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  #91  
04-28-2005, 03:49 PM
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"did you hear something!?" Said gereld. "No, why?" The slig said. It was...slog barking and I also heard some mudokons talking!" Gereld said again.
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04-29-2005, 06:10 PM
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Slogann saw the Slogs pouncing on poor Abe, and began to bark. The slogs heard Sloganns calls, and turned to him. "No way, ya lousy traitor! We's saw you's helpin' them Mudokkons out!" a slog roared at him. "Yah, ya traitor! See's if you's can save your lil' friend's life from our teeth!" another laughed. "Ok, ya' peckerheads! See if yeh can kill ME then!" Slogann barked, hoping her plan would work. "Kills yeh? Why should we, fer we got's Abe within our jaws!" the slog yelped. "Well's if'n I'm a traitor, how's 'bout you's deal with me then, first?!" Slogann challenged. "Hey, that ain't a bad idear, boss," a slog whispered to another. "Ok, Slogann! You's got's yer wish! You's die first, 'fore yer lil' Mud friends do! Take it as a sacrifice, ya pathetic Scrubs!" the leader barked over to Abe. "Ok, ya Peckerheads! Come's and git me!" Slogann jumped. All the Slogs spreaded out along the river, and surrounding Slogann within bushes and trees. 'The split up and attack tactic. So 1,000 years ago,' Slogann rolled her eyes. "I suggest you two get's outta here, 'fore this gets ugly!" Slogann barked to Abe and the Mudokkon.
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04-29-2005, 06:32 PM
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'c'mon Abe!" Kirk said. kirk had grabbed Abe's arm and ran to the forest exit when they bumped into the glukkon!
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04-29-2005, 06:43 PM
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She saw the Mudokkon pull Abe out of the forest. 'Good. They're safe an' sound,' Slogann grinned. A rustling near her sprung her in to defensive stance. The slog leader fiercely jumped out from his hiding place, and opened his mouth, revealing his jagged razor-sharp teeth.
OOC: oh I forgots to mention. All the slogs that were attacking are also bio engineered enhanced by the evil Vykkers, but not perfect. Theyre all mutated. Like the leader, he has one black and green eye, and a blood-red one as well. His jaw has been horribly mutilated, and his legs are a different structure as well. The rest have misfigured eyes, and different bodily changes, not tiny ones. HUGE ones.
Slogann leaped out of the killer slogs way, and rammed in to his soft, but steel ribs. That left her with a slight migraine. The other slogs then attacked out from nowhere, snapping at her with their disgusting mouths. Slogann managed to pass them all with flying colors, but the leader snapped right at her neck, and attached there with a iron-like grip. Slogann yelped out in pain, which could be heard miles away. Other slogs then ripped at his legs, rambling her like a tattered rag doll. Slogann barked and yelped at each bite the slogs would take at her. "Not so tough now, are yeh, pretty girl?!" the leader laughed out. Then, he leaped up high in the air, and snapped right on her neck again, this time even harder. Slogann let out a humungous whine of pain, so loud that the ears on their heads rang, but didn't give up on ripping Slogann limb from limb.
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04-30-2005, 08:00 AM
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hi guys decided to come back again

hhhhhhhhmmmmmmm said sam looks like mudokon footprints and gabit ones I thought they were extinct and what steef prints aswell something weired is going on here ahhhhhhhhhh boss shouted a slig help me shouted another I am being killed shouted another.sam ran away but a grenade fell out of his pocket and the pin poped out
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04-30-2005, 08:05 AM
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OOC| Well... it's nice that you've come back... or.. maybe not.
But you still haven't thought about what i've written to you in the PMs you've received from me.
Start using Grammar for gods sake, or else i wont let you rp anymore.
I see that the only who has actually listened to what i said is Dark Elite, which i'm very grateful for.
For all ya others: Follow the rules.
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04-30-2005, 08:14 AM
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I will get on topic now but I have had no pms off you lately

sam carried on running and went into a tree when sam woke up a steef was looking at him get lost you furball shouted sam,the steef ran away,doh I am an idiot said sam I should have chaught that thing and bangs his head on a tree
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04-30-2005, 08:25 AM
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OOC| When you go offtopic, you post OOC: and then the message.
But the PMs, are actually a bit old, so of course you haven't got any lately. Because i do not want to repeat myself.
But i'll do a lil' list over what you're doing wrong:
- No grammar at all.
- You post too small posts.
- You're posts are confusing, mainly because you do not use punctation and grammar.
- You always make side-quests for yourself, in a RP. Like if soemthing is already going on, you suddenly twist the RPs storyline to your own benefit, and the thing that was already going on, is becoming a minor thing.

Gah i do not want to explain further. Right now i encourage you to re-read the rules i have made, and if you don't undertsand soemthing. Ask! Instead of just ignoring it.
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04-30-2005, 08:30 AM
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ooc: ok t-nex I deleted the pms you sent me because my inbox was full of posts

any way. "sligs" shouted sam.a slig came running to sam.a steef try to attack me said the slig.the steef came running back and trampled over sam and the slig
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04-30-2005, 08:35 AM
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OOC| Ok, that was a bit better, but you need to put quotatin-marks around an exclamation. When a person sais something, like this: "Hi, i want the cookie," said the Slig.
Cuz it's really hard to see when someone's talking or not, in your posts.
And you still need to make them longer.
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04-30-2005, 09:33 AM
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OOC: Okay, I'm gonna play this RPG.

"hehehe, you're in big trouble you filthy mudokons, reeeeeeal big trouble." Gereld said. "Cuff'em" "I'm on it boss." The slig said. They took'em back into custody. 'So, what do you think Hudson?" Gereld asked Hudson Gore, and expert vykker scientist. "Well, we could inject some poisen venom I have into those two muds, but I wanted to experiment Abe. To see what makes him so special" Hudson replied.
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04-30-2005, 12:34 PM
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The slogs didn't seem they were to give up on killing Slogann. The leader slog was cackling at Sloganns suffering. "Now whatcha gonna do, Slogann?" the leader smiled devilishly. Slogann was whinning and growling, but really there was nothing she could do. "Now since you're dead, your lil' Mud friends are dead. I hear that Gerald, our master, caught them. So now, we shall leave for you dead," the leader smirked evily. "but just to make you a little happy," he growled at his pack to let him go. His mouth opened wide, his jagged talons dripping with a nasty liquid. He dropped down on Sloganns neck, and injected a fluid in to her body. He sat back up, and closed his mouth. Slogann felt the fangs slip out of her skin, and felt dazed. "Now, we'll leave you for dead. You have exactly 4 hours to live. Hopefully, you can get help, 'fore that poison seeps in to your brain. But I seriously doubt that," the leader grinned, roared at his pack, and walked away. 'What was that stuff? Rabies?' Slogann thought, getting up to a shakey start. "Abe. Where is.... he? Abe. Abe! ABE!" Slogann barked loudly, then fell to the ground.
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04-30-2005, 01:45 PM
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"No!" Abe said as the vykers grabbed him. "I... Will.... Not.... be..... an ......EXPERMENT!" Abe roared and turned into shrykull!
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04-30-2005, 01:50 PM
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"AHHHHHH!!!!" The vykker screamed as he got electrocuted. "Quick! RUahhhhh!" The slig said as he got electrocuted as well.Gereld ran and dodged the electric shocks. "Help!" Gereld yelled. 13 sligs came out and started shgooting. Gereld just laughed.
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04-30-2005, 01:53 PM
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As the shrykull ended, he dodgeged the bullets and grabbeb a machine gun from a electricuted slig. He shot and killed every slig in the room.
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04-30-2005, 01:58 PM
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"this guy is tough! Run away like little girls!!!" Gereld said. "ahhhhh!" Sligs screamed in high pitched voices and ran out the door. Suddenly, armoured vykker scientist's came out with drills trying to kill Abe!
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04-30-2005, 02:16 PM
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Slogann lifted her ear up, hearing machine gun firings. "I... Must... Help... Abe," Slogann walked drowsily. She picked up her pace, running more than walking. Her sense of smelling was going away quickly. 'It must be a symptom,' Slogann thought. The machine gun firings were getting louder, as she broke through the barriers. Abe, who was acting like a maniac, was killing and breaking down sligs everywhere in that particular room. Vykkers were running away, screaming at a high pitched voice, and inters were yelling that was muffled within their stitched mouths. "Abe!" Slogann barked, and fell down.
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04-30-2005, 02:22 PM
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"Ha! You can't get m... AAAGHHHH!!!" Abe said as he ran near a recycler. He ran to stop himself from being mushed up!
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04-30-2005, 03:58 PM
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"ABE! YA FOOL!" Slogann jumped up. She rushed over to Abe, and snatched his loin cloth, and began to tug him out of the recyclers suction. His loin cloth was becoming loose, and had to snatch another part of him. So, she switched over to his arm, and pulled hard. After one last tug, she threw Abe out of the recyclers way, and on to the ground. That wasted the last ounce of energy she had. "Abe.... w-what's, yer PROBLEM!?" Slogann barked, panting hard.
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04-30-2005, 08:01 PM
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Could i join the war on the native side?

Characters name: Core
Age: 14
Specie: Scrab

Bio/description: a rare blue scrab, painted with ceremonial war paint

Personality: He is a very arrogant and hostile scrab, jumping into a battle without thinking, anyone who gets in his way becomes lunch

Items/weapons: On the end of each leg are metal leggings, with blades attached increasing his height by about half a foot, also body armour around the stomach and metal plating from the top of his head down to the small of his back
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05-01-2005, 12:03 AM
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ahhhh shoot dabg abe said sam he is such a slick person and I hate it
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05-01-2005, 04:33 AM
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"Hey are you o.k Sloggan?" Abe said as he saw him o the floor panting. "You don't look so good, come on!" Abe said and picked him up. "Awwww crap!" Abe said as he got cornerd by sligs. "Now, I'll save you!" Abe said and threw Sloggan into a nearby tree!
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05-01-2005, 04:49 AM
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hahaha what are you going to do now bluey said sam.(sam took his aim with his rocket launcher and shot it)
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05-01-2005, 05:54 AM
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"A-Abe.... The.... slogs.... T-they..... got something in me," Slogann panted hard. "T-the leader.... slog.... I think he, got's me... with a.... type of p-poison, and he said.... that's I got's 4 hours, teh live," Slogann told, wrapping her legs around a tree branch. "You's got's to get me to Doc, Abe! Or this time, I'm dead!"
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05-01-2005, 07:13 AM
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"Alright i'll do it!" Abe said bravly and dodged the rocket. He broke a sligs neck and took his gun and shot everone. He then got sloggan and ran to a little vyker lab. But all the vykers were gone. He got a Foirmula called Healer: Heals you now matter what you have! and tipped it on Sloggan. He jerked on the floor and then was cured!
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05-01-2005, 07:46 AM
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"How..... how fast that was...." Slogann ruffled up, and shook her fur out. "How'd you do that?" Slogann cocked her head sideways, raising an ear. But there wasn't time to talk. He could hear Vykkers, Interns, with Snuzy guns, and Sligs, with Blitz packers, rushing down the corridors of the base. "Holy sh........" Slogann lowered her ears flat. "We've definently got trouble," he looked at Abe.
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"Frezze!" A slig yellede and got a yank o matick! It started to strech Abe!!!
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05-01-2005, 08:34 AM
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"Hey! Leggo of 'im!" Slogann roared, pouncing on the Yank o' matic, and bit it's metallic head, and rambled it up. The Slig was cackling at their efforts, and put the machine on full stretch. "There's something that has to stop this thing!" Slogann said to herself. "but what?"
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05-01-2005, 10:18 AM
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a few native mudokons carrying a wooden crate, they drop it in an open field and run as if their lives were in danger. Out of thecrate bursts a Blue Scrab who looks hungry...
"grrr....where am I know? unfimiliar this place is to me...."*sniffs around* "REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" Core runs off into the distance after a trail of some prey.
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05-01-2005, 01:17 PM
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OCC: Sorry, I had to go on a trip to the, U.S.S. Hornet! I'm a boy Scout!

Gereld had had enough and had killed hiomelf.
So their's another character!

Name:Steven
Age:17
Species: Mudokon
Carries: Nothing but a banana peel, whoopie cushion and a skeleton key and a frissbee and a boomarang!

Steven had heard and saw some of the comotion, so he decided to sneak around and see what was going on. He had snuck into the building and saw a rare Yank-O'-Matic! "Wow! Those things are super rare tto get!" Steven said. "But it also looks like that mud is in trouble" He said to himself again, he quickly got out his boomarang and threw it at the arms and suddenly let go of Abe!
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