I just got back from my holiday, and i just recieved a disc containing everything I've written, causing me to celebrate, and decide that you will get one chapter for your 2 replies, and one to celebrate, so that makes... (counts on fingers)
2!
Chapter 12
Splat
I don’t know how long I walked down that tunnel, an hour, a day, a week! But when I emerged it was night. I dropped my bag, and flopped down at the base of a tree and fell asleep.
I awoke the next morning, merely because there was a screaming laguateeny flapping at my face. I jerked up, wondering what was wrong. Then I felt it.
A tingling sensation on my back and wings. I shot a hand round to feel what was causing it. The tingly feeling spread to my hand so I brought it round and looked it. My hand was covered in tiny insects!
I bashed my hand against the tree to get the insects off. It didn’t help. I waved my hand round in despair. And the insects (I ralized later, that they were amts) went flying in all directions! I flapped my wings madly and more lost there grip and went flying!
Then I shot out a net of paramite threads and trapped the ones on my back. I rolled up the net and looked around for something to do with it.
I saw a gigantic canyon crossing the planet as far as I could see, near where I’d slept. It was almost 10 metres wide! I threw in the net and looked down. At the bottom where some very spiky plants. Probably the same kind that I’d almost dropped on to when I’d first slid in to this jungle and escaped the waste disposal chute!
I looked across to the other side of the canyon. and to my surprise, saw a gigantic, marble building! “Whoa, that place looks expensive!” I commented.
I lifted off. Or tried. I flapped my wings but nothing happened! I felt them and to my surprise, discovered that they where full of holes! Those amts must have eaten right through! And I didn’t even feel pain from them. They must do something like fekts, only it numbs pain as well as stops death.
I instinctively wrapped paramite thread round my wings to act as bandages, then looked for some way of crossing the canyon. I noticed 2 enormous trees reaching across the canyon and crossing branches half way across. I climbed the tree on my side and wriggled along the top branches on my stomach. When I got as far as the weak branches would let me, I reached out for the next tree.
I grabbed it and, with it sharing my weight I wriggled closer to get a firmer hold. Then I felt the branches of the first tree give way!
I held on to the end of the branch as tightly as I could, but it bent, swinging me towards the trunk of the tree!
I was swinging towards the trunk of the tree. “Oh, fu-“ I hit the trunk so hard that my scrab jaw smashed right in to the trunk and jammed there. “zz, ( you thought that he would say something else, didn’t you!)”
I tried to push my jaw out of the tree trunk but it wouldn’t come out, then that laguateeny showed up again and started jamming his spikes into the tree, splintering the bark and loosening the hold around my jaw.
It was then that I noticed I was 2 meters from the ground! “This really is not my day!” I muttered as I started falling! As I fell my back pack caught on a branch and split open. I landed painfully and my pack bounced on my back, sending packets of fire flumps, bottles of brew, a tube of springles, a giant magnet and a small teleporter flying. I grabbed the springles and the magnet and swung my foot to stop the brew and teleporter rolling in to the pit. I stopped all but one of the brew bottles and the teleporter, and they both fell into the pit. I cursed. The pit was 6 meters deep and I’d never get in between those plants.
I sighed. It had taken me months to finish those teleporters. One was no good without the other. I sighed again and put all the stuff back in to my pack through the tear then held the ripped edges together. They sealed back after a few seconds, mending the tear. It was something I’d put in the material. A substance called durarzey. It made the rip fix itself.
I sighed, stood up and walked towards the door of the building. I sighed again when I noticed it was closed and locked and I had no way to open it. I slumped down against its wall, and sighed!
Chapter 13
Splat
I sat there for a minute then got up again to look at the building. It was made of purple marble that glittered in the sun. The large door was about 2 metres by 2 metres in an arch shape. It was covered in dents, white scratches and chips. I found about 50 bullets in the grass below it.
I was startled to feel something land on my shoulder. I turned to see the laguateeny that had been following me since I’d led it to food. I sighed, I wasn’t setting a very good example for it.
I rubbed it gently. It had saved my life. I later found out that amts can eat a sleeping victim till there is nothing left but the creatures skeleton without waking it up! Major pain killers at work!
I pushed some of the vines off the wall by the door, and to my surprise, found a story stone. I pushed my hand in to the space in the rock and the following message appeared in front of me:
Place your hand in the head above,
if you mean no harm, enter without fear,
but if you wish to harm us, or our beloved,
then only one part of you will see the inside,
of our laguameacy temple!
I looked up to see a laguameacy head half calved, half painted in the wall above. It was oval shaped (about the size of a squashed soccer ball) with a pyramid of ten large round eyes (each about the size of a Ping-Pong ball with a black spot in the middle about the size of a pea) with 4 at the bottom and 1 at the top like a laguateeny’s. Above the eyes was a large round mouth, surrounded completely by crimson lips and full inside with inch-long sharp teeth. On top of the head were three sharp horns, each about 10 cm long.
the mouth was properly hollow. I realised that that was where I should stick my hand so I took a deep breath, and shoved it in the hole.
Flash: I was an ancient mudokon worker, testing the security system.
Flash: An elder from a sacred tribe, coming to see the temple his grandfather had ordered built to there sacred and beloved laguas.
Flash, flash, flash, flash, flash: Hundreds of mudokon, coming to pay tribute to the sacred laguameacys.
Flash: A warrior from another tribe coming to slaughter the creatures inside, I got a shock when the razor sharp teeth in the head slammed down, severing my wrist, But I felt the pain only for a split second before I was another person in another time.
Scenes of thousands of mudokons entering the temple or being sent away, minus one hand. Then finally,
Flash: For the first time, not a mudokon, but a slig, one in a group of 8. Thousands of groups had been sent out by the glukkons in search of new creatures to exploit. We had shot and killed a laguameacy and now tried to enter the temple. I screamed as my wrist was cut of!
Flash: A low ranking vykker examining the temple lock. Gasping as it slammed closed without warning or purpose. How the…
Flash: A fuzzle thrust into the hole by a chuckling intern. Squealing in fright as the mouth closed behind me and I was sucked deep in side the temple, then
Flash: was in my own body again. There was a pause where I trembled in fear of losing a hand. I don’t know why. A shudder passed through my body for a reason I still don’t know, even now. Then there was a rumble. I looked to my left to see the door slowly rising from the ground. I sighed with relief. I was allowed in with both hands!
I waited for the door too fully open before I removed my hand from the whole. I noticed the back of my hand was shining but I thought it was just a trick of the light or some dizziness after being in thousands of different minds in under 10 minutes.
I stepped through the temple door and saw to my surprise, the lamps in the walls were still burning, even though the only creature who’d been in that room for 500 years was the laguameacy, lying on its back asleep on the ceiling! It was in the light of the lanterns, that I noticed the mark on the back of my right hand.
As the glowing that had been there since I took it out of the laguameacy head faded, I saw the ancient tribal mark of the laguameacy imprinted in black marks on it…
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