Abe's Evil Twin/My First RPG Ever

[ABEZILLA]

Right theres no rules to this thing a part from this: no killing abe he's the hero this rp is sort of like a version of one of the games only its a role play get it????
ooc))hobo plese tell me if im doing this correctly.

My charcters:

Abe
Species:mud
Mud hero
He rescues the muds
Escapes from sligs kill gluk destroys factorys

I think thats it really

Slig-1
Head of the sligs
Always gets into truble
Species:slig worker class
Hates:abe all muds
Enjoys:takeing a snooze swearing at the boss and hunting
Really hates:slogs
ooc))i must say i think im doing this right

EDIT BY HOBO: This looks like it has potential, I corrected some spelling errors and added some breaks to make it look better.

[Abe-gun]

I think you should go to how to Role Play. There was alesson which was not to make the profiles dull. Sorry, but...I think it is kinda dull.