the scrab pit part 1/3

[slogster]

in the deaths of oddworld
thair are monsters
monsters like the clumsy slig
or the mighty scrab
part 1
abe a modokien
is on a vacation with his mate alf
suddenly a great light apears in
front of them both
they screm in terrior
as something falls out of the light
(witcth is actuly a portal)
about a dozen humans come out
they are confused
5 sligs are also spying on them
and guese what they have 5
little friends with them
they are slogs
they comand them to attack
and they cature them all
the next thing tey know there hanging
in the air above a pit
full of scrabs......
end of part 1

[slogster]

part 2
well good bye my freinds abe says to every one
u 2 abe u 2
suddenly another light fills the room this time 1 object
flys out this 1 was to dark 2 see
im shadow
were am i????????????
your in a meat plant dummy
and u gotta save us
plese
he just pounted 2 the pit and it ell 2 bits
1 HOUR LATER
well now were free lets get to know other
abe says
indeed continues alf
im amy says a girl in the back
im mason says a little lad
im sean says another lad
when every one finsed every one set off 2
the meat plant they were in before
they came face 2face with monsterson the way
but made it unharmed
they soon came 2 the main entirance of the plant
the door was open
unplesant said amy
theyjust came 2 be slog food
because they are in the slog kennels............
TO BE CONTINUED

[Facsimile]

Slogster it great for you to want to write a fanfic but you cannot do this. If you post your story chapter by chapter then it has to be all on the same thread. As in go back to your part 1/3 and click the reply button and post this chapter there, and the last piece there as well. I hope you read this before you create your third.

[Al the Vykker]

Thankyou for informing him Facsimile.

Yes Slogster since you are a newcomer on the forums, I will allow this once. next time I will start giving out warnings. I merged your two threads together so they will still be here, but I hope you will read this, and know that you cant just keep posting your next chapters for your Fan Fiction as new threads. Reply to your stories instead, when updating your chapters. And wait for feedback its much easier on all of us including myself. A friendly reminder to you.

-Sincerely Al the Vykker Fan Corner Moderator