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"Will you help us?"Ken asked
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"Alright guys I think I can get us out of here stand back!" Then Blarg took flight and hovered in the air in the center of the chamber and he started focus his mind on one thing and began to hum. Then the walls were beginning to crack all around every body. Suddenly the chamber broke open to a vast network of tunnels and caves leading in all different directions. Blarg then stoped humming and lowered himself back to the floor. Weakon a little by the humming he sat there catching his breath. "I did it, we broke free!" "Lets get out of here now!" Said Blarg.
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Blarg you are weakened Ken scout ahead I'll carry Blarg until all his energy returns!
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Hey I know this is off topic but does anybody know what happened to Mudokon Hawker?
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(I don't know Al he has been gone for a real long time now.) It's been at least two weeks since I talked to him. hmm?

Suddenly a strange sound was comming from one of the tunnels. "Ken, do you here that strange sound?" Asked Blarg. "I think it's comming from that tunnel over there on the left." Explaned Blarg. "What is it?"
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"I dunno"said Ken."I'll check it out"and he ran down the tunnel.

"Crap!"Ken said"Blarg!You gotta come see this!"Blarg limped there because he was still alite tired."What the h*** is that?"Ken asked.The thing was some mutated monster."Wait I heared about this this!It somthing called 'Sin'(I know it's from FF10 but it kida fits huh?)"Ken said"Wait a minute...is't that name copyrighted my square soft?"Blarg asked."Who the h*** cares lets just kill it!Ken said.
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Jerec tried stabbing it with his Slypth but instead a wave of elactricity serged throughout his entire body. Jerec fell limp to the ground and was out cold for the time being. Ken and Blarg had to get help!
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(Psst:Guys can I join in the Story.....I didn't mean to interupt sorry Mity)
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(Yay!! Thanks mity Lulu is grateful!!)
A hooded figure stepped out from the corner. It peered at the mutated lifeform scaredly.
It saw a body limpeing on the ground in agonjy, blood flowing out non-stop as it seemed. The hooded figure sighed pitliy, and approached the mutated creature calmy.
Jerec stared at the figure oddly his eyes not even half-open, it was so calm and cool. With no fear whatsoever.
The figure whipped out a staff in one hand and rose it's paw in the air......chanting,summoning a power.....
Jerec stared weakly in agony, fascinted at what the figure was doing.
The figure chanted and spoke it's last word in the summoning.....
A blast followed the chant......

(Was that O.K Mity??? I'll delete if you don't like it)
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(Guys Mudokon Hawker is my classmate he died in a car accident .
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(Yay!! Thanks mity Lulu is grateful!!)
A hooded figure stepped out from the corner. It peered at the mutated lifeform scaredly.
It saw a body limpeing on the ground in agonjy, blood flowing out non-stop as it seemed. The hooded figure sighed pitliy, and approached the mutated creature calmy.
Jerec stared at the figure oddly his eyes not even half-open, it was so calm and cool. With no fear whatsoever.
The figure whipped out a staff in one hand and rose it's paw in the air......chanting,summoning a power.....
Jerec stared weakly in agony, fascinted at what the figure was doing.
The figure chanted and spoke it's last word in the summoning.....
A blast followed the chant......

(Was that O.K Mity??? I'll delete if you don't like it)
Thats good!


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(Guys Mudokon Hawker is my classmate he died in a car accident .
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Wow are you ok Vykker Sawbones? Mann that is not good! He died in a car wreck? Mann small world we live in you know! My sympathys dude! That really sucks! I am so sorry for your loss! Oh and I am here if you need to talk buddy!

"We have to get some help Ken!" Yelled Blarg.
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Here comes Buffy
hi Blarg im Buffy many people arent supose to see me but if you need help ill help.


Im ok its jst i only had 1 friend at school that was REALLY my pall. Now he is gone and i have no FRIENDS AT SCHOOL!!!

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WHen did he die? I really thought he was cool
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The figure looked at the creature strangley as it exploded in front of it......The figure stood stunned.
It dragged Jerec away from all the danger.
"Are you O.K??" It said.
Jerec groaned in pain.
"I'll take that as a no.." said the hooded figure sweetly.
It chanted to heal Jerec....
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while Buffy and the others where looking for Jerec.... Buffy used his powers to locate were Jerec was guys we have to go east said Buffy in a screaming voice
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Jerec awoke to a strange being above him but before Jerec could speak the being told him to rest and sleep for now.....
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The hooded figure let Jerec rest.
Then it turned to see some sligs patrolling along.
"Oh no......."muttered the figure.
So it carryed Jerec and they hid.
Jerec blinked. "Why are we hiding???"
"Sligs." the being said.
"We could of taken them out!!" Jerec said.
"No.....I can't explain, but they must not see me."
Jerec looked at the hooded figure oddly.
"Who are you????"
"That,I'll answer later my friend. Rest." nodded the figure.
Jerec shrugged and curled into a ball.
The hooded person peered at the corner.......
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Meanwhile back in the Laberynth of caves, Blarg, Buffy, Ken and Raziel were searching for their friend Jerec.

"Guys, you here that?" Asked Blarg. "What is it?" Said Ken.

"LOOK!" Yelled Blarg.

Then suddenly hundreds of gallons of water came rushing down the cave in which our friends were searching.

"RUN LIKE HELL!" "AHAHAHAHAHA!"

But before they were to get out of the way the water swept them off the ground and send them down the cave.

"Hold on to me guys!" "I will keep us a float so we don't drown!"

Luckily for Blarg sake and his balloon like mouth. He was abel to keep himself a float for his friends to hold on to.

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During Jerec's sleep he was seeing visions of a far off city that was being destroyed by corrupt government although, he could not put a place on this he hoped that he would find out very soon what was happening.
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After the wash Buffy,Blarg have seen this trange house..... Buffy said guys lets go there Jerec might be there..... Ok replied Blarg.

Will our friends find Jerec or will they fail
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We FOUND JEREC GUYS!!!!!!!!! YEAH BABY Jerec are you ok asked blarg...Im ok then the strange being apperaed he showed his face he was a Molluk... WOW Molluk run he can kill us screamed Buffy. Stop said Molluk i dont wanna work for the brewy since my eletric shoc i have been having problems. Now nobody can see me or my job will have to continue it is sooo hard. My friends we shall take all of our ODDWORLD creatures and bring them to another world. This way we can be living in harmony.... But how will we get out of here hmmmmm...
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Originally posted by VykerSawBones
We FOUND JEREC GUYS!!!!!!!!! YEAH BABY Jerec are you ok asked blarg...Im ok then the strange being apperaed he showed his face he was a Molluk... WOW Molluk run he can kill us screamed Buffy. Stop said Molluk i dont wanna work for the brewy since my eletric shoc i have been having problems. Now nobody can see me or my job will have to continue it is sooo hard. My friends we shall take all of our ODDWORLD creatures and bring them to another world. This way we can be living in harmony.... But how will we get out of here hmmmmm...
Whoa!! I'm not being rude but the hooded person isn't Molluck.
It's........*the figure takes off hood* Lulu.
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Whoa!! I'm not being rude but the hooded person isn't Molluck.
It's........*the figure takes off hood* Lulu.
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*gasps and faints*
Hey,hey,hey!! I'm not that ugly am I??? (joke!!)
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I put Molluk there to make it seem intresting... So the reader will think this story is good thats all
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I'm not a baby I was just knocked uncosious. And Lulu is a bit taller then me.
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I was hopeing that since I put that chapter with the water rushing through the cave and sweeping our characters awey, that they would be even more lost than before and end up in some strange place. That would make this story even more interesting since now we would have like two adventures happening all at once. Jerec's trying to get back with his friends and the same with the other characters as well.

Hey Al, can I give you an idea? Maybe that far off city that you mentioned in your chapter right after the last one I did could be the place where the water swept Blarg and ken, Razel and Buffy to? What do you think? Maybe we can start up back where the water rushed through the cave? I don't know just a thought.
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