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Olivia didn't answer Grace or Fisher, but slowly pointed the flashlight upwards towards the roof. She clicked it on and instantly a continuous streak of what looked like green lightning shot out of the bulb to the roof. She brought the torch slowly round in an arc, leaving a trail of scorch marks along the roof and then down the wall, finishing her sweep with the lightning shooting between Grace and Silvia and making the latter jump back in fright. Then she turned it back off again and the lightning immediately vanished.

"Consider yourselves warned," Olivia spoke quietly.

Then, turning back to Fisher, she looked like she was about to say something when suddenly a jet of flame shot upwards from the ground to her left. The fire spread out and formed the shape of a fiery man, then in an instant it seemed to just "puff" out, leaving Daniel standing quite unharmed in the room. Almost before he had appeared, he had his bow and arrow at the ready and aimed at Fisher. Then, to Olivia's right, a wavery shadow appeared, gradually becoming more and more solid until it turned into Slade.
He bowed slightly, "Joseph Slade, at your service."
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OOC: Uh. Huh. So ... I guess that this ...
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Art shrugged. "Sure. Everybody hop in." And he himself climbed into the driver's seat.
... and this ...
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Art started the car and drove off, glad to be on the clear side of the road.
... didn't happen anymore?
>.> Okay. Fair enough.

Art shrugged. "Not waiting for anything. Everybody hop in." And he himself climbed into the driver's seat.
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A huge, friendly grin broke out on Fisher's face. He ignored the weapons pointed at him completely. "Well, Joseph Slade, in the flesh! And such a flashy entrance!"
Fisher turned and smiled at Grace. "And now, my dear, we should be going. Mr. Slade and I have some business to discuss." Facing Slade again, like they were old friends. "Allow me to take you and your pals -" he indicated Silvia, Daniel, and Olivia "- somewhere more comfortable."
And Fisher magicked everyone away, leaving Grace alone ... and dropping the protection on the house...
~~~
Fisher and the others were now in a pleasant office. Red carpets, red drapes framing a full wall picture window, a deep brown desk, surrounded by identical scarlet leather chairs. Fisher sat behind the desk, and Slade and his cohorts were seated across from him.
"Mr. Slade, please forgive my abrupt actions. But I'd like to form a sort of partnership with you. We have equal skill, and I think that if we were to combine efforts, we could accomplish many goals. What do you think?"

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Olivia and Daniel seemed a little disorientated by the sudden shift, but Slade was undeterred. As for Silvia, she was already utterly confused!
Slade was silent for a minute, then answered, "I would be interested to know just what goals you have in mind?"
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Fisher's expression didn't change, but inside he raised his guard. Although he did intend to make a completely legitamate and honest partnership, there were some goals of his own he had to keep secret.
Instead, he said: "It's not my business to know what my superiors are up to. But, as a sign of friendship, I'd be willing to contribute however I can to any causes you have. Just so long as," he added quickly, "you don't consider me an underling, like these three." He motioned to the others. "You and I are equally skilled, or close enough for it to not matter." He didn't say who he thought was more powerful, as it would be more politic to let Slade what he wanted. "So treat me as an equal, and you have my services at your disposal."

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Slade considered for a few moments, then nodded,
"Very well. Such an alliance could prove productive - but I'm hesitant to say 'partnership' until I can accurately judge how trustworthy you are. As I'm sure you will understand," he added.
"But I'm curious as to why, when we have clearly co-existed for years now, you chose to make this move now. And I'd like to know how and when you learned of me, as I'm sure I have never seen you before. Care to elaborate?"

Olivia and Daniel were now paying close attention to the conversation, and Silvia had finally realized who Slade was, though she still had no idea who Fisher was.
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03-18-2006, 06:20 AM
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Fisher considered briefly, then settled on the truth.
To save time (and all our brians from reading it again), I won't retype everything he said, but here's the gist of it: he told Slade about the existance of other realities, and that he was originally from another one, which is why neither had heard of the other. In his explanation, Fisher risked mentioning the RPG, which is where he learned of Slade.
When he was finished, he paused and asked, "Is everything clear to you?"

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ooc: I spent half an hour writing a post on Friday, and then the school computers deleted it
Anyway, take two. Stiff upper lip and all that.

I think, for the sake of speed, we should assume that everybody has now got in the car and they are driving off towards generic town number 3, which someone should think about naming, rather than waiting for everyone to post "all my character got into the car and waited for Dave to post so we can actually get moving".
In the mean time...


Olivia didn't answer Grace or Fisher, but slowly pointed the flashlight upwards towards the roof. She clicked it on and instantly a continuous streak of what looked like green lightning shot out of the bulb to the roof. She brought the torch slowly round in an arc, leaving a trail of scorch marks along the roof and then down the wall, finishing her sweep with the lightning shooting between Grace and Silvia and making the latter jump back in fright. Then she turned it back off again and the lightning immediately vanished.

"Consider yourselves warned," Olivia spoke quietly.

Then, turning back to Fisher, she looked like she was about to say something when suddenly a jet of flame shot upwards from the ground to her left. The fire spread out and formed the shape of a fiery man, then in an instant it seemed to just "puff" out, leaving Daniel standing quite unharmed in the room. Almost before he had appeared, he had his bow and arrow at the ready and aimed at Fisher. Then, to Olivia's right, a wavery shadow appeared, gradually becoming more and more solid until it turned into Slade.
He bowed slightly, "Joseph Slade, at your service."


Grace pulled out her gun, waved it around between Olivia and the two new arrivals, unsure where to stop, and then settled for pointing it at Olivia.

And suddenly she was alone.

THe house creaked painfully. She swore. Then the electricity, which was apparently only being supported by Fisher's spell, switched off, plunging her into almost total darkness.

Realising what was about to happen she made a run for the stairs when the door suddenly burst inwards, throwing her back, and then the windows and water flooded into the room throwing large shards of broken glass, anything in the house that hadn't been nailed down and Grace herself around, crashing against walls, floors, turning her over and over until she lost all idea of what was up, what was solid and what was water. Fingers numb from the sudden and intense cold scrambled desperately for a hold on anything that was sold, that wasn't washing around the room. The half-a-breath of air that she'd managed to hold in her lungs was proving to be of little worth.

She was weak and battered and her body screamed for air by the time water stopped flooding into the house and some order returned, but now held in a disorientated darkness she was totally lost and whatever direction she pulled herself in seemed to bring no air, just more freezing, crushing water.

Bright, silvery light high above! The cold face of the moon gazed down on her helpless form as she must have somehow pulled herself through a windo or door. She tugged desperately upwards and then her head broke the surface. SHe gulped down deep, glorious breaths of cold, biting air, gasping and shivering. Her body was weak and she could feel herself beginning to sink again.
Looking desperately around in the feeble light she spotted a flat surface just above the water level, maybe the roof of an extension to someone's house, a few metres up (or down) the road. Se pulled herself frantically towards it and finally her hands touched a solid wall, found the surface above and heaved her bosy, dripping and trembling, up onto the wet but beautifully flat and solid roof.
She retched. And then rolled onto her side, curled into a ball and lay shivering and scared on the roof.

It would be many hours before the rescue teams found her.


ooc: ok, so under the advice of Havoc i kept Grace alive in case I wanted to bring her back into the story later on. However, as for now you can count her out of things. There's not much i could do with her in her current situation anyway.
Assume what you will, that she was saved, that she died of cold long before that or whatever. I might bring her back in, I might not.

Anyway, I'll bring in a new character in a few days, probably once (or just before) they reach this new town. I might run it past Havoc first as the idea i have might seem a little too much to me.


Oh, and for the benefit of Havoc and anyone else who doesn't know, the NHS stands for National Health Service which pays for health care in England so we don't have to pay for things like hospital treatment and basic dentistry ourselvelses. American's don't have it and i basically took it for granted before you all started talking about banks that wherever we end up would have it. But yeah, whatever.
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When everyone was in the car and they were finaly on their way, Kaira leaned out the truck for a moment and yelled a mild 'Thank you!' to Pseok for helping them out.
Charger meanwhile waved his good arm at the bird, making a gesture to him to follow them in the air.
When they turned left onto the road Pseok had directed them to, Charger had a look over the roof, seeing massive ammounts of cars and sirens heading their way on the other side of the road.
'Get down,' he said quickely and pushed Kaira down to the floor. He opended the window in the back. 'Blaze, Streak, try to get out of view before any of those police or army guys sees you.'
After that he ducked down himself and waited till the rush went passed.
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Streak and Blaze obediently crouched down. Dave, not thinking, ducked down too.
Art was driving a little faster than neccesary. His reasoning was that if the cops and what not were going the other way, he could drive how he wanted.
But by the look of things, he would have to stop soon, anyway, as other cars had stopped so the drivers could get out and gawk at the damage. Frigging rubberneckers, he thought. Such a pain.
Art swore, and took the car off road to avoid the car barricade. Once safely past the considerable length of parked cars, he bumped back on the road. The cops even had trouble getting along on the other side of the road, and traffic had slowed to a crawl.
"I think you guys can get comfortable now," Art muttered.

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Slade nodded, "Clear enough." He had his own theories on matters such as these, so this was just confirmation of some and refining and correction of others.
"Is there anything else you wished to discuss?"

OOC: Sorry about the short posts lately, I guess this is the trouble when you have a whole bunch if inter-related characters! It shouldn't last much longer, though.
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Pseok was taken by surprise as Art suddenly swerved the car off the road into the trees and, having not really been expecting much, especially with the block on the road, lost sight of the car.
Ah well, they'd rejoin the road sooner or later. He took the oppertunity to fly ahead towards the town and see what it was like.

It was about a third of the size of Los Santos and looked more industrial. It was standing on the point of the mountains, just heading slightly up the slope. On the north eastern side a river ran, turning north and Pseok found himself wondering if it would reach the cold northern seas that he'd been forced to leave what seemed like a lifetime ago.

He flew down towards the city. Inside the streets were quite busy, probably preparing for the arrival of injured people from Los Santos, he guessed. Further out the city turned to warehouses and a few small factories, and then well-cultivated farmland.

He turned and flew back down the road until he found the car, now past most of the rest of the traffic. He swung down, waited for a window to open (someone inside noticed him and opened it) and shouted to Art.
Pseok: "HEY, THE TOWN'S ROADS ARE PRETTY CROWDED, I THINK YOU SHOULD PARK OUTSIDE AND WALK IN. THERE'S A HOSPITAL NOT TO FAR." He paused and then added, "YOU BETTER HURRY UP. THEY'RE GONNA BE BUSY WHEN THE CROWD FROM LOS SANTOS GET HERE."
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Charger looked ahead as the eagle yelled down to them. The town was maybe 10 minutes away at the speed they were currently driving. The road leading there was pretty much deserted, probably because the only major access road had been cut off. The other lane was packed though.
He looked trough the window at Art.
'Try to get as close as possible to the hospital, if you can find it...'
Then he sat back and thought some stuff over as they drove. Signs were flying past every once in a while. After a few minutes he got back up and looked at Blaze, Streak and Dave.
'I don't take it any of you have an idea to get into the town without being shot? I mean... this is a small mountain town, not Los Santos...' he rose an eyebrow and grinned. 'And I don't think people around here are going to be liking us much...'
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Art flashed a thumbs up at Charger and kept driving.
Streak and Blaze didn't know what to say to Charger. Dave ventured a thought.
"If you guys stay here, Art and I might be able to go and bring a doctor out here, maybe. And we could always pay him off to keep him from opening his mouth or whatever..."
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Fisher shook his head. "For now, I've finished." He reached out, indicating a handshake. "What do you say?"

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'What farm country place are you from, kid?' Charger almost blurted out laughing. 'We pay him and then he'll talk anyway, don't have any knowledge of human nature?'
He grunted.
'And besides, I BROKE my arm, remember? I'm not a doctor but I know for one thing thats not something you cure in a few minutes...'
'More like a few weeks...' Kaira added.
Charger looked down on her.
'Thank you for that comforting thought...' he whimpered.
Kaira just offered him a teasing smile.
They drove on and Charger spend some more time thinking. A few more minutes later they passed a sign, it read: Welcome to Golden Valley, population 4.897.
'Heh,' Charger snickered. 'Golden Valley, sounds like some old western town.'
'Maybe it is,' Kaira added.
Charger just smiled at her and then looked back to Dave and the rest.
'Okay look, with all hell about to break loose there's two things that can happen. Either people will be to busy with their work to even notice us, or we will get a few thousand eyes staring at us. Either way I think that at least for the first couple of hours we'll be in the save zone because everyone is preoccupied with Los Santos. Most of the police is there, so we don't have to worry about them. I say we just walk into the hospital as if nothing is akward and see what happens from there?'
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Dave, ashamed, looked down and stifled up. When he noted the town's population he was surprised. His high school had had almost that many students when he graduated. This Golden Valley would be a ludicrously small town.
"... see what happens from there?"
Art was nodding. "It couldn't hurt. And besides, if we don't get your arm set soon, it'll likely never heal properly. I vote we just go for it."
Streak and Blaze nodded and muttered in general assent. Dave didn't say anything, still embarassed.

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The hospital was not located far away from the main road leading into the town and it thus didn't take them long to get there.
'Art is right,' Charger pointed out. 'For a change.'
As they approuched the hospital and Art had put the car to a stop closeby, Charger hopped out the back, looking around to see if anyone had been making a fuss yet. To his surprise it was very quiet in the streets. A few people were about, but non of them seemed to notice the group.
He walked over to Art's door and pulled it open.
'Get your guns out and cover my tail in case some freak with a gun shows up,' he said on a serious tone. 'The rest of you stay here, we'll be back in a bit.'
With that he dragged Art out of the car.
'Come on.'
As they entered the lobby of the hospital, it was rather busy, but not immensely crowded. Everyone was minding their own bussiness. The receptionist was working, a few people were reading their paper or talking to each other. No-one seemed to notice them.
Charger was about to head for the reception desk, but as he walked past a door it suddenly opened and he was dragged inside, on his bad arm. The door was slammed shut before Art could enter and Charger was about to die from the pain that shot trough his arm.
'AAAARGH! Damnit what the **** is wrong with you!!!' he shouted right in a doctors face, apparently the guy that dragged him into the room. He reached out to the guy with his right arm and grabbed him at his throat, pushing him into a wall.
'Ighm sghorri!' the guy managed to sqeeze out. 'Plgheze et me gho! Ighm ognly trghing to gelp yough!'
Charger let go of the guy, regaining his calm as the pain dripped away again.
'Ugh...' the man coughed as he rubbed his throat. 'Quite a temper you got there buddy.'
'It's what I'm famous for,' Charger commented with straight face.
'Yea thats true,' the doctor said. 'But what are you doing down here, you shouldn't be here!'
Charger pulled a confused face.
'Wha?' he questioned.
The guy looked at him in an almost admiring way.
'Facinating, unbelievable I get to see you in the flesh...'
Charger became only more confused.
'Hey doc, slow down. Do we know each other or something? Cuz I dunno what you're talking about...'
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ooc: New character time! I apologise for the very long bio, most of it is just explaining the species.


Name: Elfair Deccar
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Species: Human/Ware

For the benefit for all those who don’t have access to the twisted depths of my mind, a brief description on what a ware is: About 1 in 200 humans bitten by a ware will become a ware. The odds for most animals (including anthromorphs) are miniscule, though wolves have a slightly higher chance. Anyone or anything that is bitten and doesn’t become a ware dies. Anyone who becomes a ware will slowly undergo physical changes such as darkening of hair and eyes, teeth becoming sharper and finger and toenails becoming thicker and claw-like, as well as other changes: becoming totally carnivorous (eats only meat) and feeling an urge to kill, particularly more intelligent creatures such as humans. On top of this, a ware will be able to transform into a creature they have bitten for about 8 hours after the bite. Contrary to popular belief, they are as easy to kill as any other creature. Silver bullets are optional.

Appearance: Hair was blonde before she was bitten, now dark, but the colour is indistinguishable. Eyes are also dark and shadowed. Thick, black claw-like finger and toenails roughly cut and sharp teeth, including a set of larger fangs. When she’s expecting to see other people she wears a large, heavy coat, gloves, boots, a large hat and (sometimes) a scarf which conceals who (and what) she is. When alone she prefers less constraining clothes, sandals and simple clothing, plus a large black cloak when it’s cold.
Bio: Bitten when she was 13, Elfair considers herself unlucky to have survived. Chased away from her home, she followed the edge of the mountains until she grew weary of travelling and settled above a large town. She hates killing other humans so she forces herself to live alone. However, when the need for food or when the urge to kill that she feels as a ware, or the need for company grows too strong she has been known to kill humans, turn into her victim and spend a few hours in the town, maybe using the time to buy supplies such as clothes, shelter and sometimes food.


I don't really intend to have her bite any of our characters (unless someone really wants her to ) and I'm aware that it's normally spelt were (as in werewolf) but as were is a real word and ware isn't (shut up havoc ) we can all just ignore that.


Pseok floated a short way above the ground as Art and Charger got out of the car. He paused for a minute, going over the last days events in his head until he reached a decision. He flew down and landed on top of the car, the darkness hiding him reasonably well.
Pseok: "Hey, writing guy, What-ever-your-name-is? I... Can I talk to you away from the others?"

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A dark figure wrapped in a black cloak dragged a dead sheep up the mountainside. the sheep's fluff was stained with its blood across its body, especially around its neck, as if it had been deeply scratched and then bitten. Reaching a hollow cave in the rock, the figure rolled the dead sheep onto its back, bent over it and bit deeply into the flesh of its belly, tore off its mouth-ful of meat and swallowed with a satisfied sigh. the animal would last for a few days. No more hunting, no fear of running into another person. No one came up here anymore, people would be safe. The beast could not hurt anyone for those few safe days.
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Art followed in a respectful silence behind Charger. Though he didn't draw his guns, he was poised to at any threat.
And when Charger was dragged into another room, and he was barred out, he did reach for them. But to draw guns in this hospital might cause more problems that he needed.
So he decided that, in keeping cool, he would knock on the door. What he actually did was slam his fist on the door rapidly three times. "What's going on in there? Hey!"
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Dave and the others, still in the car, didn't quite know if they should follow Charger and Art, despite Charger's warning.
But then Pseok flew down. "Hey, writing guy, What-ever-your-name-is? I... Can I talk to you away from the others?"
Dave looked at the others and shrugged. "I suppose so. I'll be back, you guys." He opened the door and stepped out. He walked about thirty yards off to the side of the car.
"So, Pseok. What's on your mind?"

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Charger looked over at the door as Art banged on it, then opened it in a quick movee and dragged him inside.
'Get in here...' he sighed then shut the door and turned back to the doctor. 'Look, I have no idea who you are and I don't have any idea how you can possibly know me.'
The guy smiled.
'You don't seriously think your presence has gone unnoticed all these years did you?'
All these years? The hell?
'What?' Charger questioned. 'What the hell are you talking about man?'
'About you, obviously. Yet I had expected you to be far more dangrous, but it seems you're not so bad. I guess stories like that get exagerated a lot huh?'
Charger stared at Art for a moment with a puzzled look then back at the doctor.
'Whatever pal, I dunno what you're talking about. I came in here because my arm is broken and it might be in my best interest to get it fixed.'
He pulled a sarcastic face as he said it and pointed to his wrecked arm.
'Yes ofcourse, but keeping you unseen in here won't be easy... people will be scared of you...'
'Seriously?' he questioned and gave the guy another sarcastic look. 'Never thought people would be afraid of me. Whadda ya think of that Arthur? People are scared of me!'
'Who are you anyway, Arthur is it?' the doc asked Art. 'I was not aware you lived up there with humans.'
Charger chuckled.
'No comment...' he grinned as he had the urge to make a funny comment about Art.
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Pseok landed in front of Dave and for a few seconds examined him carefully. Everything sbout him seemed strange. THat he seemed to know so much about them all, certainly, but also, there was something about him that actually made you imagine that this guy came from another world. And the writing? More than he could take in. How could there be someone controlling his actions and thoughts, right now? Was there someone making him think this?

He glanced over his 'shoulder' as if he expected someone to be sitting there. He shook himself. This was rediculous, nothing, no one could do something like that. They could write his story bu they could never control the path it took. He turned back to Dave.
Pseok: "It's about... Roland... I mean, you know what happened to him? You... Can you.... Is he really, gone? I mean.... just gone?"

This was difficult. What could this kid really know? How would he know? this was still more than he could manage to understand.
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Art rolled his eyes. "I'm a travelling companion, doc. Don't read too much into it, okay?"
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Dave shrugged. "All I know about Roland is that I was having trouble maintaining him. And I nearly ruined the story by introducing him. So I had to write him out. I suppose that he technically isn't gone, but he likely won't be coming back."
He considered the eagle's stare. "And come on. Give me some credit. I know a lot more about you than you think. I know you're probably confused, and probably still want explanations. I know you and Roland sort of became friends, and I'm sorry he had to go. All I can say is that I thought I was making this stuff up ... and apparently there's more to it than I thought. Because if I'm here, who's writing for me now?"
Dave continued before Pseok could try and puzzle this out. "See? It's too confusing. And if it doesn't concern us, why should we even try and puzzle it out? Don't worry."

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"So be it," Slade accepted.
"I am sure we will have no trouble contacting each other from now on if either of us wishes to. So, in short, the deal is if I should want your assistance, I can contact you for it and vice versa. Correct?"
He paused momentarily, then added, "And, of course, in the latter case, unless it's specifically me you want, I can always send one of these two." He nodded towards Olivia and Daniel.
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Pseok: "If someone's controlling what we're doing it does concern us. But I think.... You weren't in control, you were just telling the story of what we were doing." He looked upwards. He needed to clear his head, this was all just getting on top of him. He glanced at Dave.
Pseok: "You ever flown kid?"
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Fisher nodded and grinned. He understood perfectly what Slade was saying.
"Well, then ... ta!" Fisher tittered, then abruptly turned and disappeared.
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Dave didn't quite know what to think. He had been forced to accept all this rather quickly. He hadn't bothered to try and puzzle everything out.
And now... "You ever flown, kid?"
Dave rolled his eyes. "Pseok, I expect that 'kid' stuff from Charger and Art and them, but not from you. I'm not a kid...." He sighed. "Never mind. I've flown once or twice. But it was in an airplane, so the only way I knew I was really flying was by looking out the window. Why?"
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Streak looked down at the two little cats. "So ... where are you from? I feel like we haven't been properly introduced."

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'Traveling compannion...' the doc said, throwing a worried look at Art. 'Ofcourse...'
He turned to Charger.
'You took a very big risk coming down here... What were you thinking?'
Charger was starting to get anoyed and grabbed the guy at his coat, pushing him against a file cabinet.
'Look pal, you're confusing me with someone else. I broke my arm, I need help. Are you going to help me yes or no?!'
The doc tried pushing him off, it obviously not working.
'Can you let me go?' he asked almost calmly. 'I'm not scared of you, because I know thats pretty much what you feed off.'
Charger sighed... of all doctors he had to run into some shrink person who thinks he knows everything.
'Look pal, if you don't stop being an anoying prick, I'l give you something to be scared off, and he'll testify to that,' he pointed over to Art. 'Understood? Now are you going to help me or not because I'm bleeding all over your floor!'
The doc looked at him, then at Art and then back at Charger.
'Sure... ofcourse... I'l stop asking questions if it annoys you that much...'
Charger put him down, then stepped back.
'Good, now we're getting somewhere.'
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Pseok: "What do you know about the place you're in now? How much have you really experienced? Anyway, you're younger than me I think, and I wouldn't be considered old. But I know humans can be touchy about that sort of thing, what was it? Dave? Do you want me to show you what it's really like to fly Dave? Planes are nothing to being in the open up there. It's endless, nothing to hold you back."
He spread out his back, offering for Dave to get on. He didn't really know why he was doing this, but right now he just wanted company, something he'd been so without for too long.
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Dave shuddered a little. He hadn't really told anyone, but flight was always the one thing he wished he had. But now that he had a chance to just up and go do it, he didn't know what to think.
He started slow. "Well, all I know about this place is that I'm here. I could probably tell you all sorts of stuff about Los Santos and Community, but seeing as those towns have been sort of eradicated, it's pointless."
He watched as Pseok continued to stand, offering the chance to fly. "And what's to say I wouldn't fall off? I mean, hell. I don't know ..."
At last Dave thought What the hell? and just did it. How often did a guy like him get the opportunity to fly on a giant eagle's back?
He carefully climbed up and on, and carefully wrapped his arms around Pseok's neck. "Not so high, okay?"
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Pseok: "Do you really think i would let you fall?" He mumbled to himself, "Higher would probably be safer, more time to catch you if you did." He spoke up again. "I hope you're better at this than Roland was."
And then he beat his wings, ran across the large hospital carpark a short distance and took off, soaring up into the sky until he reached level with the top of some of the larger buildings in the city. Pseok swung around and flew out from the town heading south, exulting in the feeling of freedom and gradually moving higher through the air, as if to test his boundaries. He swung northwards across the city, where in his mind he saw the cold mountains, the empty air where the days were short the sun was cool and prey was easy to find. He screeched, long and shrill as he remembered all he'd lost.

He looked down at the town. Ambulances from Los Santos were now just arriving and it was starting to look very busy down there. He turned west to face the mountain that the city sat on. He called to Dave.
Pseok: "I'm gonna land there, the town's too busy now and I don't really want to go back in the dark with lots of cars and people moving around."
He flew down and landed on a reasonably wide, even space on the mountainside and allowed Dave to get off. "We can stay here till it gets lighter, or I guess I could fly you down outside the town and you could walk back in."

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Elfair looked up as a shadow passed over her. What was it? In the dark it had ben indistinct, but she felt it had been to big to be just a bird, and it had flown low and sliently. Curiosity got the better of her. Pushing the body of the sheep back into the hollow she wrapped her cloak around her and climbed swiftly up the mountainside, as quietly as a ghost.
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Kix and Krisha both looked up at Streak.

"Well uh.... We are from a nasty place called Cats Secret Place." Krisha said, even though it was nasty, Krisha was always proud to mention she had been part of it.

Kix gave up. Krisha kept mentioning the place, and Kix was getting quite used to hearing it.

"Yea... It was pretty nasty... But it's dead now." Kix said.

"Hehe the leaders are dead. But the place teached us all kinds of magic and stuff." Krisha said proudly, "Where are you from anyways? Oh, and what was your name again?"

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Akky had been trying to trace Kix the day after she had found him.

"Oh I'm so sure that the idiot Art has turned to their side, eh?.. Hehe I'llshow him, and I'll show the rest. Kix will be begging me to stop... And with this knife, i can do alot. Just gotta find out it's secret." He rambled to himself, with the knife attached to his body with some rope.

He stopped up and saw a sign saying: Welcome to Los santos

He looked further up and saw a city overflood with water.

"Seems like they have been having trouble." He smiled, as he went further inside the city.

"Alot of poeple probably died.." he grinned, and was satisfied with the thought.
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