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This is a special double-edition of Armament. Enjoy!

=== Chapter 9: Stray Bullets ===

Marek looked at his weapon, there was no way a revolver could stop a rampaging robot on the loose. He looked at Krisso, there was no way he could beat it either. Krisso only had his backup rifle with him, with not nearly enough ammo.

Yars spoke next. "I can handle this, I've trained enough". Marek doubted the young Slig's talent, but unfortunately he had no choice. Krisso told Marek that he could act as bait, and get the robot's attention.

Krisso looked around the corner to see Voll and his escort behind a slab of metal, the robot standing around 50 feet away. The escort wasn't injured, but his pants had been shot, one of the metal legs was broken off, twitching randomly.

Krisso started to sprint, luring the robot away from Voll. As the robot turned towards Krisso, Marek took aim with his revolver and shot one of the robot's optic receptors, the robot became confused. Yars crept along the wall silently. A few seconds later, he activated his BlitzKnife and sliced the arm off the robot in a single stroke. Before the robot could retaliate, Yars sliced off the robot's head. The robot de-activated, the electrical systems shut down.

Voll stood up, "Thanks kid, that was a close one". Yars de-activated his BlitzKnife and went to help the escort Slig find some pants. Marek walked up to Voll, "What happened sir?".

Voll revealed what happened. While heading to a high-security prison facility in the compound, a stray lightning bolt hit the communications tower. This robot was somehow affected by the lightning and suddenly became activated, firing at the nearby Sligs. It had been close to Voll when the machine suddenly started making wild movements. Voll thought this was suspicious and ushered his guards forward. The machine gave chase, one of the escorts nearly tripped while approaching the corner, ending up getting shot by the machine. The robot was more concerned with Voll and the other escort, so the other Slig managed to escape with a minor injury, hidden in an alcove just across from the hallway.

Voll wiped his forehead. Yars managed to acquire a new pair of pants for the escort, who thanked him gladly. Voll got a radio call from the prison facility. All of the power was back online and the prison was secure. Voll continued to talk on the radio, giving Marek and the others a salute before running off.

Marek sighed, "Well that was a close one, Good job there Yars".
The escort seemed embarrassed. "Um... gotta see a Slig about a Slog, bye".

Krisso smiled, and headed back the way they came.
Halfway along they met Reint, who explained that the other escort had been taken to the medical facility. Marek told Reint what happened.

Elsewhere, Kolon was making some very angry phonecalls to his Vykker suppliers.
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=== Chapter 10: We Prepare ===
Marek and his squad prepared for their next assignment. Reint was busy fixing a scope to his sniper rifle. As Reint clicked it into place, Krisso came back in the room. “Man, I can’t wait to get some action.”

Rokko came in about a minute later, and asked Krisso where they were going.

Krisso sat down and started cleaning his rifle. “We have to guard a Glukkon, Farda. He’s a pretty popular Glukkon, though his moolah ain’t looking too good nowadays. We have to make sure that no one tries to bump him off on his way to Zorbs place.”

Rokko nodded, “Alright pal, good luck out there man”. He shook Krisso’s hand and then left the room.

Reint was counting the number of UXB mines they had left, at least five… no wait, there was another one at the bottom of the backpack.

Yars came in shortly after, Marek filling him in on the mission details. “Listen, when we’re out there, we have to look out for each other. Guard each other’s backs at all costs. We aren’t some ragtag band of mercenaries. We look out for each other”.

Reint put his hand on Yars' shoulder. “The most important thing, is to keep calm at all times. When everyone else is losing their heads, you are keeping yours, looking for the right moment to take action”.

Krisso nodded, “Don’t sweat it kid, you’ll be fine”. Yars nodded, Marek looked at him. “Listen, you’ll still need a backup weapon, just in case your BlitzKnife fails on you”.

Yars looked back, “I think you’re right, I’ve got a few spares in my locker”. Yars went out of the room for a minute or so, and came back with his locker contents. “Where can I put these?”. Krisso turned his head, “Um, Put them in the locker over there”, motioning to a locker next to Marek. Yars read the notice on the top of the locker, “Udra? Can I ask who that is?”.

Marek looked at Yars with a concerned expression. “Udra, used to belong to my squad”.
Marek told Yars all about Udra. Throughout the story, Yars’s expression went from interest, to shock, to concern and finally he settled on being speechless.

Krisso hung his head low, wishing that Udra was still with them.

Yars decided to change the subject. “I’ll stick with the sniper rifle I think”. Yars took out his sniper rifle, a Quentar. Reint looked towards it, “Oh wow, that takes me back. I used to practice on Quentars all the time!”. Yars smiled, “Any tips for me?”.

Reint sighed. “Well, the trigger is easily breakable. The scope is fine, but decreases power slightly… Let’s see…”, Reint picked up the weapon, “Ammo size is .58, like mine, aim is slightly twisted, hold on a sec…”, Reint gave the weapon a little click, and twisted the nozzle slightly, “correction: aim WAS slightly twisted… a powerful weapon”.

Yars took his weapon back, “Thanks, I have a fairly steady aim when it comes to it”. Reint nodded, “That’s good to know, but remember, sniping is not your main skill, so don’t attempt any shots longer than about a hundred yards or so”.

Yars agreed, “I’ll just back you up”.

“Alright”, Marek said, “Let’s get going”.

Marek, Krisso, Reint and Yars made some final preparations and left the barracks.
Voll gave them a salute as they passed. Atto wished them luck, directing them where to go with his fluorescent batons. The Sligs changed equipment to Flying Pants, and flew in the direction of CheepMeeps. The journey would take a few days.
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That is the end of the 10th chapter of Armament, concluding Armament 1.

Coming soon: Armament 2: Slig's Regiment.
- Udra's past is revealed.
- Marek's squad escort Farda the Glukkon to Zorbs.
- The first appearance of a Big Bro.

Expect the first chapter of Armament 2 on April 1st! (Not a joke).

I'll also be writing a few other Slig related fanfics. So please keep your eyes open.

** **

Thanks to everyone who has been reading my fanfic and commenting on it. It feels really great to give something back to the community that gave me so much happiness.

I dedicate this to four people.
- Munch's Master, who welcomed me here with open arms and told me about some great fanfics.
- Fuzzle Guy, who is a true friend with some great ideas for Stranger's Wrath.
- Sl'askia, an excellent writer, can't get enough of Spider
- Teal, another brilliant writer. Jas is such a good hero!

Thanks everyone. Feel free to offer comments about how you think the first ten chapters went!
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Yay! Although that was a tad short, it was very good.

I'll be waiting until then.
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Well, I have to give it a break so I can concentrate a bit more on my university work. I'd rather make it a pit stop now, rather then keeping people waiting for chapter 11 for ages.
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wonder what happens next, great chapter
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