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Chapter 17

Straight away i had to run away from Rabid Paramites, who would not hesitate to eat me. But i tripped over a rock, and landed flat on my face. I turned around and saw the paramites, saliva dripping from their wet tenticals."AHGHGHGHGH! Wait...thats it! Im gonna hit these guys!" I shrieked, and punched both paramites in the face. The shreeched, then got even angrier. "CHHAHAHAH!" The both schreeched and ran after me, faster then ever. Ahhhhhhhhhhh..That relaxing back masarge is nice. Wait a min.,.......back masarge? "AHG! FLEECH!" There was a massive fleech, very hungry indeed.

Well, nice end of attack. I got to say, these seem as if he will be here for some time.