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Originally posted by Abe-gun
I suck at poems.
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No you don't. You have posted some really good ones, Abe-gun.
Hey, nice poem, Danz.... Oh, ferill....I see you have taken an interest in the thread
. Although, I noticed that you have only commented on Danz's poems, none of mine. I have come up with a number of plausable reasons for this:
1) You haven't seen the whole thread, asd most of my better poems are much more farther up.
2) You thought they were very igneramic (is that a word?), therefore choosing not to comment on their cr*ppiness.
3) You couldn't be bothered to read them, therefor having no comment.
4) You just....didn't comment for various reasons above.
(j/k)
Anyways, I have created another poem for your pleasure, or rather, displeasure.... Right, here goes:
I stand and wait
Alone by the river,
I stand and wait,
By the setting sun,
I know you're late.
As the clouds gather,
The lightenning streaks,
And a tear falls,
Down my cheak.
As darkness falls,
I gaze over the lake,
My eyes tire,
As my heart breaks.
I spend my life
Waiting for you,
I used to love you,
And you loved me too.
But now I stand, all alone.
I go from love to hate,
And in the darkness, by the river,
I stand alone and wait
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Oddchick
*goes to read all of Alpha's poems again*
Abegun....Relax, I did not copy the song....I just used the idea, anyway, I like the singer. If you must know, it was from Avril Lavigne's "I'm with you". The first lines go: