The Guru's Revenge

[odd chick]

Ooh, you now have a mission to de-activate a generater, eh? This should be interesting..I can't wait to see what happens! *begins countdown to next chapter* That chapter was great, by the way.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

I walked out the door.
"Slig! Let's kick his ass!" A Grub screamed.
Suddenly, 10 grubs and Mudokons ran towards me.
I loaded my machine gun.
They took no notice on what weapon I had, they started firing.
I fired.
Suddenly, a Mudokon with a blue cloak dived forward, and blue energy darted out of his hands.
A sheild of blue liquid spirted from the energy.
I fired again, but the bullets didn't go through.
"Silly me." I chuckled.
I walked forward into the transparent blue dome.
I loaded my gun.
I fired.
The bullets went bouncing everywhere, killing the Muds and Grubbs.
The bullets hit the Mudokon with the cloak, and the sheild dissapeared.
I ran towards the army.
The Grubbs started throwing spears at me.
The Mudarchers started shooting at me.
Suddenly, an arrow landed right in my left arm.
I screamed, and grabbed my machine gun with my right arm, and fired at the Mudokons.
The mudokons where dying...but not enough.
Then I saw the leader of this rebellion.
I shivered, and loaded my Shotgun.
The leader was looking rather like Kakulana.
"Wait a tick...that is Kakulana!" I screamed.
I fired my shotgun.
"Kakulana! You've got your power! What do you want now?" I shouted.
Kakulana smiled.
"Power!" He cried. "And Revenge"
"Revenge for what?" I asked.
"I new the Guru. He was nice to me! And you killed him!" Kakulana bellowed.
I stepped back.
"So this really is, The Guru's Revenge!" Kakulana screamed, sending all his army towards Splinterz for attacking.
"You can either save Splinterz with the generator, or you can kill me." Kakulana laughed.
I looked at Splinterz.
But when I turned back to Kakulana, he was gone.
I walked towards the Generator.
I was about to press the Generator button to diactivate it, but a million arrows darted towards me.
An arrow went in my right arm, and one in my back.
I screamed, and jolted forward, and pressed the button
Suddenly, and arrow went right in my head.
I stopped, and fell to the floor...

[odd chick]

Oooh, intense! I like this story, BBS. Keep it up because I have nothing to criticise you on-it's that good!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Slug was goofing around with the contols in his office at Rupture Farms.
"Stop it, Slug! Do you want to be turned into Slog meat?" I screamed.
"I'm not going to be turned into Slog Meat, BBS!" Slug said.
"Fine then, your going to be turned into Slug meat." I said.
The speakers went on.
"Slug! Stop messing with those controls! I nearlly got pushed into the Scrab cake maker!"
It was Molluck. That was bad news.
"If you do that again, You'll be in the stockyards with the Paramites!" Molluck screamed. "And Biggy Bro Slig! Get back to work!"
Everything went white, and I woke up.

There hovering over me was Splinterz, Monty, Richy, Ziggy, Slug and Grunt.
"You saved us all!" Splinterz said. "I'll give you a raise. $5"
"Kakulana got away!" I said.
"So what, Kid? An oversized Bolamite chickened out of a fight? Big Deal." Splinterz said.
"He will kill us. Even if he has to destroy the Monosaic lines." I shot back.
"Well how was I to know that? I've never met him in my life?" He answered.
"Then how do you know that he's an oversized Bolamite?" I asked.
All eyes shot to Splinterz.
"Well, I have met him before. Before I tell you, let's go inside." Splinterz said.
I got up, and we helped Splinterz across the muddy ditches and craters to his office.

[odd chick]

Great chapter, BBS. The flashback scene at the beginning was the coolest part! I can't wait to see what else you come up with!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

"I can't tell you." Splinterz said.
"Why?" I asked.
"Syrom is coming. And he is going to kill. No time for stories now, BBS! You have to get ready for when Syrom comes back." He replied.
"Syrom?" I asked.
"The Guru's brother. And he will kill you when he finds out about the Guru." Splinterz said.

[odd chick]

That was very short, BBS, but it was still very good. (especially for a short paragraph-most people can't pull something like that off, but you did!) Keep the story goin'!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Yeah, well, there it is, short, but it sure gives a little exitement for the next story, "Syrom's Retribution".
If Syrom ever does die, I'll make sure he dies in a horrible way...