"The Luminahi" graphic novel -

Splat · #61 01-02-2011, 02:38 PM

So that guy actually does do something useful... It's good he has such an understanding boss!

Oddey · #62 01-05-2011, 05:16 AM

My my my... What could be in that building? And what will happen with the police and Marvin? And when will the next panel be here?

As usual, absolutely spiffing.

scrabface · #63 01-06-2011, 09:36 AM

lol mom ich seh grad du bist ja aus der schweiz. nimmst du am fumetto wettbewerb teil?

Splat · #64 01-07-2011, 07:36 AM

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lol mom ich seh grad du bist ja aus der schweiz. nimmst du am fumetto wettbewerb teil?

Scrabface, please sit patiently while I quote Forum Rulez at you.

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Matriar · #65 01-18-2011, 02:03 PM

Thanks a lot guys!

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lol mom ich seh grad du bist ja aus der schweiz. nimmst du am fumetto wettbewerb teil?

(He said he just saw I'm from Switzerland and asked whether I'd join the Fumetto contest.)
I don't know what that Fumetto Contest is.

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Next page! I really should try to make two pages every month. x)

ziggy · #66 01-18-2011, 06:14 PM

Senanca's design is just so cool. I can't help but think he is the star as he becomes the focal point every time he appears because of his garish BRIGHT as fuck pink eyes set against a mostly muted everything else.

scrabface · #67 01-18-2011, 07:22 PM

the fumetto festival is a comic contest, but the deadline's already over. but, Daniel Clowes gonna be there! I don't think I'll show up as it would take me a 9 hrs trip with the train through the alps. oddly the fumetto festival takes place in Luzern.

Oddey · #68 01-22-2011, 01:34 AM

Ah how I love that guy. His facial expressions cannot help but make you smile.

Matriar · #69 02-14-2011, 11:15 AM

Ahaw, thank you guys!

It's so much fun and supporting to read your comments.
Senanca is indeed one of the very main characters of this story, I'm glad you like him.

Next page! I don't think I'll manage to make the next page until this month is over.

Matriar · #70 02-27-2011, 11:58 PM

Look at that, I managed to make page 14 before the month was over, aha.

STM · #71 02-28-2011, 12:09 PM

An interesting development, after 14 pages though, where's the story leading, are we gonna see some big event, I suppose, in retrospect, the next slide will have to be =)

Oddey · #72 02-28-2011, 12:17 PM

Ah, I enjoy this novel. Oh so very witty, and at the same time quite intriguing.

enchilado · #73 02-28-2011, 07:02 PM

Very nice.

Splat · #74 02-28-2011, 07:58 PM

Kick 'im inna teeth!

ziggy · #75 03-11-2011, 10:59 AM

I see an ass whoopin in the near future. By the way what are those blue ridge things on that guy's face?

dripik · #76 03-11-2011, 12:34 PM

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By the way what are those blue ridge things on that guy's face?

They are called mandrills. Don't worry, it's completely natural.

ziggy · #77 03-11-2011, 12:53 PM

Ohhhhh sorry I didn't get that. That makes sense, I guess I either forgot what a mandrill was or he didn't seem very baboon like.

Matriar · #78 03-19-2011, 03:40 PM

Mandrills are related to baboons actually, but they're not baboons. It's okay by the way, mandrills aren't a very known monkey race (while everyone seems to know Rafiki for some reason).

Anyway, thanks a lot for the comments again guys! I'm glad you enjoy my silly story.

I just noticed that there's now a new max limit of 500.0 KB per picture in this forum, so here's a link to where I posted the comic page on DeviantArt http://gloomyunderwoods.deviantart.c...lary-201543580 because you can barely read the page when I have to make it smaller for this site. (You may have to click at the picture on DA to get it to full size).

ziggy · #79 03-19-2011, 09:12 PM

I posted the same thing on deviantart but:

Bouncers get paid more for getting beat up? WHAT?

I don't understand your logic.

Matriar · #80 03-20-2011, 02:24 AM

Vorac was never officially hired as a bouncer, Senanca said Vorac should have helped the delivery guy before, but Vorac came too late and missed it, and also couldn't do cleaning jobs as chances were not available because the customers were too busy. Then Vorac waited for that guy to come back to help unload the truck, remember?

Anyway, Senanca knows it's his fault Vorac got beat up because he forgot to tell him to let Kevin pass. Senanca is also impressed that Vorac still tried to do his job good and not let anyone pass, and even kept Kevin away for at least a little while.

I think it's just Senanca's way to apoplogize for that mistake he did too.

Splat · #81 03-20-2011, 08:14 AM

I think he's impressed that Vorac managed to keep the mandrill out, so he wants to officially hire him, and will pay him more than planned 'cus he did a better job against the mandrill than Sen expected anyone ever could.

Which is also why he's so eager to hire him even when he's been late and generally been more trouble than help since starting.

Oddey · #82 03-20-2011, 08:32 AM

Oh, I adore Senanca's expression when he is informed of his bouncer. Oh, this strip was hilarious.

ziggy · #83 03-21-2011, 09:07 AM

You should draw more pretty anthropomorphic girls to creepily oogle over in the next pages.

And oh, that makes sense. But what does Kevin do? If that's for later, then ok, but why not Kevin just be the bouncer if he's such a badass? Or does he do other shifts? I'm confused.

Splat · #84 03-24-2011, 07:32 AM

Matriar, Nate recently revised the allowable sizes of files on OWF. If the changes are a problem, then I encourage you to PM and tell him; he made the sizes smaller 'cus he thought they didn't need to be as big as they were, but if you can argue a case he'll probably put it back to what it was.

Matriar · #85 03-26-2011, 11:44 PM

Thanks guys!

To answer the question, even though this is a mild spoiler, Kevin is a pimp of his own place and ain't got no time nor interest to be a bouncer.

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Matriar, Nate recently revised the allowable sizes of files on OWF. If the changes are a problem, then I encourage you to PM and tell him; he made the sizes smaller 'cus he thought they didn't need to be as big as they were, but if you can argue a case he'll probably put it back to what it was.

Yeah the size things makes sense, as I'm probably the only one uploading huge files. xD

But it's alright you can leave it like that, I don't wanna take away too much of your time.

Besides, I was actually thinking of stopping to post pages here before because I'm very active on DeviantArt and started to feel bad to kinda only be here to post graphic novel pages. Not that I'm no Oddworld fan anymore, this is a lifetime inspiration of mine, just that I feel bad to barely do anything Oddworld-ish on an Oddworldforum anymore, but post graphic novel pages and too few other messages on other topics.

So you may need to check out my DA gallery to see if there's a new page on http://gloomyunderwoods.deviantart.com/gallery/11591846 (that's where I have the graphic novel folder, if you wanna see the whole gallery just take away the number part of the address.)