this is a great story! i'm looking forth to the next chapter!

Chapter 10 Zualg 1

Abe and Munch found Zualg 1. "Finally!" Abe said. The fuzzles hopped in front but then blades came out of the walls and celing and sliced the Fuzzles. Now the trap was done they went (with Munch sobbing quetly because the Fuzzles were dead.) into the Zualg. Then A big bro slig came and got a knife and stabbed Abe and Munch. They fell to the floor and everthing went black..... They woke up at a cell. (Again!) "Well well well it looks like your trapped and this time noone can help you and to prove it DoIT!" The glukkon stenx said to a slig. The slig held up Big faces head! "you...you....you MONSTERS!" Abe said in Fury then Quickly Became Shrycull! He started to destroy everthing. The slig was killed but Stenx got away! "Dammit! Dammit! Dammit!" Abe said. Then they pulled a lever. Zualg 1 has been done.

By the way go to the Should they die? Thread! Then I can finsh the fan fic! So when the poll closes, I'll start again!
(Sorry for the double post!)

??? What exactly do you mean by that last post, Fuzzleman? That chapter was a bit short, and to be honest, it was probably not one of your best. But it was ok. :) It wasn't bad at all, it's just that you've had better chapters. Until the next one, I'll be waiting! :)

so when is the story going to be continued??

Yeah, I can't wait!

I will start at the 3rd of April! But if the should they die poll draws, can anyone think of a plan?

Final results: No they will NOT die!

Chapter 11 The gift

"Hhhhhhmmmmmm..." abe said. "What's up?" Munch said. "Well how do we get to the lever in this Zualg?" Suddenly a hammer hit abe's head. He got knocked out and fell n the floor. Suddenly the floor opened. "NOT AGAIN!" and they fell down. When they were falling abe woke up and there was a flashing light. They were at the top and Big face was there. "What the... but I thought you... WHERE THE HELL DID YOU COME FROM?" Abe said confused. "Sharmans brought me back to life." he replied. Then he accidently dropped a stick he was carring. So abe bent down to get it and suddenly RRRRIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPP!!!!! His lion cloth ripped at the back. "Oh poopie cheese!" he said embaresd. he quickly put his paws over hiss butt. "Anyway, I came to give you two your own gifts." Big face said. "Huh?" Munch said but was suddenly zapped by electricty. "Munch!" Abe said. suddenly when it went he had a tatu on his head! "This will give you the power to transforn in to antyhing." "COOL!" "and you" big face looked at abe. "oh no you are not AAAGGGGHHHHH!!!" Abe said and was zapped in the butt. "This will give you the power to summon scrabs and paramites to help you!"Then his lion cloth was fixed. "Thanks big face!" "No problem!" and big face vanished. Munch and abe then walked to Zualg two because big face had transported them there.

End of Chapter 11

So good or bad?

:lol: I actually laughed out loud when the Bigface put a tattoo on Abe's behind! :lol: That was a very funny chapter, Fuzzleman! Keep it up! :)

Me too! Very funny Fuzzleguy!

Next on tommorow!

that chapter was very funny! i liked your story!

I am really sorry I forgot to do it on the 5th!

Chapter 12 Stenix's Powers

When Abe and Munch went into Zualg two, There were lots of sligs. "FRREZE!" "Stand back!" Abe said and then he farted. "Hahahaha! You think that's going to stop us-" and then suddenly 700 scarbs and 700 paramites came and had a feast. THen stenix came . IV'e HAD IT!" He shouted and became shrycull! "Actully it's sryicull! for us!" Stenix said and zapped everthing! Then Munch dodged one but it got Abe! "HEY - What the?" And Abe was suddenly a flower on the floor! "oops set myself to flower zap! Now to SHOCK TO DEATH ZAP!" "That' it!" Munch said and punched him and he fell to the ground. "You are mean to Abe, YOU KILL FUZZLE'S AND MOST OF ALL YOU ARE A WIMP!!!!!!"""" Munch said in a rage. "Whoa!" Abe said. "I am blooming! Yippee!" THen Munch started beating him up! Then morped into a possesion orb! But stenix manged to be carried away from some flying sligs. "O.k Abe, I willl put you back to normal!" And morped into sryicull and zapped him back to Abe! "Aaawwww I nearly became a daffidill!" Abe said moaning. "Hey look a lever!" Munch said and pulled it. Zualg 2 Had been done.

End of Chapter 12.

Was it good?

He he, it was funny when Abe turned into a flower! :lol: Nice job with the humor, Fuzzleman. Keep it going. :)

Humor:10. I liked that chapter! keep up the good work. ;)

Next one in two days!!!!!:)

Who was the guy who turned into a srycull?

I am so sorry! I diden't have enough time to write a chapter!

Chapter 13 The fight

"Hey here's Zualg 3!" Munch said looking at the sign. "let's go!" So abe and Munch wen't inside! "Freeze!" Loads of sligs said. They were surronded by sligs! "Let's kill 'em!" "That's it!" Abs said. He picked up Munch and ran around the room dodgeing bullets. Then abe sneaked up on a slig. "Hey" He said and patted him on the shoulder then ducked. "Who's there?" "Kaya!" Abe said and poked him in the eye! Then he fell down a pit! SPLAT! He ended up in a bloody mess. Then abe threw munch on a platform! Munch pulled a lever! It Zapped Abe and the sligs! Then abe and the sligs walked in the middle of the room and started doing the can can! "Oops, it's on can can mode! I'll change it to james bond mode!" Munch said and zapped Abe. THen abe was suddenly holding a pistel with sunglasses! And took down ever slig! "Hey look a lever!" Abe said and pulled it! Zualg 3 had been done!

end of chapter 13

Do you like it?

LOL! James Bond mode!? That was really funny!

Yes! LOL! Please finish!

Thanks!

Chapter 14 The tabels turn!

"Aggghhhhh more sligs!" Abe said as they were standing in Zualg 4. FART! Abe said and paramites and scrabs came and killed the sligs! But suddenly the tabels turned! The scrabs and paramites wen't after Abe and munch! THen they ran into a poop chute! "Hey i wonder why they call this a poop chute?" Abe said. Then he figured out why, After fuzzle, scrab, paramite and mudokon poo laned on his head! Then the poop chute opened! They started falling! But suddenly abe and munch were dangeling in thin air! "Huh? AGGHHHH!!" Munch said as he saw paramites puling them up to them with a web! "hmmmmmM!" Munch said and morphed into a paramite! Then climbed up the web. In paramite he said" Hey you don't wanna eat him! I know where a meat stack is! Come on!" Munch said and the paramites followed him. But he lead them into a recycler! THen Munch morphed back! Meanwhile.... SPLAT! POOP! Abe was getting filled with poo! But munch came and pulled him up! "Hey stinky!" Munch said laughing! "Grrrrr!" abe said and they rolled into a fight! They rolled into a lever! "Hey we just did Zualg 4!" Abe said. "Now to the final zualg!" Munch said and they ran off.

End of chapter 14

Well do you like it?

That was awesome! It was funny when the poo landed on Abe's head LOL!

Yeah, it was funny. :lol: But there's one thing that I could point out about the story-Munch turning into a Paramite. Now, I could imagine Abe turning into a Paramite (hey, he can turn into a shrykull. ;)), but not Munch. The only thing Munch can turn into is a steroid version of himself, pretty much. (Man, too bad that part was cut from the game. :() Other than that, it was a hilarious chapter! :lol: Keep it up! :)

Thanks! And Odd chick that is right! Hmmmmmmmm........:confused:

Anywho, I am going to write the a chapter! Enjoy!

Chapter 15 The final Zualg

"well...... here we are." Abe said scracting his back and staring up at the zualg. "Let's do this!" Munch said and they went in. "Freeze!" "freeze!" "Freeze!" Loads of sligs shouted as they walked in. "Your trapped now!" Stenix said. Then a vyker came but tripped and a vyle spilled all over abe! "Aggghhhhh! Oh god no!" Abe said as he started spinning! Then he got up. "The matrix is something all around us." Abe said with sun glasses on! BLAM! The sligs shot at him but he did the matrix and dodged them! "Quite intresting." Abe said as he did kung foo on everyone and they died."DIE STENIX!" Abe said and shot him! He shived up but the blew up! "Well that's a bit of a sticky wiccet!" Munch said as blood and guts splaterd everwhere! "Whoo! He's dead!" Abe saaid. Whoom!Whoom! An alarm was going off! "There blowing up the factory, and were still inside!" Munch said as he pulled a lever to do Zualg 5! But then they ran out and all the zualgs blew up! "Come on hurry! Let's get out of here!" Abe said and they ran off.

End of Chapter 15

Was it good?

That was amazing! Id, jigglyph, Guvj, i'm buying you, a pizza!

He he, that chapter was funny! :lol: I could imagine Abe being in the Matrix-now THAT would be hilarious! :lol: Keep it up-it's a really comical story! :)

Yeah, humor, is better. :) Great job!

Thank you ,thank you all! *takes trophy*

Warning!!!! This is my final chapter!!

The Final Chapter The escape

Whoop!Whoop! "The alarm is going even louder!!" "I.....will.....KILL....yOU!" Stenix said and limped over to them and kicked a greanade but narroly missed Abe and Munch. But then there was a door! Ding dong! "Just a Minute!" Stenix said and opened it. "Here's Ya pizza!(Burp)" an drunk mudokon said. "I did not order any!" "Oh......Here's ya pizza's man!" "I am not a man I am a Glukkon!" (Spewing up)"Oh....Here'ss ya pizza's Glukkon!" "AGGAGAHAGAHGAG!" Stenix screamed! "Wait(hicup)...... You get a free squewaky toy!" Squeak! "I'll take the toy!" Stenix said, grabbed the toy and slammed the door. "O.k.... what just happoned?" Munch said to Abe. "A gient bolder squashed Stenix?" "Really?" "Yep!" Abe said and pointed at the squeshed glukkon! "Well.. that was stupid!" "Let's go!" Then they dodged rocks and other falling obstculs. "The entrance!" Abe said, picked up munch and ran through it! Then BOOm! CRASH! BANG! The factory explodded! "We did it!" "Yeah!"

THE END!

Did you like my story?

It was pretty funny when Stenix got smashed by a bolder! :lol: I liked this story-if it wasn't humorous, then I don't know exactly how good it would've been, but the humor is what really made it fun to read! :lol: :D

That was awesome! It was a great chapter plus a great stroy!