Steef art

[Dark Elite_H2]

Oh! I get it!
The Krack ain't a "dragon", per say, a descendent of it, but morely a dinosaur-type thingy...'bout the size o' a Chippunk.
But yeah! That's cute!
Bad Krack, bad!

[Dancing Steef]

that was two extremely funny pics ya got there ain't ya that lil critter adorable great work

~DS~

[Matriar]

Okay, now the critique...erm...er...*thinks* they could be bigger, but that's not your fault.

Er... *starts panicking* I can't think of anything! Sorry, it's just funneh!

Thank you, Lobo Yeah, it should be a simply joke.
I have to add, that you just should to criticize my art if you have some critique Thanks anyway for the endeavors

Oh! I get it!
The Krack ain't a "dragon", per say, a descendent of it, but morely a dinosaur-type thingy...'bout the size o' a Chippunk.
But yeah! That's cute!
Bad Krack, bad!

Okay, I can't draw "dinosaur-type" things


I noticed, you nice guys are the only ones, who checked my steef art thread, all the time:

Thank you very much!

I wish I could interest some more guys in my steef art.
Do you think my user name could be the problem?
The guys may read the thread "Steef art" and they think: "Maybe take a look on this... oh, wait... what's that for an idiotic user name, there?! I chance my mind..."
Have to add, I wasn't very imaginative when I built my nick name
Sorry, but I just had to ask that... my user name sounds so artless...

[LoboDiabloLoneWolf]

No! Yer name's nuthin to do with it, some people just don't appreciate fine art. Don't worry about it not alot of people comment, I bet there's loads just not saying anything. Hey, I've got about three constant readers of ma story, that's it. So don't let it bother you, you just keep updating, I'll keep lookin'.

[Dancing Steef]

Same here. I mean jus' look at yer art - it's fabulous! And btw nobody can draw the same as you do. Everybody has their own style of drawing and you got yours. I love yer art and yer name doesn't sound bad, on the contrary it's sounds cool - who will not be called Stranger's maid


~DS~

[Matriar]

Thanks guys

[Matriar]

That's just a unready sketch.
I show it to you just in case, if I'll do something wrongly. You know, Stranger's legs are so difficult to draw, when he's sitting.



This lady next to him is Jennadelle (or Jenna). But round these parts she is know as a strange and very dangerous person.
She's a demon girl, I invented. Don't look like that, I like demons don't ask me why. Shit happens.
Well, Jennadelle is a bounty hunter like Stranger, but she only hunt outlaws to satisfy one's desire for revenge. There's a tragic secret.

And Stranger likes her.

The finished picture will come soon. Just wait untill then, okay? See ya!

[Dark Elite_H2]

Oh, cool!
Ya know...when ya say that, it reminds me of my cousin and our RP...
She made a demon character as well...
Well, hope ter see the finished version soon!

[Matriar]

Oh... really? I didn't take a look at the RPG Forum. Jennadelle is my own imaginary person.

...but she isn't identical to the demon your cousin invented, is she?

[Dancing Steef]

WOW that's a cool & cute demon girl ya got there Maiden jus' one critique - can ya draw the lines more so they'll become more visible, please? Otherwise it looks good

~DS~

[Dark Elite_H2]

No, no, no! 'course not!
Linatsu's more human that what yer character looks of.

[Matriar]

I'm relieved to hear that.

[Matriar]

WOW that's a cool & cute demon girl ya got there Maiden jus' one critique - can ya draw the lines more so they'll become more visible, please? Otherwise it looks good

~DS~

Yeah, will do when I complete the picture This was just a unready sketch. And my scanner also did scan it a bit too light-colored.
But you're right, it wasn't visible enough. I'll do better for the future.

I have a little problem. Jennadelle has not a rag to put on yet. And I don't know what clother I should give her.
So, I made some examples :

The first picture is a simply bad-ass outfit with some brass knuckles:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695

The second is a cowboy style:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695

The third one too.
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695

And this guys, is an outlaw-style (Muahahaha )
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
I know, this outfit never match for a bounty hunter... but I couldn't stand to try it out It's my favorite picture!

Well, the last picture is another western outfit, I think:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695

Maybe you can help me with some good tips I always can make some more examples, to dress Jenna good enough I enjoyed, so don't worry.

[Dark Elite_H2]

Oh! I like's the last one! Ya ya!
They're all really good! I can't choose, but the best to me is the western outfit!

[Matriar]

Thanks!
I think, I'll take the first one. I love brass knuckles .
...and this style is also easier to draw.

Hey, good news! I plan to do a fan fiction with Jennadelle and Stranger (and maybe a lion, like the one, I once drawed, you remember?)

Bad news: It will takes a long time, untill I'll show it. Because I have to file it...!

It is a story about glorious tragedies, action, desperation, hope, hate...and love. And a secret complot...

Muahahaha

[LoboDiabloLoneWolf]

Ooooooooo. I likes the sound of that, and Jenna is fantastic, but like DS I can't really see the picture with her and Stranger very well.

On the Outfits, the three one reminds me of Indiana Jones. But in all honesty...I like the Outlaw one! Yeah, really. I think it suits her waaaaaaay more then the others.

[Matriar]

Har har . Glad, you like it too!
But I guess, I can't dress her like that for future... wait a second! I could make an outlaw of her for a short time. Ooo! Ideas! Inspirations!
Hey, my story becomes more and more interesting!
Sometimes an outlaw... and sometimes a bounty hunter . And...and... aww.
Nice

Ooooooooo. I likes the sound of that, and Jenna is fantastic, but like DS I can't really see the picture with her and Stranger very well.

Well, I work for the finished picture, so don't worry

[LoboDiabloLoneWolf]

*cheers* YAY! *does happy dance* Glad I could help matie, and I can't wait fer this story and finished piccy...



*sings softly* Stranger's gotta a girlfriend, Stranger's gotta a girlfriend, Stranger's gotta a girlfriend...

[Matriar]

I also can't wait But I don't really agitate.

I think, I'll show in my fan-fic-thread also some pictures. You know, just matching ones to some particular scenes in the story.
They will be some SW screenshots and some of my brand-new art , of course.

[Dancing Steef]

WOOOOW they're awesome pics Maiden - Jenna looks so cool- 'specially in the outlaw n' cowboy-style she's adorable

Keep it up!


~DS~

[Matriar]

Thanks, DS

I think now is time to show a Stranger picture.
I call this one...












































"What happened????!!!"

[Dark Elite_H2]

XD
That's hilarious, Maiden!
Poor Stranger! All o' a sudden midgitized!

[Matriar]

Huh? "Midgitized"?
What means that?

[Dark Elite_H2]

He got smaller...
Ya know..."midget"?
Just with a "ized" at the end.

[Matriar]

I see
He's really a poor kid. But he's cute, isn't he ?

("I'm midgitized! I'm so helpless! I want to go home to my mommy! Waaaaaaaaa! !")

[LoboDiabloLoneWolf]

DAW! He's so cute! *glomps baby Stranger*

Midget Stranger - Someone get her off me!

[Dark Elite_H2]

gasp!
Lobo! No! Bad girl! Bad!
Git off'a 'im! Now!
ulls baby Stranger out:
She didn't mean to...she didn't mean to...it's ok...:coos:
:Midgit Stranger: Who's 'dis gal?

[Matriar]

LOL
Everyone battle for the midget, poor Stranger

[LoboDiabloLoneWolf]

Awwwwww *whines* Darky, I saw 'im fir-st... *pouts and mutters something about 'I wanted to cuddle midget Stranger...'*

[digimaster43]

thats a most cutest pic i've ever seen.