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Oddworld Imadaeth: The strongest Slig on Oddworld

= IMADAETH: THE STRONGEST SLIG ON ODDWORLD =

Notes: This story was written to satisfy my own desires. As such, there may be sections of this fanfic which you may not like. Please note that there will be a lot of deaths and extreme violence in this fanfic. So if you have a sensitive disposition you might want to skip this one

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= Prelude =
His skin was Black. His mask gave his eyes a yellow tint.
He was bigger and more muscular than the typical Slig.

On the day of his birth, he killed 3 interns with his bare hands.
A month after his birth, he killed his Vykker master and escaped.
Two months after he was born, he massacred a Slig battalion as if it was nothing.

His destruction would continue forever.
This is the tale of the strongest Slig on Oddworld.

= = =

Beware the darkness,
Beware the night,
A flame appears to extinguish the light.

Death lurks,
Evil howls,

The killer, prowls...

= = =

"Well, is it alive?", the Vykker asked hopefully. The Intern mumbled excitedly. "Excellent", the Vykker clasped his hands together, rubbing them, facing the other way for a moment.

Suddenly, a spurt of blood flew past the Vykker's head. The Vykker instantly froze, his smile still on his face, afraid to even move a muscle for fear of retalliation.

The Vykker slowly turned his head, the Intern was dying, screaming in agony. The heart was clutched in the hand of the newborn Slig, still beating. The newborn Slig giggled at his new toy to play with. He threw it on the floor, hearing it make a sickening noise as it hit the floor.

"What the?", the Vykker was speechless. He couldn't believe that a newborn could have done something like that. Surely it was just an accident?

"Seize it!", he shrieked. The two Interns put their hands on the newborn's shoulders. But at that instant the newborn's smile faded. He put his hand on one of the Intern's arms, and with no effort at all, he ripped it clean off the Intern's shoulders. The arm flew through the air, hitting the ground.

"This can't be happening". The Vykker could hardly believe what was happening. The other intern was about to strike the newborn on the head with his baton, but the newborn stuck his hand right into the Intern's head. He felt the crunch of the bones and felt the brain juices flowing out, still warm.

The armless Intern was clutching his bloody stump on the floor, crying in pain.

Spotting him, the newborn jumped off the table and onto the Intern's body. The instant he jumped onto the body, it was crushed underneath him. The body didn't show any resistance at all, it sank right down to the same level as the floor. Unbelievably flat, like a rolling pin on a pancake.

The Vykker couldn't contain himself, he fled the room and locked the door behind the newborn. The newborn was dangerous. This was impossible.

The Slig was getting sick of these stupid tests, It's been a month by now and he was getting very restless. He would definately escape today.

The Vykker came into the room. He had discovered that wearing the armor protected him from the newborn. Unluckily for him, he had been on holiday and had forgot to measure the strength of the newborn every day like he should have. He walked into the room as usual, but he realised too late, that the Slig was becoming absurdly stronger as each day passed.

The Slig was bored of his master's stupid whining voice. He jumped into the air and punched his head clean off. It hit the ground with a satisfying crunch.

"Maybe I can get out of this dump now". He turned, and walked out of the room. Alarms were sounded. A group of armored Sligs approached him, guns held out.

"Freeze!", they yelled. The escaped Slig continued walking. If they expected him to raise his arms, they were mistaken. The escaped Slig just shrugged, and started walking towards them menacingly.

"Hey, back off pal", the tallest armored Slig yelled. When the escapee didn't respond to his request, the armored Slig fired his gun at it.

At first, it would seem like the bullet went into the target, the Slig smiled but then dropped the smile instantly. In fact, it had just been crushed as it hit the surface. It hadn't gone into the skin at all. It was like a lump of jelly hitting a steel girder. Even the impact area was clean, spotless, as if nothing happened.

"What the thunk?!". He fired again and again... but none of the bullets penetrated the escapee. They just rebounded or stuck to the body, as if they were not even affecting him in the slightest.

The other Sligs screamed and started running as he approached them... but the Slig who fired was dumbfounded, he couldn't believe what his eyes were telling him.

"What the heck are you?". He yelled, moving backwards to the wall.

"I", said the escapee, walking right up the Slig, "am everything wrong with this world, begone". He head-butted the Slig with as much force as he could muster. When he moved back, there wasn't a single part of the Slig's head left, a sickening dent left into the wall behind him. All that was left was the neck bone, connected to the torso like some unfinished robot. The blood flowed down to the floor, forming a puddle of red liquid.

He kicked the body to the floor, and walked away.
The escapee turned, his back now facing towards the laboratory.

His name was Imadaeth.
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Nice. You keep sorta jumping all over the place. Indstead of making a heading say "One Month Later" Just sart the paragraph with something like:

It's been a month since the birth of the abnormaly strong slig and he has been growing tiresome of the doctors test...

Other than that; Good Job!

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Thats good. Maybe make it go down three lines. Or Put a -------------- in beween to show a change of setting.
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great stuff

hope to see what happens next.
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The title reminds me of the hardest difficulty setting in RTCW.

What Slig75 said.
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Return to Castle Wolfenstein?
I remember the difficulty names on the first one and Doom.
"Can I Play Daddy?" / "I'm too young to die".

This story could take a few interesting twists. Thanks for the comments. I'll try and juggle all of my fanfics
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It's called "I'm Death Incarnated!". That is, for those who don't know, death as a person. Still pondering on how you summon the free time to write that much.
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Haha, well I'm not at University at the moment. I tend to write a lot of the stories on the fly as much as possible. I love making good fanfics, because I can enjoy them myself

I thought it would make for an interesting character name.
I was thinking of adding zombie creatures to this, but I'll have to think about it.
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Isn't that a bit obvious? It's kind of easy to work out where the originates from.

Can't wait for more.
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For the curious ones out there, here is a picture of Imadaeth;
I am working on some new chapters for my other fanfics. I'll kick start the second armament series, and also post a few other chapters every so often. I'll try and post one chapter per every two working weekdays

Glad you all like it so far. Thank you for your continued support

I quite like the Grim Reaper character in the Terry Pratchett Novels. Gotta read more of his work
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Wouldn't the strongest slig on Oddworld be a BBS? Or is your charecter yet to have his bowl of steroid cereal?
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Interesting theory. Imadaeth is basically an escaped expermental Slig. As of yet, he has pretty limited knowledge of the world so he probably doesn't know anything about medicine or steroids.

I guess one way of getting rid of Imadaeth would be to get a BBS, experiment with him in the same way, and then set him against Imadaeth, but that poses three problems;

1) What if the BBS goes mad and kills the Vykkers who created him?
2) After he kills Imadaeth (if it's possible), what's to stop him turning on his creators?
3) What if he joins up with Imadaeth and becomes an unstoppable fighting team?!

Imadaeth seems to be immune to most things, but he has no extra-ordinary skills or techniques as far as I know

I based this character on Neo, or a GM character from a MMORPG.
He appears to be immortal and has very tough skin
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I really don't see the point of this story. It just seems like a gorefest to me.
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I find that comment to be quite unfair actually. You've got plenty of violence in your fanfic, I can't see a gigantic leap in gore from my story and yours.

I'm still trying to think of a good plotline to tie in the immortality and strength.
I did warn there would be violence in this one.

Besides, why do people buy "Reservoir Dogs/Pulp Fiction/Mad World/Smash TV/Mortal Kombat" etc? There is a reason for everything. Just as you had a reason for commenting, I have a reason for writing this fanfic
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= A month later =

Imadaeth was choking another Slig to death. "Stop 'im yer fools stop 'im!", a leader Slig yelled. About fifty Sligs came in the room, shooting at the rogue Slig. All the bullets bounced off him, some of them rebounding and hitting the Sligs who were firing. "Frak, this guy is invincible or summat".

The Sligs attempted to hit Imadaeth but they were not nearly strong enough. Imadaeth started punching, kicking and shoulder-barging them out of the way. He beat Slig after Slig until about twenty five of them were on the floor injured. The other Sligs tried to flank him from the other side, but he did a leg sweep and knocked five of them over.

A few minutes later all of the Sligs were lying on the floor, clutching their injuries.
He spotted one squirming, lifted his leg and brought it down with a crunch, breaking the Slig's skull and cracking his head right open.

"Fools", Imadaeth cracked his knuckles and left the room.

= Meanwhile =

"Yes it has escaped. Yes I know it's bad. No, he doesn't know anything about why he was created. No he has no idea about the DeathSprout or the source of his invincibility"

The Vykker was speaking on a phone, looking outside the window.

"He's killed hundreds of Sligs now, it's impossible to stop him... No we can't create another, even if we did, how would we be able to control it? A BBS experiment? I doubt it...".

The Vykker looked at the phone, shock on his face. "Get him to join us? You think he'd accept?... Oh right, you're going to force him into it? I'm not sure that will work".

The Vykker put the phone down. "Frak, this is pointless, why didn't we make a failsafe?".

Imadaeth came across a mudokon. The mudokon stopped scrubbing the floor and looked at him. Imadaeth just walked past it, "I don't care about those daft things, Whatever... I'll kill whoever tries to kill me and no one else".

= * = * =

This is the end of the story from Imadaeth's perspective. However, Imadaeth's 'body' might re-appear in another fanfic. I'll give you a clue, it involves the Mudokon
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Is that it? Short... But enjoyable nonetheless. I'd like to see him come back in another fan-fic.
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Juuust watch he doesn't become a Mary sue, what with his vykker experiment cliché, uuber strength, invincibility and all. He's gotta have a weakness somewhere, I mean I reckon the Vykkers labs or Magog Cartel could just drop a big steel box on him.
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I find that comment to be quite unfair actually. You've got plenty of violence in your fanfic, I can't see a gigantic leap in gore from my story and yours.
Yeah, but my fic doesn't involve ripping off the arms of interns and watching them roll around in puddles of their own blood. ...wait
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It's funny you should mention Mary Sue. This fanfic was written as a kind of 'dare', while I was talking to one of my fellow fanfiction writers . But I admit, this story is getting a bit stale. I'm going to try and inject some life into it. In fact, this story deserves a semi-reboot. In the next chapter I'll go back and reveal how he was created. Then I'll continue with my new plotlines.

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Yes Moosh, your fanfic does invovle interns getting there arms/hands cut/ripped off by a vykker experiment/monster-type-thing. Except your fan-fic the monster isn't exactly invinceable but is very close. And involves the violent murder of tons of sligs, interns and vykkers... Unfair statement coming from you. What with Carl and all.

I don't really find this story stale, but I like the massive jump in time from the escape to the battalion destroying. Flashback-type-things are always cool so continue.
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The thing about Neddid was, even though he was strong, he was still mortal like anyone else. Only he could have survived with a badly mangled arm and one eye missing, and odd knows what other injuries. Expect an interesting continuation now!

= Three Months Ago =

"Not another experiment... okay what's it this time?". The Vykker grinned at his friend. "Haha, I'll tell you. An experimental Slig". The other Vykker raised an eyebrow, "Oh really? What did you give him, a metal arm?". "No way, it's a lot more complex than that".

"Muscle fortifiers, compound analysers, steel plated spine, enhanced vision, enhanced sense of smell, thick skin... THIS is my greatest creation". He revealed a small pulsating egg to the other Vykker. "Hmmmm, well it doesn't look tough yet", the other Vykker laughed, "Even the egg is made of titanium". "You give mad scientists a bad name", the other Vykker sat down on the chair. "Having second thoughts?", "Nah, Just wondering... what exactly is this for?".

"That's the beauty of it, there are multiple possible uses; security, test subject..."

The Vykkers left the room, leaving the egg in the room.

= Next Fortnight =

"This time I've programmed him, mentally. He will automatically try to kill as many people as he can". "And you can control that?", the Vykker gave a glance towards the other. "Well, we shall soon find out. I'll raise him to be a killing machine".

Meanwhile, a bunch of Mudokons were chanting in a native village about an hour's walk away. They were practicing a forbidden and dark kind of magic. They have had enough of the nearby factories and wanted to pray to the almighty gods for a miracle. Their bodies began to fade away, as their energies were sacrificed. As their bodies began to disappear into nothing... the egg glowed. The Mudokon's souls departed... the egg shone brighter and brighter. A Vykker headed towards the lab door. The glowing stopped as the Vykker entered the room. The Vykker picked up something from the shelf and walked out of the room.

A godly voice spoke, "Little one, you have been giving the gift of immortality to change the world. You are cursed to forever remain in the mortal realm. Your curse will never be lifted". The godly voice disappeared. The egg moved slightly, but would not hatch for a while yet.

= Back to the Present Day =

The Mudokon, called Neso smiled. "This guy is my ticket out of here, if I can possess him, I can get past the guards!".
Neso started chanting. Suddenly blue light surrounded Imadaeth. He was possessed.

The Mudokon's vision was now obsured with a light red glow. His breathing felt more heavy, and his hands were visibly different. He now had four fingers, and instead of feet, his nerve endings were reacting with the heavy metal pants of the Slig.

"Hmmm, now I have to find somewhere to hide my body for a while". He picked up his Mudokon body, and placed it in a gap in the wall. As soon as he turned around, he heard a strange hissing noise. He turned around to see the Mudokon body behind a pane of glass. "What the?!". The body was being frozen, he watched worryingly, not knowing what to do. He tried to press a button, but the computer voice issued from the panel, "ACCESS DENIED: PROCESS OF FREEZING IS IRREVERSABLE WITHOUT PROPER CLEARANCE". "B-But my body!!! I have to get it back!". He tried to cancel the possession, but he couldn't. With no body to go to, his soul was trapped inside the Slig.

He felt the urge to hit the glass, this was probably Imadaeth's supressed soul, calling out to Neso... trying to get him to kill something. Neso sighed, what have I gotten myself into now?!

A voice inside Neso's head appeared, "Hello there". Neso spun around, but didn't see anyone. "You can't see me. After all, you're inside MY body after all". Neso jumped back in surprise. "You mean, you're the one I'm possessing?!", "Bingo". Neso was visibly confused. "This doesn't normally happen when I possess things...", "Ah, but I am not 'normal' after all". "You mean, that rampaging Slig was you?", "Yup, but I wasn't rampaging. I was just doing my duty", "Killing Sligs is your duty?", "Well... more of a hobby actually".

Neso held out his arm, "Do we share control?", "Unfortunately you are in full control of my body... although I can do a few things". Imadaeth held out his hand. Neso looked shocked, but he retained control and put his arm back by his side. "You can take control whenever you feel like it. But whenever you relax your body, I can take control if I wish... of course when you sleep, then I am also forced to go to sleep as well. Although I can dive into your subconcious and go into stasis for as long as I..."

Neso held his head, "Ouch, too much information man". "Sorry, I tend to do that a lot. My name is Imadaeth by the way". Neso shook out his hand in mock fashion. "I'm Neso". Neso moved the arm as if he was shaking thin air. "Hahaha, very amusing... I think I'll like being controlled by you. This could be fun".

Neso shook his head, no-one is going to believe this...
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