ooc:
Right guys, lets take a minute with these things.
AlexFili, I thought your first version of the post was better. It doesn't have to be longwinded to be worthwhile and it becomes a serious problem when posts are overladen with detail because there comes a point when people won't bother reading them anymore (cf. Slaveless).
Also, RF doesn't have a 'recruitment office'. If you're looking for an office the boss's office might be better, though right now the executives and the head slig are in the cafeteria.
Finally, Borso just got here; he hasn't even seen another employee yet; how can he have a job?! Also, since when did we have a gate?!!
Slig75,
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Seriously though, firstly your character needs to ARRIVE at Rupture Farms, because if 'he'd been there all along' or something, someone
probably would have noticed.
Secondly, you need to pay attention to the timeline of the RPG. As Chronicler said, time can't suddenly jump x hours, you need to interact with other characters and let time develop on its own.
Carlson, you're not doing too badly right now. I assume the mudokons you're referring to would be Anni and Jim (could be wrong there) though as Anni's currently hanging on the back of a very unhappy slig and Jim is practically comatose, Zen's reaction seems slightly... banaal.
If you weren't referring to Anni and Jim, then you should know NPCs are not allowed in this RPG.
All three of you have good grammar and spelling and such, which is a great start compared to a lot of the new players we get. You just need to learn some more about RPGing.
I know I need to post IC. I don't want to do so in the same post as so much advice-giving (hope I wasn't ranting) so I'll do it as soon as I can.
Sory I haven't been around the last two weeks; work's been extrememly busy.