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T-nex 08-07-2003 04:35 PM

NOOOOO! Why stop here???
QUICK!!! Make a new episode!!!!!
*Faaaaaaaaaaaart* hehe

OH NO!!!

KABUUUUUM!!!!!!! :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

Abeguy 08-26-2003 07:29 PM

i will continue my friends but i'm still mourning over my rabbis\uncles death.:( :crying:

Abe16 08-26-2003 08:52 PM

Awwww!thats sad.:( When you're done finish being a bad boy by reading his diary:D

Abeguy 08-28-2003 07:22 PM

:

Originally posted by Abe16
being a bad boy by reading his diary:D
actully the mudokon from the story read it, not me, i just got this story in the mail a while back

oh well,

T-nex 08-29-2003 03:41 AM

Ohhh, i'm so sorry Abeguy, Thats sad.

Abeguy 09-03-2003 07:28 PM

enough mourning, it been a week, time to get on with the story!

Chapter 11:
(MULLOK)

i have come to a conclusion, terrys new name is toast, since my fave food is toast and terrys myfave slig and some day i might just eat him, his new name is toast. if i call him terry again i'll have my head cut off by a coww named john (do not ask me what a cow is but i think it's from earth). i have heard the terr... i mean toast has been keeping a diary so says a bunkmate of his and hes been reading it. he said that there a remarks that i would not be pleased with about what he thinks about me. who knows i might just be able to eat toast after all *smacks lips* yummy.
"Boss, oh mighty great powerful one!" toast comes into my office screaming.
"what, toast!" i said
"sir! theres a... What? did you call me?" he asked shocked
"toast" said i
"uh..." he stuttered "may i ask why?"
"because" i answered" my fave food is toast and your my fave slig"
"oh boss" he said "i'm not all that"
"and" i added "i might eat you someday"
"WHAT!" toast yelled
"only if i find a need to kill you like keeping secrets from me"
"NO! uh... i mean no there is no secrets just the though of me being your lunch made me jumpy"
"Okay" i said "and what? exactly where you going to tell me?"
"uh...i'll tell you when i remember"
"fine" i said
toast left
"Wait!" i said
toast stopped and turned around.
"if i do find out that you are keeping secrets from me"
i did the slit throat sign with my foot/hand.
"yes... sir"
i like my job


To be continued...



good huh?

T-nex 09-05-2003 04:55 AM

WO! Thats creepy....
Is Molluck gone insane or what??

Abe16 09-05-2003 01:41 PM

Wow and I thought Aslik was crazy thats bizzar!

Abeguy 09-05-2003 07:10 PM

thenk you, but what was crazy?

Abe16 09-05-2003 08:40 PM

Molluk eating terry I mean toast thats whats freaky!

Abeguy 09-19-2003 07:27 PM

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Originally posted by Abe16
Molluk eating terry I mean toast thats whats freaky!
he hasn't eaten him yet.
and please tell me, what is so funny about pics of teachers?

Abeguy 11-11-2003 07:35 PM

Okay


Chapter 12 (Gale)


The armor is now looking like the shell for armored big Bro Sligs (the new type of slig) and now we can go to anywhere in RF2 without suspicion from other sligs that means more food, more guns, less sligs. Molluk is thinking that we are the groups of Big Bros, but the real Big Bros are actully dead, we killed them. Toast has written more stuff, but he's not going anywhere, we captured him, wait, NO! he got away! Jerk. we were so close, with a ransome, we could've gotten out, but no! my stupid fellow muds were careless and let the varmin go! oh well, we still aren't ready to go, we need Abe, ABE! where are you? the longer we wait, the longer out chances are of being found! we cannot risk being captured! our only chance is in you Abe! okay, my mid-life crsis is over and out. well, i sure do hope we get out, i sure do

Abeguy 11-13-2003 07:14 PM

You can reply

Abe16 11-13-2003 10:57 PM

Abe is going to come back...I KNOW IT YOUR JUST GOING TALK ME INTO BUYING CARLS JR.please continue

Abeguy 12-17-2003 07:38 PM

Chapter 13 (more Terry!)

Dear Diary,

ACCK! someone has read you, wait, it's me *hits own head* well, you are bloody from me hiding you in that barrel of meat, but it's not going to be there forever, well, i won't need you for long cause i am going to escape! now, i need to find a way out, maybe take the Mudokon slaves with me,WAIT! no! i can't leave Molluck! must stay, no Abe, Abe...dead. must focus. Any Scrub trying to leave, BANG! down it goes, any Slig Betrayel, BANG! there he goes, Any Betrayel from me,BANG! there i go.I went to Mollucks office the other day and i was trying to be as calm as a cactus in the dessert, or desert, i need to keep up on my spelling.
Molluck doesn;t expect anything, but he might. must keep your eyes sharp for trouble, that's his motto. i must stay loyal!, more Sligs have died and more scrubs are gone, but, more BBS's (big bro) but they do act different than other sligs, as if they don't want to be here, New RF is doing well, I might get rid of other entrys of Molluck so if you are found, i won't get in trouble, but what are the chances of you being caug...WAIT! i here voices, no, there in my head. MY HEAD?! I'M CRAZY!
*drops book*

Abeguy 01-15-2004 11:20 AM

Might as well,

Chapter 14 (hello, Abe)

Well, we avoided brew stops, and we went on we were about to rest, when we heard a rumbling, "Eh, what's that?" Alf asked
"I dunno" Tial added "Abe?" they all asked me
"I dunno either" I said, which was the truth.
Then, out of the blue, a train wizzzed over our head. something fell out :eek:
"Looky there" I said "a bone"
"I think we're getting close" Buddy said
We looked to our right, then, to our left, and there it was...
Necrum.
"Let's go!" Tial yelled exitedly
"Yeah!" We all agreed.
We were soon at Necrum.
"Ooooh!" yelled Alf "Shade!"
"Yeah" Buddy said "Better than when we all where griping in the sun!"
"about to leave you to!" Tial said
"Then there came the train"
"And here we are" I added.
What i didn't know, was that we WEREN'T being watched

*Duhn Duhn Duhn*

Abeguy 02-10-2004 12:18 PM

Surprisingly enough, you can reply! :eek:

T-nex 02-12-2004 05:35 AM

OOOOH!!! They are NOT being watched. WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!! WILL THAY BE WATCHED??????

Abeguy 03-03-2004 11:19 AM

That was a little joke I added for no f***ing reason

chapter 15 (evil old Molluck)

"Neh" i say after seeing the latest technology in slig pants "too big"
"but sir" the slig says "they're for Big Bros"
"eh" i reply, not intrested "so what"
"So What!?" he replied as if thinking I'm crazy "they're..."
"SIR!" interupts miguel, a slig commando "look!"
there in his hands is a book, covered with slime, or blood, i dunno
"well" I say "what is it"
"It's a diary" he said "Toasts, to be precise"
"a DIARY!" I yell "you interrupt me while i'm in a meeting about your older siblings to report Toasts diary!, GUARDS!"
two guards come in.
"NO!" the slig yells "it's not what you think!"
"what do you mean!" i continue "You've caught me in one of my moods and now you shall pay!"
"No! No! Noooooooooooooooooo!" he yells as he is carried away.
minutes later, i hear a squish sound, i am satisfied.
I pick up the diary that flung out of his hands before he was carried away.
minutes later I am hitting my head on my desk repeatingly.

T-nex 03-04-2004 02:40 AM

OK, now i'm sure, Mollluck IS INSANE, and has always been. I hope he smashes his head....
Anyway, KEEP up THE GOOD WORK ;)

Abeguy 03-04-2004 11:10 AM

no, he was regreting the murder of his commando

Havoc 03-17-2004 12:44 AM

hehe, nice dude. I think il write a short fan fic myself in the near future. But since im also working on a more seruies story, it won't be that great.

Abeguy 03-17-2004 11:21 AM

I am writing a more serious story to, I havn't named it yet, but it has a character much like abe


but he's human and don't have a ponytail, it's a beanie


but he is blue :D:D:D

Abeguy 08-26-2004 11:28 AM

*blows dust off keyboard*

O.K. where was i? oh yeah, gale


CHP. 16


Great!


We have captured Toast again! we dressed up like Big Bros and he followed us without a fuss. In fact, he did not even care when we captured him, he just helled out his arms, closed his eyes and said "kill me" but no, he is now our spy and soon, he will help us out of here! i guess we don't need abe after all, that is a good thing, cause if he never comes, we'll be out already! WOO HOO! oops *slaps own head* I'll get more than a smack if i don't be quiet. well, ignorance is bliss, like that has to do with anything.
Three more minutes and than we'll set of toast to do out bidding cause it's the sligs lunch time and that is when they take roll. well, have to go! time is money!