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Thanx Lobo

I'm terribly sorry to tell this, but I haven't got rid of school... yet and well I'll take it from the start:

Remember when I got real ill in two weeks? Well that caused that I hadn't done some of the school work for a while back then and that turned out in to a mass of work, which I must finish within two weeks from now on...

And after that I'm about to have me project weeks - My class n' I are supposed to prepare a musical, Hair - but then I might/perhaps/will be able to send in another part for ya

I didn't know I had so much work left to do, so again:

I'M TERRIBLY SORRY!!!!!

As fast as get rid of school - then I mean rid of it then you'll have another part - I promise

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Dearest readers!

I'll be updating the story this weekend and I've got wonderful news: I only got one week and a half before I get my vaccation Yippiiiee!!!!

I'll hopefully write some then

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Here's a New & Fresh update and probably the longest one this far Huzza!

Enjoy...



“Acroney, don’t leave me here,” a younger female Toicer said.

“Stay here and don’t move”, Acroney said to her while he grabbed a knife from a table and went away.

Outside the triangle shaped hut a battle ruled, a bloodstained battle between the Toicers and the Wolclarks. Gunshots and splashing sounds of sharp spears and arrows pierced threw the fighting opponents and cried down the birds’ songs. Cries from children and babies from different parts of the area accompanied. Huts were burning and the thick smell of blood made people feel sick.

He saw one of the old members that tried to fight against a tall Wolclark – probably one of their leaders generals –, which almost stabbed him through his gut with a machete. Luckily the Wolclark missed and the old Toicer smashed an acid stone in its head. The enemy fell down on the ground and blood ran out and colored the grass red.

Acroney turned his head and saw his father together with a bunch of soldiers who prepared themselves for another attack. The father, Igorney, saw his son and called on him. As Acroney walked towards him, a shadow appeared from behind and smashed Acroney in the head.

The son hit the ground and everything went black.



Chapter thirteen: The trip to Noka - part four: A familiar friend


Stranger and Maki had set up their camp for the night and were about to eat something, before get some sleep. The fire was glowing, and they planned the next days wandering - looking at the map and point out where to head next.

- Well we've traveled this far, but there's still a quite long bit to go, Maki sighed.
- Yeah, it sure is. But I guess we'll reach Noka's lair pretty soon - if we're moving in this speed as we've done the whole time we ought to be there... perhaps tomorrow night or the day after tomorrow, Stranger said.
- I suppose yer right. I've been thinking on what ways we'll have to take to reach the village and I suggest we could take this Monterya road beside the river here and then walk straight this road, in to the Dingum forest and after that take the small shortcut here. That would give us a trip, both safe and peaceful.
- That's a good idea, Maki. But if we're now about to get someplace tomorrow, then we better get some rest.
- All right, let's go for it.

They both went to bed - extremely exhausted - after the days' wandering.


* * * * *



Stranger couldn't sleep. He was too tence and excited to reach Noka's village. Or was it something else?

He turned around on the soft blanket to find a more comfortable position - but without results. Suddenly a snoring sound came from the other side of the tent; a loud and rough snore. "Maki...", Stranger thought, "I'm trying to sleep here and you keep me awake... Great. Could it get any worse?"

Just as Stranger almost succeded to fall asleep, he heard something rustling outside. He sighed. "Awww man! What now...!" He rose up and sneaked out from the tent to see what was bothering him. And he saw something really strange. A small and thin figure stood bent over the bowl with leftovers, which stood on the burned wooden sticks, and ate fast. The figure wore a dark cloak and a hood. "Now that fellow mustn't have eaten anything for several days, poor creature", Stranger thought while he crouched down slowly, to make sure he didn't get noticed. A familiar scent reached the Steefs nostrills and made his eyes go wide. "It can't be!"

He cleared his throat - quite loud - and the creature stoped eating and looked at him with suprise. It had some of the leftover clear soup around its mouth, which dripped down at the earth.

- Liana, Stranger carefully asked while he sneaked out from the tent to meet the figure.

- Stranger...? Is it you, the creature asked.

- Yes it's me.

The creature took of the hood. A teenage Legendary girls' face got visible. She smiled.

- Stranger, it is you!

Liana ran towards him and embraced him with her small arms around his waist.
- I've missed you, you scrawny Steef!
- I've missed you to, Liana, Stranger said as he returned the hug.
- What are you doing here anyway? Did ya find the Steef tribe? If ya have, shouldn't you be with them?
- I sure did... but I'll not be staying now. I ought to ask you the same; shouldn't you be with your own kind?

Liana let go of Stranger and answered with sadness:

- ... I was going to... but no more.
- What do you mean?
- The night after I helped you and your Grubb to escape from the village, then the Alpha leader and some of his guards banished me. If I return they'll torture me first and then they'll kill me.
- Banished? Because of us?
- No not 'cause of you. You guys helped me to see the real life behind the walls of laws and rules. I owe you one.
- I rather owe you one after the great thing you did , Stranger said as he stroke her cheek with a gentle hand.
- Is the Grubb still with ya?
- I'm afraid not... she missed her tribe and returned to them.
- Oh, I'm sorry 'bout that. So... where are you headed?
- I'm going to meet up with Noka, the Steef leader of the west and do the same I did to Vivay, the Steef leader of the east.
- Rule and conquer, eh?
- Nah, not exactly.

Suddenly the Legendary's eyes went wide and the ears pointed down.
- Eh, what's the matter, Stranger asked while he turned around.

There among the blankets, a hairy Steef head was staring at them with red-brown eyes. Stranger chuckeld.
- Don't you get scared - it's jus' Maki, Vivays son.

The girl calmed down, trusting Stranger completely.




Chapter thirteen: The trip to Noka - part five: Regrets and Luckyness



- Well Frayda, Vivay begun, I'll leave you in the hands of Acroney here now and wish you two good luck. I've to go back to my village, before the inhabitants get worried.

- Thanks for everything Vivay, may the Holy water bless your people and may the spirit of the Elders watch over you, Frayda said as she bowed to show her gratitude.

The Steef leader returned the gratitude by bowing back.

They saw him walk away over the green hill and watched him as he disappeard in to the woods.



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- Are you hungry, Acroney asked.
- A little bit, the Grubb answered as she patted her stomache.

The Toicer filled a cup of clean soup from the bowl that stood over a fire, in front of his home, and gave it to her. Frayda began to drink of the warm soup and it reminded her of the food Stranger had brought with him on the first days of their journey. She sighed. She couldn't jus' forget Stranger or his pleading eyes; it was too much touching for her to carry. A tear ran down the cheek and fell to the ground.

- I can't do this, she sighed again, I've to help him.
- What? Whom do you talk about, Acroney asked.
- Stranger... needs me, I can feel it. He and Maki must have gone lost in the woods or maybe...
- Stranger? Who's that? Your boyfriend?
- No, no, no! He's not my boyfriend! Stranger is the protector of the Grubbs and perhaps the next leader of the Steefs' generation.
- Oh, sorry.

There was a pause.

- Did you jus' say protector?
- Yeah, why do you ask?
- If the Steefs are protectors of the Grubbs... then why did he refuse to bring ya with him?
- He didn't refuse, but I did. I wanted to get back to my own tribe - I said I'd return, to my inhabitants, after a couple weeks or so, but there has almost gone a month and I feel bad for my people.
- So that's why you needed my help to get back to the village?
- Not anymore...
- I beg your pardon?
- I've changed my mind. I have to find Stranger and Maki... and you will help me.
- Uhm, excuse me. I thought you cared 'bout your people, are you going to leave them?
- No I'm not going to leave them, but my Steef fellows need me more than ever right now and you've got to lead and protect me on the way, jus' like Stranger did.
- Wait a sec, I thought you guided him?
- Aww, whatever... Can you help me, Acroney?
- Well, I still have to keep my promise to Vivay... all right I'll help you.

Frayda felt a warmth inside of her body and smiled of joy.



Chapter thirteen: The trip to Noka - part six: Agreements and Farewells



Stranger, Maki and Liana had been walking for several hours now without taking a break and they all were tired. But they seemed to have luck with the weather though, the sky was full of clouds and quite calm winds blew around them. Nothing would stop them for reaching their destination - their goal.

- I'm tired and cold, Liana said.
- I know, we all are, but we've to continue. It isn't far from Noka's lair now and we can't have anymore breaks, Maki explained.
- I agree. I know you have different habits, but from now on you've got to get used to it, Stranger replied.
- Easy for you to say, Liana said as she continued to walk.


After a while they reached a pretty tall hill and began to get across it. Liana sat on Stranger's back - after she alomst succeded to fall to the ground of tiredness - while the two Steefs walked to the top of it. When they had reached the top they saw - to thier relief - not too far away, Noka's village.

- All right, Maki began while he looked at the map, now we've to cross the Dingum forest, that doesn't seem to be so big or deep.
- Okay let's go for it, Stranger said while he looked at the tired Legendary, you ready?
- I'm... yawn... ready, she answered.

With those words they marsched away in to the Dingum woods.




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The fog of the forest kept the plants and the remaning leaves of the trees weat and watered the mosses. A breeze of fesh clean air touched their nostrills and made them feel free.

- We're almost through it now, Maki said still followed by Stranger and Liana.

They continued to make sure no time would be lost.

Abrubtly a couple of tall and lightbrown creatures stood with loaded crossbows pointed at them. "Oh, no... not again," Stranger thought while he protected Maki and Liana.

One of the creatures said:

- Who dare to enter the Land of the Toicers? What before me I see nothing more than two scrawny donkies with thier rider.
- What is your quest and what kind of reason do you have to pass, the other one asked.
- Donkies? Donkies! You call me a donkey, yer overgrown sack of potatos, Maki shouted out in front of the Toicers.
- Eh, Maki calm down, Stranger began while he pulled Maki's arm, I'm Stranger and these are my companions. We are on our way to Noka, the Steefleader of the west.
- Who's that girl on your back then? She isn't a Steef, now is she, the first Toicer asked with wrath.

Liana climbed down from Stranger's back and walked towards them and looked in their eyes with burning anger.

- I might not be a Steef, but I still got the same rights to pass like they have. So don't try to stop me!
- You're that Legendary girl, huh? The one who got banished by her own kind, the other Toicer asked.
- Maybe I am... maybe I'm not...

Just when she turned around the first one said while putting down the crossbow:

- Wait! All we want to ask is if you want to stay with us, the tribe of Toicers. We don't want to hurt anyone, we jus' protect our territorities from enemies. We also do know Noka, he and some of his guards help to protect our homes and in exchange they get food to eat which we hunt for them. There are jus' a few of us left who survived the war between the Wolclarks and we don't want to bring up any more fights.
- A war, Liana asked.
- Yes. One of the coldest wars we've ever had since a few generations back.
- But why do you want me in your tribe?
- We've never seen a Legendary in ages and our leader would appreaciate if you would join. Do you accept?
- I... don't know, She looked at the two suprised Steefs and then back at them, it came up in such a haste...
- We understand. You feel free now when you don't have any rules to follow, but it isn't the same in our village. We do have rules that may be quite strict, but not as the Legendaries.
- How do you know the Legendaries? I mean if you haven't seen them for ages then how is it possible to know that they have rules that are more strict, Stranger asked.
- Our shaman in the tribe has shown his visions to us and that includes the history of the Legendaries and what they'll do next. He knows everything and he can't have wrong.
- Oh, that explains alot, Maki said.

The Toicers nodded and the eyes fell on Liana again.

- What's your name, the other Toicer asked.
- My name is Liana, the Legendary answered.

There was silence.

- I've made my decision, Liana continued, I will join your tribe.
- Great. Our leader will be so proud, the first Toicer said.
- But what'll happend to Stranger and Maki?
- They have the rights to pass and will be honoured by our people that they brought you here safe and sound, the other one said while he bowed to show his way of appreaciation.

Stranger and Maki returned the bowing and said farewell to Liana, aware of that she'd get a new home and a family who would love her. They waved them of while the two Toicers and Liana walked deeper in to the woods.

- I'll miss her, Maki sighed.
- Yeah me to, but we're not far from reach our goal, Stranger said.
- You're right, c'mon let's go to Noka's lair!



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ain't somebody going to read anytin' ?

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Don't cry Dancing Steef .
I just didn't write a comment till yet because I'm still not finished with reading your whole story. I want to be done doing reading your story... but I sadly don't have plenty of time you know. So I only can read it bit by bit. I'm sorry.

...are you still sad now?

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Don't cry Dancing Steef .
I just didn't write a comment till yet because I'm still not finished with reading your whole story. I want to be done doing reading your story... but I sadly don't have plenty of time you know. So I only can read it bit by bit. I'm sorry.

...are you still sad now?

*stops crying* Awww that's so sweet of you Maiden to read me story - take yer time to read I know it's quite long - it's about 70 pages. Well Lobo's n' DE's stories are longer than mine, but they're at least english people; Which I'm unfortunatly not. So it takes longer time for me to write and rewrite it.

I don't have plenty of time either - even if I'm having a vaccation I'm having a summer job with a theater group.

Thanks for reading,

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I'll be updating the story as fast as I get time - I've still got 15 shows to be in before I get real vaccation, anyway... sowwy for not updating earlier

See ya soon,

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Hello everyone I'm back with a Fresh Update!

I know it's not much but I've been so busy working at the play

Enjoy...


Chapter fourteen: Addicted to alcohole - part one


- What is it Maki? You've been so silent since we left Liana. Is there something you want to tell me, Stranger asked.
- It's nothing really... Maki stuttered.
- Are you telling me the truth now?
- Errr... Maki began while he saw his friend's annoying glance at him, well something... about Noka.
- C'mon tell me - ya know ya can always trust me - I'm your best friend.
- Well where do I start?... Stranger, Noka isn't a - what I would call - normal Steef.
- What do you mean? Is he sick or something?
- Not exactly, but... d'you remember what the Toicers told you about my uncle?
- Yeah, sort of.
- Well everything they told us was true. But there's a more advanced story behind thiers. Let me explain:

"For about five years ago my father visited Noka. They both were so exited to see each other that Noka and some of his servants had prepared a welcome cermony. Back then I was only 15 years old and my mother and I had followed father to meet our relatives. But when we got there my father discovered something about Noka that wasn't like him - he had started to drink. Fortunately, my uncle hadn't been drinking for so long, but the real problem was that the stuff he was drinking wasn't made by Steefs, but by Toicers. And who knows what they've used as ingredients. Anyway, my father tried to stop him from drinking, but nothing worked - Noka was like completely obsessed and did things he shouldn't have done.
This drink - or wine as he called it - was some kind of drug he used, not only on parties but also when he was depressed, happy or angry. Just to make him feel better. However, that caused a divorse between him and his wife, Ryna. When my family left the village my father decided that we - or at least I - shouldn't visit him again... until now."

- So you mean that your uncle has alcoholic problems?
- Big problems if ya ask me, but that was five years ago. He might have changed since then, who knows?
- It'll be another task for me to solve... How do you persuade a drunk Steef to leave his place as a Leader?
- I don't know... Just be yourself and he'll welcome and take good care of you - as his guest you deserve everything.
- Thanks Maki. We seem to get closer to the village and it seems like there are a couple of Steefs that are jus' coming to meet us.
- What...? You're right! It's some of Noka's guards.

The Steef guards wore a simple, but protective armour which covered thier shoulders, back and chest. They also had helmets with ancient Steef patterns to show that they were guardians of thier leaders tribe.
- What are your quest, Steef lads, one of them asked with a loud voice.
- We have come to see your leader Noka. And we wonder if you guys could take us to him, Stranger answered.
- I'm afraid we can't, the other one began, not before you show us that you're telling the truth.
- Excuse me if I interrupt your conversation; you guys remember me, Maki asked.
- Oh... wait! Wait! I know you're a... a cousine to our leader, right, the first one guessed.
- Close enough, but wrong. I'm Maki the son of Vivay - Nokas brother and my uncle.
- Maki? Oh dear Odd! You were jus' a little Steef boy since I saw you! What brings you here, the second asked in suprisement.
- Well my father sent me here to... get married and my friend and I want to see Noka as well.
- Sure why not follow us and we'll lead you to him, the first one said as they began to walk the last 80 metres to reach the village.

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Alcoholic problems ? Drunken steefs? Aaargh!



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Thank you I will update again soon, but it might take a while. See ya then!


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Yay! New chap! EDIT: New GREAT Chapter!!
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Chapter fourteen: Addicted to alcohol - part two


Meanwhile in Nokas hut…


- Did ya bring the wine as I told ya to do Hurricane; Noka asked a younger but pretty small Steef – that was looking a bit scared.
- Y…y…yes your honor, he answered as he gave him the bottle of wine.

Noka glared at it and then back at him with cold eyes, like an old grumpy military general. Hurricane froze and his skin crawled. Noka opened the bottle and smelled, and then he said with a gentle voice while giving him a pleased smile:

- Hurricane, do ya know what this wine is called?
- No sir… uh I mean it’s a 65´- the best of the wine gallery of yours, the unsure Steef answered.
- That’s completely… WRONG YOU IDIOT! If you can’t behave yourself in front of me then I personally will stick this thing up right in to your ass and gore you to the end of the world! Now get me a new bottle, before I’ll get myself a new servant!
- R… r…right away sir, Hurricane stuttered as he ran off.

“Stupid fool”, Noka thought as he sat down on his throne, “None seem to please me as much as the wine does… ahh… My sweet Rebecca… I wished you were here…”

Suddenly a guard came in to the leader and said:

- Noka, your nephew is here to see you.
- Ah, Maki? Well bring him in, Saldoe!
The guard did what Noka told him to and soon the nephew stood there right in front of him.

- Maki! Oh dear Odd I’ve missed ya so much, Noka said as he embraced Maki.
- It’s great to see ya too Uncle Noka, Maki began, so how’s it going nowadays?
- Well what shall I say…I’m jus’ doing fine, thank you. How ‘bout you? Have ya found any girlfriend yet hehehehe?
- Not yet, but my dad told me that your village got some real fine female Steefs, am I right?
- Maybe I have nephew, maybe I have.
- Oh and I’ve brought a friend to your village is it okay if he could stay here as well as I?
- Sure why not? Your friends are my friends, Maki.
- Stranger and I appreciate that, uncle.
- You’re welcome. I’ll have a great celebration for you and your friend’s arrival tonight, what do you like to drink?
- Water would be enough.
- WATER?! Maki you’ve got to try something new and set your soul free sometimes. Water? HA!
- Honestly, none of us drink… alcohol. Sorry Noka.
- Awww, don’t be that. I know your family don’t like to drink, and especially not your father. He has always been a coward and to lazy to try anything new.
- He’s not a coward, Noka. My father tried to stop you from this drug, but you didn’t care. He tried at least to say no from that “nightmare” and that’s called courage.
- You’re so alike your father now ain’t you? Ah well it’s up to you, but be sure to come to the party in time – I don’t like people who arrives late – if you know what I mean.
- Of course Uncle Noka I’ll be right in time for the ceremony.
- Good. Now leave me alone, sonny.

Maki left the hut and returned to Stranger who was waiting for him outside.
- So what did he say, he asked.
- He invited us to a party that would be tonight and he also said that there weren’t any troubles to letting you stay.
- That sounds good.
There was silence.
- You don’t drink, do ya?
- No, why would I, Maki?
- I jus’ wondered.

They decided to rest in their new hut, though it had after all being a long day and there would fortunately be a very long night as well.


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This must be the most largest writer's block I've ever had anyway sorry for delaying and if the moderators would sew me when I update this 'old ' thread now then I'll think about it till next time I promise!


Chapter fifteen: A friend returns



Acroney and Frayda had almost reached Noka’s lair when it suddenly began to rain. They took shelter under a tall tree and waited… and waited. The Grubb began to get impatient.

- Is the rain never going to stop fall? It’s getting a bit boring to sit here in the cold, she muttered.
- You ought to be glad that we aren’t wet… yet, Acroney grinned.
- Ah well, maybe I should. But I still don’t like to sit here while the rest of the inhabitants are inside their huts and cuddling. I wished we were in there now - in the warmth.
- Yeah…When it has stopped raining then I’ll leave you to walk the rest of the way to Noka’s village – I rarely visit people when they’re having a fiest.
- A fiest, Frayda asked.
Acroney nodded.
- I, he continued, can however lead you to the main gate but after that you’re on your own.
- Are you sure you don’t want to stay for a while and eat some food, Frayda asked.
- I’m sure.

It had stopped raining and Acroney did what he had promised the Grubb to do. He said good bye and left her as told.


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Dancing, drinking, talking and dancing, drinking a little more and threw up a few times. So was the schedule of the party. Loud noices of shouting and the sound of breaking bottles made Stranger and Maki feel uncomfortable and unwelcomed, but they didn’t want to leave until the fiest was over, jus’ not to make the leader disappointed or angry.
- I can’t understand why everybody can enjoy drinking – it’s all the Toicers fault, Maki said with anger.
- Me neither, but you can’t blame the Toicers – even if they were the ones who started this – they didn’t know that Steefs are sensitive to alchol. And by the way if they knew, then I believe that the Toicers shouldn’t have made that deal – not with alcohol. Talking about deals… have you fulfilled your father’s promise yet, Stranger asked.
- I haven’t got the time to, but I may get some sooner or later, he sighed.
- Oh, but I know one, Stranger began while he pointed at a couple of female Steefs who sat beside a table in a corner talking – or at least – tried to.
- The one to the right is the hostress whom we hire the hut from and the one to the left is her daughter, Stranger continued still pointing at them.

The daughter turned around and looked at them, and Maki seemed to had caught her attention. Maki frozed. It felt like the time had stopped when their eyes met. She smiled. He had never seen anything more beautiful in his whole life, until now. The young female Steef had blond, half-curly hair that reached her shoulders, cream colored fur, greenish/yellowish eyes that shone of happiness and she wore a lightgreen dress and a pale red shirt.

- Maki? Eh, Maki d’you hear me, Stranger asked him while he grabbed his arm and shaked it.
- What, Maki asked as he woke up from “the trans”.
- Now hadn’t I right?
- About what?
- You like her, don’t ya?
- Whom?
- The daughter of course, Stranger said annoyed of all replying.
- Well… she is…cute, Maki said as he looked at her.
- Ah, c’mon you can tell me, Stranger, your best friend can’t ya.
- … Okay, Maki grinned and burst into laughter, I give up. I’ll tell you when the party is over.

* * * *


It didn’t seem easy to get inside the village by knocking – of course almost all Steefs were at the party – though even the guards where outside to guard they couldn’t hear ‘cause of the loud noices. Frayda had been trying to get in for almost half an hour, but she stil couldn’t get inside. “Hopeless”, she thought. “Oh where is the Steef dude when I need him?”

Fifteen minutes past and after some thinking she came up with an idea: “If they can’t hear me then they’ve got to see me.”

She knew exactly what to do. First, she’d find another way in, maybe a hole or something. Then if she found one, she would dig herself in to the lair and last try to get some help to find Stranger.

And Frayda was a lucky Grubb.

She found a little hole and started to dig till she came to the other side of the wall and started to look after her friend. It didn’t take a long time before she succeded.


* * * *

“Bam!”, the doors flew up and hit the wall. Everybody got quiet and looked confused on the little creature that stood at the doorstep. The Grubb asked:

- I’m looking for two special Steefs. Their names are Stranger and Maki. Have anyone of you seen them?

Stranger who had been talking to Maki turned his head and met Fraydas gaze. Suprised, he raised from his chair and walked to her.

- I thought you had returned to your home, why are you here, Stranger asked.
- Well… there was a bird I met on the way that told me that a couple of youngsters needed my guidence and when I’m thinking… you two deserve it, she answered with a grin.
- I’m glad you changed your mind, ‘cause I’ll be needing some new company, Stranger said as he pointed at Maki and his newfound love.
- Oh I see, the Grubb said with a smile on her lips.
- Well the party has jus’ begun let’s have some fun… but without alcohol.
- Okay, but you have to show me around, dude ‘cause I don’t know this place yet.
- Sure. Just stick with me and everything’s going to be fine.


~DS~

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Thank you ! glad ya guys liked it and here's the next chapter:



Chapter sixteen: An army of Slegs



One week had past since Stranger’s and his friends arrival and everything was getting too non-intressting: Every night there were parties and almost everybody there were drinking the whole night long, well exept for Stranger and his friends of course.

- Boooriiing, Maki sighed as he laid on the sofa in the livingroom.
- I agree, Frayda began, we ought not to stay here any longer, think about your next goal, Stranger.
- I know… but I’m not sure if Noka wants me to actually take his place as well as I did to Vivay, Stranger answered.
- Haven’t you told him yet, Maki asked.
- Not yet, I mean you know how drunk people react when you “seem” to threat them or something – they get mad.
- You’ve got to do something, you’re the only one who can make it to the top dude, you jus’ have to believe in yourself, Frayda said.
- … But how… he’s much older and gots bigger horns, while I ain’t got none…
- That’s not the problem, Steefdude. The main thing here is to make Noka trust in you and your opinions, and not in your fighting skills.
- Okay Miss “I-know-everything” tell me how.
- Don’t get cocky now Stranger; I may know a lot of things you don’t know anything of, but you’ve got to think on your own – or have your brain taking a vaccation?
- No it hasn’t! But I need some tips or something to work on before I decide how to act – I don’t want him to think I’m stupid.
- Maybe he already knows, when we first said that we don’t drink any alcohol, Maki added.

Stranger sighed of tiredness:
- I’m jus’ going out for some fresh air. Maybe I’ll figure out something, he said before he went out from the hut.
- Did I say something wrong, Maki asked confused.
- Nah, he jus’ need to time think for a while, the Grubb said.


* * * *


It had gone ten minutes since he went out from the warm hut and been trying to figure out some kind of solution, but without getting anywhere. “This was harder then I thought it would become”, Stranger thought as he looked out into the dark forest that surrounded the walls of the village and sighed. “Maybe the Grubb was right, maybe by brain really have taken vaccation”, he thought.

Though it was pretty late and the moon had begun to raise beyond the horizon, Stranger could hear small birds singing through the woods. The sound of peace and calm almost made him to doze of just as he heard a terrible scream. Stranger looked up and heard it again. He ran out from the village through the main gate and saw somebody run on the road down the hill in full speed with an army of Slegs in the heels. The one screamed once again and made Stranger run on all six after it to the rescue. He ran through the thick vegetations of lians, trees and bushes and succeded to catch up with the escaping prey, who seemed to be heading for the White oak tree. The Steef ran as fast as he could to manage to get to the tree before them. When the prey had reached the giant oak, it realized that the roots of the tree were to broad to climb and that the army of Slegs was approaching fast.

Just as it felt as the day of doom was here, Stranger jumped out from behind and landed in front of the victim and roared loud while he prided himself with raw anger. The Slegs then attacked him by biting his arms and legs, but Stranger grabbed them and threw a few of the little scumbags in to a treetrunk, while he knocked others out with his enormous and strong Gorilla-arms.

After a long bloody fight, the enemies were defeated and Stranger turned around to the prey. He walked to it and bent down to it’s height.

- Are you okay, he carefully asked as he laid his hand on it’s shoulder.
- I… I’m fine, a female voice answered while she met his gaze.
- Here let me help you up.

She took a hold of his hand and he helped her up on her legs. Stranger recognize that she wore a cloak over her that covered her face to her feet, except for the glowing darkblue eyes.
- Thank you, she said.
- Your welcome, Stranger said while he reckon that he still held her hand and let go of it.
- How can I ever repay you?
- Nah, it’s not necessary jus’… imagine that it hasn’t happend.
- Oh, but I can’t forget those creatures, they were terrifying and you almost got killed by them! There must be a way of repaying you?
- They’re jus’ a bunch of Slegs what did you think they would do to you? Anyway… where are you from?
- I rather not mention it, I feel too uncomfortable and chocked to tell.
- Okay, ya got any name?
- You can call me Yoanne. You?
- Yoanne huh? That’s a pretty name. My friends call me Stranger. I’m about to head back to Noka´s village do you want to come with me? It’s better to be in a village where no nasty critters will find you, don’t you think?
- Uhm thank you… I guess you’re right, but how do I know I can trust you?
- I saved your life, remember? Eh, do I look dangerous to you or what?
- Maybe a little, I mean I don’t know you…yet.
- Your right about that though, but I promise you that you’ll be safe there. And I’ll also promise that if someone tries to harm you, then I’ll personaly deal with him, Stranger said as he looked her deeply in her eyes and reached out his hand once more.
- Okay then. Lead me to the village, but be sure you’re telling the truth or else I’ll do something you would never like.
- What?
- Something real nasty, Yoanne said as she grabbed his hand and grinned.
- Try me, please…
She squeezed his hand harder and took a steady grip of his beard and pulled him closer to her own face and said with a mysterious voice:
- Make me…please!
- Well uhm… shall we go then?
- Sure, why not? Guide me to the village then, Yoanne said as she let go of his beard.

“Yikes, that chick knows how to handle a Steefmale who’s almost twice as big as herself, but she doesn’t know how to take out an army o’ Slegs…”, Stranger thought as he guided her back to the village. “I wonder where she comes from… ah well I’ll find it out sooner or later”.


~DS~

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Simply amazing, DS!
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Wow, that was an exciting scene with the slogs.

Yoanne? I think I heard that name before... didn't you draw a picture of her some times ago?
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Thank you all guys !!!

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Wow, that was an exciting scene with the slogs.
Thank you, but they're called Slegs

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Yoanne? I think I heard that name before... didn't you draw a picture of her some times ago?
Yes I did. And here is she again Warning: Spoiler alert!Yoanne it's only one of other scetches and I'll work on her colors a bit more.

Oh, and I'll update the story later on today See ya then!

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Thank you, but they're called Slegs

Slegs, right! Sorry, I mistook these with slogs .




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Yes I did. And here is she again Warning: Spoiler alert!Yoanne it's only one of other scetches and I'll work on her colors a bit more.

Double-sorry then (for saying that).
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Slegs, right! Sorry, I mistook these with slogs .
Double-sorry then (for saying that).
It's okay Doc well Here it is as I promised: A new chapter!


Chapter seventeen: The secrets of a Stranger – part one: Truth revieled



- Oh my! What’s this, the Grubb asked Stranger, has my Steef got himself a fiancée?
- What the…? Eh Stranger, congrats to ya, Maki added.
Stranger blushed and said:
- No this ain’t my… or anybody else’s fiancée. This is Yoanne, whom I rescued from a bunch of Slegs downside the hill.
- Slegs?! Oh, well… is she a…, Frayda asked.
- A what?
- A Steef?
- Uhm… I haven’t thought ‘bout that uhm… are you?
- Of course I am a Steef, Yoanne answered, what did you think I was? A Sleg?
Maki burtsted out into laughter.
- Ya know that girl o’ yers do got some humour, whahahahaha!
- First Maki, she isn’t my girlfriend and second stop teasing me, Stranger said with and annoyed voice.
- Eh, sorry I jus’ couldn’t help it.

There was a pause.
- So why do you wear this…baloney clothes, Maki asked.
- Baloney clothes? I beg your pardon “Mr” these are great clothes for sneaking and hiding in forests with high quality, Yoanne snorted.
- For hiding? And sneaking? Are you being nuts or what? Do ya think ya actually could hide in these woods without being noticed?
- Of course, why do think I would put these on for?
- Well you don’t have to hide yourself now, can’t you take it of, Frayda asked carefully.
- I don’t know… not outside I presume?
- Oh, but ya can change inside the hut if you want – it’s no problem at all.
- … okay but keep these two out of the way – I don’t like guys who are peeping.
- Sure, sure just walk inside and I’ll keep an closer eye on the boys, the Grubb said as she closed the door behind her.


* * * * *


Fifteen minutes later she stood there in front of them – to her five and a half feet height and gazed at the little group with darkblue eyes. She had darkblond hair that touched her shoulder-blades and a small braid was seen from the right side of the head and was decorated with red and darkgreen pearls, lightblond fur and wore a leatherbrown dress and a orange shirt that seemed a little bit too large for her thin body.

- Well, how do I look, Yoanne asked with a tender voice.
- You look magnificent dear, Frayda said with a smile on her lips, What do you guys say?
- You looked more cool in the other outfit, Maki said and got an angry look from Frayda, but you look great in this too.
- Stranger?

Stranger didn’t answer. He just stared at her with his jaw open. “Stranger” someone called again but still no response from him untill he felt that somebody shaked his shoulder.
- What? Have I missed somat?
- What do ya say of Yoanne’s new outfit, the Grubb asked.
- Oh, it’s errr… suits you.
- Thank you, Yoanne said and blushed.

Later on, when they all had got inside the hut Frayda decided to make some food for them. Well in the kitchen, Stranger went in to her and looked out from a window close to the oven. She saw him and began to talk to him.
- Now, where could I’ve seen that face expression before?
- What expression, Stranger asked.
- The dreaming look you had when ya saw Yoanne, remember?
- I haven’t been dreaming!
- Oh ya sure did! Don’t fool me dude I know when someone’s in love.
- In love…? Oh, c’mon I’m not in love with her, even the wisest Oracle couldn’t tell if I was.
- Really, then why do you look at her right now?
- I’m not staring at her… jus’…
- Uhuh? Now tell me my dear Steef – everything – I promise to keep it secret.

Stranger looked at her and then back at Yoanne and sighed deeply.
- I don’t know where to begin… for almost my whole life I’ve been unintressted in female Steefs. When I turned eighteen my dad told me to get myself a bride, but when I tried to get one, no one seemed to be intressted in me – jus’ in other males that looked more muscular and handsome. So I laid of searching for a partner and started my life as a lonewolf. I didn’t tell my father though, he would jus’ get mad at me. Years past and when I returned after my first mission as one of the new protectors in the valley, I had decided to get myself a wife… but I hadn’t got the clue of that only a couple of hours after my arrival the village would be all destroyed. I didn’t know if there were any other Steef tribes than mine, so…
- That’s why you gave it all up as a protector and decided to become a bounty hunter.
- Not exactly. I remember the last words my father said to me “ Make your way to the rocky mountains in the south of our country…there you’ll be safe…” I did travel south, but for nothing. I didn’t know where to look for others, but when I was traveling along the way I heard some Clakkerz talked about a doctor that had the abillities to operate then I decided to go to him and ask him if he would help me. But I understood that I had to dress myself out to something else with two legs whom they would never suspect as a Steef. So I turned out to be a good bountyhunter. When I first met the doc and told him about my little secret then he expected a some kind of price. And I knew exactly what to do. So here I stand… among the all Steefs. I’m quite happy that D.Caste Raider found out that I was one, otherwise I wouldn’t have seen, heard or even felt the scent of Steefs again.
- No you aren’t. You’re extremely grateful that he found out.
- Yeah I’m extremely grateful.
- Hey, is there going to be any food or not, Maki shouted out from the livingroom, we’re starving!
- It’s on it’s way, be patient, Frayda shouted back.
- I don’t know how to act in front of her, I mean I haven’t seen anything more beautiful than her in my whole life. Maybe I should or… maybe I shouldn’t, Stranger began.
- Shouldn’t do what, the Grubb asked.
- Ah, nothing. How do you know if someone likes you?
- You jus’ have to get to know her and if you feel that you two have something in common, then why not ask her to become yours?
- That’s where the problem lay – how do I know if she… you know would…
- Love you?
- Yeah.
- It’ll turn out by time passing by, you have to be patient and wait for the right moment. Now you have to leave me alone for a while so I don’t mix the ingredients. You go and sit with the other ones while I finish this.
- Alright. Thanks for the help.
- You’re welcome dude.


~DS~


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That's a warm part in the story.



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Stranger didn’t answer. He just stared at her with his jaw open. “Stranger” someone called again but still no response from him untill he felt that somebody shaked his shoulder.
- What? Have I missed somat?
- What do ya say of Yoanne’s new outfit, the Grubb asked.
- Oh, it’s errr… suits you.
- Thank you, Yoanne said and blushed.
So...
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That's so cute.
I'm thinking about drawing a picture about this moment when Stranger has that special "I'm-in-love"-look... I'm sure that looks interesting.


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I'm thinking about drawing a picture about this moment when Stranger has that special "I'm-in-love"-look... I'm sure that looks interesting.
I look forward for it. It's surely a very unique image.
The big, bad bounty hunter: fallen in love!
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