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I agree with DE, and I also LOVE the story as well! you's a very good writer ya know I'm so imprest by yer talents of writing *Jumps up n' down of happyness* yeah I really envy you alot

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Thanks everyone! More story'll be updated this evening, dunno what time, I got archery lessons, but I guarantee more story. Stay Odd peeps.
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Stranger’s Departure
A little way away Stranger felt a tug on his heart. Bailey needed him, right now. Immediately he made his way back to the infirmary hut of the old Steef. When he reached it a few minutes later, he found Bailey, coming out of the hut and closing it softly behind. Bailey looked at him, with sad, tired eyes and Stranger knew that the old Steef had left the living world. Bailey swallowed a sob as she saw Stranger. Stranger came up to her and nudged her chin so that she was looking at him.

“Bailey? What happened? I felt yer needed me.” Bailey looked at Stranger without speaking, with a sad, confused gaze. “What’s wrong liddle darlin’?” Stranger asked slowly. Bailey gulped and flung her arms around Stranger’s stomach, burying her face in his fur, sniffling quietly.

“I wouldn’t hurt you. You know I wouldn’t right Stranger? You do know that don’t you.” Bailey sounded desperate and on the verge of tears. Stranger was surprised to say the least but he soon swept it aside when Bailey looked up at him, her desperate eyes glistening. Stranger stroked her head.

“You’d never hurt me.” He reassured, “And I’d never hurt you either. Bailey? What’s this all about?” Bailey suddenly burst into tears,

“I’m sorry!” she wailed, almost hysterical, pressing her head to Stranger’s stomach, “I’m sorry for what he did to you. I never knew, I’m sorry, I’m so sorry!” Shocked Stranger picked her up like she didn’t weigh anything, and looked into her face concernedly. He was shaken when he saw Bailey’s red, tearful eyes.

“Bailey,” he soothed, “Bailey, what have yer to be sorry for? Yer haven’t done anythin’ wrong.” Stranger eyes glowed fiercely, “What did he say to yer?” he suddenly growled, “I knew I should neva let yer go in there.” He wiped away Bailey’s tears with a gentle touch, she wouldn’t meet his eyes. “Bailey, look at me.” Stranger touched Bailey’s nose with his own.

“I’m sorry.” She whispered again, eyes filling up, “I’m sorry, I never meant for it to happen.” She dropped her head onto Stranger’s shoulder, closing her eyes, the tears leaking from under the lids, “I’m sorry, so sorry.” Stranger rested a hand on Bailey’s head. All the while Bailey hiccupped quietly, her forehead pressed against his shoulder, the occasional tear sliding down her cheek.

“Okay, calm down liddle one. Calm down, I got’cha.” However much Stranger wanted to take Bailey away and cuddle her, find out what had upset her so, he knew he couldn’t. Respects had to be paid to the old Steef. He lifted her hair gently, “We’ll talk about this later.” He whispered in her ear. Bailey nodded into his shoulder.

¤§¤

The Steef was buried that day in the Grubb graveyard, overlooking the valley. ‘An eternal guardian’ the Grubbs called it, even in death the Steef’s soul could watch over them. When Bailey asked about this, the Seer explained that it was according to the traditions of the Steef, before Sekto came, that when a Steef guardian died, his (because apparently only male Steef were guardians) soul would forever wander the place he protected on the immortal plain.

“Immortal plain? Wait, the old Steef kept mentioning plains.” Bailey had said, the Grubb Seer nodded,

“The Steef believed that there was the physical plain, this world around us, and the immortal plain, a spiritual world that overlapped ours, but never joined, except were the veil between is very thin. We Grubbs believe that too.”

“Don’t I know it…” Bailey thought, remembering the voices she’d heard in the Grubb graveyard, “I guess I believe it too…”

Appropriately on that day of the burial the sky went grey and it began to snow, drifting softly on Stranger, Bailey and Grubbs.

As the box was lowered the Grubb Seer intoned a blessing.

“Great one who made all things as they are, take thee this Steef into thy heart as a loyal follower of thine great laws.” The Grubbs joined in as they spoke the prayer, Bailey listening in respectful silence;

The long prison of years unlocks it’s iron door,
Go free now, into the beautiful land.
Forgive us who suffer in this clouded world,
Guide us and wait for us as we wait for you.
We will meet again.

We will meet again. Whispered a voice, a breeze touched Bailey’s cheek, she looked out among the graves.

She saw the old Steef. Standing among the stones, smiling at her. As she watched the years melted from the Steef until he was young and strong again, his horns re-grown. Just a bit older then Stranger. And then another Steef, this one female seemed to step out of thin air and joined him, hugging him tightly and kissing him on the cheek. The female Steef then too looked over at Bailey and smiled. Other Steef, whom Bailey guessed were friends, old comrades and family, appeared and joyfully greeted the no-longer-old Steef as well, they laughed as they hugged him. Bailey could almost feel their happiness and joy as if it were a tangible thing.

The group looked over at Bailey, realising she could see them. They smiled and Bailey felt a warm wave of love and compassion emanate from them. She bowed her head fractionally in respect, they returned the sentiment and then faded away, like scraps of smoke on the wind.

We will meet again.

¤§¤

It was a few days later and Stranger was determined to find a quite place where he could talk to Bailey, to find out what had upset the day the old Steef had died.

It wasn’t hard finding her and when he did, he didn’t wait to explain or hear her protests before he swept her into his arms and began marching towards the outskirts of the village. Both he and Bailey felt more comfortable in the wilds. Stranger continued out of the village until they were among the trees.

Stranger clambered up into a bole formed by the twisting trunks of several trees. Folding his legs beneath him he relaxed in the trees swaying gently seven feet from the ground, hidden by leaves.

“Bailey.” He said softly. “Please, tell me what’s wrong.” Bailey sniffled, Stranger gently wiped her eyes and brushed a strand of hair from her face. “What did the old Steef tell yer?” Bailey swallowed and explained, she recounted everything that the old Steef had told her, including what she had discovered about her own father, Stranger and the Steef tribe in the mountains.

Finally she went quite. Stranger hugged her close, resting his chin on Bailey’s hair.

“Oh my Bailey.” He sighed, “Why were yer apologisin’ fer undoin’ what yer Dad did.”

“He’s not my Dad.” Bailey said quietly, “I have a father, but no Dad. And I don’t need one.” She looked up at Stranger, “I have you.” Stranger smiled and nuzzled her cheek. “Love you.” Bailey muttered,

“I love yer too kiddo.” Stranger stroked her hair and kissed her cheek.

“We need to find them.” Bailey said suddenly. “We need to get you back, to the Steef.” Stranger let out a deep breath.

“Not ‘we’ baby-doll.” He sighed, “Not we. I’m never puttin’ yer in danger again. I’ll go, and then I’ll come back for yer.”

“You’re gonna leave me behind?” Bailey asked softly, Stranger wrapped his arms more firmly around Bailey, trying to make her feel how much he loved her and wanted to keep her away from danger.

“I want you to be safe.” There was a comfortable silence, Bailey felt Stranger’s soft fur on her cheek and the deep, regular thud of his heart, she felt warm and safe and most importantly she felt loved.

“I’ll miss you while you’re gone.” she murmured,

“I’ll miss yer too, but I gotta know…” he faded off and pressed his cheek to Bailey’s.

“You have to do, what you have to do.” Bailey whispered. “As long as you promise you’ll come back to get me.”

“I promise Bailey.”

¤§¤

A week had passed. Stranger stood close to Bailey, in the middle of the Grubbs of the village who’d come to see him off as he went in search of more Steef.

“You’ll be back soon won’t ya Steef dude?” asked one Grubb,

“As soon as I find the other Steef.” Stranger nodded as he swung the pack the Grubbs had made up for him over his shoulder. He went down to Bailey’s eye-level. “You gotta look afta them while I’m away kiddo.” He grinned comfortingly, “I’ll be back real soon.” He whispered for her ears only, “I love you liddle darlin’.” Bailey threw her arms around Stranger’s neck and hugged him tight.

“I love you too.” Stranger gave her one last squeeze and stood up, turning towards the Grubb queen as she approached with the tribe’s Seer.

“So you begin another journey Stranger.” The Grubb smiled, Stranger nodded. “We will look after your Bailey until you return.”

“Thankee kindly ma’am, I hope to be back fer ‘er soon.” The queen smiled and nodded and the Grubbs parted for Stranger to pass through.

“There is a road in the hearts of us all.” She said, sending a Grubb blessing after him, as Stranger walked through the groups, towards the remains of Sekto’s dam and the mountains. The other Grubbs joined in and spoke in unison as he left the village and began his journey north.

“Hidden and seldom travelled,
Which leads to an unknown, secret place.”

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Okay, don’t own 95% of the burial blessing and the second Grubb blessing apparently appears at the end of Stranger’s Wrath. Credit to Ignigeno for that information. Thanks matie.
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NICE chapter LW! It's getting more intense... Stranger looking for other Steefs huh? Cool can't wait reading what's going ta hapen next


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Yep, he's off ter find more Steef, but it'll be completely different from yours I promise.
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Into Snow And Storm
Days passed and Bailey integrated herself with the community, wherever help was needed Bailey would go and do whatever needed doing. There was a sense of urgency in the air, stores and winter supplies needed to be made and stocked up to last the winter.

So whether it be fishing, dying cloth, helping with the stores, kippering the fish caught, making fish paste and all the other foodstuffs the Grubbs made from the fish or even been roped into making baskets and fishing nets; Bailey did it all and all the time she was learning to fit into this new existence.

She took her guardian duties very seriously as well, patrolling the boarders, armed and ready for trouble, but with Sekto gone and all the more notorious Outlaws behind bars the danger to the Grubbs had seemed that for the most part, to have passed.

As the winter laid it’s thick snowy blanket on the world around them, the Grubbs retreated indoors, living off the stores they had stocked before the snow had come.

Without the work to occupy her mind, Bailey found that her thoughts turned more and more to Stranger. Was he alright in the fierce, unforgiving winter? Did he have shelter and enough to eat as Bailey had? Or was he alone in the cold and dark, hurt, maybe even dying?

Bailey shivered and pulled a hood of blanket over her head as she stared into the fire of one of the bigger communal huts, nursing a steaming mug. Even though the hut was packed, the Grubbs huddled together, chatting pleasantly, fed and warmed, Bailey suddenly felt very alone. She felt misery creeping up on her. Jolee obviously felt it too as she came and sat beside Bailey, she and the human had become firm friends and most of the time the two could be seen working happily together, bantering lightly and laughing.

“Steef’ll be fine ‘Lee.” Jolee said bracingly, knowing instinctively what bothered Bailey, “I bet he’s in the exact same situation you are, and I bet he’s worrying himself silly about you as well.” Bailey forced a watery smile.

“Yeh…yeh, course he is…” Bailey fell silent. Jolee hated seeing Bailey so desolate and wracked her brain to think of something to pull her out of her brooding. Suddenly she stood up, and climbed on a nearby table, the Grubbs at the table picking up their mugs and looking interestedly as Jolee waved her arms for attention.

“Excuse me!” she called, “’Scuse me please!” The Grubbs soon fell silent and looked at Jolee expectantly, Jolee beamed, “I can think of nothing better on a winter evening,” she said loudly so that she was heard clearly, “Then a story, and if she’ll agree, I suggest we ask Bailey to tell us a story from her own homeland.” The reaction was instantaneous and unanimous. The Grubbs clammered for Bailey to tell them a story. Jolee smiled apologetically at her friend then jumped down from the table.

Bailey considered being irritated and refusing, but the eager faces of the Grubbs made her smile and she stood up, the blanket thrown over her shoulders and head like a cloak. She grinned and the Grubbs feel silent.

“So it’s a story you want?” she asked, a roar of sound answered her, laughing Bailey flapped her hands for quiet and she was obeyed. “Alright, a story you want, a story you’ll get.” She moved to stand with her back towards the fire, the blanket draped over her mysteriously, she cleared her throat, the sound clear in the silent hut.

“A long time ago,” she began, with a huge grin on her face, “In a galaxy far, far away…” she paused and the grin grew, “Star Wars.”

¤§¤

Days turned into weeks, and weeks – to Bailey’s increasing worry – became months. Three months passed when Bailey had the dream.

She stood on a snowfield, a blizzard raging around her. Her hair whipped across her face, obscuring her vision. Strangely she didn’t feel cold, nor did she feel apprehension when a Steef appeared through the curtain of flurrying snowflakes. She was mildly surprised when she realised that the Steef was transparent, tinted blue and glowing gently. When she recognised him, she broke into a smile.

“Old Steef.” She greeted cheerfully, “Whadda you doin’ here? Where are we? Why am I here?”

“So many questions.” Smiled the Steef fondly, “But I cannot answer them all, we only have a short time, and a lot to discuss. I’ve been sent to come and speak to you. Stranger needs you.”

“Did he find the Steef tribe?” Bailey asked eagerly, the old Steef smiled indulgently,

“Yes, he found them, he is safe and well.” Bailey felt a faint stab of hurt,

“Why didn’t he come back for me?” she asked plaintively,

“Believe me child, he tried, but he was injured. No, no,” he added quickly as Bailey’s face became scared, “He is fine now, but unable to travel back.” The Steef smiled again, “He misses you, it’s been agonising for him to know you’re waiting.”

“What do I have to do?” Bailey asked in a decided tone.

“You must go to him, there is something you must do in the north. That is where your path leads you.” The Steef began fading,

“Wait! What is it I have to do!?” Bailey shouted, trying to be heard over the storm. The Steef laughed, a deep husky laughed that remained Bailey painfully of Stranger,

“I have to leave you now. But you must go north. Amongst the Steef is where your destiny lies now.” The Steef faded.


Bailey woke with a jerk, sitting up and gasping. When her heart and breathing had calmed she flopped back onto her bed and rubbed her eyes. She stared up at the ceiling, her mind already made up, in the morning, she would begin preparations to go north, to find the Steef.

And Stranger.

¤§¤

“You are sure this is what you want to do?” the Grubb queen asked.

“Yes ma’am, I’m sure. I take my duties as the guardian very seriously, but I need to go. I’ve been called.”

“Seer, what do you make of this?” asked the queen,

“Bailey did come to me beforehand, I’ve scryed and found that she was sent a message from the immortal plain. She is meant to go north majesty. Her heart is set on it, and I believe that whatever it is that she is destined to do. It will help us as well.” The Seer defended Bailey,

“You speak as if you know something Seer. What would you do?” Said the queen wryly, the Seer bowed slightly,

“Majesty, I would kit Bailey with the best we have and let her go north. I have seen, that if we do. The Steef will return, not just Stranger, but others as well. The Mongo guardians with come again.” The queen looked from the old Seer to the young human, her face was set and determined. The queen couldn’t help smiling, she knew that even if they didn’t help her, Bailey would go anyway. The Grubb queen had to admire Bailey’s iron will. Bailey would not be swayed.

“If I didn’t know better, I’d say she was Steef too…” the queen nodded, “Alright, Seer, I want Bailey to get the best we have.” The queen smiled at Bailey, “She has a long way to go.”

¤§¤

Bailey sat on the bed in her hut, packing everything she needed into her pack. Over the last few months she’d only need to tot around her bow and arrows, but now she dug out everything she owned; clothes, trinkets, weaponry, supplies and packed it carefully. Just as she’d finished that was a knock on the door.

“’Ello?” Bailey called,

“It’s me.” Came Jolee’s voice,

“Oh, come on in Jo’.” The small Grubb girl opened the door and came in with a black, rubbery and green, woolly things folded in her arms. Meech trotted in after the Grubb. Bailey grinned and patted Meech’s head, she cocked her own head as Jolee laid the black and green things onto the bed, next to some thick, dark pants, shirt, a kind of knitted balaclava-esque hood, green jumper, mittens and woolly hat. “What’re these?” the human asked curiously.

“It’ll keep yer warm.” Jolee smiled, she picked up the green thing, “Your old scarf was kinda wrecked, so we made a new one.”

“Aww, thanks Joey.” Jolee grinned and unfolded the black, rubbery thing. She held it up, it reminded Bailey of a drysuit from Earth.

“This is made from the skin of a sea creature that migrates up the Mongo every couple of years, you haven’t been here long enough to see it, but anyway; you wear this under yer clothes and it keeps yer warm.”

“Wow, nifty.” Bailey grinned.

“See yer inna bit ‘Lee.” Jolee grinned and left Bailey to change.

After a while Bailey was ready to leave, she pulled the woolly hat over her hair and tugged on her scarf and mittens. She took one last look at what had been home for the past few months and then went out into the snow.

The Grubbs of the village were all there to see her off, all wrapped up warmly. The wind whistled, blowing towards the mountains, as if leading Bailey where she was needed. Bailey said goodbye to her friends and was hugged by a fair few of them before she reached Jolee and was hugged by her as well.

“Take care of Meech while I’m gone.” Bailey said, Jolee nodded;

“I will.” The Grubbs clustered together and spoke the blessing of wanderers.

“There is a road in the hearts of us all,
Hidden and seldom travelled,
Which leads to an unknown, secret place.”

And Bailey disappeared into the snow and storm.
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Road To Nowhere
“Don’t know where we're going,
Got no way of knowing,
Driving on the road to nowhere…”

Bailey had murmured the pointless, repetitive refrain for a while now. Just to take her mind from the endless cold and snow. The rubbery suit Jolee had brought, for the most part kept the severe cold at bay, but not enough for Bailey not to feel the pinch.

She pulled the woollen hat over her ears and tugged gently at the scarf so that only her eyes were visible and stumbled on through the three feet snowdrifts.

¤§¤

Bailey stumbled and fell to her knees, near exhausted and bitterly cold.

Eight days. She’d been travelling for eight days now and as far as she knew, she was no nearer to her destination. For all she could tell, she could have been wandering around in circles, the thought was disheartening. But Bailey was stubborn and she pushed herself to her feet and continued doggedly, staggering and stumbling through snow that came up to her knees.

Finally Bailey couldn’t take anymore and she collapsed, utterly spent. She curled up into a shivering little ball and waited for the inevitable.

“Sorry Stranger,” she whispered, shaking with cold, “I tried my hardest.”

“You can’t give up now, you’re so close. Come on now, get up.” Said a calm voice, just above her. Bailey curled up tighter.

“I, can’t.”

“Yes, yes you can, now get up.” The voice said firmly, “I have waited too long for you my little one, you can’t give up now.” With obvious effort Bailey looked up, the speaker glowed blue and Bailey could see the snow gusting behind. The apparition smiled kindly. It was a female Steef, with long hair and huge, beautiful eyes, wearing a long, flowing shirt. For some reason she seemed very familiar to Bailey.

“I’m tired.” Bailey whispered, “I don’t have anything left to give.” The female Steef smiled warmly,

“Yes you have my little Bailey, you have so much. There are people that need you, such a bright little spark of a soul shouldn’t go out again.”

“A…again?” Bailey whispered, her jaw vibrating with cold. The Steef smiled and Bailey felt a little stronger. She struggled to her feet.

“That’s it,” the Steef encouraged, “That’s it, keep going. Come on Bailey. You can do it.” Bailey stood up and began wading through the snow, driven by the Steef’s encouragement.

The wind howled and the snow battered at Bailey as she forged on, not knowing where she was going. She looked around for the glowing Steef, but she was alone. Bailey managed a weak smile. Determination once again flowed through her veins and she continued, singing to keep her spirits up, the wind snatching at her voice and making her body cold but her confidence surged again.

“I can see clearly now the rain has gone,
I can see all obstacles in my way,
Gone are the dark clouds that had me blind,
It's going to be a bright, bright, bright, bright sunshiny day!”

¤§¤

The storm seemed to worsen with every step Bailey took, if that was even possible, Bailey didn’t know, nor did she care, all her energies were focused on three words that ran around her mind like a mantra.

Just keep going.

A blast of icy wind gusted in her face. Bailey squinted her eyes and crouched slightly until it passed, before she rose and struggled onward. Cold and wet seeped through her pant legs but the rubbery suit kept her dry, for which Bailey was very grateful.

Suddenly, another great blast of air from the east crashed into Bailey with the force of a wave of water. Bailey staggered and was forced to her knees and rolled over and over in the snow, scrabbling to get a hold as she was pitched down a sharp hill.

Finally she managed to dig in her heels and grind to a halt, stopping her sliding descent. She flopped onto her back with a sigh of relief and put her mittens over her face.

“That was too close.” She whispered. Carefully she climbed to her and tried to stand up but she didn’t see the patch of ice and she hit the snow again with a hard thud, air whooshing from her lungs at the impact. Completely winded Bailey gasped and rolled onto her side. She tried to rise again but found the same results, unfortunately with much more disastrous consequences.

Bailey began sliding.

Then, to make matters worse, the snow plain suddenly dropped out beneath her and with a yelp Bailey fell over the edge of a cliff that had been obscured from her vision by wind and snow.

Her jumper snagged on something and Bailey was abruptly jerked out of her descent and almost choked for her trouble. She quickly reached up and latched onto the thing holding her up. It was a tree root, that had grown out through the cliff-face. Bailey had unhooked the jumper and taken a firm hold on the root and was just wondering how to clamber back up the cliff when she realised that the wind wasn’t blowing anymore, no snowflakes touched flurried around her.

Frowning, Bailey looked down. Her eyes all but bugged out of her head. Not far below her was a small sheltered valley, about the size of about five American football fields of which she could see only a little fragment. Bailey blinked in surprise. It looked as if it were still autumn in the valley below her, nowhere near the midwinter above. A river ran down the valley’s whole length and a good bit of it that she could see was covered in a thick forest into which the river disappeared.

But what captured her attention most, was the cluster of huts below, and the figures she could see.

Steef. Lots and lots, of Steef.

Bailey whooped in delight.

“Steef!” she yelled joyfully, “Oodles and oodles of Steef! I did it! I found them! YEAH!” a sudden crack broke into her jubilation. Bailey looked up and once again experience a bout of hated déj* vu. “Oh crud, oh man,” she moaned, “…Oh no…” the root cracked again and with a harsh screech, it snapped.

Bailey dropped and crashed through the ceiling of one of the huts below. She landed on her back with a crunch. She sat up slowly, one hand on the side of her head. Luckily she hadn’t broken anything but one of her pupils were bigger then the other and it took a lot of effort to drunkenly hold the groggy thoughts together.

She blinked and looked up, a female Steef with very pale hair and fur and startlingly pure blue eyes and staring at her apprehensively, clutching at two little Steeflings, one with pale fur and blue eyes, and the other slightly darker furred with red and burnt orange eyes. All of them gaped at the strange creature that had just fallen through their roof, their eyes very, very wide.

Bailey broke into an unsteady grin.

“Oh look,” she said dreamily, “Steef.” And then she fainted.
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Ooooh... cool and exiting LW! I wanna read more of yer amazing work I'm so curious what's going to hapen next Bailey's lucky that she found the Steefs Looking forward to the next bit

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Wheeeeeeeeeee! Glad you like. Yeh, too lucky if you ask me, if I'd written it realistically, more then likely she'd had gotten lost and frozen to death...But ANYway, more comin' soon!
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Behind Bars - Again
Bailey groaned and sat up. Keeping her eyes closed she rubbed at her aching skull gently. When she opened her eyes and looked around she let out another groan.

“Not again.” She was in a cube shaped cell, but unlike Sekto’s dungeons, they were more cages that cells, with only a back wall and a low level wall running along both sides. But the rest was comprised of bars.

Bailey looked down the row of cells and found herself completely alone. She put her head and her hands and shook it.

“This is not happening to me.” She muttered. “Someone up there hates my guts…” She peeped between her fingers and looked around again. The cells were a lot cleaner and more pleasant then Sekto’s dungeons. And it was lighter as well, a torch flickered at regular intervals along the cells, and Bailey could see the lanterns in the corridor leading passed all the cells, as well.

Bailey stood up quickly and tried to move to stand by her cells door, a foot away from it, she felt a tug at her ankle. A manacle and chain was cuffed around her ankle. The chain was attached to a ring on the back wall of the cell and it was only just long enough for Bailey to stand at her door if she hopped on one leg.

It more then likely looked ridiculous.

But that wasn’t what Bailey was looking at. That was her stuff hung on the back wall, her pack with everything she owned in it and her woollen hat, scarf and mittens. And next to it, was a ring of keys hanging on a sagging nail.

“Urg, this is so stupid.” She muttered. She stomped into the back corner of the cell and plonked down on the pile of straw, elbows on crossed knees, chin in her hands as she scowled to herself. “Someone definitely hates me.”

¤§¤

It was a couple of mind-numbingly boring hours later when Bailey first heard it. A deep, muffled boom. The kind that sent vibrations through the floor, that Bailey felt acutely. Bailey scrambled to her feet.

“WHAT IN FLAMING HECK!?” she yelled as she stumbled to one side as another boom rocked the floor. “That sounds like a canon…” Bailey murmured, her eyes went wide, “A CANON!?” Bailey’s mind whirled, horrible thoughts went racing through it. Were humans back?? Were they attacking the Steef?? “I have to get outta here.” She whispered.

She scrabbled around on the floor until she found a pebble. She scrambled over to her door and looked at the drooping nail on which the keys hung.

“Please work.” She whispered, “Please work.” she aimed and threw the little fragment of rock. It bounced on the wall and fell onto the already loose nail. The nail fell out of the wall and the keys jangled as they hit the floor, about three feet away from Bailey. Just out of her reach. “Oh fer cryin’ out- give me a break will ya!” she snapped to no one in particular. Bailey fumed, as if nothing else could go wrong.

¤§¤

“C’mon,” murmured Bailey, tongue between her teeth, “C’mon, just a liddle bit further…” She stretched her fingers and groped at ring of keys on the flags. The sounds of battle above her head became more intense, Bailey glanced up and then stretched more desperately. She ignored the pain of her shoulder being wedged between the bars of her cell door. The chain of the manacle around her foot pulling taunt.

It would have been quite amusing to an onlooker. The short human girl balancing on one leg, the other stuck out behind her, reaching for some fallen keys.

“I hate Steef.” Bailey thought mutinously. “Well okay, I hate all Steef bar Stranger…” With a strained sound Bailey reached abit further and managed to get a hold on the keys. “Thank you God.” Bailey whispered and eased herself back into the cells, the keys hooked on her fingers.

She sat on the cold, damp floor of the cell and patiently tested each key in the manacle’s lock. Finally, the lock clicked and the manacle fell from her leg. Bailey rubbed her leg to get the blood flowing, then she scrambled to her feet and slammed into the cell door, fumbling with the keys, putting each one in the lock in turn. It only took a minute or two for her to unlock her cell.

Bailey tumbled out of the Steef cell but jumped to her feet in a moment.

“Right.” She growled. She pulled on her hat and scarf, jammed the mittens into her pockets and grabbed her pack from the hook on the wall where all confiscated possessions of the prisoner were hung. She rooted around in it until she brought out her bow and arrows, hatchet and the handguns. She swung on the pack, secured the bow and arrow quiver across her back, put the hatchet on her belt and the handgun holsters behind her back. “Right.” She said again, pulling her fingerless gloves on and hiding the guns with her jumper. “Ready to rock.”

Bailey sprinted along the passage with the cells on her right. She reached the stairs and tore up them, she burst through the thick wooden door and paused, getting her bearings. She was underground still. A network of passages went out in all directions like a warren.

After a second she followed her instincts and went along the left hand corridor.

It took her under five minutes to reached the surface door that led to outside of the underground civilisation. Bailey didn’t pause to wonder why she wasn’t in the Steef village any more. She just flung open the door and scrambled out into the snow.

Another snowstorm was raging – or it could have been the same one, Bailey didn’t know. What she did know was that it affected visibility. Which was bad, but not terrible.

Bailey’s loose hair and the ends of her green bandana whipped across her face, but Bailey could see the dark shadows flitting through the snow screen, and she could hear the muffled sounds of a battle.

Bailey squinted and soon her eyes adjusted and she could distinguish Steef in the flurry of snowflakes. Lots and lots of Steef were out in the snow, fighting ferociously with creatures with guns.

“Outlaws?” Bailey wondered, briefly relieved they weren’t humans, at least, they didn’t seem human… She didn’t have long to ponder this question as just then, as she watched, she saw one of the creatures aiming his gun at a Steef fighting another of the creatures. The Steef had it’s back turned to the creature and was too busy scrapping to notice it.

Bailey growled, without thinking she instinctively drew her gun and fired, hitting the creature in the back of the head. The creature dropped.

“Low life.” She thought.

Bailey plunged in the battle.

Soon she was firing left, right and centre, taking down the creatures as they attacked the Steef. Unfortunately for her, her ammo couldn’t last forever and just when she needed it, it ran out.

For a while she’d been picking off the enemy without being noticed, but now she’d been spotted. Bailey saw one of the creatures advancing upon her through the storm. For a moment they stood, face to face, guns at the ready like a Western showdown. The Bailey fired…or tired too…her gun clicked. Her adversary chuckled mockingly.

“Aww, your peashooter pack-in princess?” Bailey frowned slightly, she did not recognise that voice, this was something new…

Suddenly the wind dropped, and for a split second Bailey got a good look at her antagonist. Bailey gaped, eyes wide, she almost screamed.

It looked like a warped human with grey skin and it’s mouth had no lips, only long, toothpick teeth. It had a machine gun in one hand, and some kind of axe in the other.

“Let’s look at the colour of yore insides.” The thing grinned horribly, then he choked and fell, gurgling. An arrow in his throat, red blood gushing from the punctured jugular.

“They’re red, just like yours.” Bailey muttered and lowered her bow. She didn’t stop for long and after a split second she spun and continued to fight, darting through the snow curtain.

After a while, after Bailey had been fighting, hidden from either side by the snow she heard a great, deep-throated roar that shook her bones. Bailey snapped towards the sound. The snow was clearing now and visibility was getting better.

Bailey saw one giant Steef (which Bailey took as male as been as it had huge curling horns like a demonic mountain goat from Hell and the female she’d seen didn’t have horns) being overwhelmed by three other creatures, about Bailey’s height. These were more familiar, looking like hunchback Outlaws but not exactly the ones Bailey had seen.

Bailey drew an arrow, notched it to her bowstring, aimed and fired, one of the Outlaw-esque cretures squealed and fell, Bailey drew two arrows, one after the other and slew the last two of the Steef’s tormentors.

Bailey grinned in satisfaction and lowered the bow.

“Yippyciya losers.” She muttered. And then, again, she heard that earth shattering roar, but this time from behind her, and louder now as the storm had dropped and the wailing wind, silenced.

Bailey pivoted, sharp eyes confused.

Another huge Steef was charging.

Straight for her!

Bailey’s eyes went wide and she took a shocked step back, but she had no time to move more then that. The Steef (which also appeared male) skidded to a halt in front of her and reared, thrashing powerful hooves. Bailey, fortunately, managed to dodge the pulverising blows. And retreated slightly.

The Steef warrior kept coming, splashing up the snow in violent sprays. He reared again.

“Die scum!” he roared and his fore-hooves came crashing down.

Bailey dropped into a roll and evaded the pounding hooves. She jumped to her feet, and realised too late, her mistake. The Steef lashed out with his back legs, his hind hooves connecting with Bailey’s ribs in a savage kick.

Several somethings cracked…

Bailey choked and let out a gasp, dropping to her knees, falling backwards and hitting the snow in a daze.

Excruciating pain drenched her vision with red. She looked up weakly at the Steef. He was raising a fore-hoof, right over Bailey’s head. He was going to smashed open her skull like an egg…

Something flickered in the corner of Bailey’s bleary eyes.

One of the warped creatures was rising, it staggered to one side but steadied itself and brought up a gun.

The Steef hoof came down.

Bailey rolled, hauled her body upright to her knees, sending agony through her ribs, and brought the hatchet from her belt. The Steef, obviously thinking Bailey was trying to attacked him again, rose on his hindlegs to strike her.

Bailey grit her teeth against the pain and flung the hatchet. It struck the thing, it fell.

Bailey then twisted her body, avoiding the blow and staggered to her feet. She wiped a trickle of blood from her mouth,

“Idiot Steef.” She choked, spitting blood from her mouth. “I’m on your bloody side.”

“Do not lie scum!” the Steef roared, they were surrounded by others now, watching a comrade slaughter Bailey.

“If I woz lyin’ why do half o’ them twisted freaks got my arras in ‘em?” Bailey’s voice was choked and think with the blood in her mouth, her knees buckled and she dropped to them, heaving for oxygen that was blocked by broken ribs. She lifted her head, steadily becoming weaker. The huge Steef was smirking at her, clearly not believing a word. He stooped and Bailey saw a flash of reflecting light off the head of a long spear.

She watched with pain-induced detachedness as the Steef raised the spear, it’s head bright and gleaming.

“Fine.” Said her still active mind, “Fine. I give up. Kill me… Stranger, if only you could know that I love you, more then anything. I wish I could see you again…goodbye my friend.” She felt a vague feeling of resentment, “So this is it?” she asked herself, “This is what I fought through a storm for? To be kebabed by some dumb Steef?” The spearhead came down in a silver arc.

Bailey heard a familiar voice roaring, or was that the blood in her ears? And then, suddenly the big Steef was thrust aside as another furry mass, smaller then he was, but made of just as much hard muscle and sinew, barrelled into him. The Steef fell but had soon scrambled to his feet.

“Traitor!” he growled. Bailey’s rescuer stood over her, his legs protecting her from the bigger Steef. One fore-hoof pawed the snow. It was tightly bandaged.

“No-one touches MY Bailey.” Snarled a voice, a wonderfully familiar voice that sounded absolutely beautiful in Bailey’s ears. She almost sobbed in relief. She let out another painful choke and leaned her head momentarily against Stranger’s foreleg.

The huge Steef opposite them was incensed.

“Move aside cur! Why do you defend this piece of filth.” Bailey felt the rumble of Stranger’s growl.

“Say that again, an’ I’ll rip out yer heart.” He snarled. The big Steed charged, Stranger reared onto his hindlegs and kicked the other Steef’s flank. Hooves thudded on flesh. The big Steef was thrown aside by the strength of Stranger’s blow.

Bailey could feel herself weakening. She was shaking, darkness was bleeding across her vision. Her breathing came in short, painful gasps. As if feeling her distress Stranger moved and swept her into his arms. Bailey could only just make out his glowing green eyes.

“Bailey.” He whispered, concern and fear and unshed tears making his voice hoarse. Bailey’s hand twitched. Stranger, understanding, took her hand and placed it one his cheek. He stroked the human’s cheek with his thumb. “You’ll be alright liddle darlin’.” He whispered, swallowing, “Jist hold on.” Bailey gulped down another breath, her eyes were misting over and her body was shaking. “No. Don’t yer dare die. Don’t leave me alone. Please.” Stranger held Bailey’s rapidly cooling body to his chest. Bailey felt hot tears run down her face.

They weren’t her tears.

They were Stranger’s.

“Please.” Bailey tugged gently on the fur on Stranger’s jaw. Stranger lowered his head so that his forehead was pressed to Bailey’s. He was trembling too now. The Steef surrounding them were still and silent. The big male staring in outraged disbelief. Bailey moved her arm around Stranger’s neck and hugged him as best she could.

“Love you.” She said in a low voice.

“I love yer too kiddo, more then yer know.”

“I know.” Bailey felt her heartbeat slowing, her wheezing breathing became shallower. She pressed her forehead closer to Stranger and Stranger held the human tight.

Darkness came for Bailey.

And she had no strength left to fight.

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Well, what d’you think of that?

Melodramatic in my opinion. Urg. The horror…

Oh, and the weird creatures are some concept art I nicked from the Togg site…I’m not going to get my hide kicked for this am I? They really were brilliant pieces of art…

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Poor Bailey lucky her that Stranger came n' rescued her from being killed as always this is good stuff, a very Good Story, my friend very good Story Looking forward to read more on what's hapenin' next

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Thanks Dancin' Steef mate! Glad you're enjoying it so much and as soon as I beat this writer's block I'll update.
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Dancing With The Reaper
Breathing hurt, even thinking hurt. Bailey subconsciously decided that everything hurt.

“Where am I?” she thought, “And why do I get the feeling I’ve been here before?” Bailey gave vent to a mental sigh. “Well, time to join the living.” And she bullied her brain into reluctant action and forced her eyes open. They opened slowly and at first her vision was blurry, but after a few blinks it cleared and Bailey looked around

She found herself, once again, underground. The room was just like a cave that had been smoothed out. But it was furnished comfortably and it was pleasantly warm, the bed was soft and the sheets were clean. There was a thick, bright rug on the floor and on the table next to the wall was a softly glowing lantern of some kind.

There was also a chair, one made to accommodate a Steef’s body shape. And there was a Steef dozing in the chair.

“Stranger.” Bailey croaked, her voice hoarse and rasping in her sore throat. Stranger stirred and was awake in a moment. He saw Bailey awake – abit pale, but awake – and an expression of intense relief swept over his features. He came over quickly and stood by the bed. He gently wrapped his arms around Bailey lifting her into his arms. He sank to his knee, closing his eyes and burying his snout in her hair.

“I thought I’d lost yer kid.” He murmured. Bailey swallowed and managed to ease one arm around his neck, taking hold of a handful of fur. She gave it a gentle tug so that she could see Stranger’s eyes. She smiled tiredly and kissed his nose.

“Nah,” she croaked, “You’re stuck with me fer a little longer.” Stranger gave a relieved chuckled and rubbed his nose on Bailey’s cheek. He drew back, putting a hand on Bailey’s forehead and smoothed back her hair.

“What am I gonna do with yer?” he asked fondly, “I turn my back fer a few weeks and yer go an’ git yerself almost killed.” But he smiled. Bailey quirked a half smiled,

“Hey, I had a dinner date with Death that I had to keep.” she said weakly. She then coughed, a violent, hacking cough and groaned feebly. “Ow…” Stranger sobered quickly, he gently laid Bailey back in the bed and drew up the sheets before dragged the chair over to the bed and sitting down. He touched Bailey’s cheek with his nose again.

“How’re feeling liddle one?”

“Breathing hurts.” Bailey rasped, “Actually, everything hurts.” Stranger smiled briefly,

“Try not ter talk too much an’ don’t breathe too deep, yer ribs took a beatin’.”

“Where am I?” Bailey asked, “And what happened?”

“Yer in the winter quarters of the last Steef tribe in Oddworld.”

“But I found a valley,” Bailey protested, “With Steef.” She added, Stranger chuckled,

“I know they were jist gittin’ ready ter leave and yer dropped in fer a visit.” Bailey laughed gently but the laugh quickly became a wrenching cough. “Bailey, shallow breaths, yer need to calm down.” Stranger propped up the young human and rubbed her back.

Eventually Bailey’s coughing fit subsided, her breathing though still rasping slowed and became easier and regulated. Stranger made her lie back and relax,

“What,” she coughed again, but only a couple of times, “Happened, after I crashed in on those Steef?”

“I dunno, first time I saw yer, yer were gittin’ yer butt kicked by Jorken.”

“J-who? And I wasn’t gettin’ beat that bad.” Bailey protested,

“No, it was a lot worse…” Stranger muttered, “Jorken, the big Steef.”

“Oh…him…what was with him? I mean, I’m not surprised, they don’t trust humans…but he seemed abit…extreme…” Stranger chewed his lip,

“Hrm…” he hummed, “…D’yer remember when the old Steef told yer that when the humans started dying, that some Steef disappeared?” Bailey sat up and nodded, wondering where Stranger was going with this. “They neva proved it, but some of the tribe think, that the humans may have killed the Steef.” There was an uncomfortable pause, “One of his kids disappeared.” Bailey’s eyes widened for a second.

“That explains few things…” she muttered,

“But it didn’t give ‘im tha right ter pound yer.”

“He didn’t pound me though, you came and rescued me,” Bailey grinned half rueful, half embarrassed, “As always.” Stranger chuckled, leaning back in his chair. Bailey smiled but then wrapped the bed sheet and blanket around herself, hooding the sheet over her head, the blanket wrapped around her shoulders and looking dejected. Stranger smiled slightly and gathered Bailey, sheet, blanket and all, up into his arms and cuddled the young human. He gently tugged the sheet from Bailey’s head and smiled down at her, curling some of her hair around his finger. “Stranger?”

“Yes?”

“I don’t want ter stay in bed.” Bailey moaned, “I’m sick of waking up in recovery rooms.” Stranger could have said something about her not being so reckless then, but mindful of Bailey’s feelings – and memories of her recklessness saving his own hide – he didn’t, just held her close and told her a less harsh truth,

“Jist mind yer ribs and yer’ll be up an’ about in no time.”

“You promise?”

“I promise.” There was a comfortable silence. After a while Bailey noticed the soft bandage on one of Stranger’s forelegs. She touched it gently,

“This why you couldn’t get back sooner?” she asked, Stranger rested his chin in Bailey’s head,

“Broke it.”

“How?” Bailey asked, innocently curious. There was a moment of silence.

“Bailey, we have more enemies then Sekto and his boneheads. You remember the battle don’t yer?” Bailey nodded,

“I remember.” Bailey whispered, “What were those things?” she asked.

“I don’t know, nobody does… They just came before I did and they’ve been attacking ever since. I was in another battle, three months ago, an’ one of tha liddle monsters broke me leg.”

“I shoulda come sooner.” Bailey muttered, Stranger suddenly looked very depressed,

“Why did yer do it?” he asked plaintively, “Why didn’t yer wait fer me ter come fer yer?”

“Three months Stranger, I waited, and I got worried…and…” she faded off.

“And?”

“I needed to come, needed to be here.” And left it at that.

There was another silence, neither Bailey or Stranger feeling the need to say anything, communicating with actions instead of words as Bailey yawned, Stranger looked at her with a firm expression and Bailey, getting the message, relaxed against the Steef. Her eyes drifted closed and she slipped into a warm, secure sleep, feeling safe and comfortable to be back with Stranger.
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Oooooh, this is getting more and more INTSENSE hehe way to go LW I wonder what hapend to one of Jorken's kids... may it have any conections to that Stranger got abducted when he was small or? Well It's a GREAT story LW, KEEP GOING!

*Holds fingers crossed*

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I wonder what hapend to one of Jorken's kids...
You'll find out a bit later, but I warn you, it's not pleasant... Curse those humans. Glad you like, and I'll hopefully get another chapter up today. Keep yer fingers crossed!
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Sure LW, I will keep me fingers crossed for ya, matie a new update today? wow yer a fast writer, aren't ya? well I've been very busy myself so I haven't got enough time to write my story

I jus wondered...the link above yer siggy, how did ya manage to do it? I'm trying to make my own link to my piccys and i don't know how to do it... can ya PM me some instructions, please? *begs on bare knees*

See Ya!

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Heh heh, hope the PM helped. You'll havta lemme know, anyway, as promised, here's the next chapter.

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Stranger’s Family
Bailey was cheerful when she woke up a little while later. She felt safe and loved, still cuddled under Stranger’s chin. She yawned and stirred slightly, stretching and loosening cramped muscles.

Stranger felt Bailey stir and opened his eyes from dozing. He grinned and rubbed his nose in Bailey’s hair.

“How d’yer feel?” he asked,

“Ready to get out of bed?” Bailey suggested hopefully, Stranger chuckled,

“Oh no squirt, not yet.”

“Aww, c’mon Stranger, you know I hate being cooped up like a chicken.” Bailey moaned.

“Hey, yer ain't gittin’ out of this here bed until yer’ve healed.” Stranger said firmly. Shaking his head. “I know yer don’t like it kid. But I ain’t gonna risk you hurtin’ yerself. Not again.”

“Okay, okay, I’ll take it easy, I promise, nothing strenuous. Please Stranger, just don’t make me stay here. I can’t stay in bed, it’s driving me nuts.” Bailey pleaded, Stranger could tell she hated being confined to a bed.

“Hrm… I’ll talk ter someone.” he relented. Bailey grinned and hugged him.

“Have I told you I love you, today?” Stranger chuckled,

“Not today.” Bailey rubbed her cheek into Stranger’s fur.

“Love you Stranger.”

“Love you too liddle darlin’.”

“You’ll really try and get me outta here?”

“Yeah.”

“Thanks.” Stranger smiled and returned the hug.

“But if the Doc says yer stay here, then yer’ll stay. Even if I havta tie yer ter the bed.” Bailey nodded in consent. There was a pause.

“If…if I’m allowed out of here…where will we go?” she asked hesitantly. “Yer know, where will we stay?” Stranger smiled to himself.

“There’re some Steef I want you to meet.” He answered enigmatically. Bailey looked at him, interest piqued,

“Really, who?” she asked intrigued, Stranger grinned and ruffled her unruly hair,

“Yer’ll see.”

“I hate it when you know somat I don’t and gloat over it.” Bailey groused, Stranger chuckled and they lapsed into a comfortable silence. Finally Stranger stirred, standing up, he carefully set Bailey back onto the bed and tucked her in.

“I’ll be back inna bit with someone ter look yer over, okay?” he asked, running a hand over Bailey’s face. Bailey yawned and nodded, making herself comfortable and dozing off. She still had a lot of healing to do.

¤§¤

“Bailey. Bailey, wake up, someone here ter see yer.” Bailey’s eyes opened, she blinked a few times then propped herself up on the pillows, staring at the new Steef standing by Stranger, with innocent curiosity.

It was an older Steef with pale brown fur and deep blue eyes, like a pair of oceans. He had a belt of pouches around his middle and he held a staff of weathered wood with a separate curling piece of wood wrapped around the main staff. On the top of the staff the wood formed a claw that clasped a vividly coloured butterfly – as big as Bailey’s hand span – of some kind, encased in clear, golden coloured amber, feathers and beads of several different colours hung under the amber and the staff rattled every time it was moved. The older Steef smiled,

“Your name is Bailey I presume?” Bailey nodded,

“My name is Gershom, Stranger asked me to come and take a look at you,” Gershom lowered his voice conspiratorial and his eyes twinkled, “Don’t like being stuck in bed I hear.” Before Bailey could answer he straightened and turned to Stranger, “If you could wait outside while I look over Bailey, I’ll be done in a few minutes.” Stranger glanced from Gershom to Bailey with a look that Bailey knew;

Will yer be alright? Bailey nodded;

Yeh, go on, I’ll be fine. Stranger looked back to the healer, he nodded and left. Gershom turned to Bailey as the door closed.

“Now miss Bailey, I believe you took quite a beating to those ribs of yours, roll up that shirt, let’s have a look.” Bailey did as she was told, showing her bruised abdomen. The bruises were all faintly green and yellow with only a little black and blue but even so, the marks of Steef hooves could be clearly seen on her ribs.

Gershom gently prodded here and there at her ribs and asked where it hurt. When he was quite satisfied he let Bailey roll down her shirt and brought Stranger back in.

“How is she?” Stranger asked as soon as he entered,

“Healing well.” Answered Gershom, “I’m completely satisfied with her recovery, there’s still some bruising and her ribs are still knitting but as long as she doesn’t physically strain herself I see no reason for her to stay here.” Bailey whooped,

“Brilliant!” and looked extremely please with herself.

“Thanks Doc.” Stranger looked relieved,

“No worries,” replied the Steef healer, “I’ll just bandage Bailey’s ribs for extra support and she can go. You might want to drop in at the herbalist for some pain-killers while I wrap Bailey up.” He added, Stranger nodded,

“I’ll see yer inna bit kid.” He said to Bailey, she nodded brightly and Stranger left.

¤§¤

When Stranger returned, Gershom had gone and Bailey was waiting impatiently on the bed, dressed in dark shirt and pants, sneakers, hat, bandana and fingerless gloves.

As soon as she saw him Bailey grinned hugely and bounced off the bed, obviously eager to leave as soon as she could.

“We can go now right!?” she asked excitedly. Stranger couldn’t help but smile.

“Yeh, we can go.”

“Yippee!”

Careful!” Stranger called, “Yer don’t want ter hurt yerself.” Bailey relented but couldn’t stop grinning. Stranger smiled slightly at her enthusiasm. “C’mere yer liddle varmint.” He growled playfully and swept Bailey into his arms. Bailey put her arms around his neck and rubbed her forehead on Stranger’s cheek. “C’mon, there’s someone I want yer ter meet.” Stranger finally murmured, Bailey nodded and leaned her head on Stranger’s shoulder.

Stranger carried the trusting little human from the recovery room and along one of the corridors of the underground winter quarters of the Steef tribe. Bailey was fascinated by everything, the corridors, unlike the ones near the prison cells were furnished comfortably, lit with slowly glowing lamps. But more so, the Steef that came and went. Bailey couldn’t keep her eyes off them.

She blinked innocently at them as only a thirteen-year-old could. And the Steef seemed just as interested in her, the younger ones especially looked as if they wanted to come over and say hello, but their adult companions hustled them away, whispering admonishingly.

“What am I gonna do Stranger?” Bailey whispered after this had happened a couple of times, “They all hate me.”

“They don’t hate yer. They’re jist afraid, they’ll git use to yer.” Bailey swallowed,

“I don’t want them to hate me.” She whispered. Stranger stroked her head. “What…what if-”

“What if the Steef I want yer ter meet hate yer too?” Stranger suggested, Bailey nodded into his shoulder. “They won’t.”

“You promise?”

“Yeh, yeh I promise.” Comforted, Bailey nodded into Stranger’s shoulder and he felt her tense muscles relax. He rubbed her back, “That’s right liddle one, yer don’t havta be afraid anymore.”

After passing through several corridors they came out into a great underground cavern, with sphere shaped structures seemingly sprouting from the rock, like weaverbird nests. Wooden catwalks and rope bridges spanned between them and the cavern walls, leading to other tunnels, connecting it to the rest of the warren-like civilisation. The spheres had little lighted windows, warm coloured lights glowed pleasantly. Bailey looked at it all in awe.

“Wow.” She whispered, eyes gleaming with curiosity. Stranger grinned at her wonder. “Not bad.” She finally shook off her wide-eyed wonder and tugged gently on Stranger’s fur. “Lemme down.” She said quietly, Stranger did as she asked and set her down.

“You ready?” he asked softly, Bailey hesitated and then nodded. “C’mon then.” Stranger smiled and placed a hand on Bailey’s head. He led the way along a couple of the rope bridges and towards one of the circular dwellings, Bailey following him apprehensively. They eventually came to an iron bound door made of thick, sturdy wood.

Stranger rapped on the door with his knuckles. A few seconds later a feminine voice spoke, the words muffled by the door but coherent,

“Who is it?”

“It’s me Alika. I got Bailey.” The door was immediately thrown open and the smiling face of a female Steef, about Stranger’s age, maybe a fraction older, was revealed. She had pale blue eyes and chocolaty brown fur, Bailey also noticed that she was heavily pregnant.

“Stranger,” she said with obvious affection, “Come in, come in, bring Bailey with you.” She beckoned to them, Bailey glanced up at Stranger who smiled reassuringly and Bailey entered the Steef home, Stranger following and shutting the door.

“Daimen,” the female, ‘Alika’, called, “Daimen, Stranger’s back. And he has Bailey with him.” Another Steef with very dark shade of fur and red and orange eyes, this one male judging by the demonic goat horns, came out of another room into view. It took Bailey a lot of effort not to cower behind Stranger, this Steef was huge. Bailey had always thought Stranger was pretty big, but it appeared that by Steef standards that he was really quite small. He was only just bigger then Alika. Bailey edged imperceptibly closer to Stranger and dug her fingers in his fur.

Daimen broke into a huge grin and came forward, Bailey backed away a couple of steps in surprise as the big Steef caught Stranger into a crushing embrace,

“Glad to have you back little bro.” he grinned, slapping Stranger’s shoulder companionably. “And this your kid?” he asked, turning shining eyes on Bailey. Stranger, noticing a tenseness in Bailey’s eyes stepped away from his apparent brother and stood behind Bailey, putting his hands comfortingly on her shoulders.

“Yeh, this is my Bailey.” He squeezed the humans shoulders gently, “Bailey, this is my older brother, Daimen, and his wife, Alika. They’ve agreed to take us in and let us stay.” Bailey looked innocently up at Stranger and then back at Daimen and Alika. For a moment Bailey watched them guardedly, trying to see past the smiling faces, trying to read through their eyes what they were really feeling. She’d found that Steef eyes, apart from being fascinating no end, were very expressive. She’d learnt to read Stranger and now she read these two other Steef.

What she found was surprising. There was no fear, and there was no hate. There was only compassion, and affection, understanding, but more importantly and that touched her most; acceptance. Bailey almost choked up. After so much fear and hatred she’d felt from the Steef, this was, overwhelming. Stranger’s family did not hate her as the others did, nor did they distrust her. They accepted her.

Bailey swallowed and smiled wanly and they could easily see that was her way of thanks.

“You’re things are in your room.” Alika told her, adopting a reassuring tone of voice, “I’ll show you if you like?” Bailey smiled,

“Yeh, I’d like that.” she whispered, Alika smiled and led the young human from the room.
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W-wow...I've missed...so much...I fell like-like crying...GOOD CHAPTERS, LOBO! I wish I could've seen them sooner...I WANT A NEW HARD DRIIVE NOW! WAAAAAH!!! I've missed yer guys soo much...THIS SUCKS!
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*hands over virtual tissue* Least you got to see 'em now right? Yeh, I hopes yer get a new hard-drive as well, I'm missin' yer buddy!
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Settling Into A New Existence
“I didn’t know you had a brother.” Bailey said.

It was later that same evening and Bailey was on the bed in the room Alika had taken her too, it had a couple of single beds, so it looked like she and Stranger were still going to be together. Bailey was secretly relieved, she wasn’t yet comfortable enough in these new surroundings to not have him nearby.

Stranger relaxed next to her and Bailey lay against his stomach, just a little lower then his Steef forelegs.

“Neither did I,” Stranger said quietly, his eyes were closed, feeling and looking peaceful, “Until three months ago.”

“Nice to have a family again, hm?” Bailey asked. Stranger opened an eye and looked at Bailey unfathomably, Bailey gazed back impassively.

“I already had one. It just got bigger s’all.” He said softly, his voice rumbling. He opened both eyes and sat up, “C’mere squirt.” Bailey cuddled up to his chest and Stranger put his arms around her comfortingly. “And yer family just got bigger as well.”

“Hrm,” Bailey chuckled, “Guess it did.” She rubbed her cheek on his soft fur and Stranger growling a soothing purr. He laid a hand on her cheek and stroked his thumb across Bailey’s temple. Bailey let out a deep, comforted sigh and put her arms around Stranger’s middle, burying her face in his fur. “They’re nice…” she finally murmured, “I like ‘em.” Stranger chuckled deeply,

“They like yer too kid, they may not-a trusted tha otha humans, but they know yer different. Somat about tha eyes, Alika put it.” Bailey smiled to herself,

“Windows to the soul.” She thought fleetingly as just then, another voice called from down the passage,

“Stranger! Bailey! Dinner’s on the table!” Bailey’s lethargic mood immediately dispersed and she picked her head up interestedly. Stranger laughed to himself, as always, in any situation, Bailey’s voracious appetite won out.

Smiling, he set Bailey on the floor and eased himself off the bed. Together they left the bedroom and trotted down a couple of twisting passages to the dwelling’s kitchen. It was bright and warm, cosy, but not cramped. Daimen was already sitting at the table when Stranger and Bailey arrived, in one of the strange chairs that accommodated the Steef’s centaurish body shape.

Bailey stared thoughtfully at her chair for a moment, Daimen and Stranger shared a quiet grin, Bailey completely oblivious to their amusement. Finally, with a determined expression the short human scrambled onto the nearest, unoccupied chair. And found herself eye-level with the table-top.

Even though the two Steef males could only see her eyes, they could clearly see the peeved expression. Bailey looked at Stranger, scowling.

“Oh stop laughin’.” She muttered, but that only made Stranger grin all the more broadly.

“You might find these helpful.” Said another voice, Bailey looked at Daimen who was also grinning, but offering a pile of cushions. Bailey accepted them with a nod of thanks and shot a glare at Stranger before making herself comfortable on the cushions, at an entirely more suitable height.

Just in time too as just at that moment Alika called to Daimen to come and help her bring in dinner. Stranger made a move to stand as well but Daimen waved him down;

“You’re our guests, and you’ve had it rough. Just relax bro, even if it’s just for tonight.” Stranger sank back into his chair. Bailey’s stomach growled in anticipation as an absolutely divine smell wafted to her as Daimen opened the swinging kitchen door and went in.

“Ummm, yummy…” she muttered half to herself and half aloud. Soon Daimen reappeared with a couple of plates and set them before Bailey and Stranger, Alika came in right behind him with their own meals. Daimen and Alika re-took their own seats.

“Dig in.” Daimen grinned and without any further cajoling Bailey did just that. It was even better then it smelt, she decided.

The talk during dinner was light and easy flowing;

“Where’s Haigar?” Stranger asked after a moment,

“He’s staying at a friend’s house tonight,” explained Alika, she smiled at Bailey, “Didn’t want the little one to feel besieged.” Bailey returned the smile but doubted the honesty of the female Steef’s words.

“It’s because you didn’t know if I could be trusted isn’t it?” but she let the lie slide, especially when Daimen and Alika glanced uneasily at each other. Obviously they didn’t think Bailey was a threat anymore. Bailey acted as if nothing was amiss and dinner was a pleasant affair.

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Towards the end of dinner, Bailey found herself extremely drowsy, so much so that she nearly twice fell asleep at the table.

“Bailey?” Bailey blinked and looked up, resting sleepy eyes blearily on Stranger,

“Wotsmatter?” she slurred. Stranger grinned slightly,

“I think it’s time yer went ter bed.”

“Burr I’m not t-t-t-tired.” She yawned and shook her head slightly, before dropping off to sleep right at the table. Stranger caught the tired youngster before she hit anything and stood up with her in his arms.

“I’ll jist take the squirt to bed.” He muttered, he saw his brother and Alika smile slightly before he left.

A few moments later, he was tucking Bailey into bed when she woke up slightly with a jerk, Stranger put a hand on her forehead,

“S’alright liddle one, jist got ter sleep.” Bailey blinked groggily at him. then she made an ‘hrm’ sound in affirmative and nodded off again. “G’night liddle one.” Stranger stroked her hair and turned the lamp nearby to a soft nightlight glow, then left, shutting the door quietly behind him.

¤§¤

“And then I brought ‘er here.” Stranger finished, he’d just told Daimen and Alika his adventures (or misadventures) with Bailey.

“She’s a very special person.” Said Alika after awhile, “You better take good care of her Stranger.” Stranger smiled to himself,

“I know, jist hope I can take good care of ‘er.” They were sitting in the lounge, just relaxing, talking now and again about nothing in particular, asking polite questions. On another occasion Stranger would have found the relatively small talk somewhat frustrating but here he was too relaxed and too at home to really be bothered.

There was no one hunting him or Bailey, no one out to hurt them, Bailey was safe and he was once again among Steef, something he thought would never happen. Having Bailey around as well just made Stranger feel more at ease.

“So lil’ bro,” grinned Daimen after a pause, “When are you gonna get a girl and some kids of your own hm?” Stranger blinked and his green eyes bulged slightly,

Wha’!?” he spluttered, nearly falling from the couch in shock, “Now, steady on, I’ve only jist got home. And anyway, I got’s Bailey ter look after, and she’s already a handful.”

“I think she’s a sweet little thing.” Alika commented amusedly,

“Don’t be deceived ‘Lika she ain’t always sweet I can tell yer. Righ’ horror when she wants.” But it was clear to anyone that Stranger was really more then fond of Bailey, despite whatever he said.

The comfortable lull in conversation was suddenly shattered as the three Steef suddenly heard what was clearly Bailey’s voice, yelp in terror;

“STRANGER!” Stranger was up and out of the lounge like a shot, Daimen and Alika right behind. Stranger burst into the bedroom where Bailey had a minute ago been peacefully sleeping to find the young human in a terror-stricken panic, the lamp had gone out and the room was in darkness. Stranger knelt by the bed and tried to calm Bailey down.

“Bailey,” he soothed, “Calm down liddle darlin’, s’alright, I’m here. No one’s gonna hurt yer.” Bailey clung to Stranger like a life-line,

“Night- nightmare,” Bailey stammered, “W-w-was all dark an-an-and there was s-s-s-something here, but I couldn’t, couldn’t see it.” Stranger stroked her head,

“Shh, it was just a dream Bailey, just a dream, nothing’s here, no one can touch yer. I promise liddle one.” Bailey buried her head into Stranger’s fur,

“It’s so dark.” She whispered, “Just like Sekto’s dungeons…” Stranger tensed, Bailey never had told him what had happened to her when she’d been taken. “Stranger?”

“Yes, I’m here, what is it?”

“I’m scared.” Bailey whispered. Surprise flooded through Stranger but he didn’t comment and held Bailey close. He glanced at the door of the bedroom. Alika and his brother stood in the doorway, Alika’s hands were clasped and tears puddled in her eyes, sympathy for Bailey’s fear and unknown experiences tugging at her kind, gentle heart. Daimen stood by his wife, a supporting arm around her.

Stranger gave them a helpless look and laid his cheek on Bailey’s head, rocking her gently, murmuring soothingly.

“If you want Bailey,” began Daimen in a low voice, Bailey peeped at him, “You can, come into the living room until you feel better.” Alika nodded,

“I’ll go and get a warm drink.” She smiled at Bailey and left. Daimen followed, leaving Stranger and Bailey to themselves,

“Whadda yer say kid? Stay up fer abit?” Bailey nodded into his shoulder. “Alright then,” Stranger said and scooped Bailey and blanket into his arms, before carrying her into the front room.

Stranger settled himself on one of the couches, Bailey curled up next to him, wrapped in the blanket, leaning her head on against his ribs. Stranger put his arm around her and curled her hair around his fingers. Soon Daimen and Alika reappeared, Alika carrying a steaming mug;

“Careful, it’s still hot.” Bailey drew the sleeves of the huge nightshirt she was wearing over her hands and took the mug, enjoying the warmth seeping through the cloth from it.

“Thank you.” She said in a quiet voice. Alika smiled and sat down again. In low voices, the adults talked while Bailey blew and sipped her drink.

She’d only just finished it when she nodded off, her head drooping against Stranger. Sensing her relaxing, Stranger gently took the mug from her grip and set in on a nearby side table.

“Do you know what she was dreaming about?” Alika asked at last, Stranger shook his head and kept his eyes on Bailey, frowning slightly and stroking her hair. Daimen put an arm around his wife and hugged her, Alika rested her head on her husband shoulder and they both smiled as they watched Stranger with his kid.

Stranger would make a good parent.
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wheee! it's SOOOO GOOD LW well done chapters ya got there... looking forward too read more

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You can be happy that I'm in vacations. I really found the time to read your story from the beginning to the yet last chapter. Wonderful. Your fantasy is really worthwhile and I wish for you that you keep that forever. *sighs* I remember the time I wrote my stories about Alector, the Mudokon. His story changed and he's a human now. You can see him on my banner, BTW

You can be proud of this wonderful story. It's just a pity that less people read it.
This story inspired me to make a new character. I can't wait to show him to you. He isn't a usual Steef
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Wow! Brilliant! I'm sooooo glad you enjoyed it and I'm over the moon the story inspired you. Can't wait to see this new characters of yours. And don't worry about my overactive imagination, I think it'll still be churning out ideas when I'm an old age pensioner. I guess I can take this as permission for using your characters? *looks hopeful* But you'll have to tell me about them so I can do them justice.

PS. Alector is absolutely spiffing.
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Oops, forgot to add this here picture of the Steef winter homes, (it's nicked from the very cool games of the Myst series made by Cyan, it's the Moeity's Hideout in Riven : Sequel to Myst, but it suited the story brilliantly - in my humble opinion) ain't they cool?
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wow that's a cool piccy ya got there Lobo like it uh btw have ya done it by hand or by a comp? anyway good or GREAT work... It looks SOO nice and homely too. Wish I was a Steef... sadly I'm not


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By computer, but I didn't do it! No, There's a PSX game called Riven, the graphics are amazing and this one is a place where a rebel group called the Moeity hang out. It's what I based the Steef winter homes from, so don't give me the credit that all goes to the amazing people at Cyan.
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I don't know why Steefs inspire us so immensily. I think because they'rte so mystical and strong. So their homes need to be that too. It looks so pleasant that I wish I was there. It's a good idea to make "zivilized" Steefs, who live in communities and families.

I always think on wild, huge and harsh Steefs, which aren't that lovely.
That would be a funny composition. Don't you think so? When I showed you the new character, I can give his/her profile so that you can put them in your fantastic story.

PS: Lobo is cute
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I always think on wild, huge and harsh Steefs, which aren't that lovely. That would be a funny composition. Don't you think so? When I showed you the new character, I can give his/her profile so that you can put them in your fantastic story.
Ooooo and I have just the perfect place for this Steef to come in, especially if it's a rougher, wild Steef. And you gotta tell me about your dark-haired, blue-eyed Steef, he's such a cutie.
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Hehe, yes. I first have to finish the new character, then I will draw another picture of the blue-eyed Steef. I'll give him a name. I thought of a latin name, so he will be called Caligo. What do you think about this name? Caligo with the blue eyes. The exotic Steef
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