Campaign Tour ( VP Aslik's Campaign )

Al the Vykker · #1 08-05-2002, 11:44 PM

Here is the Preview. Note: Ill still be working on Failure to Comply.

Following the dissapearance of Molluck the Glukkon, the Magog Cartel has been set into a whirl wind. Fellow Glukkons rise up against their own kind in the hopes of becoming the head honcho, but three Power hungry Glukkons that stand out are willing to go all the way and are desperate to try anything, they are General Dripik, Director Phleg, and Vice President Aslik. The story will follow the trials and errors, the hopes and dreams of VP Aslik and his loyal slig body guard. Find out what happens here on Campaign Tour.

Stay tuned.

paramiteabe · #2 08-06-2002, 06:54 PM

This sounds pretty good. I can't wait to read it. Also I can't wait for more chapters of Failure To Comply Hope to see new things soon buddy.

Paramiteabe...

molluck2 · #3 08-07-2002, 01:06 PM

sounds cool!

C'mon write it!

Al the Vykker · #4 08-17-2002, 02:16 AM

Chapter 1 Down to Business

"A full investigation has been started, we will get to the bottom of this, immediately thank you."

Vp Aslik stepped down from the press podium, as everyone at this conference tried to get some more information.

"Uncle Aslik has nothing further to say at this time."

Aslik was escorted by Slig security upstairs to the train back to FeeCo Depot a long trip was ahead of him.

" Thank Odd I got out of there fast enough the media would of tore me to pieces, Literally."
"All this Molluck dead or alive crap is really getting on my nerves, I dont even know what to believe, I mean one of our major companies just closed over night, Im not to happy about that."

"In time it'll go away, you just have to relax," Oddling, VP Aslik's head of security said."

" I guess your right hopefully I didnt look to bad on Magog on the March tonight, Uncle Aslik has to look good."

The train continued its destination still far away but, closing in every minute that passed.

check back later.

molluck2 · #5 08-21-2002, 03:09 PM

Nice start, continue!!!!!!!

~Molluck2~

oddling · #6 08-21-2002, 10:22 PM

Good one Al! Um, am I supposed to wright a few chapters or something cause I'm in it? Just curious about the heck I'm supposed to do cause I've haven't been myself latley. *puts underwear on head and starts walking on hands*

Oddling l:c l

Al the Vykker · #7 08-26-2002, 09:03 PM

I may have you write some of the chapters later It depends.

Chapter 2 The Arrival

Vp Aslik noticed that he had slept for two hours now, the train passed by Rupture Farms, but did not stop, for no one dared to even stop there to see what happened there last week

Ss they passed the terminal for the factory Aslik noticed that the place had been vandalized by Mudokon delinquents, using slang terms, and sentences like powerups to the people as there mottos.

Aslik quitelely pondored the fate of his good buddy Molluck, they both had risen high in the Glukkon status ranks, and had both worked together before, but for now he put that out of his mind. Aslik knew he had to become the top Glukkon, he wasnt called VP for nothing.

The train finally came to a slowing pace as it pulled into FeeCo Depot, at last Aslik was home at last. He exited the train accompanied by his body guard Oddling and her unit of slig officers, and also a few Jr. Execs, who had been with him at the press conference earlier.

" This place is such a dump." Aslik said.
" And I wouldnt have it any other way." He smirked, as he had Oddling adjust his monicle.

" Thank you Oddling." Aslik said.

" No problem boss, Ill have my team go to our barracks down stairs and report in tonight for dinner at your Exec office suite."Oddling replied.

"Good, get those guys rested we have a big day tommorrow also.
" Yes sir." Oddling said.

Then along with the Jr. Execs, Vp Aslik went up stairs to his luxory suite, in the FeeCo Exec offices........

Stay tuned.

oddling · #8 08-27-2002, 12:26 AM

Nice one Al! *continues to get the rest of the troops down stairs* Keep it up! You're doing great!

Oddling l:c l

Al the Vykker · #9 09-15-2002, 11:53 PM

Ill be updating this story tommorrow when I get home from school, if I have time I may post two new chapters to catch up a bit. Stay Tuned. And be on the watch for a new chapter tommorrow.

-Al the Vykker

mitsur · #10 09-16-2002, 12:08 AM

WOW!This good!Can I be in to?*makes puppy-dog eyes*I'll help to if ya need to

sO fReAkIn oDd · #11 09-29-2002, 01:55 AM

I like this story, keep it up Al.

dripik · #12 10-03-2002, 11:46 AM

Very good story! Please continue!

Al the Vykker · #13 12-08-2002, 01:23 AM

Chapter 3 The Reception

Upstairs inside the Executive Suites of Feeco Depot, Vice president Aslik, finishes up his long conversation with his Jr. Executives.

"Im telling you gentleman, by the time this conflict is over, you wont even be able to see a flub fuels pumping station that doesnt have my name plastered over it." Aslik said, to the Jr. Execs.

"I wouldnt doubt it, you are a genius Aslik, I mean what a great slogan, The Trains will run on time, its got that sense of the old days, this is going to be a great campaign." One of them replied.

"Gentleman, thankyou, and I hope you enjoy the reception we have downstairs."

The Junior Executives exited, as Vice president Aslik took a deep breath, and called his slig Valet merve to adjust his suit and monacle.

"Well its going to be a hell of a year, aint it merve?"

"You can sure say that boss," Merve replied.

The two exited the exec suites, and went downstairs to the banquet hall where dozens of other gluks, chroniclers, Vykkers, sligs, and many other corporate species were all gathered.

They all had been invited in response of the three top Glukkons Vice President Aslik, General Dripikk, and Director Phleg, aggreeing to run for top spot of the Magog Cartel.

Champaign, Gabbiar, crackers, punch, and many more foods, and delictables were all on tables, in the main room. As well as news groups such as fud TV, Magog on the March and others, were setting up cameras, and microphones, for interviews, news coverage, and trying to catch a glimpse of Uncle Aslik.

Aslik finally had a seat with his two running mates. Well Gentleman this will be a night to remember, all of the three glukks Aslik, Dripikk, and Phleg, all had their own slig valets, light their cigars, and special ciggarettes in the case of Aslik, as they talked about what to do next.....

Stay tuned, for the rest of the Reception, and to find out where the campaign goes next.

Facsimile · #14 12-19-2002, 07:28 AM

Excellant, I'm liking it. I like stories that actually run in with the Quintology.

Splat · #15 01-02-2003, 04:28 PM

Thats cool. I read ya story Al, so can ya do me a favour? I have 2 stories, Splat and "the Oddworld Story". Can ya read that, its proving less popular than Splat and i need feedback.

This is cool, cant wait for the next chapter. Its interesting, what'll happen, the Necrum mines blowing up should be the next thing to happen.

Facsimile · #16 01-02-2003, 09:01 PM

Don't tell him what to do.

Splat · #17 01-12-2003, 01:47 PM

I wasnt telling our wonderful moderator what to do, i was asking him to do it cause he said hed try to read them but he didnt realize i have 2 and he only read one so i was asking him to read the other!