Oddworld Blargs Oddyssy new!

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Ok I think my story has moved to the second page so now I am going to start where I left off here.

Chapter 9: Blargs meeting of Nod!

Back in the dark room on the Vykkers 2 ship Blarg laid helplessly on the table. Blarg new he was in trouble and he had to get out of there. Luckily for Blarg's sake he manage to shut down the power with his powers just before Herry the Vykker was about to operate. It bought Blarg some time to plan his escape.

As Blarg laid there straped he started to here a funny noise. This noise sounded as if smeone was in the room with him. Blarg started to panic. Who's there? Said Blarg. Shshsh it's me. said the mysterous character. Who are you? My name is Nod I am here to rescue you. Nod? Yea Nod thats my name. How did you know I was comeing? I called you in my mind Nod. That explanes why I am here. Mann you are an intresting creature Nod explaned.

Why I had a dream that I was doing this Nod explaned. I also had a dream about me controling an entire army on a beach. I know said Blarg. I gave that dream so you know what you need to do. I also Telepathically talked to Abe, Munch, and Squeek. They too are part of my plan. Said Blarg. What plan will that be? asked Nod. You will find out soon enough said Blarg. Lets get out of here.

Suddenly the two heard talking coming from behind the sliding door. It's Vykkers quick lets hide yelled Blarg. The power started up again and all of the lights flikkered on. There no place to hide yelled Blarg. Blarg hold on to me I will use my power. When Blarg held on to Nod. Nod became invisible. Then Nod used his power to make an image on the table where Blarg was straped so the Vykkers won't know that Blarg escaped.

Aw the so called new creature miss me little thing! said Harry. Harry then picked up his knife and began the surgery. Lets see now where did I left off. Aw yes the leg. Hold still because this is going to hurt a whole lot ahaha. When Harry started to cut the leg off on the image The image of Blarg started to flikker. What this? A hologram! Guards we have a visitor. Find them and kill them screamed Harry.

Lets go said Nod. If you stay on my sholders we will stay invisible. Anything I touch that is an innocent creature they turn invisible along with me. so hold on said Nod.
The two were sneaking pass the Inturns and Nod accedently kicked a fuzzel. Mememe yelled the Fuzzel. What I am sorry my little friend. Hey little fuzzel can you do me a favor. Kill those nasty Inturns for me. ME ME! said the fuzzel.
Then as Blarg and Nod left the room invisible a whole pack of fuzzels come flying into the room starting to eat all the Inturns. The door shut and the two were gone. As for those Inturns. Lets just say they are Fuzzel feed now.

[Al the Vykker]

Great, more more must have more.null

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Chapter 10 a lost profacy

As we know now Abe, Munch, Squeek, Nod, Alf, and Blarg are searching for each other. Back in the deasert Alf was sitting on a rock drinking some water. He was taking a rest from his long hike up the river to the deasert.

Phew it's hot. Boy I hope I find my friends. Are they dead or they alive? Mann get a hold of yourself your talking to no one but a slurg.

As Alf was slurping his water he did not realise what was happening in the distance. A strange black orb was floating in the air. It started wispering Come Alf! Come Alf! Whats that said Alf. Come Alf Come Alf! Repeated the orb. Then suddenly Alf was teleported by this strange hovering black Orb.

For this orb was something special. It was an object of infanity. On the outside of the strange object it was the size of a bowling ball but in the inside it was infanity. Alf was teleported inside of this black Orb. Alf apeared in an endless black void of emptyness.

Where am I and What is this place said Alf. You are part of infanity said the voice of the orb. I am called the lost profacy said the voice. I was created a long time ago by the creature who is really special. You mean Blarg? Yes replyed the voice. Blarg is my creater. Whats your purpose asked Alf? I will tell you the story of Blarg my fellow stich lip.

My name describes me completly said the voice. I am the only one who knows Blargs destiny and his purpose. For I am a product of him. Blarg is the most powerful creature of Oddworld. In the beginning long before there were even races existing on Oddworld. Before the Raisin and the wise elders there was nobody. Oddworld was a waistland bombarded by firey rocks from the sky. Out of the primordal soup arised the first creature of Oddworld. The creature was Blarg. He was born from the planet. He has no queen. His mother is the land. When he was born he was extremly powerful. He started creating creatures of all types. by stiring up the pimordal soup. Yes even you my fellow stitch lip. he created the queens of Oddworld to give birth to the races. He started nameing each creature from Glukkens to Mudokins and Gabbits and so forth and so on.

He grew so powerful he even created me. I am a living message from the past searching for my creator. Once I find him the profacy will be fulfilled. What profacy is that? asked Alf. The profacy of Oddworld of coarse. It is important you keep Blarg alive. If he dies you die, Oddworld dies. You see Blarg is imortal. He was born imortal. Blarg is Oddworld. He dies Oddworld dies. He is one to bring an end to war of the land. All races will gather and cheer with joy for the victory of Oddworld is at hand. In dreams he called the five great heros of Oddworld to help him on his quest. The Mudokin Abe, The gabbit Munch, The plexon Squeek, The robex named Nod, and there is one more out there he is Sling the slukken. With the help and protection of these great heros Blarg will bring piece. You My fellow stich lip are the great traveler. You will guide me to Blarg. When I reach him I will become part of him once again and Blarg will regain his strength and knowledge of everything. I can't do this without your help Alf. All of you are special to Blarg don't forget it.

Wait I need more information. Suddenly Alf was teleported out of the lost profacy orb. The orb started flying around Alf and then Alf beathed the Orb in threw his mouth. Now Alf had the knowledge to deliver.

[Al the Vykker]

That was your best chapter yet. Keep writing. When I am finished with my story I will give you the first full copy.

[Teal]

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Well, it's... interesting. I would comment further, but it's rather hard to read. You may want to put speech marks in and separate it out so it's easier on the eye. That way your reader isn't so daunted at the prospect of trying to figure out who's saying what and when, making it more enjoyable to read, so you get more readers.

For instance, instead of:

As Alf was slurping his water he did not realise what was happening in the distance. A strange black orb was floating in the air. It started wispering Come Alf! Come Alf! Whats that said Alf. Come Alf Come Alf! Repeated the orb. Then suddenly Alf was teleported by this strange hovering black Orb.

you might want to put:

     As Alf was slurping his water he did not realise what was happening in the distance. A strange black orb was floating in the air. It started whispering "Come Alf! Come Alf! "
     "What's that?" said Alf.
     "Come Alf, Come Alf!" Repeated the orb.
     Then suddenly Alf was teleported by this strange hovering black Orb.

See? Nark.

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Chapter 11 lost

It was the next morning and A feeco train came flying by a fleech feeding on a paramite carcas. Abe, Munch, and Squeek were on there way to a Feeco Depot.

When we get to the Feeco Depot were going to have to find a blimp since Vykkers Labs is a floating fortress said Abe. You think we will find Blarg? Asked Munch. Of coarse we will replyed Abe. Why do you ask that Munch? Well since I was taken by Vykkers a long time ago I know what they can do said Munch. Lets just say that I hope Blarg knows what to do. Theres many scary things about Vykkers said Munch. Very desturbing things said Munch. Don't worry Munch he will be ok. Replied Abe. If I know situations like these he is probbally finding a way to get out of there said Abe.

All of a sudden the train came to a screeching stop. Whats going on? Asked Squeek. I don't know said Abe. Lets get off and check it out said Squeek. The three jumped off the train onto a small platform that was part of the train. Why would we just suddenly stop like that in the middle of no where? said Munch.
Hey guys look at this! yelled squeek. What do you see? Asked Abe. We were sukkered into taking this train said Squeek. Look, the fuel tank has blown to bits. I think some sligs attached some bombs to the fuel tank and it started leaking. Great what do we do now? cried Munch. Well I guess we have to walk said Abe.


I will fly ahead to see if there is any danger said Squeek.
Squeek then swooped ahead to scout the area. Nobody was around. But then Squeek notice that the region they were in was a marsh land. He only knew that they just stoped in the the great swamp expanse of Mudos.

Guy's I have good news and some bad news said Squeek. whats the good news? Asked Munch. Well there is nobody around to catch us and.... And what asked Abe? Well the bad news is that we are lost said Squeek. Lost? oh know what are we going to do? cried Munch. We stopped in the great swamp lands of Mudos and it has been known that travelers get lost in this unexplored wilderness explained Squeek. I heard of monsters who live in these parts said Abe. We are going to have to be careful cried Munch. Lets go said Abe. And the three were off in the swamp finding there way out. We can't follow the tracks because this track is not complete said Squeek. What are we going do! cried Munch.

Are friends are now lost in the swamp lands and they need to get out. What creatures lurk in these dark shadowy swamps? Will they ever find Blarg?

[Al the Vykker]

I really like how you describe the characters such as Squeek, putting your theories to work.

[Teal]

*wonders why she bothers, sometimes*

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Chapter 12 Glukken meeting

Back in the Hall of Larva Lady Margret was calling the Glukkens to a personal meeting. Margret suspected that something was up with the naturalist. To Margret it seemed as if the Naturalist were comeing together for some kind of important event that is going to happen in the future. She wasant sure why all the low life forms of Oddworld were merging as one force. So she called for a meeting.


"My fellow Gluk's, something strange is happening with the naturalist's right now, and we have to find out what it is."
The Glukken crowd started talking to each other about this situation. "What are we going to do Margret?" Asked one of the Gluk's.
"Yea your majesty we need some answers." Said another Glukken in the crowd.
"It seems to me that we are all concern about this." "We need to find someone out there who know's or thinks he know's what's going on." explained Margret.

Then after Margret explained the situation a mysterous ceo came walking in the chamber with a group of sligs sorounding him. This Glukken was hooded so nobody could see his face and find out who he is. "You, hooded Gluk, come forth." Said Margret.
"Who are you and why do you ware a hood over your face?" Asked Margret. "My name is not important, and I had an accedent a while back with a mudokin." "That is why I hide my face" Explained the mysterous glukken. "Very well, what do you have for us gluk?" Asked Margret.

"I have some information for you concerning the recient event's with the natural community." "Lady Margret, is it correct that you have been visited by three of Oddworld's most wanted criminal's?" Explain the mysterous glukken. "Why yes." Repled Margret. "I have been traveling for a long time now and I have notice naturalist coming this far north into Mudos." "That did not seem right to me since Alot of the naturalist stay south" Explained the mysterous glukken.

"The other day I visited with the Vykker's new lab to tour it." "The Vykker that was running it showed me this new creature they found in the desert with Abe and Munch." "They snatched this creature up and was going to conduct surgery on it." Explained the hooded glukken. "I believe that this is what the natural community is comeing for." "This new creature asked Margret, What is he?" "I don't know but I will find out." Said the hooded glukken.

"All that I know is that the naturalist are searching for this creature and we have to beat them to it." "Why?" Asked Margret.
"Why do we need to be so concern about the creature?" Explained Margret. "It is not why it is what." Said the hooded glukken. "It is the creature I am worried about." "He seems to have unusal powers that control entire nations." "If we get a hold of him we could make him do are bidding." Explaned the hooded glukken.

"I never seen this kind of being before." And what I have seen thus far is something that could possibly help the Magog regain strength." "He is easily convinced in believing others around him." "So what do you say Margret?" "Let's take him in and take good care of the creature so he can become one of us." explained the hooded glukken.

"I like it said Lady Margret." "As of today my fellow gluk's we will concentrait on one thing." Explained Margret. "And that is the creature in which the naturalist want." "We now live in a new era." "The Magog Cartel will be victorous over the land!" Enthusiastically put by Lady Margret. "Let us march forward for the creature awaits." Explained Margret.

The crowd starts cheering for this new plan seemes to be the perfect plan in Margrets mind. As the crowd leaves the chamber Lady Margret thanks the hooded glukken for the idea.

"Thankyou hooded glukken we shall be victorous because of you." Explained Margret. "I will reward you 65 billion moolah." You are indeed the greatest Glukken since Molluck." Said Margret.

"Thankyou Margret and I will reveal myself to you soon enough." Explained the hooded glukken. Then the Hooded Glukken disappeared in the shadows laughing for his plan is working and he just made a profit with Lady Margret of coarse.


Who is this hooded glukken and will the Magog get a hold Blarg?

[Al the Vykker]

I know who he is! Great chapter described perfect!

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Chapter 13 Sea Bound

Deep in the dark halls of the Vykkers 2 ship, Blarg and Nod were running for their lives from a bunch of fleeches and slogs. For the two were nearing a poop chute to escape the labs.

"Nod...Slow down!" Yelled Blarg. "Why Blarg we are almost to the poop chute." "If we stop now we will be eaten." "Comeon!" Yelled Nod.

Then suddenly the two quickly jumped in the poop chute and were safe at the moment.

"Quick close the door Blarg." The door shut and Blarg and Nod were inside. An alarm started ringing and all of a sudden the hatch opened.

"Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah SPLASH"! Blarg and Nod were finally out of the labs. Luckily for Blarg sake his balloon like mouth acted like a small floatation device. The two landed in the middle of the turbulant great sea of Oddworld.

"Nod hold on to me, I will keep us a float." Yelled Blarg.
Massive waves started throwing are friends all back and forth. Thunder cracked through the sky and lightening flshed wildly Then all of a sudden the storm started to settle down and the sea became calm again.

"Thank odd we are out of there" Said Blarg. "Why are we out at sea asked Nod?"

"There is only one reasion why I think we are at sea" explaned Blarg. "The Vykkers are going to a place called Dark island." "The other day when I was straped to the table I over heard the Vykker talking to a strange glukken." "They were talking about a lost island off the coast of Mudos" After that the Vykker and the glukken started laughing about it." Explaned Blarg. "I don't quite know what it was about but I bet it has to do with me." Explaned Blarg.

"We have to follow the ship to that island and find out what is on there." Explaned Blarg.

As the sun was setting in the west and the huge storm was in the distance flashing, Blarg and Nod were floating not too far behind the Vykkers ship.

What is this island that Blarg speaks of? Time will only tell.

[Al the Vykker]

Sorry I have not updated my story but wait to till the weekend. Your story is looking good and you have great descriptions!

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Chapter 14 Sea rex dance

It was late at night and Blarg and Nod were still a drift in the sea. The Vykkers 2 ship was still not too far from them. The sea was calm and Blarg and Nod were sleeping while staying a float. The breeze gently blew over their faces.

Blarg began to wake up. "Nod wake up." "We are still at sea." "Wha...What Oh we are still here." Said Nod. "I am going back to sleep." "Nod I thought I felt something touch my legs." "Are you sure Blarg." "Yes Nod I am sure." "I think it could be something big." explaned Blarg.


"You are just dreaming Blarg." How could I be dreaming I just woke up." "Shut up I am going to go back to sleep!" "You are the one thats dreaming said Blarg."

As the two were argueing on who was dreaming or sleeping. About one hundred yards awey from them there was something happening.

"I told you I want to sleep so leave me alone!" Yelled Nod. Then suddenly A massive fin came flying out of the water like a whale.

"Shish, I think we are not alone." Said Blarg.
Then suddenly the beast rose out of the water like a submerine resurfacing.

"Ahah! Sea rex!" "Swim Blarg swim." The creature started swimming faster and faster towords them. "We are going to die darn it!" Said Blarg. Then the sea rex opened his massive mouth and started swallowing everything in it's path.

"Ahahahaha! We are going in." With out a doubt our two friends were swallowed up by the Sea rex. The Sea rex then dove back under water.

The sea Rex swam deeper and deeper to the sea floor
Not to far from where our friends were swallowed a group gabbits were in the area.


"Hey look a sea rex." Said one of the gabbit's
"Mann it's going down pretty fast it must just got done eating something." Said another gabbit. Then one of the gabbits said "Maybe we should follow it." "Why do you say that?" I don't know something tell's me we shoud follow it." then the group of gabbits went after and followed the sea rex to the sea floor.

Are Blarg and Nod doomed forever?

[Al the Vykker]

THats great how you put the searex in there.

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Chapter 15 Vykkers ruins!

As Alf and the lost profacy were leaving the deasert they stumbled upon the first Vykkers Labs.
The untire ship was covered in trees and vines and other forrest growth. There was this massive hole in one of the sides of the Lab.

"Lets go in said the lost profacy". Then Alf walked slowly up to the ship and walked into the dark hole that was in the side of the ship. "Hello anybody here? yelled Alf". Then nobody answered. "I guess it is safe". Then Alf and the Lost Profacy disipeared into the dark depths of the Labs.

As Alf was traveling throughout the labs walking over hundreds of broken fuzzel cages. Alf started talking to the Lost profacy about old stories he heard about these Labs. He rememberd sitting by camp fires listening to Abe ramble on about his adventure with Munch through Vykkers Labs and how he saved his unborn breatheren of the Mudokin socity. Alf also learned how Abe rescued Sam from these stories that Abe told. In many ways Alf felt jealous for Abe because Abe was considered a hero to the Mudokin nation. After all Alf started the Rehab and Tea for depressed Mudokins. Alf alweys woundered why he wasent really honored.

But he knew that it just wasant his destiny. Alf knew now that he was on an important mission not only for his race but for everyone. Thats what the Lost profacy was saying to him back in the deasert.

Suddenly Alf came up to a large slideing door that was sparking. "Open it said the Lost Profacy". Then the door opened up to a large room. "This must be it said Alf". "This must be the room in which they kept Munch in." There was still some little power left for the lights were still flikkering. As Alf started walking towords the center of the room he started to notice a strange thing at the bottom of the ramp. He could not really tell what it was because the lights were not as bright. As Alf was aproaching the so called object it started to take shape. As he got closer and closer it started to look like two objects.

"What is that? said Alf." "Whoe.....! wow what a horrible sight Alf explaned." Alf just stumbled upon the oddest looking sight ever seen. It was two standing Vykker skeletons holding each other. Alf only knew these Vykkers had to have been the famous Humphery and Irwen. "What a horrible way to die." Explained Alf.

Suddenly a small noise came from the darkness. "Who's there?"
What is in the room with Alf? And why is Alf in the Vykkers Labs?

[Al the Vykker]

Thats awsome! hope you don't find my skeleton!
Kepp writing.

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Thanks Al I plan on haveing at least ten more chapters left in my story it is really a long one because every day I am comeing up with so many new ideas but now I see the end of this. After I am finnish I plan to write other stories That are comeing to mind. Like for instance I have this idea about what it is like on other conteninets of Oddworld. I am comeing up with new creatures and characters. And plus I want to give characters we already know about a little twist to them so there will be a new story comeing soon. I think I will finnish this in a weak or two weaks or so. It's getting close.

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chapter 16 escape from the Sea Rex

As the gabbits were following the beast to the sea floor Blarg and Nod were actually alive trying to escape from the belly of the sea rex.


"Quick we have to get out of here Blarg." "I know Nod, this a bad situation we are in right now but I called for some help Nod."

"Who is that Blarg?" "Just as we were being swallowed I telepathically called a group of gabbits in the area to get us out." "You amaze me Blarg I mean it's like you know what is going to happen in the future."

Just as the creature made it to the sea floor the gabbits started to attack the beast with there musical voices. The song of the gabbits seemed to make the sea rex fall asleep. When this happened it started to float back to the surface.

"Somethings happening Blarg." "We seem to be heading up words." "Yea I notice that too Nod, here that, The gabbits are singing to the creature to make him sleep." Explaned Blarg.

At the surface there were these bubbles comeing out of the water for it was the Sea rex. Then suddenly the sleeping beast came flying out of the water. The Sea rex was still asleep and the gabbits were still singing to it. One of the Gabbits hopped into the creatures mouth and swam up into the belly where Blarg and Nod were.

"hey you, we are here to rescue you." Said the gabbit. "We don't have much time the Sea rex will only be asleep for a short time." explaned the gabbit. "Ok lets go said Blarg." And the three were climbing their way out. Just as they got out the Sea rex awakened.

But the Sea rex was really frighten by this massive creature in which Nod created with his hologram power. So the Sea rex dove under and left. Everybody cheered and now are friends are safe.


"So where are you two headed?" asked a gabbit. "Well we are going to a place called Dark Island can you help us?" Asked Blarg. "Sure we will help you It is not too far from here lets go." And Blarg and Nod were off with the gabbits to Dark Island.

What's happening with Abe and company back in the Great swamp Land? Who knows.

[Al the Vykker]

Man ten chapters you have alot of fresh ideas! Check back later for my next chapter.

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Chapter 17 night of the leens!

Deep within the dark, mist and muddy swamp of Mudos Abe, Munch, and Squeek were truely lost.

"We are lost you idiot!" Yelled Munch. "Comeon we only been walking through here for a day Munch." Abe replied. "It's not like we have been ambushed in some way." "So cheer up Munch we will get out of here." Explained Abe.

"You know Abe, we should take a rest we been walking though the muck for two days now and my legs can't take it anymore." Explained Squeek. "Alright I guess we can camp out here for the night." Said Abe.

As the three piched a small mud tent up, which Abe brought with him just in case for such situations like this, Something odd was happening in the dark bushes of the swamp.
A strange rustleing of leaves started to fill the area. then an errie sight came upon the three. Abe, Munch, and Squeek became extremely frighten for the thouhgt on what lies out in the swamp

Abe knew of stories of strange creatures that came out at night in these parts. He was petrified.

"You know guy's I am getting pretty scared now." "I am hereing these noises all over the place and I here the howls of carnvores out there." Explaned Abe. "Yea me too Abe, I think we should get out of here." Said Munch. "Yea I agree."

As are three friends began to pack up the tent a pair of glowing eyes appeared from the thick dark swamp ahead of them.

"What in odds name is that Abe?" "I don't know but I don't want to stay here and find out!" Replied Abe. "I think we should leave quitely awey from this area as fast as we can." Said Squeek.

Then suddenly where the glowing eyes were stareing right at Abe, Munch, and Squeek, a funny sound filled the area.

With a high pich tone to the sound leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen! the creature called out.
Then this strange creature jumped out of the bush. It was a small cute looking thing that had a fury body with a shell on the back with small spikes sticking out of the shell. The creatures glowing eyes matched well with the dark swamp. It called out again leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen! That sound had a ghoastly feel to it.

Then suddenly more glowing eyes appeared all around Abe, Munch,and Squeek. Then more of those creatures also jumped out.

"What are they Abe?" Asked Squeek. "Well with that sound they are making I will call them leens." "There funny said Munch."

Suddenly the first of the leen's snarled at the three with a long hiss to follow. Then the rest of them did the same.

"I don't think they like us." Said Abe.

As the snarling and hissing got louder and louder, more and more leens began to appear. As the hissing of these fury critters got louder Abe, Munch,and Squeek began to realise that they were not safe. They were on these little buggers menu for the night.

"Ruuuuuuuun!, yelled Abe." Then Abe followed by Squeek taking flight quickly picked up Munch and ran like hell out of there.
The leens began to chase after them through the thick swamp.


Will Abe and company become lunch for these new creatures?

[Al the Vykker]

Awesome again!

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Chapter 18 Dark Island

It was early morning when Blarg and Nod were approaching Dark Island. The gabbits were leading them to it. The Island itself was surrounded by relentlees thick black smoke and sewage. There were hundreds upon hundreds of glukken factorys covering the island. It was like a mountain of steel and smokestacks comeing out of the ocean.

At the top of these pillaring factorys was the second Vykkers lab docked to what it looked to be another saucer shaped fortress that is 20 times larger than the one that is docked.

The gabbits would not go near the island for the raw sewage would kill them.

"Blarg, Nod this is Dark Island we will leave you here." "We are not going any further." Explaned the gabbits. Then the gabbits swam off.

As are two friends were approaching the shore line, the sulferic stench of pollution and raw sewage filled the air.

"Now I know why they call this place Dark Island explaned Blarg."

Blarg and Nod were finally out of the sea and on land after two heart wrenching days in the water.


"Comeon we have to get to the lab and see whats happening." Said Blarg. And the two were off in the steel wilderness of Dark Island.

What sadistc plan do the Vykkers and the Glukkens have on there minds?

[Al the Vykker]

Sweet this story is just awesome!

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Chapter 19 Rejoining!

As Abe, Munch and Squeek were still running awey from the leens for their lives. The swamp was thinning as they were moving through the swamp.

"Keep going guys, we need to get out of here!" Yelled Abe. "Look over there it's a clearing!" Yelled Squeek. "Hurry there still after us!" As are friends were running like hell, the leens were howling and screaming followed by the hissing and snareling.

leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen! leeeeeeeeeeeeeeen! The creatures were getting close but are friends were just about to clear out of the swamp. But they did not know that there is a massive cliff just on the other side of the trees.

"Comeon there is the opening!" Yelled Abe. Just after Abe said that, they jumped right through the bush.

"Ahahahahaha!" Our friends yelled in horror. "Hang on guys don't let go!" yelled Squeek. But suddenly one of the leens came out of the swamp and frightened Abe. Then The three were falling to a certain death. "Ahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahaha!.....SWOOSH!" Suddenly Abe, Munch, and Squeek fell right into a large well where they were blasted to a great distance.

Mean while back on dark Island Blarg and Nod were moving across the beach when they started to here a funny noise.

"Comeon we have to hurry, lets get to the top!" Yelled Blarg. "Shish...do you here that Blarg?" Asked Nod. "Yea I here that." "What do you think it is?" "It sounds like yelling." Said Nod.
"It's comeing from the south." Explaned Nod.

Then as Blarg and Nod were listening to the sound, it started to get louder and louder. "Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!.....BANG, CRASH!" "Ooh ah eh oh awi!

"Whoe, where am I?" "My head!" "My face!" "Wow that was a a long way!" cried Abe.

"Hey look over there Nod." It's my pals Abe and Munch, and Squeek." "Hey guys long time no see!" Yelled Blarg.

"Blarg is that you?" "Woe, mann we must of been blasted farther than I thought." Said Abe. "That was a huge well." Said Abe.

"You guys ok?" Asked Blarg. "We are fine." said Munch. "Luckily we were not killed!" Explaned Munch. "What is this place?" Asked Squeek. "Its an island called Dark Island." Explaned Blarg. "The glukkens have something on their minds that I must find out." Explaned Blarg. "Where were you for the last three days?" Asked Nod.

"Back when we were captured by the glukkens we were taken to the queen." Explaned Abe. "Then Squeek here saved us." Explaned Munch. "Then we hitched a ride on a Feeco Train to get a bilimp to rescue you Blarg." Said Squeek. "But the train broke down from the curtasy of the sligs." Explaned Abe. "Then we had to cross the Great swamp of Mudos when we were chased by aweful creatures that we call leens." "I tell ya it was a trip!" Explaned Abe. "They almost ate us for lunch but we ran off a cliff and were hanging for are lives." Explaned Squeek. "Then one of those little buggers flew out of the bush and frighten Abe and we fell into a large well." "And here we are." explaned Munch.

"Wow said Blarg." I am glad we are all not dead we too went through a lot through the last three days." Yea, we escaped the Vykkers ship just before they were going to operate on Blarg." And then we end up in the sea." " Then get swallowed by the Sea Rex and then get saved by some gabbits and here we are." Explaned Nod. "Good thing we are back together." Said Blarg.

"Lets go and destroy this place and find out whats happening with the Vykkers and glukkens." Said Blarg. Then Blarg and all of his friends, Abe, Munch, Squeek, and Nod were finally back together again. Now they were setting off into the unknown territory of Dark Island.

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Chapter 20 the fortress chamber!

Mean while at the top of Dark Island out on the dock of the second Vykkers labs a bunch of Interns were all lined up armed with strange new weapons of mass destruction. Then suddenly the door of the labs opened and out came Harry the Vykker and the mysterous hooded glukken.

"This is it my friend." "this what we have been waiting for all of are lives." Explaned the hooded glukken. Then Harry and the glukken walked into the massive fortress in which the labs was connected to. The Interns followed the two in. then the door shut.

Inside this vast fortress was a long hallway headed straight for the center. On the sides of this hallway were thousnds of crio tubes with deformed Mudokins and other creatures inside them.

As Harry and the Hooded glukken made their way to the center, a sound started to fill the hall with screams and whiping.
Then the hall opened up to a vast chamber with a massive weapon in the center. Below it were hundreds upon thousands of deformed Mudokin slaves working. Sligs and Interns were carrying whips and shock pokers to inflict pain on the deformed slaves. The chamber looked like a huge hunny comb of passageways all leading to this chamber. On the top of the chamber was a massive hatch in which the weapon us pointing up.

Then suddenly the Hooded glukken stood on a hovering platform along with Harry. He then ordered a slig to take his robe off to reveil himself.

Then a slig with a cigar came by and lit the cigar and gave it to the glukken. The Glukken then turned around to view the work that was in progress. Still this mysterous glukken face was hidden in a shadow that loomed over him. All you could see was the glowing orange eyes and the red from his cigar.

[Al the Vykker]

Great Chapter! SOrry I have been gone for a while though.

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Chapter 21 A Scarred Glukken!

As the mysterous glukken stood there in the shadow he started to move forword into the light. The glukken finally was revield to everybody in this chamber. Sligs were very scared of him for what he might do to them.

One of the sligs said "I can't believe my eyes!" "Thats imposible." How can he be alive?" Explaned a slig.

This glukken had a massive burn scar on his face which made him even more scarier than before. He wore a dark purple suit with a new type of symbol patched on his side. The symbol had two letters on it which were an M and a R.

The glukken was the one and only Molluck the Glukken. "Surprise sligs I am back and better than ever haha!" "We now live in a new era." I am now your rular and you will obey me you fools!" "You will find that the weapon in the center is my evelution weapon." "Yes the big secret is that all creatures of Oddworld will be my drones and work only for me only!"

Then one of the sligs asked Molluck "Where did you get all the moolah to build this place?" "I got it from Lady Margret who she was a fool in thinking that they were part of my plan to turn Oddworld into my empire!" Explaned Molluck. "What are those Muds down there?" "They look like freaks." Asked another slig.


"They are the result of my plan." "But they will die because of the side effects of the weapon." "That is why I am seaching for the creature named Blarg." "He has the power to sustain life for keeping my drones from dieing." "So you see the Magog is finnished and Blarg is finnished." "Aha hahahahahaha!" laughed Molluck. "With Blarg I will suck the life energy out of him and use that on my freaks of nature." "I will have an endless supply of slaves to do my bidding and nobody will escape this like Abe." laughed Molluck.

Then all the sligs and Molluck were laughing outrageously to this evil plan.

Molluck is back and more evil than before. If he gets a hold of Blarg then Oddworld will be gone forever. Blarg dies Oddworld dies.

[Gabbit]

yo awsome great i read all those chapters great man i wish i was smart as you. My reading teacher is mean. i did 32 chapters of my own character called stich she hated it. Wait until i become a famous writer she'll be crying.

[paramiteabe]

Chapter 22 A move of fate

As Blarg and his friends were headed up the mountain of nothing but junk and steel They were passing old rusty signes that said Rupture Farms, Saul Storm Brewery, Vykkers lab, Dark Hills Bakery, Flemmings Steel Mill.

"Mann this must be where they put the factorys after they all shut down." Explaned Abe. "Wow a whole island made out of these factorys." "Thats amazing." Said Blarg. Then the rest of the heros Munch, Squeek, and Nod were getting tired.

"Blarg, Abe, stop we need to rest." Explaned the three.
"How about you three go back to the beach and wait there." "Abe and I are not really tired." Explaned Blarg. "Alright, that sounds like a good idea." Said the three. "Nod when you get down to the beach there are natural creatures gathering down there ready to act at any moment." Explaned Blarg. "You are the only one who has proven to be a good leader." "Go down there and tell them that we are in the fortress and the event I have forseen is close." "This is important Nod." "Sure Blarg but what event are you talking about?" Asked Nod. "I can't tell you or anybody because the fate of Oddworld is in the balance." "If I were to tell you then we would be doomed." It's best we don't know and that I only know." Explaned Blarg. "It is the only way." Said Blarg

Then Nod and the other two headed down the mountain leaving only Abe and Blarg to persue the fortress.

As the three made it at the bottom, the natural creature that Blarg explaned were there camped out on the beach. Then Nod called out to all the creatures to listen to what he had to say.

"Creatures of Mudos and Oddworld The creature Blarg sent me to lead you into this unknown event we are about to embark on." "Trust me and you will be safe."

"Then all the creatures cheered him on along with Munch and Squeek.

What is going to happen to Blarg and Abe? For Blarg indeed made a move of fate.

[paramiteabe]

Chapter 22 The final walk!

As all the creatures of Oddworld were cheering a dark cloud rose over the island and thunder crashed and lightening flashed. Blarg and Abe were at the top of the moutain of steel and Alf who was back in the old runned down Vykkers Labs was about to meet his destiney.

"Who's there?" said Alf. Then suddenly a crazy spring like creature came out of the darkness. It was Sling the fifth hero. "Sling your here." "You had me scared there for a little bit." Then suddenly the Lost profacy orb which was in Alf came flying out of him and started to speak to Sling and Alf.

"Alf, Sling we don't have any time to cit chat we have to get to Dark Island." "Blarg is on the verge of fulfilling his profacy." Explaned the orb. "How do we get to Dark Island it must be very far from here." Said Alf. "Alf that is why Sling is here." "With his ability to repair broke down machines in just seconds you will be abel to have these Labs fully operational once again." "That is how you are going to Dark Island, by useing these labs to travel there."

"Sling, repair this ship and lets get going." Said Alf. Then Sling with his usual self just nodded because Sling doesant talk at all. He has no mouth. Then Sling started to move as fast as lightening across the ship and before Alf could blink his Eye the old Vykkers ship was operational and floating. "We are off!" Yelled Alf and they were gone.

Mean while back on the mountain top of Dark Island Blarg and Abe were about to enter the fortress. The wind was blowing and the storm was beginning to get savere.

"Lets get in." said Blarg and they both were in the fortress.
Are two friends were walking carefully through the corrodor scared to death for what they were seeing. The crio tubes with the deformed Muds and other creatures. They seemed to have a errie stare at our friends. Then suddenly Abe noticed something.

"Look Blarg, it... it's a tube with nobody inside." "It has my name on it." "Whats that supose to mean?" Asked Abe. "I don't know." "But we are going to find out like right now." Said Blarg.
Suddenly the two turned around and whole group of sligs were pointing guns right at them.

"Freeze your comeing with us." "It's time you meet are master." And Abe and Blarg were taken to the chamber.

This is it the time is at hand and Abe and Blarg will finally know whats to come. Indeed our friends have made there final walk across Oddworld the answers lie ahead.