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Oh. I thought she was doing her own nails. Next time maybe don't put the entire setup of the joke in the first two frames. You didn't need to have the snoozing frames to make it work.
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Yeah, I almost rearranged the entire thing before posting it. Not sure why I didn't. The snooze button is a thing that when hit makes the alarm go quiet for about ten minutes and then start up again (not sure if that's what it's called over seas). I was trying to show that I was hitting the snooze button, and so over slept, and that's how I managed to not notice that my nails were painted before I left for work. However, I do think that the panel with me saying that I over slept probably told that story well enough without the "snooze" panel, so yes, I agree. I knew this one was kind of a mess, and I was a little disappointed with that, because I felt like the story board was actually funnier than the first comic we published. But yeah, I learned a few things from this one, and I do appreciate the thoughtful input.
I plan on sticking with this, and after maybe about two years, starting to monetize it. I realize that it's a long, up hill battle to get something like this recognized, but I feel like the concept has legs, and I want to give it a shot. If I can make it work, it's something that could be very good for my family. I figure I'll start a website for it when it gets to about 500 Likes on Facebook. We're at 71 right now, but I'm capable of being patient.
