onto the wire, tossed the battery over the top and grabbed it on the other side and plugged it in again.
He started climbing slowly, trying not to wobble the wire to set off the TNT on the end.
He gave Slug the thumbs up to cross. Slug unplugged his battery and tossed it over. Well, he didn’t quite. The battery pounded the wire and Jick yelped, as the TNT’s fuse was lit.
Ziggy was the first to react, as he pulled out an old rusty knife and threw it. When it landed, it severed the lit fuse from the normal.
Five mnutes later, Slug and Jick had reached the wagon.
The small train-like cart’s brake was on. Slug released it. The wagon pumped up to the explosives.
As they hopped off, the wagon rolled all the way back to Ziggy.
Slug walked into something. He switched on his torch.
Slug’s eyes rolled out. He had bumped into a Slug hut.
He reached for Ziggy’s knife, and knelt down on his knees and peered in.
“Here Sloggy! Here Sloggie!” Slug called.
He got up and realised they had died years ago.
Wrong answer he thought, as a big, dollop of drool landed on his shoulder.
He turned around shivering.
“My god! That is one big son of a Slogette!” Slug screamed.
Slug ran around in circles trying to dodge the 10-foot Slog.
“Errr…Jick! Can you hurry up please! I’m kinda in a situation here!” Slug said.
By the time Jick turned, he was too late. Slug was struggling to survive in the belly of the Slog…

Hey, update! And good cliffhanger, will Slug live? You like doing cliffhangers don't you? Update plese, 2 month waits are too long to wait.

That one was a little short, but still well-written. ;) Nice job.