"The Luminahi" graphic novel -

Q-Ball · #31 03-22-2010, 02:05 AM

It looks impressive mate! You have a big talent!

Oddey · #32 03-22-2010, 07:36 AM

Kind of makes me wonder what Marvin's thinking.

Keep 'em coming.

Splat · #33 03-22-2010, 05:14 PM

Matriar, your art ability really is great

It looks great and the story has already managed to be intriguing and enticing. One page ago, Yilan seemed like quite a nice guy. But this most recent page challenges that, making him appear as a sex-slave-trader.

I like how you break stereotypes

Alf Shall Rise · #34 03-22-2010, 05:53 PM

That was great! Keep them coming.

Matriar · #35 04-21-2010, 11:50 PM

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It...uh...has been more than a year since I visited the OddForums and I never believed that you're still in here. OMG.

I wonder how many old chaps are around here still. hehe
I think these forums will never die on us hardcore fans. x)

I'm not very active here but yeah, I'll always be into Oddworld. x)

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heh lol nice one

Thank you!

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It looks impressive mate! You have a big talent!

Aw, thanks!

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Kind of makes me wonder what Marvin's thinking.

Keep 'em coming.

Marvin got used to it, he knows Senanca since many years. c:

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Matriar, your art ability really is great

It looks great and the story has already managed to be intriguing and enticing. One page ago, Yilan seemed like quite a nice guy. But this most recent page challenges that, making him appear as a sex-slave-trader.

I like how you break stereotypes

Thank you very much! I like stories with scenes you can't see coming.

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That was great! Keep them coming.

Thanks a lot!

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Alright, I'm sorry for the delay... there's been a lot of things happening outside art. The most recent thing was that I got very sick last Sunday. I got a bad cold, or a fever or something (I was hot and cold, dizzy, and all my muscles hurt for some reason. I could barely sleep). I'm still a little sick but not as much. I only cough often, I should be fine by tomorrow.
And I still have to find a job too. I haven't been that successful when it comes to making money yet, lmao. But I made tons of new experiences, at least.

Blah blah blah, NEXT PAGE!

Splat · #36 04-22-2010, 04:33 AM

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I got a bad cold, or a fever or something (I was hot and cold, dizzy, and all my muscles hurt for some reason. I could barely sleep). I'm still a little sick but not as much. I only cough often, I should be fine by tomorrow.

Sounds like influenza to me... Fortunately it's only half as deadly as Gorman Disenza, so there's a good chance you'll live!

Anyway, enough of Doctor Splat; comic touched my sense of humour, too

I love how Senenca goes from furious to friendly in the blink of an eye. Can't blame Vorac for being a bit befuddled.

Oddey · #37 04-22-2010, 04:38 AM

I was befuddled too. At how amusing and well done this comic is.

STM · #38 04-22-2010, 07:19 AM

Hmmm, I'm trying to understand but the art is amazin as always!

Matriar · #39 06-01-2010, 12:33 PM

Sorry I've been busy lately, that's why this page comes in pretty late. :/
I'll try to make one page per month.

Btw thanks again to everyone who wrote the comments to my last page again!

Anyway, here's the next page!

STM · #40 06-02-2010, 01:39 PM

Yey and heh at the last frame! Made me laugh a little bit out loud And I actually don't laugh out loud that much, no matter how much lol I write. =D Glad your actively keeping this running.

Oddey · #41 06-04-2010, 12:45 PM

Again, another amusing last frame. I was wondering what was so funny for her in the last page. Now it seems we know.

Despite the wait, it was worth it.

Matriar · #42 08-15-2010, 04:50 AM

Sorry I was extremly inactive lately. Also graphic-novel-wise, I think I just needed a break. I really hope I didn't make anyone mad here. :c
But I'm back again with a new page.

By the way, it makes me happy to read all this nice feedback I get from you guys here. <:]

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Yey and heh at the last frame! Made me laugh a little bit out loud And I actually don't laugh out loud that much, no matter how much lol I write. =D Glad your actively keeping this running.

Thanks a lot! I try add at least something funny per page, I'm glad it even made someone laugh in real.

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Again, another amusing last frame. I was wondering what was so funny for her in the last page. Now it seems we know.

Despite the wait, it was worth it.

Thank you very much!

STM · #43 08-15-2010, 05:21 AM

yey, nice one

Alf Shall Rise · #44 08-15-2010, 07:33 AM

Good page, I see Vorac's father was mentioned again, and I like the character development as well. Can't wait to see the next one!

Oddey · #45 08-15-2010, 11:42 AM

This novel intrigues me more and more.

Don't worry about the break, we can wait.

Dipstikk · #46 08-22-2010, 10:29 AM

This is really great stuff. You have a knack for dialogue that I have to fake.

Matriar · #47 10-30-2010, 01:55 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Scrabtrapman, Alf Shall Rise, Oddey, and Dipstikk!

They mean a lot.

WHOAH I am so late with pages, I'm sorry. But here's page 9!

So far, the pages were mostly about introductions. Now the actual story is slowly getting started (I hope).

enchilado · #48 10-30-2010, 02:25 PM

Awesome! I had to catch up a bit because I missed a few pages, but I enjoyed all of them. This is really great.

Splat · #49 10-30-2010, 02:50 PM

Intriguing; is this his job, or some private business?

Very pretty page. Worth waiting for.

Mudokon_Master · #50 10-30-2010, 07:29 PM

I love them maybe someday they can be really big. You should publish them in the paper or something.

Oddey · #51 10-31-2010, 07:54 AM

Who could this mysterious figure he is chasing after be?

Wonderful as usual.

ziggy · #52 11-03-2010, 02:19 PM

Wow you're drawings are still really great. I haven't really followed the story though but that one (horsy thing) girl is ripped. She has like serious abs. Sorry if that was insulting but I don't really know what these creatures are supposed to be, and I'm too lazy to look into it right now. My only suggestion would be to make the speech bubbles look more professional cause they kind of take away from the images. I didn't realize you were still on here cause you changed your username, but you were actually the first person to talk to me on these forums. Could you please contribute to my "fan corner" thread I'm trying to revive? hehe. Please! I'm kind of desperate for some feedback and need more popularity in this part of the forum. Ya I know I'm begging for attention.

Matriar · #53 11-23-2010, 12:13 PM

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Awesome! I had to catch up a bit because I missed a few pages, but I enjoyed all of them. This is really great.

Thank you!

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Intriguing; is this his job, or some private business?

Very pretty page. Worth waiting for.

It's... private business, but it will get more clear later.
And thanks! c:

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I love them maybe someday they can be really big. You should publish them in the paper or something.

Thanks! I plan to find a publisher and print them as comicbook once I'm finished with the first volume (around sixty pages I think). The pages won't have the watermarks then.

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Who could this mysterious figure he is chasing after be?

Wonderful as usual.

Thanks. x)

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Wow you're drawings are still really great. I haven't really followed the story though but that one (horsy thing) girl is ripped. She has like serious abs. Sorry if that was insulting but I don't really know what these creatures are supposed to be, and I'm too lazy to look into it right now. My only suggestion would be to make the speech bubbles look more professional cause they kind of take away from the images. I didn't realize you were still on here cause you changed your username, but you were actually the first person to talk to me on these forums. Could you please contribute to my "fan corner" thread I'm trying to revive? hehe. Please! I'm kind of desperate for some feedback and need more popularity in this part of the forum. Ya I know I'm begging for attention.

The horsy girl is a sheep, lol. And no, didn't sound insulting. Senanca is a hybrid and I don't know what he is, I just like to think he has weasels, goats, and felines in his family tree. :P
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Page 10!

ziggy · #54 11-23-2010, 08:05 PM

I went back to first page and read everything you posted so far. So now, I'm following the story. Hope to see more soon. Good work.

enchilado · #55 11-25-2010, 02:35 AM

Nice! I really like his expression in the last panel.

Oddey · #56 11-25-2010, 04:19 AM

Oh that expression is hilarious. And even more amusing is how Senanca is talking about how people are asking him for money right before Marvin asks for some.

Splat · #57 11-25-2010, 04:29 AM

What does Marvin do round here to make up for all the trouble he causes?

scrabface · #58 11-25-2010, 04:31 PM

I really like the balance of your colours you use for your graphic novel.

Matriar · #59 01-02-2011, 10:55 AM

Sorry I didn't manage to make a page for December! I gotta be dead honest, that month had too many distractions, especially fun ones, and I'm weak. Ironically, there's not much happening on this new page here. The next ones will be much more full. I really should try to make two pages per month!

But wow, thank you very much for the kind feedback, guys!

You're very supporting, it helps me more than you think.

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What does Marvin do round here to make up for all the trouble he causes?

Can't tell yet, it will be shown later. ;]

STM · #60 01-02-2011, 01:08 PM

Ah yeh. Story starting to fill up? Me thinks so.