Jesus Christ, Al.....
1, I was not critizing, I was merely commenting, I liked Kai's poem apart from that bit. 2, :
3, Al....my thread is entitelled Romantic Poems, the idea of that was not sexual poetry, but of romantic poetry, to spread the idea of romance...Like the kinda ickky stuff that Shakespere wrote. Now, Al....I really love being told to 'grow up'. (By the way, there was quite a lot of sarcasm in that sentance) But Al....may I remind you that I am an imature 12 year old, and that I may say things that seem very...'stupid' :p . Right, Al, now that I've said a few 'childish' things, I'd better put in that I hope this doesn't seem offencive and rude...I have a trouble of accidentaly offending ppl....unfortunate habit, I am afraid... :) . Oh yes...why don't you send in a poem, Al.... oddchick |
To reply, to you statements oddchick, I never said you were immature specifically, I was painting a general picture. The more you point out something the more it starts to be brought up, and it sticks out like a sore thumb. I which case with the line from Kai's poem.
If you would have addressed it to Kai in a Pm or on oddchat etc. It would have saved me time and you wouldnt have gotten a lecture by me. And at the time when I asked how do you know if he meant it in a sexual way. I missed the line where he said he did mean it in that way. Anyways I dont like to argue much, and most of the time I'm really laid back. But I just wanted to tell you in life there are things you will like and there are others you will not like. Its best to get used to it now rather than be suprised at something later. Thats all I have to say. Sorry If you felt hurt by my statments, I just wanted to try and settle a disupute I felt could have been avoided earlier. -Al the Vykker |
bravo bravo 2 u all there fab well they are fab
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I'm not going to disect that single line of my poem for you:fuzblink: However...I am sorry that you (miss odd) does not understand the fact that "sex" is all a part of love...in the future I will remember to put this above my poems
Warning, this peom contains a singal line of sexual expression, suggested for the mature only! And that wasn't sarcasm:| I just can't stand a immature mind saying I should not have included "play toy, play girl" in my poems. Anyway enough of all this. Continue with the poems people. P.S. I still believe poems that rhyme every line is rather..."childish". |
Ok, Kai, that wasn't funny. Yes, I do understand that sex is a part of love, so you didn't have to make me look like a complete ass hole on my very first thread! I maybe immature, but you didn't have to point that out, either. And, I wasn't the only one to feel unconfortable when reading that line...I believe that 89da11 was not sure either. I did like the poem apart from that, as I stated earlier.
Kai, I also feel that having sexual expression in poems is not a bad thing...unlike what you think I think....Although when I started the thread, I intended it to be of the Shakespear style... Right, now I ask, can we please forget all this unpleasant buissness about the way in which we write our poems, and simply go back to the topic of the thread 'Romantic Poems'....I appologise for my behavior towards you poem, which was totally unlike me, for I believe that people should have the freedom to write whatever they wish. Thank you for you time, please continue with the poems, Kai...and everyone else :) oddchick |
Heya people,
Heres my crappy one i don't even think it an be classed s a love poem oh well, *writes*: Sitting here, watching over you, Nothing simple has ever occured, I see you smile, my heart lighens, From the depth of my soul the world shines, All of my memorys out cast by theese few seconds, Just trying to make my dreams come true, Your all I need right now, You don't understand that, you shut me out, And you aused m distress, but i love you, and thats what matters, But for now I just want to dissappear, and never come back until you realise, how much you mean to me, And how much I love you........... told yas it was crappy! |
Well done, Rexy!!!
*Claps*... :) :) :) :) Great work, really fab. :) I may write some more poems yet....keep 'em commin' ppl!! :D :D :D oddchick |
Alright Miss Odd, I'll get off your case, and set aside our differences. Anyway, love poems in it's deepest most meaning, expresses things people feel, and apply to there lives. This poem I am about to share, explains just that.
------------------------------------------------------------------- The Fire As you and I sit there by the fire, our hands together, we lean against eachother, oh what a peaceful moment in time we share, when no hardship overules us, and all we do is whisper sweet words to eachother, and kiss under the sky above, like the fire we lay next to, burning with an endless glow, so to does our hearts shine, with loves eternal flame. -------------------------------------------------------- Alright, now that expresses the way one feels about love, and how I applied it to a fire. Pretty basic concept. Once again like most of the poems here, this one was made on the spot. |
Hey, well done Kai :) :) :), I take it that we're friends again *hugz*. Here is another poem of my own:
I Long For You I long for you to love me, I long for you care, I long for a true love, For us both to share. I long to see us together, Walking hand in hand, I long for you to be by me, There forever, you should stand. I long for you to realize, That you could be for me, I long for you to notice, That forever, we could be. ________________________ I think they more and more cheasy....ick....:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) oddchick |
Well nice Job Miss Odd...
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-_- earlier I was going to say "this topic should be entitled, 'Arguments', where you can let it ALL out...like the Real World.... : )" Yes....I was just gone a while! :P Why hasn't anyone replied in a while? Oh, well....
The Shine in Your Eyes I look at your eyes, the sparkle, how it shines, I look into your eyes, and it makes you mine! The shine in your eyes, makes you look so great, the sparkle in your eyes, makes my world clear of hate. And now I know, and now I see, that if you say "no" that you'll still see me. I know you feel, I know you see, I know you'll kneel, and you'll be with me, for all of eternity. too mushy *X's it out* UGH! |
This is tight... I think im in love...... Miss Odd
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Another stupid poem here,
My love My love, i wish you could know, How much i really love you, I just want you to know, I love you with all my heart, And wish to be with you all the time, This time not leave your side, For, i wonder on nights to come, Where i would be without you, Not there in your arms, my one true love.. ___________________________________ Really bad poem, maybe cause i made it up on the spot but who cares? |
Great poem Blue, Abe-gun... lol Stan...i know my poems are good :lol: , but they aint that good :lol: (j/k).
Right...another poem of my own, I't a little different to the other ones that I've done...sorry...but i can't think of a title.. Think of a sad story, Something to make you cry, But I bet I know something sadder, This you cannot deny. Think of the power of love; Someone in love with another, Then think of the feelings of the someone, When the one she wanted had a lover. Think of the way she felt, To see them hand in hand, To see them kiss by moonlight, Or cuddle in the sand. Then think of the problem, That her heart could not mend, Was the fact that his lover, Was her only bestest friend. Then think of her emotions, On the wedding day; As she sat and heared their vows, She wished her life away. Then think of the passing people, Who on the river bank they saw her lie, With slit wrists and tears... That was how she wanted to die.... _____________________________________ What do you think? oddchick |
I like that poem odd, you dont usually write ones like that, nice to see a change.. Good work.
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I love you so
I love you, You dont love me, You are with her, Not with me, I want to be with you, You dont want to be with me, Ive got no-one, You've got her, I love you so very much, But you dont love me.. ________________________ Thats just a weird one, tried to write in the same style as odd, it didnt really work.. |
Xp She's dead....because, *GASP!*
...lol...Good joke Blue, but it did work a lot like Oddchick's! This is sort of like it, too;
_____________________ The Knife When I saw it in your hand, I knew I had the proof, All the good times we've spent, And now you do this? "POOF!" Now you're gone, And I wonder why, All the good times we had, So now you want to die. So I look at you on the bed, You laying there, This thing knocked the wind out of me, I have no air. I look at what did it all, what made you lose your life, It was right in your hand, It was a knife. ____________________________ Hmm....the knife...thank god it's not true!!! LoL |
right....soz for double-posting but I had a slight problem with the quoting area...lol! Please deleate this mods...
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Cool poem AG.. I'll say no more...:)
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*Sighs* Lovely work, Abe-gun and Blue.....but did you really have to copy that idea of mine? :p ...*Sighs indestinctly* Honestly...whatever I do, someone always has to copy the idea and make it better....*looks up* Oh well :D, keep up the good work, guys....wow...I can't believe how well this thread is doing! *giggles*
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The answer to does everyone have to copy me is... Yes:D Hehe..
I agree with the fact that this thread is going well, it has 60 posts! Well that could change.. |
Sad, voilent, and romantic.
You, Me, Him and the Beatings I hold you tight, On those lovely nights, But the next day, It doesn't go the way, That you planned. What you did to me? Aband. Find him. It turns bloody. I can't believe this is getting so muddy. The way you are, it doesn't seem true. You cheat on me and this guy beats you. Now you're dead because of them all. The beatings he gave you made you take the fall. __________________________________________ Basically about a man who had a girlfriend that cheated on him. The man she was secretly with beats her to death when she would usually be at work if she hadn't even cheated on him. |
Another poem i see, hmmm not bad.. Not my style, oh well good poem AG
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Very nice, Abe-gun......not quite as romantic as many of the other poems here, but what the hey, well done!:) I do have one comment (If this sounds completely stupid, it's because I have probably read the poem worng, or just talking rubbish like I usually do :p ), Why would a woman have an affair with someone who beats her up? Strange world....
Keep up the great work, AG. Oddchick |
Well I dont know odd, and really, I dont care, no offence or anything AG..
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Right, 89da11....Oh by the way, 89da, I like your signature, very kool. Here is another peice of work, I thought I's try something that is (hopefully) funny.
You there! In your underwear, You said you wanted me.. Oh man...I need a pee... Listen, you asked me out, Come closer, I don't want to shout. Anyway, you want to win my heart? Well, first promise that you wont f*rt. And if I were to care for you, You would often esscort me to the loo. It's not just that, It's how you act. Now trust me, that's a fact, Class is what you mustn't lack. So now you have it, Mr Man, And, if you dont mind, I'm off to Milan. __________________________________________ I wouldn't call that funny, more stupid. Hehe, oh well :) Oddchick |
Yeah odd, stupid, not funny, just plain weird, well from my signature I am weird, oh who cares! And thanx odd about my signature...:D But non the less, good poem..
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i cant really write these sort of things..but anyway
if there ever was a girl it be you my love, so very true i see your lovely face.. i need to have a trace..of you HE-EH! It was horrible wernt it??? |
No, that was quite good for a first try... Good work! Besides, my poems a rubbish anyways..
~Danielle |
I agree with 89da11, that poem was very good, Reptile. Hey Reptile, have you seen the poems that I have written farther up in the thread? They're not as bad as the last on I did....
C'mon Guys, if you have poems, don't be afraid to post 'em! Oddchick :fuzwink: |
Im afraid to post, you keep quoting me! *runs away*
~Danielle |
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Anyway, has anyone got anymore poems? You guys got anymore poems? Here is another one of my invention, it's not very romantic, it's kinda about a girl who isn't having much luck in love, it's entitled dear Morgan because I like the name. Here goes : Dear, Dear Morgan Dear, Dear Morgan, please don’t be blue, As it only makes me feel blue, too. Dear, Dear Morgan, please don’t cry, Don’t you worry, you will find the right guy! Dear, Dear Morgan, please don’t feel sad, Wait patiently now, you’ll find the right lad. Dear, Dear Morgan, I try to understand, And I’m always here, to offer a helping hand. Dear, Dear Morgan, I’ll be there for you, Through hard times and sadness, we’ll see it through. Oddchick |
Nice poem odd, but really, stop quoting me! *runs into a wall* Ow, now I'll ask you nicely, please stop quoting my every post..:flames:
~Danielle... |
Wow alot of these poems are really good, and some of them are just weird. i just wish that i found this thread last month (d'oh).
But any way here's one of my own poems. Hope you like it. I watch the T.V You listen to the radio I play games you play music I eat chocolate You eat fruit But the most important thing is You talk and I listen |
Nice poem... Good work, keep writing them! Maybe I should write some more poems, no can't be bothered...
~Danielle... |
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2) If I do quote you, it's because I find you have a point, etc. 3) What's there to get so worked up about? Hey Nath, cool poem, man.... Anymore poems, guys? *Looks directly at Kai and 89da11* :p Oddchick |
*shrugs shoulders* Ummm no more poems for now anyways..
~Danielle... |
hmmm, i think i have another....
i dont know where i went wrong i was only there to hold you before you left for the skies you were very bouncy..like a rubber bong i loved you so very true i love paramite pies!!!! |
Nice work, Reptile! Here is another poem of my own invention:
Only An Angel The church bells ring, Oh, what hope they did bring, On this glorious day in May, It would be, planned out and booked, our happy wedding-day But now the plan, Changed there and then, For terrible happenings came, Another angel heaven, had unrightly gained. As the funeral procession went by, Hope was to die. As the church rang its bell, My lover was...nothing more than an angel. Pretty stupid....It doesn't really make sense.... Oh well, I'll try harder next time. Oddchick |
I suck at poems, but I'll give it a try...
Don't laugh.. The sun is Green, The grass is BLue. I'm F*cking StOned, But I loVE You... Like I said, I suck at poems |